读后续写--善意的回响：单亲妈妈的暖心救赎 讲义-贵州省铜仁市2024-2025学年高三上学期1月期末考试英语试题

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Anna Collins was a 34-year-oldwsingle mother. Her husband died while their twin sons were still babies. When the twins turned one, Anna experienced yet another challenge: One of her sons, Adam, couldn’t walk due to leg discrepancy (不一致). After consulting severe doctors, the best suggestion they could give was for Adam to receive surgery.
To support the family, Anna worked two jobs. one as a waitress at a fast-food chain and the other as a pizza delivery worker. However, the amount she was taking home wasn’t enough to cover Adam’s surgery.
One Friday afternoon. Anna decided to go to the grocer s to buy her twins’ food for the week. As she lined up to pay, she noticed an old man in front of her looking confused. “Sorry. I can’t give you goods unless you have enough money to pay!” explained the cashier patiently.
Anna felt awkward for the old man. Although she was having a hard time saving up for Adam’s treatment, she decided to help. She paid for the old man’s groceries. “Do you know your way home ” she asked him. The man stood still, looking confused again. It was then that Anna realized the man was likely suffering from memory loss.
Luckily, the old man had an address card in his pocket. it was a couple of blocks from the grocery store. Anna helped him carry his groceries, and they walked toward the parking lot where she parked her pizza delivery service car. After she took him home, Anna went straight to work.
A few days later, Anna received a call from the old man’s son James. “I just want to thank you for helping my dad out the other day,” said James.
Anna replied, “I’m glad I was able to help him. Is he doing alright ” James replied that his father was receiving treatment because of memory loss and was recovering gradually.
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To Anna’s surprise, James said he himself was a doctor treating legs.
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After checking Adam’s legs, James told Anna the good news.
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文章大意
34 岁的单亲妈妈安娜，丈夫去世后独自抚养双胞胎儿子。其中儿子亚当因腿部发育不一致无法行走，医生建议手术治疗，但安娜打两份工仍凑不够手术费。一个周五下午，安娜在杂货店排队付款时，帮助了一位钱不够付账且疑似失忆的老人。她帮老人付账并送其回家。几天后，老人的儿子詹姆斯打电话感谢安娜，称父亲因失忆正在接受治疗且逐渐康复。
故事山分析
开端：安娜是单亲妈妈，儿子亚当腿部有问题需要手术，安娜打工攒钱却不够。
发展：安娜在杂货店帮助了一位失忆老人，送他回家。
高潮：老人的儿子詹姆斯打电话感谢安娜，且他是治疗腿部的医生。
结局（待续写）：詹姆斯为亚当检查腿部，亚当顺利接受治疗，安娜的困境得到解决。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
亚当腿部需要手术：在续写中，詹姆斯作为腿部医生，会对亚当的腿进行检查和治疗，回应这一伏笔。
安娜经济困难，手术费不够：詹姆斯可能会因为安娜帮助了自己的父亲，而在治疗费用上给予帮助或优惠，解决安娜的经济难题。
老人失忆：在故事中起到引出詹姆斯的作用，詹姆斯的出现推动了情节发展，为亚当的治疗带来转机。
安娜帮助老人：这一善举得到回报，詹姆斯因为感恩而愿意帮助安娜的儿子，体现善有善报。
詹姆斯是医生：预示着他能利用专业知识解决亚当腿部的问题，成为故事的关键转折点。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：着重描写詹姆斯表明身份后，安娜的惊讶和激动之情。接着详细描述詹姆斯了解亚当情况后的反应，他可能会询问亚当的具体症状，查看之前的诊断资料，主动提出为亚当进行检查和治疗。
第二段：细致描写詹姆斯检查亚当腿部的过程，他的专业动作和专注神情。之后宣布好消息，比如手术方案可行，治疗费用可减免等。最后描述安娜得知消息后的喜悦和感激之情，以及对未来的美好憧憬。
情感线
安娜起初因儿子的病情和手术费问题而焦虑、无助。帮助老人时，她出于善良不计回报。接到詹姆斯电话时，她只是礼貌回应。当得知詹姆斯是治疗腿部的医生时，她从惊讶转为充满希望。在等待詹姆斯检查亚当腿部的过程中，她紧张又期待。听到好消息后，她的喜悦和感激之情达到顶点，对未来充满信心。
故事线
詹姆斯表明自己是治疗腿部的医生，安娜十分惊讶。
詹姆斯询问亚当腿部情况，查看之前的诊断资料。
詹姆斯主动提出为亚当进行免费检查。
詹姆斯仔细检查亚当的腿部，制定手术方案。
詹姆斯告诉安娜手术可行且费用可减免。
安娜激动不已，对詹姆斯充满感激，对未来充满希望。
主旨升华句
A kind act, no matter how small, can create a chain reaction of kindness and bring unexpected blessings. 一个小小的善举，也能引发善的连锁反应，带来意想不到的福泽。
Helping others is not only about offering assistance; it's about sowing the seeds of hope that may bloom in the most unexpected ways. 帮助他人不仅是给予援助，更是播下希望的种子，它可能会以最意想不到的方式绽放。
In the circle of life, every act of kindness we give will eventually find its way back to us, perhaps in the form of a helping hand when we need it most. 在生命的轮回中，我们给予的每一个善举最终都会回到我们身边，也许是以在我们最需要时伸出的援手的形式。
Kindness is like a light in the darkness, not only brightening the path of others but also leading us to unexpected good fortune. 善良就像黑暗中的一盏灯，不仅照亮了他人的道路，也引领我们走向意想不到的好运。
The power of kindness lies in its ability to connect people's hearts and turn strangers into friends who are willing to help each other in times of need. 善良的力量在于它能够连接人们的心，把陌生人变成在需要时愿意互相帮助的朋友。
写作示范一
To Anna’s surprise, James said he himself was a doctor treating legs. Anna’s eyes widened in disbelief. “Are you serious My son Adam has a leg problem and needs surgery. But I can't afford it,” she blurted out. James listened attentively and then said, “I owe you for taking care of my father. Let me help Adam. I'd like to check his legs first.” Anna's heart was filled with hope, and she immediately agreed.
After checking Adam’s legs, James told Anna the good news. “The condition is not as bad as I thought. With the right treatment, Adam will be able to walk normally. And don't worry about the cost. I'll cover part of it.” Anna was overwhelmed with joy and gratitude. Tears filled her eyes as she thanked James repeatedly. She could already picture Adam running and playing with his twin brother. From that day on, Anna's life took a positive turn, all because of a simple act of kindness.
写作示范二
To Anna’s surprise, James said he himself was a doctor treating legs. “I can't believe it! This is like a miracle,” Anna exclaimed. James asked her to bring Adam to his hospital for a detailed examination. He assured her that he would do his best to help. Anna was so excited that she could hardly sleep that night.
After checking Adam’s legs, James told Anna the good news. “Adam's leg can be cured with a series of treatments. And I have a team of excellent doctors who are willing to help for free. We believe in paying it forward.” Anna was speechless with happiness. She hugged James tightly, thanking him from the bottom of her heart. From then on, Adam started his treatment journey, and Anna knew that kindness truly made a difference in their lives.
【答案】参考范文
To Anna’s surprise, James said he himself was a doctor treating legs. He explained that he specialized in legs surgery and had rich experience in operating on legs. Hearing this, Anna’s heart raced with a mix of hope and disbelief. She told James about her son Adam’s situation as well as tight family life. “First I will take a look at Adam’s condition,” James offered. “Maybe there’s something I can do to help and don’t consider money.” Anna, feeling a wave of gratitude, agreed. The next day, James visited their home, bringing along some medical equipment. He carefully examined Adam, taking detailed notes and measurements.
After checking Adam’s legs, James told Anna the good news. He explained that while Adam’s condition was challenging, it was not beyond help. “There are several choices we can consider,” James said, “and I believe we can significantly improve his mobility and quality of life.” Anna was overwhelmed by the unexpected turn of events. James reassured her, “We can schedule the surgery as soon as possible, and our hospital will offer some money and the best care for Adam.” Anna, filled with relief and gratitude, thanked James constantly. She knew that this was a turning point, and a brighter future lay ahead for her son.