应用文写作
假定你是李华,冬至那天,你给英国朋友Chris发去一张自己设计的冬至(Winter Solstice)的明信片。请你给她写一封邮件分享这张明信片,内容包括:
(1)画面描述;
(2)你的感想与期望。
注意:(1)写作词数应80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well.
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Yours,
Li Hua
写作提纲
第一段:开篇问候 Chris,直接表明写信目的是分享自己设计的冬至明信片,引发对方兴趣。
第二段:详细描述明信片画面,包括画面中的场景元素,如厨房、饺子、茶壶、雪景等,并解释这些元素所代表的意义。
第三段:阐述自己对冬至这个节日的感想,强调其在家庭团聚方面的重要性,表达希望通过明信片让 Chris 了解中国文化的期望,同时发出尝试制作饺子的友好邀请。
语言积累
be excited to 对…… 感到兴奋
share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某物
be filled with 充满
symbolize reunion 象征团圆
emit wisps of steam 冒出缕缕蒸汽
add a cozy touch 增添温馨的氛围
a special festival 一个特殊的节日
family gatherings 家庭聚会
give sb. a glimpse into 让某人得以了解
look forward to 期待
佳句
I'm writing to you with great pleasure to share a unique postcard that I designed especially for the Winter Solstice. 我非常高兴地写信给你,分享一张我专门为冬至设计的独特明信片。
The moment I saw the completed postcard, I couldn't wait to send it to you, hoping it would bring you a taste of Chinese culture. 我一看到完成的明信片,就迫不及待地想寄给你,希望它能让你领略到中国文化的韵味。
The Winter Solstice, an important traditional festival in China, is a time when families come together to celebrate and enjoy each other's company. 冬至是中国一个重要的传统节日,是家人团聚、共享欢乐时光的时刻。
Through this postcard, I sincerely hope you can feel the warmth and significance of this special day in Chinese culture. 通过这张明信片,我衷心希望你能感受到中国文化中这个特殊日子的温暖和重要意义。
I'm eagerly looking forward to your reply, and I hope you'll be interested in trying some traditional Chinese food like dumplings. 我热切期待你的回复,希望你会对尝试像饺子这样的中国传统美食感兴趣。
写作示范一
Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you in good spirits. I'm really excited to show you a postcard I designed for the Winter Solstice.
On the postcard, you can see a round table full of delicious food. In the middle are bowls of tangyuan, a sweet dumpling eaten during the Winter Solstice, which means family togetherness. Around the table, a family is sitting, smiling happily. The background is decorated with patterns of plum blossoms, representing the arrival of winter.
The Winter Solstice is not just a festival but also a symbol of family bonds. Creating this postcard made me cherish family more. I hope it can help you understand Chinese family values. Maybe you can celebrate it with your family next time!
I'm looking forward to your response.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作示范二
Dear Chris,
How's everything going I'm writing to share a postcard I designed for the Winter Solstice.
The postcard shows an old - fashioned courtyard covered in snow. In the courtyard, an elderly couple is making wontons. The red lanterns hanging on the eaves create a warm and festive atmosphere. Wontons are a popular food during the Winter Solstice in some areas of China.
The Winter Solstice is a time for warmth and love. While making the postcard, I was reminded of the happy times with my family. I hope this postcard can bring you some warmth. You can try making wontons if you're interested!
I'm waiting for your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作示范三
Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well. I'm extremely delighted to share a postcard I made for the Winter Solstice.
On the postcard, there is a modern - style living room. A young family is making jiaozi together. The colorful jiaozi wrappers and the fillings on the table look very inviting. Jiaozi is a must - have food for the Winter Solstice in many parts of China.
The Winter Solstice is a festival full of meaning. Making this postcard made me realize the importance of passing on traditions. I hope it can help you know more about Chinese festivals. Maybe you can organize a jiaozi - making party!
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well. I want to share with you a special greeting for the Winter Solstice, which we celebrated on December 21st. I designed a postcard that I thought you might enjoy.
The postcard features a beautiful winter scene with a traditional Chinese village. The houses are covered in a soft blanket of snow, and there is a family gathering around a warm fireplace, symbolizing the warmth and togetherness that this day brings.
For me, the Winter Solstice is a time to reflect on the year that has passed and to look forward to new beginnings. I hope this postcard brings a bit of that warmth and reflection to you as well.
Best regards!
Yours,
Li Hua