2025年中考英语热门话题写作话题《科学与技术》
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2025年中考英语热门话题写作话题《科学与技术》
一、考情分析
考查角度 介绍新科技 发表对新科技的看法
二、写作指导
五步写作法——审列扩连查
假定你是李华，收到英国笔友 Harry 的邮件，获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复。词数 80 左右。
参考词汇：congratulation 祝贺
注意事项：1. 回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Harry,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
第一步 细审题 定要点（五审法：审主题、审人称、审文体、审时态、审要点）
1）审人称：以第二人称、第一人称为主
2）审文体：应用文
3）审主题：对机器人的看法和机器人的用途
4）审时态：以一般现在时为主
第二步 分段落 列要点
首段 (Beginning)：祝贺对方（congratulations）。
中间段 (Body)：回答对方在邮件中的提问：对机器人的看法、是否想有一个机器人和原因 (helpful)。
结尾 (Ending)：表达祝愿。希望对方取得更大进步（make progress）。
第三步 扩句子 精加工
首段：祝贺对方
[一般句] Congratulations! I am glad to share your good news!
[高分句] Congratulations! How excited and surprised I am to share your wonderful news!(感叹句)
中间段：
【要点一】 对机器人的看法
[一般句] Robots are helpful. They’ll play an important role in our daily life.
[高分句] I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future they’ll play more important roles in our daily life. (I think...)
【要点二】 是否想有一个机器人
[一般句] I wish to have a robot of my own one day.
[高分句] I’m dying to have a robot of my own. /I long for owning a robot.(be dying to/long for)
【要点三】 想拥有机器人的原因
[一般句] They can help us do some housework.
[高分句] 1. (such as)
结尾：祝愿取得更大进步
[一般句] I hope you’ll make greater progress.
[高分句] 2. (and连接并列成分)
第四步 连句子 成短文
[优秀范文]
Dear Harry,
Congratulations! How glad I am to share your good news!
I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future they’ll play more important roles in our daily life. What’s more, I’m dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home. You see, my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.
Hoping you’ll make greater progress.
Yours,
Li Hua
第五步 查全文 得高分
首先依次检查人称、时态是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
素材积累
介绍新科技：
现代发明 modern invention
探索太空 explore space
改变我们的生活方式 change our way of life
最重要的发明之一 one of the most important inventions
充分使用 make good use of
由……制成 be made of...
用来做……be used for...
发表对新科技的看法：
享受社会的进步 enjoy the progress of society
在……扮演了重要的角色 play an important role in...
培养学生对科学技术的兴趣 develop students’ interest in science and technology
对……产生很大的影响 make a great difference to
使做某事成为可能 make it possible to do sth.
我对技术的创新和美观而感到震惊。I was amazed at the innovation and beauty of technology.
它们让我们的生活变得更加便利。They make our life more convenient.
它们给我们的社会带来了极大的便利和进步。They bring great convenience and progress to our society.
实战演练
上周六你和父母一起参观了科技馆，你们对“未来机器人与人类生活”主题展厅的一款居家机器人很感兴趣，你打算在本周的英语口语交流课上向你班上的同学介绍它。 请你根据下面的图示信息及要求用英语写一篇短文为交流课做准备。词数80左右。
注意事项：1. 词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名。
时态： 人称： 要点：
Last Saturday, I went to the science and technology museum with my parents.____________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
【高分句】
1．Robots can help my grandparents do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.
2．I sincerely hope you'll make greater progress in robot making and have great improvement in your life.
【实战演练】
时态：以一般过去时、一般现在时为主 人称：第一人称、第三人称 要点：the looks of the robot, things the robot can do, your opinions
Last Saturday, I went to the science and technology museum with my parents.A special machine caught my attention.It was a new kind of robot—Home Doctor.
Home Doctor was invented two months ago.And it was invented by three young men.It is very lovely, and it is 1.2 meters tall. It has two hands and has no legs.It is made from recycled materials, like steel and plastic.Home Doctor can not only give people lots of advice on health, but also treat common diseases at home.It will save people a lot of time, because they needn't go to the hospital whenever they feel sick or get hurt.What's more, it can help take good care of the old people and babies at home.
I believe Home Doctor will be very popular with people in the future
一、考情分析
考查角度 介绍新科技 发表对新科技的看法
二、写作指导
五步写作法——审列扩连查
假定你是李华，收到英国笔友 Harry 的邮件，获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复。词数 80 左右。
参考词汇：congratulation 祝贺
注意事项：1. 回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Harry,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
第一步 细审题 定要点（五审法：审主题、审人称、审文体、审时态、审要点）
1）审人称：以第二人称、第一人称为主
2）审文体：应用文
3）审主题：对机器人的看法和机器人的用途
4）审时态：以一般现在时为主
第二步 分段落 列要点
首段 (Beginning)：祝贺对方（congratulations）。
中间段 (Body)：回答对方在邮件中的提问：对机器人的看法、是否想有一个机器人和原因 (helpful)。
结尾 (Ending)：表达祝愿。希望对方取得更大进步（make progress）。
第三步 扩句子 精加工
首段：祝贺对方
[一般句] Congratulations! I am glad to share your good news!
[高分句] Congratulations! How excited and surprised I am to share your wonderful news!(感叹句)
中间段：
【要点一】 对机器人的看法
[一般句] Robots are helpful. They’ll play an important role in our daily life.
[高分句] I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future they’ll play more important roles in our daily life. (I think...)
【要点二】 是否想有一个机器人
[一般句] I wish to have a robot of my own one day.
[高分句] I’m dying to have a robot of my own. /I long for owning a robot.(be dying to/long for)
【要点三】 想拥有机器人的原因
[一般句] They can help us do some housework.
[高分句] 1. (such as)
结尾：祝愿取得更大进步
[一般句] I hope you’ll make greater progress.
[高分句] 2. (and连接并列成分)
第四步 连句子 成短文
[优秀范文]
Dear Harry,
Congratulations! How glad I am to share your good news!
I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future they’ll play more important roles in our daily life. What’s more, I’m dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home. You see, my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.
Hoping you’ll make greater progress.
Yours,
Li Hua
第五步 查全文 得高分
首先依次检查人称、时态是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
素材积累
介绍新科技：
现代发明 modern invention
探索太空 explore space
改变我们的生活方式 change our way of life
最重要的发明之一 one of the most important inventions
充分使用 make good use of
由……制成 be made of...
用来做……be used for...
发表对新科技的看法：
享受社会的进步 enjoy the progress of society
在……扮演了重要的角色 play an important role in...
培养学生对科学技术的兴趣 develop students’ interest in science and technology
对……产生很大的影响 make a great difference to
使做某事成为可能 make it possible to do sth.
我对技术的创新和美观而感到震惊。I was amazed at the innovation and beauty of technology.
它们让我们的生活变得更加便利。They make our life more convenient.
它们给我们的社会带来了极大的便利和进步。They bring great convenience and progress to our society.
实战演练
上周六你和父母一起参观了科技馆，你们对“未来机器人与人类生活”主题展厅的一款居家机器人很感兴趣，你打算在本周的英语口语交流课上向你班上的同学介绍它。 请你根据下面的图示信息及要求用英语写一篇短文为交流课做准备。词数80左右。
注意事项：1. 词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名。
时态： 人称： 要点：
Last Saturday, I went to the science and technology museum with my parents.____________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
【高分句】
1．Robots can help my grandparents do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.
2．I sincerely hope you'll make greater progress in robot making and have great improvement in your life.
【实战演练】
时态：以一般过去时、一般现在时为主 人称：第一人称、第三人称 要点：the looks of the robot, things the robot can do, your opinions
Last Saturday, I went to the science and technology museum with my parents.A special machine caught my attention.It was a new kind of robot—Home Doctor.
Home Doctor was invented two months ago.And it was invented by three young men.It is very lovely, and it is 1.2 meters tall. It has two hands and has no legs.It is made from recycled materials, like steel and plastic.Home Doctor can not only give people lots of advice on health, but also treat common diseases at home.It will save people a lot of time, because they needn't go to the hospital whenever they feel sick or get hurt.What's more, it can help take good care of the old people and babies at home.
I believe Home Doctor will be very popular with people in the future