读后续写--庆典中的迷失与重逢：亲情纽带坚不可摧 讲义-湖南省常德市2024-2025学年高三上学期期末考试英语试题

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Max and Mia were so excited to go to the city festival with their parents. They woke up early that day, put on their favorite clothes, and headed straight for the car. The anticipation was killing them!
As they drove into town, they could see flags waving in the air and hear music coming from every direction. “We’ re here!” Max shouted as they pulled into a parking spot.
Mia’s eyes widened with amazement as she took in all of the sights around her. There were food stalls selling all kinds of yummy treats like cotton candy, popcorn, and ice cream.She couldn’t wait to try everything! Meanwhile, Max was already eyeing his first game booth (岗亭) where he could win a giant stuffed animal if he scored enough points throwing balls through hoops. They spent hours exploring different parts of the festival together: trying out games at carnival booths or enjoying exotic (异国风味的) dishes from food stands while hearing different types of music ranging from jazz bands to folk singers.
But then something scary happened. Max turned around to ask his mom a question when he noticed that-she was no longer there. He looked around but couldn’t see her or his dad anywhere. Mia started to cry because she didn’t know what was going on.
“Where did they go ” Max asked himself as he nervously scanned the crowd for any sign of his parents. Mia clung (紧抓) to Max’s hand tightly as they walked through the busy street filled with people. “We need to find them,” Max said calmly but firmly. “Let’s try calling out for them.” They shouted at the top of their lungs, hoping that somehow their voices would reach their parents over all of the noise at the festival. But still, no answer came back from anywhere in sight!
As minutes stretched into what felt like hours, Max started getting really scared too — how could they ever find each other in such a huge sea of people
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Just then, a kind lady approached them with a warm smile.
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Turning around, they saw their parents rushing towards them.
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文章大意
Max 和 Mia 与父母一同前往城市节日庆典，他们一早便兴奋出发。到达后，庆典上彩旗飘扬、音乐回荡，美食摊位和游戏摊位琳琅满目，他们尽情享受节日的欢乐。然而，Max 转身询问妈妈问题时，却发现父母不见了，Mia 吓得大哭，Max 也紧张起来。他们在人群中呼喊父母，但在嘈杂的庆典声中毫无回应，随着时间流逝，Max 也越发害怕，不知如何在茫茫人海中找到父母。
故事山分析
开端：Max 和 Mia 与父母前往城市节日庆典，满怀期待。
发展：在庆典上尽情游玩，享受美食和游戏。
高潮：发现父母不见，在人群中呼喊却无回应，陷入恐慌。
结局（待续写）：在他人帮助下找到父母，化解危机。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔：Max 和 Mia 与父母一同出行 。回应：结尾处父母出现，与前文出行形成呼应，强调家人团聚。
伏笔：庆典现场人多嘈杂 。回应：正是因为人多嘈杂，才导致呼喊父母无回应，同时在寻找过程中增加难度，为他人帮助提供背景。
伏笔：Max 和 Mia 的恐慌情绪 。回应：在他人帮助逐渐冷静，最后见到父母时情绪转为安心和喜悦。
伏笔：Max 的冷静应对 。回应：在寻找过程中发挥作用，配合好心女士找到父母，展现其责任感。
伏笔：城市节日庆典的环境 。回应：续写中利用庆典的环境特点，如工作人员、广播系统等，帮助寻找父母。
续写要点
第一段：着重描写好心女士的出现，她的询问、安抚以及提供的帮助，比如询问情况、带孩子去广播室等，同时描述 Max 和 Mia 的反应，从恐慌到稍感安心。
第二段：详细描绘父母出现时的场景，父母的焦急神情、动作，以及一家人团聚时的激动和喜悦，表达对好心女士的感激。
情感线
起初 Max 和 Mia 兴奋地前往庆典，充满期待。发现父母不见后，从 Mia 的大哭到 Max 的紧张，两人陷入极度恐慌。好心女士出现时，他们稍感安心，随着寻找过程推进，心中燃起希望。最后见到父母，恐慌瞬间转为安心、激动和喜悦，情感经历大起大落。
故事线
Max 和 Mia 与父母前往城市节日庆典。
在庆典上享受美食和游戏。
发现父母不见，呼喊无果，陷入恐慌。
好心女士出现，提供帮助。
通过好心女士的帮助，联系到父母。
父母出现，一家人团聚。
主旨升华句
In the chaos of life, a helping hand from a kind - hearted stranger can guide us back to safety and warmth, just like a lighthouse in the stormy sea.（在生活的混乱中，一个善良陌生人的援手能引领我们回到安全与温暖，就像暴风雨中的灯塔。）
Moments of fear and separation can make us cherish the bond of family even more deeply, teaching us the true value of togetherness.（恐惧和分离的时刻能让我们更加深刻地珍惜家庭的纽带，教会我们团聚的真正价值。）
The kindness shown by that lady in the crowded festival reminds us that there is always hope and love in the world, even in the most unexpected places.（那位女士在拥挤节日中展现的善意提醒我们，世界上总有希望和爱，即使在最意想不到的地方。）
Through this adventure, Max and Mia not only learned the importance of staying calm in difficult situations but also experienced the power of human kindness and the unbreakable bond of family.（通过这次冒险，Max 和 Mia 不仅学会了在困境中保持冷静的重要性，还体验到了人性的善良和牢不可破的家庭纽带。）
In the vast sea of people, the reunion of Max and Mia with their parents is a beautiful reminder that love and connection can always overcome the challenges of separation.（在茫茫人海中，Max 和 Mia 与父母的团聚美好地提醒我们，爱和亲情总能战胜分离的挑战。）
写作示范一
Just then, a kind lady approached them with a warm smile. “Are you two lost, sweeties ” she asked gently. Max and Mia nodded, tears still in their eyes. The lady introduced herself as Mrs. Brown and told them not to worry. She took them to the festival's information booth, where the staff could make an announcement. “We'll find your parents in no time,” Mrs. Brown comforted them. Max and Mia sat nervously, waiting for any news.
Turning around, they saw their parents rushing towards them. Their mother had tears in her eyes, and their father looked extremely worried. “Oh, thank goodness we found you!” their mother cried, hugging them tightly. Max and Mia explained what had happened, and they all thanked Mrs. Brown sincerely. It was a relief to be together again, and they realized how precious their family was. From that day on, they always made sure to stay close during outings.
写作示范二
Just then, a kind lady approached them with a warm smile. “What's wrong, little ones ” she asked softly. Max bravely told her they couldn't find their parents. The lady, named Mrs. Green, said she had kids of her own and knew how scary it could be. She took them to the security office. The security guard there used the festival's loudspeaker to announce the lost children. Max and Mia listened intently, hoping their parents would hear.
Turning around, they saw their parents rushing towards them. Their father scooped them up in his arms, and their mother kissed their foreheads. “We were so worried!” their father said. They thanked Mrs. Green and the security guard. This experience taught Max and Mia the importance of staying together and the kindness of strangers. As they continued their festival adventure, they held their parents' hands even tighter.
【答案】
Just then, a kind lady approached them with a warm smile. The kind lady, introducing herself as Ms. Johnson, gently asked if everything was alright. Feeling relieved that someone noticed them, Max nodded his head eagerly while Mia clung tightly to his hand. Ms. Johnson offered to help them find their parents. “Let’s go to the information booth, where we can make an announcement and your parents can find you more easily.” Ms. Johnson suggested. Max and Mia, still holding hands, followed her through the crowd. Along the way, Ms. Johnson constantly comforted them and assured that they would find their parents. As they were nearing the information booth, suddenly they heard familiar voices calling their names.
Turning around, they saw their parents rushing towards them. “Max! Mia!” their mom exclaimed, pulling them into a tight hug. Their dad, equally relieved, knelt down to their level. “You two did the right thing by staying together and going to the information booth,” he said, his voice choked with emotion. Max told their parents how Ms. Johnson helped them. Their parents turned to her, and thanked her for helping keep an eye on their kids. Although it was scary to get separated from their parents in a crowded place like that, Max and Mia felt the warmth from the stranger and also learned a valuable lesson about staying safe when out in public places like city festivals.