读后续写--善意的回响：餐厅里的温暖馈赠 讲义-湖南省娄底市部分普通高中2024-2025学年上学期高一期末考试英语试题
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I spent almost three years in food service doing everything from washing dishes to working as a service director at a country club, Firstly, I waited tables, and it was actually one of my favorite jobs, mostly because of the people, One thing I learned is doing your job right .and focusing on ensuring that your customers have the best dining experience.
During college, I worked at a place called O’Malleys. It’s not open anymore so I don’t have
to worry about getting anybody in trouble, and besides, this isn’t that kind of story.Every Sunday, these two ladies and a little girl would come in, and nobody wanted to wait on them because they were super cheap and never tipped, so I volunteered, and they became my regulars, I quickly learned that it was a mom, her young daughter, and her mother. They always ordered the same thing. They’d each get water, The two women would split an entree ( 主菜), and the young girl would get something off the child’s menu. And they’d leave no tip. I didn’t really care because Sunday lunch was always busy with the crowd, and their check was so small that even a 20% tip would have been just a few dollars. Besides, they were super nice, and I understood that this was their special time out. Going out just wasn’t something they could do. I did my best to treat them just like everybody else ，which they appreciated.
This went on for over a year, Every Sunday, they would come in their pretty dresses, sit in my section, order the same thing they always did, and not leave me a tip... until one day,they did.
That day, they came in and ordered iced tea and a soda for the girl, I knew something was up. The two ladies each got their own entree nothing share, The little girl got a full order of chicken strips. I’m not sure why I remember exactly what she ordered.
注意：
1 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Of course, I asked what the celebration was ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ The mother said they were moving to Dallas the next week. ___________________________________________________________________
文章大意
作者在餐饮服务行业工作，大学时在 O’Malleys 工作。每周日，一位母亲、她的母亲和女儿都会来就餐，她们消费很低且从不给小费，但作者仍热情服务。因为周日午餐繁忙，她们消费少，即便给 20% 小费也没多少，且作者理解她们外出就餐不易。这种情况持续一年多，直到有一天，她们来点了冰茶、汽水，两位女士各自点主菜，小女孩点了一整份鸡肉条，与往常不同。
故事山分析
开端：作者在餐厅工作，每周日固定接待消费低且不给小费的母女三人。
发展：这样的情况持续一年多，作者始终热情服务。
高潮：某天母女三人点餐与往常不同，似乎有特殊事情发生。
结局（待续写）：揭示点餐变化原因及给作者带来的影响。
伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔：三人消费一直很低且从不给小费 。回应：妈妈解释之前经济困难，所以消费低且无法给小费。
伏笔：那天她们点了冰茶、汽水，女士各自点主菜，小女孩点一整份鸡肉条 。回应：妈妈说找到高薪工作，所以庆祝，点了丰盛的食物。
伏笔：作者一直热情服务，理解她们。回应：妈妈因作者的热情服务，离开时给了 50 美元小费表达感激。
伏笔：作者提到这不是会给人惹麻烦的故事 。回应：在后续故事中，没有出现任何麻烦相关情节。
伏笔：作者说记得小女孩点的食物 。回应：点餐的特殊之处暗示了有特别的事，为妈妈宣布找到工作做铺垫。
续写要点
第一段：着重描写妈妈告知庆祝原因，如找到工作的喜悦，以及作者听到后的反应，像惊讶、开心等。
第二段：妈妈说出要搬家，给作者小费，作者收到小费时的震惊、感动，以及对这段经历的感慨。
情感线
起初，作者对母女三人虽消费低且无小费但仍保持理解与热情服务，是一种职业素养和善良的体现。当发现三人点餐变化时，作者产生好奇。得知妈妈找到工作，作者为她们感到开心。最后收到 50 美元小费时，作者从震惊转为感动，情感不断升华，感受到付出得到回报的温暖。
故事线
作者在餐厅工作日常接待顾客。
每周日固定接待母女三人，她们消费低无小费。
这种情况持续一年多。
某天母女三人点餐异常。
妈妈告知庆祝原因是找到工作。
妈妈说要搬家并给作者小费。
主旨升华句
A small act of kindness, like warm sunshine, can brighten others' lives and bring unexpected rewards.（一个小小的善举，如温暖的阳光，能照亮他人生活并带来意想不到的回报。）
Understanding and kindness in service not only satisfy customers but also create beautiful connections and precious memories.（服务中的理解与善良不仅能让顾客满意，还能建立美好的联系和珍贵的回忆。）
In the world of business, empathy and genuine care can turn ordinary encounters into extraordinary stories of gratitude.（在商业世界里，同理心和真诚关怀能将普通的相遇变成非凡的感恩故事。）
Our sincere efforts to serve others, no matter how small, may plant the seeds of kindness that will bloom in unexpected ways.（我们真诚服务他人的努力，无论多么微小，都可能种下善良的种子，以意想不到的方式绽放。）
Through acts of kindness in service, we not only serve food but also nourish the human spirit and build a more compassionate world.（通过服务中的善举，我们不仅提供食物，还滋养人类精神，构建一个更具同情心的世界。）
写作示范一
Of course, I asked what the celebration was. The mom's face lit up with a huge smile. "I finally got a well - paying job after months of looking! We're so excited, and we wanted to celebrate with a real meal today," she exclaimed. I was overjoyed for them. I rushed to the kitchen to ensure their food was prepared perfectly, and kept a close eye on their table, making sure they had everything they needed.
The mother said they were moving to Dallas the next week. As she handed me the check, there was a folded bill underneath. When I opened it and saw the $50 bill, my eyes widened in disbelief. "You've always been so kind to us, even when we couldn't tip. This is a small way to say thank you," she said. I was touched beyond words. Watching them leave, I realized that sometimes, the rewards of kindness come in the most unexpected forms.
写作示范二
Of course, I asked what the celebration was. The mother's eyes sparkled with pride as she said, "I've been promoted at work! After all the hard work, it finally paid off. We just had to come here and have a special meal to mark the occasion." I couldn't help but smile along with her. I made sure their dining experience was even more special than usual, suggesting some of the best - selling desserts.
The mother said they were moving to Dallas the next week. She then handed me a tip that was much larger than I ever expected. "You've always made us feel welcome here. This is for you," she said. Holding the money, I felt a deep sense of warmth. It wasn't just about the money; it was about the recognition of my kindness. This experience taught me that kindness is always worth it, no matter how long it takes to be rewarded.
参考范文：
Of course , I asked what the celebration was. I mean, it was obvious this was a special occasion. The mother of the small girl smiled at me and said, “ I just graduated from nursing school. We wanted to come see you one last time and say thank you for making our Sundays so special. It meant so much to us to come in here and be treated like everybody else, even though we could never order very much or leave you a tip.
The mother said they were moving to Dallas the next week. She said, “We won ’t becoming back. I got a job at Major Hospital, and we won ’t see you anymore. ” I smiled and wished them the best of luck, letting them know I ’d miss them. They enjoyed the delicious food happily. When I picked up their check, they had left me a fifty-dollar tip, which was about 150% of their bill. From the story, I see: Don ’t worry about tips because you never know the customer ’s true story. Sometimes the memory is worth more than the money.
I spent almost three years in food service doing everything from washing dishes to working as a service director at a country club, Firstly, I waited tables, and it was actually one of my favorite jobs, mostly because of the people, One thing I learned is doing your job right .and focusing on ensuring that your customers have the best dining experience.
During college, I worked at a place called O’Malleys. It’s not open anymore so I don’t have
to worry about getting anybody in trouble, and besides, this isn’t that kind of story.Every Sunday, these two ladies and a little girl would come in, and nobody wanted to wait on them because they were super cheap and never tipped, so I volunteered, and they became my regulars, I quickly learned that it was a mom, her young daughter, and her mother. They always ordered the same thing. They’d each get water, The two women would split an entree ( 主菜), and the young girl would get something off the child’s menu. And they’d leave no tip. I didn’t really care because Sunday lunch was always busy with the crowd, and their check was so small that even a 20% tip would have been just a few dollars. Besides, they were super nice, and I understood that this was their special time out. Going out just wasn’t something they could do. I did my best to treat them just like everybody else ，which they appreciated.
This went on for over a year, Every Sunday, they would come in their pretty dresses, sit in my section, order the same thing they always did, and not leave me a tip... until one day,they did.
That day, they came in and ordered iced tea and a soda for the girl, I knew something was up. The two ladies each got their own entree nothing share, The little girl got a full order of chicken strips. I’m not sure why I remember exactly what she ordered.
注意：
1 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Of course, I asked what the celebration was ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ The mother said they were moving to Dallas the next week. ___________________________________________________________________
文章大意
作者在餐饮服务行业工作，大学时在 O’Malleys 工作。每周日，一位母亲、她的母亲和女儿都会来就餐，她们消费很低且从不给小费，但作者仍热情服务。因为周日午餐繁忙，她们消费少，即便给 20% 小费也没多少，且作者理解她们外出就餐不易。这种情况持续一年多，直到有一天，她们来点了冰茶、汽水，两位女士各自点主菜，小女孩点了一整份鸡肉条，与往常不同。
故事山分析
开端：作者在餐厅工作，每周日固定接待消费低且不给小费的母女三人。
发展：这样的情况持续一年多，作者始终热情服务。
高潮：某天母女三人点餐与往常不同，似乎有特殊事情发生。
结局（待续写）：揭示点餐变化原因及给作者带来的影响。
伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔：三人消费一直很低且从不给小费 。回应：妈妈解释之前经济困难，所以消费低且无法给小费。
伏笔：那天她们点了冰茶、汽水，女士各自点主菜，小女孩点一整份鸡肉条 。回应：妈妈说找到高薪工作，所以庆祝，点了丰盛的食物。
伏笔：作者一直热情服务，理解她们。回应：妈妈因作者的热情服务，离开时给了 50 美元小费表达感激。
伏笔：作者提到这不是会给人惹麻烦的故事 。回应：在后续故事中，没有出现任何麻烦相关情节。
伏笔：作者说记得小女孩点的食物 。回应：点餐的特殊之处暗示了有特别的事，为妈妈宣布找到工作做铺垫。
续写要点
第一段：着重描写妈妈告知庆祝原因，如找到工作的喜悦，以及作者听到后的反应，像惊讶、开心等。
第二段：妈妈说出要搬家，给作者小费，作者收到小费时的震惊、感动，以及对这段经历的感慨。
情感线
起初，作者对母女三人虽消费低且无小费但仍保持理解与热情服务，是一种职业素养和善良的体现。当发现三人点餐变化时，作者产生好奇。得知妈妈找到工作，作者为她们感到开心。最后收到 50 美元小费时，作者从震惊转为感动，情感不断升华，感受到付出得到回报的温暖。
故事线
作者在餐厅工作日常接待顾客。
每周日固定接待母女三人，她们消费低无小费。
这种情况持续一年多。
某天母女三人点餐异常。
妈妈告知庆祝原因是找到工作。
妈妈说要搬家并给作者小费。
主旨升华句
A small act of kindness, like warm sunshine, can brighten others' lives and bring unexpected rewards.（一个小小的善举，如温暖的阳光，能照亮他人生活并带来意想不到的回报。）
Understanding and kindness in service not only satisfy customers but also create beautiful connections and precious memories.（服务中的理解与善良不仅能让顾客满意，还能建立美好的联系和珍贵的回忆。）
In the world of business, empathy and genuine care can turn ordinary encounters into extraordinary stories of gratitude.（在商业世界里，同理心和真诚关怀能将普通的相遇变成非凡的感恩故事。）
Our sincere efforts to serve others, no matter how small, may plant the seeds of kindness that will bloom in unexpected ways.（我们真诚服务他人的努力，无论多么微小，都可能种下善良的种子，以意想不到的方式绽放。）
Through acts of kindness in service, we not only serve food but also nourish the human spirit and build a more compassionate world.（通过服务中的善举，我们不仅提供食物，还滋养人类精神，构建一个更具同情心的世界。）
写作示范一
Of course, I asked what the celebration was. The mom's face lit up with a huge smile. "I finally got a well - paying job after months of looking! We're so excited, and we wanted to celebrate with a real meal today," she exclaimed. I was overjoyed for them. I rushed to the kitchen to ensure their food was prepared perfectly, and kept a close eye on their table, making sure they had everything they needed.
The mother said they were moving to Dallas the next week. As she handed me the check, there was a folded bill underneath. When I opened it and saw the $50 bill, my eyes widened in disbelief. "You've always been so kind to us, even when we couldn't tip. This is a small way to say thank you," she said. I was touched beyond words. Watching them leave, I realized that sometimes, the rewards of kindness come in the most unexpected forms.
写作示范二
Of course, I asked what the celebration was. The mother's eyes sparkled with pride as she said, "I've been promoted at work! After all the hard work, it finally paid off. We just had to come here and have a special meal to mark the occasion." I couldn't help but smile along with her. I made sure their dining experience was even more special than usual, suggesting some of the best - selling desserts.
The mother said they were moving to Dallas the next week. She then handed me a tip that was much larger than I ever expected. "You've always made us feel welcome here. This is for you," she said. Holding the money, I felt a deep sense of warmth. It wasn't just about the money; it was about the recognition of my kindness. This experience taught me that kindness is always worth it, no matter how long it takes to be rewarded.
参考范文：
Of course , I asked what the celebration was. I mean, it was obvious this was a special occasion. The mother of the small girl smiled at me and said, “ I just graduated from nursing school. We wanted to come see you one last time and say thank you for making our Sundays so special. It meant so much to us to come in here and be treated like everybody else, even though we could never order very much or leave you a tip.
The mother said they were moving to Dallas the next week. She said, “We won ’t becoming back. I got a job at Major Hospital, and we won ’t see you anymore. ” I smiled and wished them the best of luck, letting them know I ’d miss them. They enjoyed the delicious food happily. When I picked up their check, they had left me a fifty-dollar tip, which was about 150% of their bill. From the story, I see: Don ’t worry about tips because you never know the customer ’s true story. Sometimes the memory is worth more than the money.
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