应用文写作 写一篇主题为“拍摄推广家乡特产短视频寻求外教帮助”的英语邮件 讲义-湖北云学名校联盟2024-2025学年高二上学期期末考试英语试题

应用文写作
假定你是李华，想拍摄一段短视频，向外国朋友推销你的家乡特产。请给你的外教 Tom 写一封邮件，内容包括：
1 .请他帮忙修改英文解说词；
2. 请他帮忙为视频录音；
3. 表示感谢。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：拍摄视频 shoot a video；特产 special products；解说词 narration；录音 recording
注意：1. 词数80词左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
写作提纲
第一段：开篇表明写信目的，简要介绍自己要拍摄推广家乡特产的短视频，引出下文寻求帮助的内容。
第二段：详细说明希望外教 Tom 提供的具体帮助，一是帮忙修改英文解说词，二是帮忙为视频录音，并阐述寻求这些帮助的原因，如自己英文水平有限，而 Tom 在英文方面有优势。
第三段：再次表达对 Tom 的感谢之情，强调他的帮助对视频的重要性，以及期待他的回复。
语言积累
短语
shoot a video 拍摄视频
promote... to... 向…… 推广……
special products 特产
be in need of 需要
do sb. a favor 帮某人一个忙
have a good command of 精通
ask for one's help 寻求某人的帮助
look forward to 期待
express one's gratitude 表达某人的感激之情
contribute to 有助于
佳句
I am writing to you because I am planning to shoot a video to promote the special products of my hometown to foreign friends, and I am in great need of your help.（我写信给您是因为我计划拍摄一个视频，向外国朋友推销我家乡的特产，我非常需要您的帮助。）
Since English is not my native language, I am afraid there may be some grammar mistakes and inappropriate expressions in the narration. Thus, I sincerely hope you can do me a favor by checking and revising it.（由于英语不是我的母语，我担心解说词中可能会有一些语法错误和不恰当的表达。因此，我真诚地希望您能帮我检查并修改一下。）
Knowing that you have a good command of English and an excellent voice, I was wondering if you could spare some time to do the recording for my video.（我知道您精通英语，而且声音非常出色，我想知道您是否能抽出一些时间为我的视频录音。）
Your help will surely contribute to the success of this video, making it more appealing and professional.（您的帮助一定会促成这个视频的成功，使其更具吸引力和专业性。）
I truly appreciate your kindness and look forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.（我真心感谢您的好意，期待您在方便的时候尽早回复我。）
写作示范一
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well. I'm Li Hua, and I'm currently working on an exciting project. I plan to shoot a video to promote the special products of my hometown to foreign friends.
However, I'm facing some challenges. I've written the English narration for the video, but I'm not confident in my English. I would be extremely grateful if you could help me revise it. Besides, your voice is so charming. I was wondering if you could do the recording for my video.
Your help means a great deal to me. Thank you in advance, and I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作示范二
Dear Tom,
Hello! I'm Li Hua, writing to ask for your kind help. I'm going to shoot a video to introduce the unique special products of my hometown to international friends.
The English narration has been written, but I'm worried about potential errors. Since you have a good command of English, I sincerely hope you can help me polish it. Moreover, I know you have a wonderful voice. It would be amazing if you could do the recording for the video.
Your assistance will make the video more professional. Thanks a lot, and I'm eagerly waiting for your response.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作示范三
Dear Tom,
How are you I'm Li Hua, and I'm excited to share my new project with you. I aim to shoot a video promoting the special products of my hometown to foreign friends.
As English is not my first language, I'm not sure if the English narration I wrote is accurate. I really need your help to correct it. Also, your excellent pronunciation and clear voice would be a perfect fit for the video recording. Could you please do me this favor
Your help will play a crucial role in the success of this video. Thank you very much, and I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
Eager to shoot a video to promote my hometown’s special products to my foreign friends, I’m writing to consult you to perfect it.
Firstly, what upsets me is whether my narration is accurate, vivid and authentic. So it will be very kind of you to correct the mistakes and polish my narration. What’s more, I have no confidence in the English recording, which I think may result in misunderstanding for my inaccurate pronunciation and intonation. So can you record it for me Only in this way will my foreign friends understand it better.
I would appreciate it if you can give me a hand. Keenly anticipate your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua