读后续写--破旧小屋与海边富妪的暖心交集 讲义-宁夏石嘴山市2024-2025学年高二上学期1月期末英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Polly Goodman, 82-year-old, was a rich old woman. Her husband was a businessman and left her a large fortune after his death, so she had no problems supporting herself. The only problem was that her son who was a doctor busy with his work seldom had time to visit her, leaving her living lonely.
One day, Polly was walking along the beach, like she did every evening near her seaside house, when she noticed a young boy and his little sister playing there. As she was passing by them, she heard their mother calling out to them. “Corey! Daisy! Be careful! Stay away from the water!”
Polly noticed their mother resting on a bench, appearing sick and tired. The dark circles under her eyes were quite obvious, and she coughed frequently. Polly always had a desire to have a chat with someone. So she walked carefully towards the mother with a kind smile on her face.
“Hi, I’m Polly. I live by the beach.” Polly said.
The mother looked up at Polly, feeling a little surprised. The mother told Polly she was Lydia and had worked as a waitress. Lydia further said that she and her children had only recently moved to that location because her children had always wanted to see the ocean. Then Lydia stopped to cough heavily. After she calmed down, it seemed she wanted to say something, but stopped as if there was something difficult to tell. Polly did not follow up, saying goodbye and left.
When Polly went to the beach the next day, she saw the kids again, but this time their mother wasn’t with them. She observed them playing by themselves until late in the evening before heading home. The third day came and again the two kids played at the seaside until late in the evening, still without their mother s company. Then the elder brother was about to lead the sister back home. Out of curiosity and care Polly decided to follow them to their house.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Upon arrival, the kids invited Polly inside.
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Polly took the mother to the hospital her son worked in.
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文章大意
82 岁的富有老妇人 Polly Goodman，丈夫去世后留下大笔财产，生活无忧，但儿子是医生，工作繁忙，很少来看她，她十分孤独。一天，Polly 在海边散步时，遇到 Lydia 和她的两个孩子 Corey、Daisy 。Lydia 看起来病恹恹的，有浓重的黑眼圈且频繁咳嗽。她告诉 Polly 自己是服务员，刚搬来这里是因为孩子想看海。之后几天，Polly 发现孩子独自在海边玩耍到很晚，母亲不在身边。出于好奇和关心，Polly 跟着孩子们回了家，发现 Lydia 病得很重却没钱看病，于是 Polly 带她去儿子工作的医院，使她得到了救治。
故事山分析
开端：Polly 生活孤独，在海边散步时遇到 Lydia 和她的孩子。
发展：Polly 与 Lydia 交谈，发现她身体不好；之后几天看到孩子独自玩耍，决定跟随他们回家。
高潮：Polly 发现 Lydia 病重无钱医治，带她去儿子工作的医院。
结局：Lydia 得到救治，病情逐渐好转，一家人生活重燃希望。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
Polly 的儿子是医生：伏笔，在续写中为 Lydia 能够得到及时专业的救治做铺垫，使情节发展合理。
Lydia 的病态表现：伏笔，如黑眼圈明显、频繁咳嗽，在续写中揭示她病重的事实，推动故事发展。
Lydia 欲言又止：伏笔，在续写中通过孩子的话得知她是因没钱看病而苦恼，解释了之前的行为。
Polly 的孤独和渴望交流：伏笔，促使她主动与 Lydia 交流，在后续故事中进一步关心 Lydia 一家，成为帮助他们的关键。
孩子独自玩耍，母亲不在身边：伏笔，引出 Polly 跟随孩子回家，发现 Lydia 的困境，从而引发后续帮助的情节。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：着重描写进屋后看到的景象，突出房屋的简陋和 Lydia 的病状，通过孩子的话语揭示家庭困境，展现 Polly 的心疼与决心帮助的心理。
第二段：细致描述在医院的情况，如医生的诊断过程，以及后续 Polly 对 Lydia 一家的持续关心，体现帮助带来的积极改变。
情感线
Polly 起初因孤独渴望交流，遇到 Lydia 时友好交谈。看到孩子独自玩耍时，好奇与关心交织。发现 Lydia 的困境后，心生怜悯与同情，决心帮助她。在帮助过程中，感受到被需要，内心得到温暖和满足。Lydia 一家从无助、担忧到在 Polly 的帮助下看到希望，情感逐渐转变。
故事线
Polly 孤独地生活，在海边散步。
Polly 遇到 Lydia 和孩子，与 Lydia 交谈。
连续几天看到孩子独自玩耍，Polly 跟随他们回家。
Polly 发现 Lydia 病重无钱医治。
Polly 带 Lydia 去儿子工作的医院。
Lydia 得到救治，病情好转，生活重燃希望。
主旨升华句（英文）
In life, a simple act of kindness, like Polly's help for Lydia, can become a ray of hope in the darkest of times, bringing warmth and new life to those in need.
This story shows that no matter how different our lives may be, a little concern and help can bridge the gap between people and create a beautiful bond full of love.
Through Polly's actions, we learn that wealth is not just measured by money, but more by the love and kindness we share with others, which can change lives in unexpected ways.
Polly's assistance to Lydia's family is a reminder that in moments of hardship, reaching out a helping hand can not only save a life but also light up the future with hope.
The story of Polly and Lydia tells us that even the most ordinary encounter can turn into a life - changing event when we are willing to show compassion and offer help.
写作示范一
Upon arrival, the kids invited Polly inside. The moment Polly stepped into the house, a strong smell of medicine hit her nose. She saw Lydia lying on a tattered bed, her eyes closed in pain. Corey whispered, “Mom has been like this for days. We're so scared.” Polly gently patted the boy's head and said, “Don't worry, kids. I'll take care of it.”
Polly took the mother to the hospital her son worked in. Her son, after a thorough examination, told Polly that Lydia's condition was serious but treatable. Polly paid for the treatment without hesitation. In the following weeks, Polly visited Lydia every day, bringing books for the kids and fresh fruits for Lydia. As Lydia got better, the kids' laughter filled the small house again, and Polly felt a deep sense of happiness, knowing that she had made a difference in their lives.
写作示范二
Upon arrival, the kids invited Polly inside. The house was in a mess, with clothes scattered around. Lydia was sitting on a broken chair, struggling to breathe. Daisy ran to her mother, crying. Polly realized the seriousness of the situation. She said firmly, “We need to get you to a doctor right away.”
Polly took the mother to the hospital her son worked in. Her son quickly organized a medical team to treat Lydia. With the best care, Lydia's health improved day by day. Polly also helped Lydia find a part - time job that was less strenuous. Slowly, the family's life got back on track. Polly, who once felt lonely, now had a new family in Lydia and the kids, and they all cherished the precious bond formed by this kind act.
参考答案
Upon arrival, the kids invited Polly inside. The moment Polly stepped into the house, she was
shocked to see the house in a mess with toys scattered everywhere on the floor. Meanwhile, she
spotted Lydia lying in the sofa, coughing heavily. Seeing Polly approaching, Lydia struggled to sit
up but failed. Apparently, Lydia was seriously sick and needed immediate treatment. When asked
why she didn’t go to hospital, Lydia explained she was too weak to drive. Out of sympathy, Polly
offered to drive her to the hospital.
Polly took the mother to the hospital her son worked in. Having learned about the situation through the phone called by Polly, her son helped contact doctors. After a careful medical check, Lydia
was told she had to stay in hospital for days, which worried her a lot, for her kids were too young
to stay at home alone. Polly comforted her that she would take care of the kids. Hearing that,
Lydia was so deeply moved that she could say nothing. She hugged Polly tightly to express her
sincere gratitude.