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I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers-very big, tough-looking bikers. They blocked my only path and their appearance suggested they were part of an infamous street gang (帮派).
I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater Had I misread the date of the event
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater, where I could meet many animal rescue groups. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
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I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.
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When the film began, I realized that the bikers were not what I had feared.
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文章主要讲述了作者在费城参加会议期间,看到当地一家剧院放映关于动物收容所救助流浪狗的纪录片广告,因热爱动物且同事不愿同行,最终独自前往。剧院距离酒店仅五个街区,作者在天快黑且街道几乎无人的情况下到达剧院,却发现门口有一群看起来很凶悍的摩托车手,像是臭名昭著的街头帮派,这让作者心生恐惧,虽确认是正确地点和时间,但仍犹豫是否要返回酒店,最终决定进入剧院,认为里面会更安全 。
故事山分析
开端:作者在费城参加会议,看到关于动物收容所纪录片的广告,因热爱动物想去参加,但同事不愿同行,自己又担心夜晚独自外出。
发展:作者克服担忧前往剧院,却在剧院门口看到一群看起来像街头帮派的摩托车手,内心充满恐惧和犹豫。
高潮:进入剧院后发现更多摩托车手,以及电影开始后对摩托车手的新认识。
结局:与摩托车手友好相处,感受到他们对动物的关爱,收获一段温暖的经历。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔:作者提到认识很多摩托车爱好者,大多是好人。回应:在后续发现这些摩托车手并非自己想象中的坏人,与伏笔呼应。
伏笔:作者决定进入剧院是觉得里面会更安全,能遇到很多动物救援团体。回应:进入剧院后发现更多摩托车手,与原本认为的安全形成反差,之后又发现他们对动物的关爱,体现了剧院里复杂又意外的情况。
伏笔:剧院门口的摩托车手看起来像街头帮派,让作者心生恐惧。回应:在续写中反转,展现他们善良的一面。
伏笔:作者犹豫是否要返回酒店。回应:最终没有返回,而是在剧院里经历了态度的转变。
伏笔:作者热爱动物。回应:因为热爱动物才来到剧院,也因为动物与摩托车手建立了联系。
续写要点(两段)
第一段:描述进入剧院看到更多摩托车手时内心的紧张与不安,可通过心理描写和周围环境描写来烘托气氛,比如 “我的手心全是汗,双腿也微微颤抖”,“剧院里昏暗的灯光让气氛更加压抑”。
第二段:阐述电影开始后发现摩托车手的真实面目,他们对动物的关爱,以及自己态度的转变,可通过描写摩托车手的行为细节,如 “他们全神贯注地看着屏幕,看到可怜的流浪狗时发出阵阵叹息” 。
情感线
起初作者因独自面对陌生且看起来凶悍的摩托车手而极度恐惧,进入剧院看到更多时紧张到极点。但随着电影开始,发现摩托车手对动物的关爱,作者的恐惧逐渐消散,取而代之的是惊讶与感动,最终与他们友好交流,收获温暖,感受到不能以貌取人,人与人之间的善良和关爱可以跨越外表的差异。
故事线
作者独自前往剧院,遇到门口的摩托车手。
作者进入剧院看到更多摩托车手,内心极度紧张。
电影开始,作者发现摩托车手对动物的关爱。
作者与摩托车手交流,了解他们的爱心行动。
电影结束,作者与摩托车手成为朋友。
作者带着温暖的回忆回到酒店,改变了对摩托车手的看法。
主旨升华句
Appearances can be deceiving, and true kindness lies within one's heart rather than on one's face.(外表可能具有欺骗性,真正的善良在于内心而非外表。)
This experience taught me never to judge others based on their looks, for everyone has a hidden side filled with love and compassion.(这次经历教会我永远不要以貌取人,因为每个人都有充满爱和同情的一面。)
Through this encounter, I realized that the bond of loving animals can bridge the gap between strangers and break down stereotypes.(通过这次相遇,我意识到对动物的热爱可以弥合陌生人之间的差距,打破刻板印象。)
It is not the way people look or the group they belong to that defines them, but their actions and the love they show.(决定一个人的不是他们的外表或所属的群体,而是他们的行为和展现出的爱。)
This night in the theater not only deepened my love for animals but also broadened my understanding of humanity, reminding me that kindness is everywhere if we are willing to see it.(剧院的这个夜晚不仅加深了我对动物的爱,也拓宽了我对人性的理解,提醒我如果我们愿意去发现,善良无处不在。)
写作示范一
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. My heart sank, and I felt a lump in my throat. The theater was dimly lit, and the loud chatter of the bikers added to my unease. I quickly found a seat in the corner, trying to make myself as small as possible. I kept my eyes down, avoiding any eye contact with them, praying that the movie would start soon and this nightmare would end.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were not what I had feared. As the heart - rending stories of the abandoned dogs unfolded on the screen, the bikers fell silent. I noticed a big, bearded biker wiping a tear from his eye. Another one was clenching his fists in anger at the cruelty shown to the animals. After the movie, I gathered the courage to talk to them. They told me that they were all there to support the animal shelters and had raised a large sum of money. We chatted and laughed, and I was no longer afraid. This experience taught me a valuable lesson: never judge a book by its cover.
写作示范二
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. My hands were shaking, and I could hear my own rapid breathing. The smell of leather and the rumble of their voices made me feel like I had stepped into a den of danger. I sat rigidly in my seat, my mind racing with all the worst - case scenarios.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were not what I had feared. They watched the documentary with rapt attention, their tough exterior melting away as they witnessed the suffering of the dogs. One biker stood up and shared his own story of rescuing a stray dog. His voice was filled with emotion. Touched by their kindness, I joined in the discussion. By the end of the night, I had made new friends, and my view of these "tough - looking" bikers had completely changed. It was a night I would never forget, a reminder that kindness comes in all shapes and sizes.
【答案】范文
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. They were chatting loudly and seemed to fill every corner of the place. My heart sank even further. I quickly found an empty seat in the back row, trying to make myself as inconspicuous as possible. I clutched my bag tightly, constantly glancing around, praying that nothing bad would happen. Every now and then, I peeked at the bikers, wondering what they were doing here. Were they going to cause trouble The tension in the air was palpable, and I regretted my decision to come alone.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were not what I had feared. They had come to support the fundraiser for the local animal shelters. As the documentary unfolded, showing the plight of the abandoned dogs, I saw many of the bikers wiping away tears. They were as moved as I was by the heartwarming and heartbreaking stories. During the intermission, some of them even came over to me, smiling kindly and asking if I was enjoying the film. Their tough exteriors hid big, soft hearts. I felt ashamed of my initial fear and was truly grateful that I had decided to come. We spent the rest of the evening sharing our love for animals and discussing ways to help.