读后续写--公园捡到小流浪，女孩的爱与放手 讲义-2025届云南省曲靖市高三上学期第一次质量检测英语试题
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It was a sunny afternoon in the park. The grass was green, and the flowers were in full bloom. Children were playing, and people were walking their dogs. Among them was a little girl named Emma. She was skipping along the path, enjoying the beautiful day.
Suddenly, she heard a faint meowing sound. She stopped and listened carefully. The meowing seemed to be coming from a nearby bush. Emma walked over to the bush and had a quick glimpse of inside. There, she saw a tiny, frightened kitten. The kitten was all alone, and its fur was dirty and matted (乱蓬蓬的).
Emma felt so sorry for the kitten. She slowly reached out her hand, trying to coax (哄劝) it to come to her. The kitten was hesitant at first but then sniffed her fingers and allowed her to pick it up. Emma cuddled the kitten in her arms, trying to warm it up. She looked around, hoping to find the kitten’s owner, but there was no one in sight.
Emma decided to take the kitten home. She knew her parents might not be too happy about it, but she couldn’t just leave the poor thing. When she got home, her parents were surprised to see the kitten. Emma explained what had happened and begged them to let her keep it. Her parents looked at each other and finally agreed, but only if she took good care of it.
Emma was overjoyed. She gave the kitten a bath, carefully washing away the dirt. The kitten meowed softly as she dried it with a towel. She then made a cozy bed for it in a box and gave it some food and water. The kitten ate hungrily, as if it hadn’t eaten in days.
Over the next few days, Emma spent all her free time with the kitten. She named it Whiskers. She played with it, taught it to use the litter box, and took it to the vet to make sure it was healthy. Whiskers grew stronger and more playful.
One day, Emma took Whiskers to the park where she had found it. She wanted to show it the place where their adventure began. While they were playing, a woman approached them. She looked at Whiskers and gasped (倒吸气).
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The woman screamed, “That’s my kitten! I’ve been looking everywhere for it!”
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Emma thought about the woman’s proposal for a moment and then nodded.
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文章大意
一个阳光明媚的下午，小女孩艾玛在公园玩耍时，听到灌木丛里传来微弱的猫叫声。她发现一只脏兮兮、孤零零且受惊的小猫，心生怜悯，将小猫抱在怀里并决定带回家。起初父母有些惊讶，但在艾玛的恳求下同意她收养，条件是她要照顾好小猫。艾玛给小猫洗澡、做窝、喂食，还带它看兽医，小猫逐渐强壮且活泼起来，艾玛给它取名威克斯。一天，艾玛带威克斯回到发现它的公园，这时一个女人朝她们走来。
故事山分析
开端：艾玛在公园发现一只可怜的小猫。
发展：艾玛把小猫带回家，说服父母收养，悉心照顾小猫。
高潮：艾玛带小猫回到公园，女人出现并声称小猫是她的。
结局（待续写）：续写艾玛和女人之间的互动，以及艾玛最终的决定和后续故事发展。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔 1：艾玛在公园发现小猫，周围没看到主人：在续写中，女人的出现解释了小猫当时为何独自在公园，同时也为小猫归属问题制造冲突。
伏笔 2：艾玛悉心照顾小猫，与小猫建立深厚感情：这使得艾玛在面对女人要回小猫时，内心产生纠结，成为故事发展的情感转折点。
伏笔 3：艾玛带小猫回发现它的公园：为女人发现小猫提供场景，推动故事走向高潮。
伏笔 4：父母同意艾玛收养小猫的条件是照顾好它：可能在后续会影响艾玛对小猫归属的决定，比如她会考虑自己能否继续满足照顾小猫的责任。
伏笔 5：小猫在艾玛照顾下逐渐强壮活泼：暗示小猫在新环境下生活得很好，让艾玛更不舍得它离开，增加故事的张力。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：描述女人声称小猫是她的后的反应，比如她讲述小猫丢失的经过，表达寻找小猫的急切心情；同时描写艾玛的内心感受，她既惊讶又不舍，可能会对女人的说法产生怀疑，通过回忆自己与小猫相处的点滴来表达对小猫的深厚感情。
第二段：讲述艾玛经过思考后点头同意女人提议的原因，比如女人提出合理的共同照顾小猫的方案，或者艾玛意识到女人确实是小猫的主人且小猫在原主人处也能得到很好的照顾；最后描述艾玛和女人达成一致后的场景，如交换联系方式，约定看望小猫的时间等，体现艾玛的善良和成长。
情感线
艾玛从发现小猫时的怜悯，到收养小猫后的喜悦与疼爱，与小猫建立起深厚感情。当女人出现声称小猫是她的时，艾玛内心充满惊讶、不舍与纠结，在情感上进行激烈挣扎。经过思考同意女人的提议后，艾玛虽然有些失落，但更多的是为小猫能有更好的归宿而感到欣慰，展现出她从单纯喜爱小猫到为小猫未来考虑的情感成长。
故事线
艾玛在公园发现小猫。
艾玛把小猫带回家并说服父母收养。
艾玛悉心照顾小猫，小猫茁壮成长。
艾玛带小猫回公园，女人出现称小猫是她的。
艾玛内心纠结，思考女人的提议。
艾玛同意提议，与女人协商小猫的后续安排。
主旨升华句
This experience taught Emma that true love for an animal is not just about keeping it by one's side, but also about ensuring its well - being, even if it means letting go.
Through this encounter, Emma learned the importance of selflessness in loving, understanding that sometimes the best choice for a beloved pet is to let it return to its original home.
What happened that day made Emma realize that the bond between a human and an animal transcends ownership, and that the most precious thing is the care and love given to the creature.
Emma's decision showed that growing up means making tough choices based on what's best for others, rather than just following one's own desires.
This event in Emma's life proved that kindness and understanding can lead to the best outcomes, even in situations filled with emotional turmoil.
写作示范一
The woman screamed, “That’s my kitten! I’ve been looking everywhere for it!” She rushed towards Emma, her eyes filled with both excitement and relief. She quickly explained that her kitten had accidentally run away a few weeks ago. Since then, she had posted countless flyers and searched every corner of the park. Emma was stunned. She held Whiskers tightly, memories of their days together flooding her mind. She couldn't believe she might have to part with the little friend she had grown so close to.
Emma thought about the woman’s proposal for a moment and then nodded. The woman suggested that they could share the care of Whiskers. She promised that Emma could visit Whiskers whenever she wanted. Emma realized that this was the best solution for Whiskers. She smiled at the woman, feeling a sense of peace. From then on, Emma often went to the woman's house to play with Whiskers. She was happy to see that Whiskers had a loving home and that she could still be a part of its life.
写作示范二
The woman screamed, “That’s my kitten! I’ve been looking everywhere for it!” Her voice trembled with emotion. She told Emma how much she had missed her beloved pet and how worried she had been. Emma's heart sank. She looked at Whiskers, who seemed a bit confused by the commotion. Emma's eyes welled up with tears as she thought about all the times she had spent with Whiskers. It was hard for her to imagine not having the little kitten around.
Emma thought about the woman’s proposal for a moment and then nodded. The woman proposed that they could take turns looking after Whiskers. She said that Emma could keep Whiskers for a few days each week. Emma saw the sincerity in the woman's eyes and knew that this way, Whiskers would have two loving families. She wiped away her tears and agreed. After that, Emma and the woman became friends. They shared stories about Whiskers and took good care of the little kitten together.
【答案】(Possible version)
The woman screamed, “That’s my kitten! I’ve been looking everywhere for it!” The woman exclaimed, “That’s my kitten! I’ve searched everywhere!” Emma, stunned, clung to Whiskers, explaining, “I found it alone in the bush, scared and hungry.” The woman clarified Whiskers had escaped days prior. Doubting her, Emma scrutinized the woman until she showed photos on her phone. Realizing Whiskers belonged to her; Emma was saddened but agreed to the woman’s proposal: Emma could visit and receive updates.
Emma thought about the woman’s proposal for a moment and then nodded. She gently handed Whiskers to the woman. The woman thanked her again and again and gave Emma a big hug. As the woman walked away with Whiskers, Emma felt tears rolling down her cheek. But she also felt a sense of happiness because Whiskers was going back to its rightful owner. From that day on, Emma visited Whiskers regularly. The woman usually sent Emma pictures and videos of Whiskers. Emma also made a scrapbook filled with all the memories of her time with Whiskers.
It was a sunny afternoon in the park. The grass was green, and the flowers were in full bloom. Children were playing, and people were walking their dogs. Among them was a little girl named Emma. She was skipping along the path, enjoying the beautiful day.
Suddenly, she heard a faint meowing sound. She stopped and listened carefully. The meowing seemed to be coming from a nearby bush. Emma walked over to the bush and had a quick glimpse of inside. There, she saw a tiny, frightened kitten. The kitten was all alone, and its fur was dirty and matted (乱蓬蓬的).
Emma felt so sorry for the kitten. She slowly reached out her hand, trying to coax (哄劝) it to come to her. The kitten was hesitant at first but then sniffed her fingers and allowed her to pick it up. Emma cuddled the kitten in her arms, trying to warm it up. She looked around, hoping to find the kitten’s owner, but there was no one in sight.
Emma decided to take the kitten home. She knew her parents might not be too happy about it, but she couldn’t just leave the poor thing. When she got home, her parents were surprised to see the kitten. Emma explained what had happened and begged them to let her keep it. Her parents looked at each other and finally agreed, but only if she took good care of it.
Emma was overjoyed. She gave the kitten a bath, carefully washing away the dirt. The kitten meowed softly as she dried it with a towel. She then made a cozy bed for it in a box and gave it some food and water. The kitten ate hungrily, as if it hadn’t eaten in days.
Over the next few days, Emma spent all her free time with the kitten. She named it Whiskers. She played with it, taught it to use the litter box, and took it to the vet to make sure it was healthy. Whiskers grew stronger and more playful.
One day, Emma took Whiskers to the park where she had found it. She wanted to show it the place where their adventure began. While they were playing, a woman approached them. She looked at Whiskers and gasped (倒吸气).
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The woman screamed, “That’s my kitten! I’ve been looking everywhere for it!”
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Emma thought about the woman’s proposal for a moment and then nodded.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
文章大意
一个阳光明媚的下午，小女孩艾玛在公园玩耍时，听到灌木丛里传来微弱的猫叫声。她发现一只脏兮兮、孤零零且受惊的小猫，心生怜悯，将小猫抱在怀里并决定带回家。起初父母有些惊讶，但在艾玛的恳求下同意她收养，条件是她要照顾好小猫。艾玛给小猫洗澡、做窝、喂食，还带它看兽医，小猫逐渐强壮且活泼起来，艾玛给它取名威克斯。一天，艾玛带威克斯回到发现它的公园，这时一个女人朝她们走来。
故事山分析
开端：艾玛在公园发现一只可怜的小猫。
发展：艾玛把小猫带回家，说服父母收养，悉心照顾小猫。
高潮：艾玛带小猫回到公园，女人出现并声称小猫是她的。
结局（待续写）：续写艾玛和女人之间的互动，以及艾玛最终的决定和后续故事发展。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔 1：艾玛在公园发现小猫，周围没看到主人：在续写中，女人的出现解释了小猫当时为何独自在公园，同时也为小猫归属问题制造冲突。
伏笔 2：艾玛悉心照顾小猫，与小猫建立深厚感情：这使得艾玛在面对女人要回小猫时，内心产生纠结，成为故事发展的情感转折点。
伏笔 3：艾玛带小猫回发现它的公园：为女人发现小猫提供场景，推动故事走向高潮。
伏笔 4：父母同意艾玛收养小猫的条件是照顾好它：可能在后续会影响艾玛对小猫归属的决定，比如她会考虑自己能否继续满足照顾小猫的责任。
伏笔 5：小猫在艾玛照顾下逐渐强壮活泼：暗示小猫在新环境下生活得很好，让艾玛更不舍得它离开，增加故事的张力。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：描述女人声称小猫是她的后的反应，比如她讲述小猫丢失的经过，表达寻找小猫的急切心情；同时描写艾玛的内心感受，她既惊讶又不舍，可能会对女人的说法产生怀疑，通过回忆自己与小猫相处的点滴来表达对小猫的深厚感情。
第二段：讲述艾玛经过思考后点头同意女人提议的原因，比如女人提出合理的共同照顾小猫的方案，或者艾玛意识到女人确实是小猫的主人且小猫在原主人处也能得到很好的照顾；最后描述艾玛和女人达成一致后的场景，如交换联系方式，约定看望小猫的时间等，体现艾玛的善良和成长。
情感线
艾玛从发现小猫时的怜悯，到收养小猫后的喜悦与疼爱，与小猫建立起深厚感情。当女人出现声称小猫是她的时，艾玛内心充满惊讶、不舍与纠结，在情感上进行激烈挣扎。经过思考同意女人的提议后，艾玛虽然有些失落，但更多的是为小猫能有更好的归宿而感到欣慰，展现出她从单纯喜爱小猫到为小猫未来考虑的情感成长。
故事线
艾玛在公园发现小猫。
艾玛把小猫带回家并说服父母收养。
艾玛悉心照顾小猫，小猫茁壮成长。
艾玛带小猫回公园，女人出现称小猫是她的。
艾玛内心纠结，思考女人的提议。
艾玛同意提议，与女人协商小猫的后续安排。
主旨升华句
This experience taught Emma that true love for an animal is not just about keeping it by one's side, but also about ensuring its well - being, even if it means letting go.
Through this encounter, Emma learned the importance of selflessness in loving, understanding that sometimes the best choice for a beloved pet is to let it return to its original home.
What happened that day made Emma realize that the bond between a human and an animal transcends ownership, and that the most precious thing is the care and love given to the creature.
Emma's decision showed that growing up means making tough choices based on what's best for others, rather than just following one's own desires.
This event in Emma's life proved that kindness and understanding can lead to the best outcomes, even in situations filled with emotional turmoil.
写作示范一
The woman screamed, “That’s my kitten! I’ve been looking everywhere for it!” She rushed towards Emma, her eyes filled with both excitement and relief. She quickly explained that her kitten had accidentally run away a few weeks ago. Since then, she had posted countless flyers and searched every corner of the park. Emma was stunned. She held Whiskers tightly, memories of their days together flooding her mind. She couldn't believe she might have to part with the little friend she had grown so close to.
Emma thought about the woman’s proposal for a moment and then nodded. The woman suggested that they could share the care of Whiskers. She promised that Emma could visit Whiskers whenever she wanted. Emma realized that this was the best solution for Whiskers. She smiled at the woman, feeling a sense of peace. From then on, Emma often went to the woman's house to play with Whiskers. She was happy to see that Whiskers had a loving home and that she could still be a part of its life.
写作示范二
The woman screamed, “That’s my kitten! I’ve been looking everywhere for it!” Her voice trembled with emotion. She told Emma how much she had missed her beloved pet and how worried she had been. Emma's heart sank. She looked at Whiskers, who seemed a bit confused by the commotion. Emma's eyes welled up with tears as she thought about all the times she had spent with Whiskers. It was hard for her to imagine not having the little kitten around.
Emma thought about the woman’s proposal for a moment and then nodded. The woman proposed that they could take turns looking after Whiskers. She said that Emma could keep Whiskers for a few days each week. Emma saw the sincerity in the woman's eyes and knew that this way, Whiskers would have two loving families. She wiped away her tears and agreed. After that, Emma and the woman became friends. They shared stories about Whiskers and took good care of the little kitten together.
【答案】(Possible version)
The woman screamed, “That’s my kitten! I’ve been looking everywhere for it!” The woman exclaimed, “That’s my kitten! I’ve searched everywhere!” Emma, stunned, clung to Whiskers, explaining, “I found it alone in the bush, scared and hungry.” The woman clarified Whiskers had escaped days prior. Doubting her, Emma scrutinized the woman until she showed photos on her phone. Realizing Whiskers belonged to her; Emma was saddened but agreed to the woman’s proposal: Emma could visit and receive updates.
Emma thought about the woman’s proposal for a moment and then nodded. She gently handed Whiskers to the woman. The woman thanked her again and again and gave Emma a big hug. As the woman walked away with Whiskers, Emma felt tears rolling down her cheek. But she also felt a sense of happiness because Whiskers was going back to its rightful owner. From that day on, Emma visited Whiskers regularly. The woman usually sent Emma pictures and videos of Whiskers. Emma also made a scrapbook filled with all the memories of her time with Whiskers.