湖北省楚天协作体2024-2025学年高二上学期1月期末英语试题读后续写故事续写 讲义

读后续写
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整故事。
They were going to Fort Lauderdale — three boys and three girls — and when they boarded the bus, they noticed Vingo. He sat in front of them, dressed in a plain, ill-fitting suit, never moving, in complete silence.
Two hours later, the bus pulled into a motel (汽车旅馆), and everybody got off for a break except Vingo. He sat rooted in his seat, and the young began to wander about him, trying to imagine his life. When they went back to the bus, one of the girls sat beside him and introduced herself.
“We’ re going to Florida,” she said brightly. “I hear it’s really beautiful.”
“It is” he said quietly, as if remembering something he had tried to forget.
After a while of chatting, slowly and painfully, he began to tell his story. He had been in prison in New York for the past four years, and now he was going home.
“Are you married ”
“I don’t know.”
“You don’t know ” she said.
“Well, when in prison I wrote to my wife,” he said. “I told her that I was going to be away a longtime, and that if she couldn’t stand it, if the kids kept asking questions, if it hurt her too much, well, she could just forget about me. I told her she didn’t have to write me. And she didn’t. Not for three and a half years.”
“And you’ re going home now, not knowing anything ”
“Yeah,” he said shyly. “Well, last week, when I was sure the parole (假释) was coming through, I wrote to her again. We used to live in Brunswick, and there’s a big oak tree (橡树) just as you come into town, I told her that if she didn’t have a new guy and if she’d take me back, she should put a yellow ribbon (丝带) on the tree, and I’d get off and go home. If she didn’t want me, forget it — no ribbon, and I’d go on through.”
“Wow,” the girl exclaimed.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1: She told the others Vingo’s story.
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Paragraph 2: Then suddenly, all of the young people were up out of their seats.
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读后续写
故事续写相关素材整理
续写要点
第一段：着重描写故事关键情节的转折点，比如主角面临的重大抉择、意外的突发事件等。详细刻画主角的心理活动，是紧张、犹豫还是坚定，同时描述周围环境对主角的影响，通过环境烘托气氛，如风雨交加暗示危机，阳光明媚预示转机。
第二段：主要讲述故事的结局，是成功解决问题、实现目标，还是遭遇挫折但获得成长。描写主角和其他角色在结局时的反应，主角内心的感悟，以及这次经历对主角未来的影响，展现故事的深层意义。
情感线
开始主角可能处于消极情绪，如恐惧、迷茫、沮丧。随着故事发展，遇到困难时，情绪可能会进一步恶化到绝望。但在关键时刻，主角受到某种启发或帮助，燃起希望，情绪逐渐转变为坚定。最后，无论结局如何，主角都获得了成长，内心充满自信与对未来的期待，完成从消极到积极的情感蜕变。
故事线
开端：介绍主角的基本情况和初始困境，比如主角是个胆小的孩子，害怕参加学校的演讲比赛。
发展：描述主角为克服困境做出的努力，如努力准备演讲稿，向老师同学请教演讲技巧，但内心依然害怕。
转折：比赛当天出现意外，如忘带演讲稿，或者突然生病，这让主角陷入更大的危机。
高潮：主角在关键时刻克服内心恐惧，凭借自己的能力或者他人的帮助解决问题，如凭借记忆完成演讲，或者在他人鼓励下重新振作完成演讲。
结局：公布比赛结果，无论是否获奖，主角都收获了成长。
影响：这次经历让主角变得更加勇敢自信，对未来的挑战充满信心。
主旨升华句
From this experience, I learned that the greatest obstacle we face is often within ourselves, and once we overcome it, we can achieve anything we set our minds to.（从这次经历中，我明白了我们面临的最大障碍往往来自自身，一旦克服了它，我们就能实现任何我们决心要做的事情。）
This event taught me that no matter how difficult the situation may seem, there is always hope, and with determination and perseverance, we can turn our dreams into reality.（这次事件让我明白，无论情况看起来多么艰难，总会有希望，只要有决心和毅力，我们就能把梦想变为现实。）
Through all the hardships and challenges, I realized that every setback is an opportunity for growth, and it is these experiences that shape us into stronger and more resilient individuals.（历经所有的艰难困苦和挑战，我意识到每一次挫折都是成长的机会，正是这些经历让我们成为更强大、更有韧性的人。）
This journey not only brought me success but also made me understand the true meaning of courage, which is not the absence of fear but the willingness to face it head - on.（这段经历不仅带给我成功，还让我理解了勇气的真正含义，勇气不是没有恐惧，而是敢于直面恐惧。）
Looking back on this adventure, I am filled with gratitude. It made me appreciate the power of self - belief and the support of others, and I am ready to embrace more challenges in the future.（回首这段经历，我满心感激。它让我体会到了自信的力量和他人的支持，我已准备好迎接未来更多的挑战。）
写作示范
示范一
The moment the teacher called my name to give the speech, my heart raced. Standing on the stage, my hands trembled and my mind went blank. I could hear the whispers in the audience, which only made me more nervous. But then, I remembered all the times I had practiced and the encouragement from my friends. Taking a deep breath, I began to speak. At first, my voice was barely audible, but as I got into the flow, my confidence grew.
When I finished, the audience erupted into applause. I couldn't believe I had done it! I had overcome my fear of public speaking. This experience taught me that with determination and the support of others, I could conquer any obstacle. From that day on, I was no longer the timid person I used to be. I was ready to face new challenges with a brave heart.
示范二
As the storm raged outside, the small boat tossed and turned in the rough sea. I was terrified, thinking that all was lost. My friend, however, remained calm. He encouraged me to hold on and work together to keep the boat afloat. Despite the fear, I followed his lead. We bailed out water, adjusted the sails, and fought against the waves.
Finally, the storm subsided, and the sun peeked through the clouds. We made it to the shore safely. Looking back on that terrifying experience, I realized the importance of friendship and teamwork. It was our mutual support and cooperation that saved us. From then on, I valued my friends more and was always willing to lend a hand when they needed me. I also learned that in the face of difficulties, staying calm and working together can lead us to safety and success.
【答案】范文
She told the others Vingo’s story. Soon all of them were in it, looking at the pictures. Vingo showed them of his wife and three kids. “Not only does my wife make our home warm but she is also devoted to taking care of our children.” Vingo murmured, pointing at the pictures. With 20 miles left from Brunswick, the young people took over window seats on the right side, waiting for the approach of the great oak tree. Vingo stopped looking, tightening his face, as if protecting himself against another disappointment. Nobody uttering a word, the bus was full of silence.
Then suddenly, all of the young people were up out of their seats. “Wow!” they all screamed and shouted and cried, doing small dances except Vingo. He was overcome with extreme anxiety and nervousness, with his legs trembling without control and his face losing color. Subsequently, he was deeply shocked, looking at the oak tree, which was covered with countless yellow ribbons. Memories of his wife and kids living with him flooded back, tears welling up in his eyes. It was not until then that he slowly rose from his seat, making his way to the front of the bus to go home.