写作急救知识课写作示范 讲义-湖北省荆门市等4地2024-2025学年高二上学期1月期末英语试题

写作
假定你是李华，上周五，你班开展了一堂急救知识课，邀请了经验丰富的急救专家主讲，并有实操演练环节。请你给你的英国朋友Eric写一封邮件，分享你的所学和感受。内容包括：
1. 急救常识；
2. 你的感受。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Eric,
I hope this email finds you well.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
急救知识课写作示范
写作提纲
第一段：开篇表明写信目的，引出上周五班级开展急救知识课这一事件，简单介绍课程由急救专家主讲且有实操演练环节。
第二段：详细阐述学到的急救常识，如心肺复苏（CPR）的操作步骤、处理烧伤烫伤的方法、创伤性出血的止血技巧等，可列举具体的操作要点。
第三段：分享自己上完这堂课的感受，如意识到急救知识的重要性、增强了应对突发情况的信心、明白了急救在生活中的实际意义等。
语言积累
急救操作相关：perform CPR（进行心肺复苏）、apply direct pressure to stop bleeding（直接按压止血）、elevate the injured limb（抬高受伤肢体）
感受表达相关：be deeply impressed（印象深刻）、realize the significance of（意识到…… 的重要性）、gain confidence in（在…… 方面获得信心）
课程相关：first - aid knowledge class（急救知识课）、hands - on practice（实操练习）、experienced expert（经验丰富的专家）
急救场景相关：emergency situation（紧急情况）、life - saving skills（救命技能）、handle injuries（处理伤口）
佳句
The first - aid knowledge class last Friday was a real eye - opener, equipping me with essential skills that could potentially save lives.（上周五的急救知识课让我大开眼界，教会了我可能拯救生命的关键技能。）
Learning how to perform CPR correctly is like having a life - saving key, which could make a huge difference in critical moments.（学会正确进行心肺复苏就像拥有一把救命钥匙，在关键时刻能发挥巨大作用。）
Through the hands - on practice, I not only mastered the techniques but also understood the importance of calmness and quick thinking in emergencies.（通过实操练习，我不仅掌握了技巧，还明白了在紧急情况下保持冷静和快速思考的重要性。）
This class has made me more aware that first - aid knowledge is not just for professionals but is essential for everyone to have in their life toolkit.（这堂课让我更加意识到，急救知识不仅是专业人员所需，也是每个人生活必备技能。）
I am truly grateful for this opportunity to learn first - aid skills, as they have given me the confidence to face unexpected situations bravely.（我非常感激有机会学习急救技能，因为它们让我有信心勇敢面对意外情况。）
写作示范
示范一
Dear Eric,
I hope this email finds you well. I'm eager to share an exciting experience with you. Last Friday, my class had an amazing first - aid knowledge class.
An expert taught us crucial skills like how to perform CPR. We learned to place hands correctly on the chest and press rhythmically. For burns, we should cool the wound with running water first.
I was deeply impressed. I now realize these skills are vital in daily life. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
示范二
Dear Eric,
I hope everything is going well with you. I want to tell you about a special class we had last Friday. It was a first - aid knowledge class led by an experienced expert, followed by hands - on practice.
During the class, we were taught different ways to deal with common injuries. For bleeding, applying direct pressure and elevating the wound can stop the blood flow effectively.
This class made me understand the significance of first - aid knowledge. It gives me the confidence to handle emergencies. I can't wait to hear from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Eric,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to share with you an insightful first aid class we had last Friday.
A seasoned first aid expert was invited to instruct us on essential first aid knowledge like CPR and how to handle wounds. We also participated in hands-on practice sessions, which greatly enhanced our understanding and skills. It was an eye-opening experience for me. I realized the importance of being prepared for emergencies and how such skills can make a significant difference.
I look forward to applying these skills if needed and encourage you to learn them too
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua