Unit 2 I'll help to clean up the city parks.书面表达专练（含答案+解析） -2024-2025学年八年级英语下册单元重难点高频易错题专练（人教版）

Unit 2 I'll help to clean up the city parks.
单元话题书面表达专练
一、书面表达
1． 假如你是李佳。Alice 是你的美国笔友。在一次聊天中，你们谈到了志愿者活动，Alice 想了解你们班十二月份的志愿者活动安排。请你根据表格提示给 Alice 写一封电子邮件，介绍一下具体的活动安排。
时间 活动
12.9 帮助清洁工打扫公园
12.15 去当地医院给病人唱歌
12.22 为人们修理自行车和电脑
12.30 去附近的小学给孩子们辅导功课、讲英文故事
写作要求：1.词数 80左右(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)；2.根据表格提示，可以适当发挥；3.文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
提示词:cleaner 清洁工;local 当地的;nearby附近的;meaningful有意义的
Dear Alice,
How is everything going
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That's all. Do you have anything interesting in your class Please tell me.
Yours,
Li Jia
2． 假定你是学生李辉，你校英语俱乐部将举办英语征文活动，请你以"My coming winter holiday"为题写一篇短文，要点如下：（1）此刻心情；（2）计划安排；（3）期待收获。
注意：（1）词数60-80。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My coming winter holiday
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3．假如你是李明，你的美国网友Mike来信询问你将如何有意义地度过这个漫长的暑假。请你给他发一封70词左右的电子邮件。
Dear Mike,
Glad to receive your letter. Now I'll show you my summer vacation plan.
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4．假如你是李华，上周六你参加了学校的环保俱乐部(Saving the Environment Club)组织的志愿者活动。其内容包括: 张贴海报、分发广告、打扫街道、打扫公园等。
请给你的笔友Linda写一封电子邮件，向她介绍这次活动的情况，并谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法。不少于80词。
Dear Linda，
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．某国际文化交流中心将于5月份组织一些英、美学生来北京学习、交流，现在在招募志愿者。假如你是第二中学的孙新，请根据以下提示给该项目负责人格林先生(Mr. Green)写一封申请信，要求成为此活动的一名志愿者。
提示：1）Why do you want to be a volunteer in the program
2）What qualifies (使具备资格) you to do the volunteer job
3）When can you do the volunteer job
要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Green,
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Yours,
Sun Xin
6．Paul 是校志愿者俱乐部的一名成员。假如你是Paul，请根据下表写一篇日记，记录自己周六在敬老院的义工活动。
活动时间 周六
活动地点 敬老院
志愿者 志愿者俱乐部成员
活动,上午,▲给老人送水果
▲帮助老人打扫卫生
下午,▲有些同学为老人唱歌或跳舞
▲有些同学和老人下棋
▲你擅长绘画，你为一些老人画像要求：1）条理清楚，意思连贯；
2）包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3）不少于80词。
March 5th Saturday Sunny
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7．志愿者活动是社会和个人成长的需要。你有做一名志愿者的经历吗？你什么时间在哪里做的？感受如何？根据以上要求，以My Volunteer Experience为题，适当拓展，写一篇短文，词数在70左右。
My Volunteer Experience
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答案解析部分
1． Dear Alice，
How is everything going I'd like to tell you something about our plans for the volunteer activities in December. First， we'll help cleaners clean up the park on December 9. On December15，we'll go to the local hospitals and sing songs for sick people to cheer them up. We'll fix bikes and computers for people in need on December 22. On December 30，we'll go to a nearby primary school to help children there with their lessons and tell them some English stories. I believe we'll have a meaningful December.
That's all. Do you have anything interesting in your class Please tell me.
Yours,
Li Jia
这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求按照所给的题目结合提示内容完成这篇关于志愿者活动的文章。写作中要包含活动内容，环节。陈述，表达出作者的观点看法等。写作时注意将内容写全面，注意单词拼写的准确度，语法连贯的准确度，注意连接的流畅度。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般将来时态，人称主要是第一人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
考查提纲作文，这篇短文属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头中间内容是写二月份志愿者活动安排。本文应该用第一人称来叙述活动内容，时态采用一般将来时为主描述活动时，场景应描写细致，叙述完整，保证条理清晰。 这篇范文的优秀之处在于其清晰的结构和流畅的叙述。 首先，作者以问候语"Dear Alice,"开头，营造了亲切的交流氛围。接着，作者通过使用第一人称"we'll"和具体的时间点"on December 9"、"December 15"等，清晰地介绍了志愿者活动的计划，体现了计划的详细和具体性。此外，通过动词的多样化使用，如"help cleaners clean up the park"、"sing songs for sick people"、"fix bikes and computers"、"help children there with their lessons"，展现了活动的多样性和积极意义，使得整篇文章充满活力和感染力。最后，作者以"Have a meaningful December"作为结尾，不仅表达了对活动的期待，也传达了积极向上的价值观。整体上，这篇文章使用了好词好句，如"cheer them up"和"tell them some English stories"，既丰富了语言的表达，也增强了文章的感染力。
2．My coming winter holiday
The winter holiday is coming. I am so excited and there are many things I want to do.
First, I am going to take a trip with my parents to Shanghai. I want to go to the Disneyland. The Spring Festival is coming and I will visit my grandparents and other relatives. Also, I need to do sports. Finally, I'm going to finish my homework and prepare for the next term.
I'm looking forward to the holiday and I hope to have a wonderful time.
这是一篇提纲作文。要求按照所给的提示内容以"My coming winter holiday"为题写一篇短文。写作时可以按以下步骤来写：首先说明寒假即将来临，我此刻的心情怎样，然后陈述我的寒假计划，最后表明我期待在寒假中得到什么样的收获。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般将来时，人称是第一人称单数。写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给的提示内容陈述了作者此刻的心情、寒假的计划安排以及期待的收获。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用准确。一些固定短语，如take a trip、do sports、prepare for、have a wonderful time等以及句型结构，如I am so excited and there are many things I want to do. I'm looking forward to the holiday and I hope to have a wonderful time.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅自然。
3．Dear Mike,
Glad to receive your letter. Now I'll show you my summer vacation plan. First I'll get up early and do sports as usual. This is good for my health. Then I'll help my parents do some housework, such as cooking and washing. I'll also take the great chance to read books, especially some famous novels. At last I want to be a volunteer to help farmers with some farm work and help cleaners clean streets. I think I'll learn a lot as well as have a good time in the coming vacation.
May you have a nice summer vacation！
Li Ming
这是一篇材料作文。要求按照题目要求写出自己对于如何有意义地度过这个漫长的暑假的感想。根据作文开头所给出的第一句话可知，本文用一般将来时表达对于即将到来的事情的计划。用第一人称，注意用上表示顺序的连词，表明先做什么，然后做什么。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将自己对于暑假的计划进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语如 as usual；such as ; take the great chance; 等以及宾语从句的正确使用，如 I think I'll learn a lot as well as have a good time in the coming vacation.运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅自然。
4．Dear Linda,
Nice to write to you. I'm going to tell you something about my voluntary work in Saving the Environment Club of my school. Last Saturday, I did some voluntary work with other volunteers. Some of us put up posters. Some handed out ads. Others swept the streets. We also helped clean up the city parks. When we finished all the work, we were very tired but very happy at the same time. I think it's great to be a volunteer. What do you think of volunteering Please write back soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇提纲类作文，请给你的笔友Linda写一封电子邮件，向她介绍上周六你参加了学校的环保俱乐部(Saving the Environment Club)组织的志愿者活动。其内容包括: 张贴海报、分发广告、打扫街道、打扫公园等，并谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法。文章时态要用一般过去时，人称主要用第一人称。最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求；检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，文中writeto，tell sb about sth，work with，think of等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密 ，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如运用了时间状语从句When we finished all the work, we were very tired but very happy at the same time. 宾语从句I think it's great to be a volunteer等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
5．Dear Mr. Green,
I'm Sun Xin from No. 2 Middle School. I want
to help out as a volunteer in your program. The reason is that I'm interested
in other countries and their cultures and want to make new friends from other
countries. I'm good at English and I'm outgoing. What's more, I'm always ready
to help others. I think that is important for a volunteer. I'm free to help on
the weekend. If I can get the job, I'm sure I can be a great helper.
Yours,
Sun
Xin
这是一篇应用文写作，时态是一般现在时。首先介绍自己想成为志愿者的原因；然后介绍自己做志愿者的资格；最后写自己什么时候能做志愿者工作。注意运用好词好句，同时恰当使用连词。
作文内容全面，涵盖提示信息。运用好词好句，如：want to do；be interested in；make friends；be good at；be ready to do sth.等等。表语从句和宾语从句的运用为文章增色不少，如The reason is that I'm interested in other countries and their cultures and want to make new friends from other countries.I think that is important for a volunteer.。连词and、what's more等运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
6．March 5th Saturday Sunny
As a member of the School Volunteer Club，I helped out as a volunteer in the old people's home today. In the early morning we went there with delicious fruit. After giving the fruit to the old people，we started to help them do some cleaning. In the afternoon，some of us sang and danced to cheer up the old people. Some of us played chess with them. I'm good at painting，so I drew pictures for them.
We spent a happy day with the old people.
这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文章首先介绍自己是志愿者，其次简述了在敬老院一天的活动，最后总结。文中使用了大量短语，例如in the early morning，after doing，give sth to sb，start to do，help sb do sth, do some cleaning, in the afternoon, some of, cheer up, play chess with sb, be good at doing等的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是短文的亮点。
本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。
7．My Volunteer Experience
I am a middle school student. I think volunteering is important and necessary for us all. I took part in a volunteer activity last summer. My classmates and I worked on Sanya Beach as volunteers. We handed out some notices and told the visitors the importance of protecting nature. We picked some rubbish, too. I played beach volleyball in my free time,too. It was only a project of a week, but I learned a lot.
这是一篇提纲作文，本文要求按照所给的题目结合提示内容完成这篇英语周活动的文章。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时，人称主要用第一人称，注意并列连词使用和主谓一致的问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，符合逻辑。
这篇提纲作文详细的阐述了作者的观点、经历和感受，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。其中使用了一些固定的句式和短语，宾语从句的准确使用，为文章增色不少。如 take part in，last summer，hand out，the importance of，play beach volleyball ，in my free time。学习中注意总结并牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。