2025届江西省景德镇市高三上学期二模英语试题故事续写商店里的帮助故事 讲义

阅读下列材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As Mom and I stood in line waiting to cash out at the retail store, I studied the customer in front of us who was reading the magazines to our left. She was young, maybe early twenties, but she already had a stoop (驼背), looking very tired.
The items in her cart included the cheapest cuts of meat and meal materials like pasta, rice, and potatoes. Day-old bread, bargain soap, and inexpensive shampoo (洗发剂)completed her purchases --well, almost. In the corner sat a little doll and a pretty dress that was 50 percent off. She continued to look at the magazines as we waited, and more people lined up behind us. She turned around and asked Mom for help.
“I’m sorry to bother you,” she began shyly. “But can you tell me how much this is I forgot my glasses at home.” “Of course,” Mom said. When Mom finally found the small print and told her, she sighed quietly and put it back.
“Next!” The cashier called and she moved forward to begin her trade. When the store employee finally figured everything out and told her the cost, the woman’s face paled. It was obvious that she didn’t have enough money, and she scanned her groceries to see what she could do without. One by one, she removed things, but it was still not enough. She continued to take much-needed goods out while the cashier patiently deducted (扣除)things.
The child’s items remained in the cart, however. In fact, the palm of her other hand lay protectively across them, as if she didn’t want to be tempted to abandon them. The woman finally paid, and moved down to bag them.
When our turn came, Mom pointed to the pile of items the woman had taken out, added all our meat and fresh milk, and whispered “Separate bags, same bill please” to the cashier. She nodded, even though it was a “pack your own” kind of store.
注意: (1)续写词数应为 150 左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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The cashier went on with her work, and Mom and I picked up all the items.
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The woman turned and looked at my mom in surprise.
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商店里的帮助故事续写
续写要点
第一段要点：详细描述妈妈走向年轻妈妈时的神态，如坚定且充满善意的眼神；动作上，突出妈妈脚步的急切，双手稳稳捧着物品；描写年轻妈妈看到妈妈走来时的反应，从最初的疑惑，到听到妈妈说 “这些是给你的” 时的震惊，着重刻画她的表情和肢体动作，如眼睛瞪大、嘴巴微张、双手不自觉地停住。
第二段要点：深入描绘年轻妈妈听到妈妈解释后的情绪变化，从震惊到感动，泪水夺眶而出，通过语言、表情和动作展现她的感激，如颤抖的声音、紧紧拥抱妈妈的动作；再描写妈妈的回应，温暖的话语和轻柔的动作，如拍拍后背；最后描写 “我” 的内心感受，如对妈妈的敬佩，以及从这件事中获得的成长感悟。
情感线
起初，年轻妈妈因钱不够而窘迫、无奈，在看到妈妈走来时感到疑惑；妈妈则是充满同情和想要帮助的决心。当妈妈表明来意，年轻妈妈转为震惊，听到妈妈的解释后，被深深感动，满是感激。“我” 从好奇、困惑，到看到妈妈帮助他人后，内心充满对妈妈的骄傲以及对善良的深刻感悟，情感得到升华。
故事线
排队等待：“我” 和妈妈在商店排队结账，看到前面一位年轻妈妈购物车里的物品，发现她经济拮据。
结账困境：年轻妈妈结账时钱不够，无奈一件一件拿掉物品，孩子的东西却始终护着。
妈妈决定：妈妈看到这一幕，决定帮助年轻妈妈，让收银员分开装袋，算在同一账单。
给予帮助：妈妈和 “我” 拿着物品走向年轻妈妈，妈妈把物品递给她，年轻妈妈十分震惊。
表达感激：年轻妈妈询问原因，妈妈解释后，她感动落泪，拥抱妈妈表达感谢。
收获成长：“我” 目睹这一切，从妈妈的善举中领悟到善良和慷慨的意义。
主旨升华句
This encounter in the store vividly illustrates that a simple act of kindness can bring warmth and hope to those in need, and it is these acts that make the world a more beautiful place.（这次在商店的相遇生动地表明，一个简单的善举就能给那些有需要的人带来温暖和希望，正是这些举动让世界变得更美好。）
Through this experience, we witness the power of compassion. It has the ability to break through the barriers of strangers and create a connection that enriches our lives and the lives of others.（通过这次经历，我们见证了同情心的力量。它有能力打破陌生人之间的隔阂，建立起一种联系，丰富我们和他人的生活。）
The story of this helping - hand in the store serves as a reminder that no matter how small our actions may seem, they can have a profound impact on someone's life, and kindness knows no boundaries.（商店里这次帮助他人的故事提醒我们，无论我们的行为看似多么微小，都能对他人的生活产生深远影响，善良是没有界限的。）
In the end, we realize that the true value of life lies not in material possessions but in the love and kindness we share with others, and this act of kindness in the store is a shining example of that.（最后，我们意识到生命的真正价值不在于物质财富，而在于我们与他人分享的爱和善良，商店里的这次善举就是一个光辉的例子。）
This heartwarming incident in the store teaches us that when we reach out to help others, we not only bring joy to their lives but also find a deeper sense of purpose and fulfillment within ourselves.（商店里这个温暖人心的事件告诉我们，当我们伸出援手帮助他人时，不仅给他们的生活带来快乐，也在自己内心找到了更深层次的目标和满足感。）
写作示范一
第一段
The cashier went on with her work, and Mom and I picked up all the items. Mom's eyes were filled with a soft glow of kindness as she made her way towards the young woman. Her steps were brisk, as if she couldn't wait to relieve the woman's distress. I followed closely, my heart pounding with anticipation. When we got to the woman, she was still fumbling with her bags, her brow furrowed in worry. Mom cleared her throat gently, and the woman looked up. Mom held out the bags, a warm smile on her face. "Please, take these," she said. The woman's jaw dropped, and her eyes darted from Mom to the bags, then back again. She seemed too stunned to speak.
第二段
The woman turned and looked at my mom in surprise. "I... I don't know what to say," she finally managed to stutter. Mom placed a hand on her shoulder and said, "Don't say anything. Just know that we're all in this together." The woman's eyes welled up with tears, and she pulled Mom into a tight embrace. "You've no idea how much this means to me," she wept. Mom patted her back soothingly. "It's our pleasure. Now, go home and take care of your family." As we walked out of the store, I felt a newfound respect for Mom. This act of kindness had not only helped the woman but also taught me a valuable lesson about empathy and generosity.
写作示范二
第一段
The cashier went on with her work, and Mom and I picked up all the items. Mom's face was set with a determined expression, her eyes fixed on the young woman who was struggling to pack her groceries. She walked with purpose, her arms full of the items she had purchased for the woman. I tagged along, my mind racing with questions. When we reached the woman, she looked up, a confused look on her face. Mom, without a word, placed the bags beside her. "These are for you and your little one," she said softly. The woman's eyes widened in shock, and her hands flew to her mouth. She stood there, frozen in disbelief.
第二段
The woman turned and looked at my mom in surprise. "Why are you doing this " she asked, her voice shaking. Mom smiled gently and said, "Because we all need a hand sometimes. You have a beautiful family, and I hope this helps." The woman's eyes filled with tears, and she threw her arms around Mom. "Thank you from the bottom of my heart," she cried. Mom hugged her back, saying, "You're very welcome. Have a wonderful life." As we left the store, I felt a sense of warmth and happiness wash over me. This simple act of kindness had shown me the power of love and the beauty of helping others.
【答案】Paragraph 1
The cashier went on with her work, and Mom and I picked up all the items. I immediately understood what my mother meant. But we couldn’t find the young woman anywhere when looking around. After we eagerly made our way through the crowd and got out of the store, we finally discovered her walking slowly along the street in a distance. We hurried up to catch up with her, asking her to wait a moment.
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The woman turned and looked at my mom in surprise.. “What’s wrong ” she asked confusedly. Then Mom came up to pat her on the shoulder, saying “You’ve left these things behind. Here you are.” Hands trembling, she received the gifts. Without waiting for her to say thanks, we left. I realized that a little kindness could really make a positive difference to others when I saw my mom doing this action. I am proud of my mom.