2025届山西省临汾市高三上学期考前适应性训练考试(一)英语试题故事续写《偷山核桃的人》故事续写 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Pecan Thief
Plunk! I dropped another plump pecan (美洲山核桃) into my bucket (桶). Then a cool autumn breeze shook a few more nuts loose from the tree and I scrambled to pick them up from the ground. Whew! Pecan picking was really hard work, I thought, and my bucket was barely half full.
I was six years old, visiting my grandfather’s farm in Kansas, and Grandpa had sent me into the woods to gather pecans for us to enjoy later. The pecans were about the size of a man’s thumbnail and just about the tastiest snack I’d ever had. I wasn’t about to let him down.
Just then something caught my eye: A large brown squirrel (松鼠) was digging at the dirt a few feet away. I watched in amazement as he picked up a pecan in his jaws and rushed toward a tree. The industrious squirrel climbed up the trunk and disappeared into a large hole. A moment later the squirrel popped back out and climbed down to the ground to pick up another nut. Once again, he took the pecan back to his secret hiding place inside the hollow of the tree.
Not so secret anymore, I thought. I dashed over to the tree and stared into the hollow. It was stuffed with pecans. This was my chance. Handful by handful, I scooped all of those pecans into my little bucket. Now it was almost full!
I was so proud of myself. I couldn’t wait to show Grandpa all of the pecans I’d collected. I quickly ran back and found him sitting outside, shelling a cob of corn to feed to the hens.
“Look, Grandpa,” I shouted, “look at all of the pecans I found!”
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
He gazed into the bucket, “Well, well, how did you ever find so many ”
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I picked up that little bucket full of pecans and carried it back to the tree.
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《偷山核桃的人》故事续写
续写要点
第一段要点：着重描写爷爷看到 “我” 满满一桶山核桃时的反应细节，从最初的微笑，到眼中流露出的好奇，再到表情转为严肃，通过神态和语言展现爷爷的教育智慧。详细刻画 “我” 的心理变化，从兴奋炫耀到被爷爷教育后的羞愧、自责，通过内心独白和肢体动作，如低头、脸红等，体现 “我” 意识到错误的过程。
第二段要点：深入描绘 “我” 归还山核桃时的动作和心理，动作上细致描述如何小心翼翼地倾倒、摆放，心理上突出对松鼠的愧疚和期待它原谅的心情。同时，描写松鼠回来时的场景，包括松鼠的动作、眼神，以及 “我” 与松鼠的互动，如松鼠的短暂停顿、试探，“我” 的紧张注视等，最后强调 “我” 的成长和感悟。
情感线
起初，“我” 因为捡到满满一桶山核桃而兴奋自豪，迫不及待地想向爷爷展示。爷爷询问后，“我” 因被质疑而有些疑惑，当爷爷指出 “我” 的错误时，“我” 感到羞愧和内疚，内心充满自责。归还山核桃时，“我” 怀着沉重的心情，害怕松鼠的失望。看到松鼠安全储存食物，“我” 感到如释重负，最后得到爷爷的认可，“我” 内心充满温暖和自豪，完成了从自我中心到懂得尊重他人的情感转变。
故事线
独自捡果：六岁的 “我” 在爷爷农场的树林里捡山核桃，觉得过程辛苦，收获寥寥。
发现鼠藏：偶然看到松鼠藏山核桃，“我” 发现了它的秘密树洞，里面堆满山核桃。
装满水桶：“我” 将松鼠藏的山核桃全部装进自己的桶，满心欢喜准备向爷爷炫耀。
爷爷教导：爷爷看到山核桃后，询问来源并引导 “我” 思考松鼠的感受，让 “我” 意识到错误。
归还山核桃：“我” 带着愧疚将山核桃归还给松鼠，认真摆放整齐。
获得成长：松鼠回来储存食物，“我” 得到解脱，回到爷爷身边，获得爷爷认可，懂得尊重他人劳动成果。
主旨升华句
This experience taught me that true happiness lies not in taking what others have worked hard for, but in respecting their efforts and sharing the fruits of their labor.（这次经历让我明白，真正的幸福不在于夺取他人辛勤努力的成果，而在于尊重他们的付出并分享他们的劳动果实。）
Through this encounter with the squirrel and my grandpa's wise words, I learned the invaluable lesson of empathy and the importance of considering others' feelings in every action we take.（通过与松鼠的这次相遇以及爷爷的明智教导，我学到了同理心这一无比珍贵的一课，明白了在我们的每一个行动中都要考虑他人感受的重要性。）
The story of the pecan - stealing incident serves as a reminder that even the smallest creatures' hard work deserves our respect, and that kindness and fairness should guide our interactions with all of nature.（偷山核桃这件事的故事提醒我们，即使是最微小生物的辛勤劳作也值得我们尊重，善良和公平应该指导我们与整个大自然的互动。）
In the end, I realized that the simple act of returning the pecans was not just about righting a wrong, but about cultivating a sense of responsibility and integrity that will stay with me throughout my life.（最后，我意识到归还山核桃这个简单的行为不仅仅是纠正一个错误，更是培养一种责任感和正直感，这种感觉将伴随我一生。）
This heartwarming story of the pecan thief shows that life's most valuable lessons often come from unexpected encounters, and that learning to respect others' hard work is the key to a harmonious and fulfilling life.（这个关于偷山核桃者的温暖故事表明，生活中最宝贵的教训往往来自意想不到的相遇，而学会尊重他人的辛勤劳动是和谐充实生活的关键。）
写作示范一
第一段
He gazed into the bucket, “Well, well, how did you ever find so many ” His eyes sparkled with a mix of surprise and something else I couldn't quite put my finger on. I jumped up and down, spilling out the whole story of the squirrel's hidden treasure. But as soon as the words left my mouth, I saw a frown crease Grandpa's forehead. “Sweetie,” he said, his voice soft but firm, “think about it. That squirrel spent days gathering those pecans to survive the cold winter. What would happen if he came back and found nothing ” I froze, my excitement fading away in an instant. A lump formed in my throat as I realized the selfishness of my actions.
第二段
I picked up that little bucket full of pecans and carried it back to the tree. My steps were slow and heavy, each one filled with regret. When I reached the tree, I crouched down and gently poured the pecans back into the hollow. I arranged them carefully, trying to make it look exactly as it did before. Just as I stood up, I heard a rustle. The squirrel was back. It perched on a low - hanging branch, its beady eyes fixed on me. For a moment, we just stared at each other. Then, as if it understood, the squirrel scampered down and started storing the pecans again. I watched with a smile, feeling a weight lift off my shoulders. When I returned to Grandpa, he gave me a big hug, and I knew I had made the right choice.
写作示范二
第一段
He gazed into the bucket, “Well, well, how did you ever find so many ” A broad smile lit up his face at first, but soon it was replaced by a look of deep thought. Unable to hold my excitement, I babbled about stumbling upon the squirrel's stash. However, instead of the praise I expected, Grandpa's expression grew solemn. “Dear,” he began, “the squirrel worked tirelessly to save these pecans for the tough times ahead. How would you feel if someone took away all your hard - earned things ” I felt my cheeks flush with embarrassment. I looked down at my feet, suddenly ashamed of my actions. The realization of my mistake hit me like a ton of bricks.
第二段
I picked up that little bucket full of pecans and carried it back to the tree. With a heavy heart, I made my way through the woods. When I got there, I knelt beside the tree and slowly emptied the bucket. I made sure every pecan was in its proper place. Just as I finished, I saw the squirrel approaching. It stopped a short distance away, eyeing me warily. I held my breath, hoping it wouldn't be too scared. After a moment, the squirrel hopped closer and started to store the pecans. I watched, feeling a sense of peace wash over me. When I got back to Grandpa, he patted me on the back, and I knew I had learned a valuable lesson about respect and kindness.
【答案】
He gazed into the bucket. “Well, well, how did you ever find so many ” I told him how I’d followed the squirrel and taken the pecans from his hiding place in the hollow tree. I was beaming when I finished my tale. Grandpa congratulated me on how resourceful I’d been in observing the squirrel and his habits. Then he did something that surprised me. He handed the bucket back to me and wrapped his arm gently around my shoulders. “That squirrel worked very hard to gather his winter supply of food,” he said. “Now that all of his pecans are gone, don’t you think that little squirrel will be mighty hungry when it gets cold ” Suddenly I felt as hollow as that old tree. The image of that starving squirrel wouldn’t leave my mind. There was only one thing I could do.
I picked up that little bucket full of pecans and carried it back to the tree. In sight came the heartbroken squirrel squeaking bitterly. Lifting the bucket up, I poured all of the nuts back into the hole, refilling it with all of the squirrel’s pecans and the ones I had collected on my own. “Sorry, I didn’t think about that,” I whispered to the frozen creature. I didn’t eat any of the sweet pecans that night, but I had something much more filling. The satisfaction of knowing I had done just the right thing. A good man should never take advantage of someone else’s hard work, even the squirrels.