读后续写 帮助老人故事续写 讲义 河北省邢台市2024-2025学年高三上学期1月期末英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Summer vacation just began. Steve and Paul had set their hearts on practicing baseball daily to make the freshman team. Steve grabbed his bat and glove, shouting a quick goodbye to his mom before rushing out, the door slamming behind him. Paul was already waiting, looking a little worried.
“What’s wrong Forgot your stuff ” Steve inquired. Paul shook his head, explaining that he had to help Mr Thimpson, whose broken arm prevented him cleaning his garage. Paul sighed, “Mr Thimpson is old and needs help.” Understanding the situation, Steve offered to lend a hand. Together, they headed to the Thimpson’s.
Soon the boys arrived and got started. They found a couple of brooms and shovels (铲). Before they swept, they put boxes that scattered around the garage floor on shelves. As Paul put a big box on a shelf, it fell off and with it falling an envelope. His eyes widened when he found a large sum of money in it.
“You’ve got to see this,” Paul pulled out a handful of bills and showed it to Steve. “Perhaps we can ask Mr Thimpson for tips,” Paul said.
“We can’t!” Steve insisted firmly. He grabbed the money from Paul’s hand and stuffed it back in the envelope. “Knock it off. You’re better than that,” Steve said and put the envelope back on the shelf. “Come on. Let’s get done and go to the park.”
Just then, Mr Thimpson walked into the garage, surprising them. He came to invite the boys to taste the chocolate that Mrs Thimpson had just baked. “Ugh... Sure, Mr Thimpson,” said Paul. “Let us finish up and we’ll be right in.”
After Mr Thimpson left, Paul admitted his moment of embarrassment and regret. “I don’t know what got into me. The Thimpsons are always trying to pay me for the work I do. My mom won’t let me take money from them, since she thinks they don’t have that much. But, Mrs Thimpson is always making me cakes and cookies, and she has knitted (编织) five sweaters for me.”
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The boys finally finished cleaning the garage and then went into the house.
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As they finished the cake and were about to leave, Mrs Thimpson handed Paul a beautifully wrapped package.
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帮助老人故事续写
续写要点
第一段要点：着重描写保罗在屋内的状态，如局促不安的肢体动作，眼神游离不敢直视老人；史蒂夫为缓解气氛所做的努力，如绘声绘色地讲述棒球故事，模仿球员动作；以及老人讲述棒球往事时的神态，眉飞色舞、手舞足蹈，让故事场景更具画面感。
第二段要点：细致刻画保罗收到包裹时的反应，先是惊喜得张大嘴巴，接着小心翼翼打开，看到手套时眼中闪烁光芒；描述老人送礼物时的温暖话语和亲切笑容；最后补充保罗和史蒂夫前往公园后，使用新手套进行棒球练习的场景，如两人的投球、击球动作，脸上洋溢的快乐笑容。
情感线
起初，保罗因看到钱产生不当念头而兴奋，被史蒂夫制止后感到尴尬和后悔，在屋内吃巧克力时满心愧疚。收到礼物时，保罗从惊讶转为感动，对老人充满感激，同时为自己之前的想法感到羞愧。史蒂夫一直秉持正直态度，在帮助保罗的过程中，对保罗的转变感到欣慰，两人都在这次经历中体会到善良带来的温暖与满足。
故事线
假期计划：暑假开始，史蒂夫和保罗计划每天练习棒球，为进入新生队努力。
帮忙抉择：保罗因要帮手臂受伤的辛普森先生打扫车库而犹豫，史蒂夫理解并一同前往。
发现钱财：在打扫车库时，保罗不小心碰落盒子，发现里面有一大笔钱，曾提议要小费，被史蒂夫坚决制止。
屋内交谈：辛普森先生邀请他们品尝巧克力，保罗因之前的想法而愧疚，史蒂夫努力活跃气氛。
收到礼物：准备离开时，辛普森夫人送给保罗一个包裹，里面是崭新的棒球手套。
感悟前行：保罗被礼物感动，和史蒂夫前往公园，决心用手套好好练习，领悟到善良才是真正的回报。
主旨升华句
This experience taught the boys that integrity is the compass that guides us through life's choices, and kindness always returns in unexpected and beautiful ways.（这次经历让男孩们明白，正直是指引我们在人生选择中前行的指南针，善良总会以意想不到的美好方式回馈。）
Through this encounter, they realized that true wealth lies not in money but in the warmth of human relationships and the joy of helping others.（通过这次相遇，他们意识到真正的财富不在于金钱，而在于人际关系的温暖和帮助他人的喜悦。）
The story of Steve and Paul serves as a reminder that even in the face of temptation, standing firm on principles can lead to a path filled with moral growth and genuine happiness.（史蒂夫和保罗的故事提醒我们，即使面对诱惑，坚守原则也能引领我们走向道德成长和真正幸福的道路。）
In the end, they learned that the rewards of kindness are far more precious than any material gain, and that a simple act of helping can create a chain of positive emotions.（最后，他们懂得善良的回报远比任何物质收获都珍贵，一个简单的帮助之举就能创造出一连串的积极情感。）
This heartwarming tale shows that when we choose kindness over self - interest, we not only enrich the lives of others but also find a deeper sense of purpose and fulfillment within ourselves.（这个温暖人心的故事表明，当我们选择善良而非私利时，我们不仅丰富了他人的生活，也在自己内心找到了更深层次的目标和满足感。）
写作示范一
第一段
The boys finally finished cleaning the garage and then went into the house. As they sat around the table, savoring the rich chocolate, Paul fidgeted uneasily in his seat. His eyes constantly darted around, avoiding Mr. and Mrs. Thimpson's gaze. Mr. Thimpson, completely unaware of the inner turmoil, recounted his glorious baseball memories with great enthusiasm, his hands gesturing wildly. Steve, sensing Paul's discomfort, jumped in with a hilarious story about a baseball game where the pitcher threw the ball in the wrong direction. He mimicked the pitcher's confused expression, making everyone laugh, except Paul, who managed a weak smile. Paul's mind was a whirlwind of thoughts, constantly replaying his moment of weakness. He stole glances at the Thimpsons, filled with self - reproach.
第二段
As they finished the cake and were about to leave, Mrs. Thimpson handed Paul a beautifully wrapped package. Paul's eyes lit up in surprise, and his hands trembled slightly as he took it. He carefully unwrapped the package, his breath catching in his throat when he saw the brand - new baseball glove. “We know you've been working so hard on baseball. This is just a small token of our gratitude,” Mrs. Thimpson said, her eyes twinkling with kindness. Paul's face flushed with a mix of embarrassment and gratitude. He stammered out his thanks, his voice thick with emotion. On the way to the park, Paul turned to Steve and said, “I'll never forget this. I'm so glad you stopped me.” They arrived at the park, and with the new glove on, Paul took a powerful swing, the sound of the bat hitting the ball echoing through the air, a symbol of his new - found resolve.
写作示范二
第一段
The boys finally finished cleaning the garage and then went into the house. Once seated, Paul was like a cat on a hot tin roof. He picked at the chocolate, barely tasting it. Mr. Thimpson was in high spirits, sharing stories of his old baseball team, his face beaming with pride. Steve, trying his best to ease the tension, started talking about a crazy baseball match where a fan ran onto the field. He animatedly described the chaos, making Mr. Thimpson laugh heartily. But Paul was lost in his own thoughts, berating himself for his earlier lapse in judgment. He stole a look at the kind - faced Thimpsons, feeling a lump form in his throat. He knew he had to make things right.
第二段
As they finished the cake and were about to leave, Mrs. Thimpson handed Paul a beautifully wrapped package. Paul's eyes widened in disbelief. He slowly opened it, and when he saw the baseball glove, his eyes welled up with tears. “This is for you, dear. We hope it helps you in your baseball journey,” Mrs. Thimpson said gently. Paul was overcome with emotion. He thanked her profusely, his voice breaking. On their way to the park, Paul said to Steve, “I feel so ashamed of what I thought. But this gift... it's like a second chance.” When they reached the park, Paul put on the glove and threw a ball high into the sky, watching it soar, a symbol of his new - found understanding of kindness and integrity.
【答案】范文
The boys finally finished cleaning the garage and then went into the house. The air was filled with the warm, comforting smell of freshly baked chocolate cake. Steve and Paul sat down at the dining table, their minds still on the money they had found but not mentioned to Mr. Thimpson. They both felt a sense of relief as they enjoyed the delicious cake, trying to forget the unsettling discovery.
As they finished the cake and were about to leave, Mrs. Thimpson handed Paul a beautifully wrapped package. Paul’s eyes lit up with curiosity and gratitude. “Thank you, Mrs. Thimpson,” he said, eagerly tearing open the package to find a handmade sweater, perfectly knitted to his size. “This is amazing! You shouldn’t have,” Paul added, feeling a mix of embarrassment and appreciation. Mrs. Thimpson smiled warmly, “Paul, you’re like part of our family. We just want to show our appreciation for all the help you give us.” Steve watched his friend, realizing that sometimes, the best rewards aren’t always monetary. Sometimes friendship is more valuable than money.