读后续写 冒险比赛故事 讲义 福建省宁德市部分学校2024-2025学年高三下学期开学考试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“The adventure race is starting in five minutes, everyone! Please get ready!” the teacher announced cheerfully. On a Saturday morning, I was stretching and warming up with the rest of my teammates as the cool morning breeze brushed against my skin. My school had planned an adventure race for my level and we were required to take pictures of our surroundings with a camera during the race.
Before I knew it, the adventure race was starting as teams started gathering at the checkpoints. It was not long before the sound of the whistle was heard. Determinedly, my team members, Irene, Jennie and Lucas started venturing out in the forest. Walking purposefully onto the path of the forest, we took numerous photographs of the greenery around us. Not too long after, we started feeling anxious as we could no longer see any trees that were marked, indicating that we lost the path we were supposed to follow.
Finding ourselves in a fix, we were worried about how we were going to get back on track and were panicking. “Perhaps... we can look through the photographs we took to see our previous location,” Jennie suggested while holding the camera. Needless to say, we readily agreed to her idea and started looking through the pictures. Little did we know that “someone” was stealthily spying us. Out of nowhere, our camera was suddenly taken away! Apparently nobody was there and we stood in shocked silence, feeling thunderstruck.
Just then, I heard the rustling(沙沙声) of trees. Confused, I looked up at the trees. Then, I saw it! A flash appeared on one of the tree branches, and I gestured my teammates to keep quiet. I was astonished by the sight that greeted me. A monkey was holding up our camera on the tree.
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“How are we supposed to get back our one and only camera now ” Irene asked.
Quite coincidentally, we had been back on track.
冒险比赛故事续写
续写要点
第一段要点：在描述大家讨论拿回相机的过程中，增加更多人物的细节刻画，如 Irene 皱眉、跺脚等焦急的动作，Lucas 思考时的眼神变化；在寻找水果时，描述森林环境，如茂密的灌木丛、泥泞的小路等增加难度；抢回相机时，详细描绘猴子的反应，如尖叫、跳开等。
第二段要点：回到正轨后，补充团队成员的互动，如相互击掌、欢呼等；在拍照环节，对森林景色进行更细腻的描写，如阳光在树叶上形成的光斑形状，野花的独特香气；到达终点时，描述大家的表情、动作，如疲惫但满足的笑容、瘫倒在地又兴奋爬起等。
情感线
起初，相机被抢，大家满心焦虑、无助，感到绝望。在讨论拿回相机方法时，有期待也有担忧。寻找水果时，因森林环境困难，又增添紧张感。抢回相机瞬间，转为惊喜、激动。回到正轨后，是兴奋、充满斗志，完成比赛时，内心满是自豪、满足，对这次经历充满感慨。
故事线
比赛开始：周六早晨，冒险比赛即将开始，队员们在老师宣布后，进行热身准备，随着哨声响起，比赛正式开始。
迷失方向：队员们在森林中按要求拍照，不久后发现迷失了有标记的路径，开始感到焦虑和恐慌。
相机被抢：正当大家通过照片寻找位置时，相机突然被一只猴子抢走，队员们震惊不已。
夺回相机：队员们讨论用水果引诱猴子，分头寻找后，Lucas 拿着浆果引诱猴子，“我” 趁机抢回相机。
重回正轨：寻找猴子时，意外发现有标记的树，回到正确路线，继续拍照前行。
完成比赛：队员们克服困难，欣赏并记录森林美景，最终按时到达终点，完成比赛。
主旨升华句
This adventure race taught us that in the face of unexpected challenges, teamwork and quick - thinking are the keys to success, and every obstacle is an opportunity for growth.（这次冒险比赛让我们明白，面对意想不到的挑战时，团队合作和敏捷思维是成功的关键，每一个障碍都是成长的机会。）
Through this experience, we realized that nature, with its beauty and unpredictability, not only tests our physical strength but also enriches our spirits and deepens our bonds with each other.（通过这次经历，我们意识到大自然，以其美丽和不可预测性，不仅考验我们的体力，还丰富我们的精神，加深我们彼此之间的联系。）
The story of our adventure serves as a reminder that setbacks are just temporary detours on the road to achievement, and with determination and cooperation, we can overcome any difficulty.（我们的冒险故事提醒我们，挫折只是通往成功道路上的临时弯路，凭借决心和合作，我们可以克服任何困难。）
In the end, we learned that the true value of an adventure lies not only in the destination but also in the journey, and the memories created along the way are the most precious treasures.（最后，我们懂得了冒险的真正价值不仅在于目的地，还在于旅程，沿途创造的回忆是最珍贵的财富。）
This exciting journey shows that when we work together, our combined strength and wisdom can turn a potential disaster into a remarkable adventure, and that is the power of unity.（这次激动人心的旅程表明，当我们齐心协力时，我们的力量和智慧相结合可以将潜在的灾难变成非凡的冒险，这就是团结的力量。）
写作示范一
第一段
“How are we supposed to get back our one and only camera now ” Irene asked, her voice shrill with panic. She paced back and forth, her hands nervously wringing together. Lucas furrowed his brows, his eyes scanning the forest floor. “I think there must be some fruits around here that monkeys love,” he said, his tone determined. Jennie nodded, her face pale but resolute. We plunged into the thick underbrush, the branches scratching at our skin. The forest floor was muddy, making our steps slippery. After a long search, we finally found some ripe, juicy berries. Lucas slowly approached the tree, his hand outstretched with the berries. The monkey chattered nervously, its eyes fixed on the fruits. As it inched closer, I tensed up, ready to pounce. Just as the monkey grabbed the berries, I lunged forward and snatched the camera, my heart pounding in my chest.
第二段
Quite coincidentally, we had been back on track. As soon as we recognized the familiar markings on the tree, Jennie let out a whoop of joy, and we all high - fived each other. With renewed enthusiasm, we continued our journey. The sunlight filtered through the leaves, creating a dappled pattern on the ground. The wildflowers were in full bloom, their sweet fragrance filling the air. We stopped frequently to take pictures, capturing the beauty of the forest. When we finally crossed the finish line, we were exhausted but elated. We collapsed onto the grass, laughing and reminiscing about our adventure. This race was not just a competition; it was a journey of discovery and teamwork.
写作示范二
第一段
“How are we supposed to get back our one and only camera now ” Irene cried out, her eyes wide with fear. Lucas stood there, his head tilted in thought. “I've got an idea,” he said suddenly. “Monkeys are attracted to bright colors. Let's find something colorful to trade with it.” We rummaged through our backpacks and found a brightly - colored scarf. Lucas waved the scarf in the air, calling out to the monkey. The monkey watched us warily, swinging from branch to branch. Slowly, it came closer, curious about the scarf. As it reached for the scarf, I carefully reached up and grabbed the camera. The monkey let out a screech and jumped away, but we had our camera back.
第二段
Quite coincidentally, we had been back on track. The moment we saw the marked tree, a sense of relief washed over us. We continued our race, our spirits soaring. The forest seemed even more beautiful now. The leaves rustled in the wind, as if cheering us on. We took pictures of the mushrooms growing on the tree trunks, the small streams trickling through the forest. When we crossed the finish line, we were greeted with applause. We looked at each other, our faces flushed with excitement. This adventure had taught us the importance of perseverance and cooperation, and we would always cherish the memories.
参考答案
“How are we supposed to get back our one and only camera now ” Irene asked. It was not long before we started our mission to distract the monkey. In a bid to get the monkey's attention, I cautiously took out a banana from my backpack. The monkey instantly let go of the camera and its eyes lit up with joy. Meanwhile, Jennie was jumping around, trying her best to catch the camera. Without wasting a moment, we ran as fast as we could. It was some time later when we stopped running.
Quite coincidentally, we had been back on track. The marked trees came in our sight. Bearing in mind that we still needed to complete the adventure race, we made our way along the path. Eventually, we passed the finish line of the race and were excited with joy to have completed it despite the predicament that we were in. “That was surely an exciting adventure,” I commented with a cheerful smile as the rest shared the same opinion as I did. I would never forget my teammates and I working together despite the accident. Recalling the exciting adventure, I still swelled with pride.