河南省漯河市2024-2025学年高二上学期期末质量监测英语试题故事续写钱包失而复得故事续写 讲义

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名称 河南省漯河市2024-2025学年高二上学期期末质量监测英语试题故事续写钱包失而复得故事续写 讲义
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ms. Eleanor, a senior lady, lives by herself in an urban area. She is a lady with a warm smile and is known for her fondness of bookshops and her habitual walks through the city’s historical region.
One evening, as she was heading back to her home from a park, Ms. Eleanor suddenly realized that her purse was missing. She retraced her steps, searching every corner of the park. Her heart sank with each passing moment, as the purse contained a treasured photograph of her departed husband, which she carried as a precious treasure.
As the sun set, casting long shadows along the pavements, Ms. Eleanor felt an overwhelming sense of loss and hopelessness. In the meantime, a young man named Tom was walking home from her cherished job at the community library. As he passed by the bookshop which Ms. Eleanor had visited earlier that day, he spotted something nestled in the corner of the pavement. Interested, he picked it up and discovered it to be a well-worn leather purse. Tom opened the purse, seeking some identification to return it to its owner. It wasn’t long before he saw the cash and personal belongings inside. Recognizing the significance of what he held, he decided to wait at the spot where he found the purse, hoping that the owner would return to search for it.
As nightfall blanketed the city, Ms. Eleanor, with a heavy heart, headed back to her beloved bookshop to make her last attempt to get back her purse. Her pace was slow and weary, yet her determination was strong. As she drew near to the bookshop, she noticed a figure standing under a street lamp, hold something in his hands.
“Pardon me, young person. I was wondering if you happened to come across an old purse ” Ms. Eleanor inquired in a low tone The young man’s face brightened and he was about to hand the purse to the elderly lady. However, he hesitated slightly because he wasn’t entirely certain that the purse actually belonged to the elderly lady.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Sensing the young man’s worry, Ms. Eleanor decided to confirm her ownership.
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Paragraph 2: Tom said “It’s my pleasure. Forget about the money.”
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钱包失而复得故事续写
续写要点
第一段要点:着重描写埃莉诺女士确认钱包归属时的细节,比如她回忆照片时的表情、声音的变化,眼中流露出的深情与眷恋,通过这些细节展现她对钱包内物品的珍视。同时细致刻画汤姆的反应,从最初的犹豫,到认真倾听埃莉诺女士的描述,眼神中透露出的思考与判断,最后确信后放心递还钱包的动作,如双手恭敬地递出。
第二段要点:深入描绘汤姆拒绝报酬时的坚决态度,如坚定的眼神、摆手的动作、诚恳的语气。详细描述埃莉诺女士和汤姆聊天的内容,除了工作,还可以涉及对书籍的热爱、对社区生活的看法等,展现两人的共鸣。最后描述两人分别时的场景,周围环境的烘托,如温暖的灯光、轻柔的晚风,以及他们内心的感受,突出善良带来的美好。
情感线
起初,埃莉诺女士丢失钱包后满心焦急、失落与绝望,尤其是想到钱包里亡夫的照片,内心充满痛苦。汤姆捡到钱包时,怀着想要归还失主的单纯善意。当埃莉诺女士出现,汤姆因不确定归属而犹豫,埃莉诺女士则紧张担忧。确认归属后,埃莉诺女士转为欣慰与感激,汤姆为帮助他人感到满足。拒绝报酬时,埃莉诺女士更加感动,两人聊天增进了解,分别时都被善良带来的温暖所感染,情感得到升华。
故事线
钱包丢失:埃莉诺女士从公园回家途中发现钱包丢失,里面有亡夫的珍贵照片,她焦急地沿路寻找。
钱包被捡:汤姆下班路过书店,在人行道角落捡到埃莉诺女士的钱包,决定原地等待失主。
失主出现:埃莉诺女士来到书店寻找钱包,看到汤姆站在路灯下,上前询问。
确认归属:埃莉诺女士通过描述钱包内物品,尤其是亡夫照片的细节,让汤姆确信她是失主,汤姆归还钱包。
拒绝报酬:埃莉诺女士要给汤姆报酬,汤姆坚决拒绝,两人开始聊天。
温暖告别:聊天中埃莉诺女士了解到汤姆的工作和爱好,邀请他喝茶,两人带着温暖的心情告别。
主旨升华句
This encounter between Ms. Eleanor and Tom serves as a beautiful reminder that in the hustle and bustle of urban life, the simple act of kindness and honesty can still shine brightly, bridging the gap between strangers and bringing warmth to our hearts.(埃莉诺女士和汤姆的这次相遇美好地提醒着我们,在喧嚣的城市生活中,善良和诚实的简单举动依然能够闪耀光芒,弥合陌生人之间的差距,温暖我们的心灵。)
Through the lost and found of the purse, we witness the power of human kindness. It not only restores the lost item but also creates a connection that enriches the lives of both the giver and the receiver.(通过钱包的失而复得,我们见证了人性善良的力量。它不仅找回了丢失的物品,还建立了一种联系,丰富了给予者和接受者的生活。)
In a world that sometimes seems cold and indifferent, the story of Ms. Eleanor and Tom shows that a single act of honesty, like Tom's return of the purse, can ignite a spark of hope and restore our faith in the goodness of humanity.(在一个有时看似冷漠的世界里,埃莉诺女士和汤姆的故事表明,像汤姆归还钱包这样一个简单的诚实举动,就能点燃希望的火花,恢复我们对人性善良的信心。)
The bond formed between Ms. Eleanor and Tom over the lost purse is a testament to the fact that kindness has no boundaries. It can bring people from different walks of life together and create a moment of pure joy and connection.(埃莉诺女士和汤姆因丢失的钱包而建立的联系证明了善良没有界限。它可以将来自不同生活背景的人聚集在一起,创造出纯粹的快乐和联系的时刻。)
This heartwarming story teaches us that even the smallest act of kindness, such as returning a lost purse, can have a profound impact on someone's life, and it is these acts that make our world a better place to live in.(这个温暖人心的故事告诉我们,即使是归还丢失钱包这样最微小的善举,也能对某人的生活产生深远的影响,正是这些举动让我们的世界成为一个更美好的居住之地。)
写作示范一
第一段
Sensing the young man’s worry, Ms. Eleanor decided to confirm her ownership. Her eyes glistened with unshed tears as she began, "That photo in the purse was taken on a sunny day at the beach. My husband, with his kind smile, held my hand tightly. We were so happy that day, and that photo has been my most precious possession since he passed away." Her voice choked with emotion. Then, she took out the old - fashioned keychain, saying, "This was a gift from my father when I first moved into this city." Tom watched her intently, seeing the truth in her eyes. Finally, he nodded and handed the purse to her with a relieved smile.
第二段
Tom said “It’s my pleasure. Forget about the money.” Ms. Eleanor was deeply moved by his selflessness. She took his hand and said, "Young man, your kindness is truly rare. Not everyone would do this." They then started chatting about their love for books. Tom shared his experiences of helping students find the right books at the library. Ms. Eleanor was fascinated and said, "I've always loved the world of books. It seems we have a lot in common." Before leaving, she gave Tom her address and said, "Please come for tea. I really want to thank you properly." As they parted, the city seemed to glow with a new kind of warmth, a warmth born from a simple act of kindness.
写作示范二
第一段
Sensing the young man’s worry, Ms. Eleanor decided to confirm her ownership. She took a deep breath and said, "Inside, there's a small Bible. My mother used to read it to me every night when I was a child. It's been with me through all these years." Her hands trembled as she spoke. Then, she mentioned the unique design of the wallet, a small embroidery on the corner that her husband had made for her. Tom listened carefully, and as Ms. Eleanor's words filled his ears, he was convinced. He placed the wallet in her hands gently, saying, "I'm glad it's yours." Ms. Eleanor let out a sigh of relief and thanked him profusely.
第二段
Tom said “It’s my pleasure. Forget about the money.” Ms. Eleanor was touched by his generosity. She insisted on giving him something, but Tom firmly declined. They then talked about the community. Tom told her about the community events he had organized at the library. Ms. Eleanor was impressed and said, "I've always wanted to be more involved. Maybe you can tell me more." Before they parted, Ms. Eleanor gave him a warm hug and said, "You've made my day. I hope to see you again soon." As they walked away, both of them knew that this encounter had changed them, making them believe more in the beauty of kindness.
【答案】参考范文:
Sensing the young man’s worry, Ms. Eleanor decided to confirm her ownership. She described the contents of the purse, mentioning the photograph of her late husband whom she cherished deeply. “It’s a small black and white picture, slightly worn at the edges, but it’s the most important thing.” she explained. Tom, moved by her words and the evident sorrow, handed the purse to the elderly woman. The lady was full of gratitude and asked him to accept the money in her purse for his good deed.
Tom said, “It’s my pleasure. Forget about the money.” As the whole incident progressed, a sense of relief and enlightenment enveloped him. Tom added, “It’s I who should be grateful. Your heartfelt thanks is more precious than any money. You’ve also taught me to value my beloved ones. Nice to know you, Ms. Eleanor.” With those words, Tom prepared to depart, his heart filled with a sense of accomplishment. Ms. Eleanor stood there, a satisfied smile emerging on her face as she viewed Tom’s departure, both having gained a sense of joy from their brief but meaningful interaction.
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