辽宁省葫芦岛市2024-2025学年高三上学期1月期末英语试题故事续写花瓶破碎故事 讲义

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名称 辽宁省葫芦岛市2024-2025学年高三上学期1月期末英语试题故事续写花瓶破碎故事 讲义
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The sound of glass breaking is instantly recognizable. I’d been telling my best friend Missi a silly story and had spun around in the living room when I heard that sound and froze.
When I looked down at the carpet, it was covered with pieces of sparkling red, pink and clear glass. Missi said, “Oh, no, not the vase.”
“Why What did I do ” My face reddened.
“Abby, that glass vase was one of the few items my relatives brought when they came to America,” Missi replied nervously. “If you’d broken anything else in the apartment, I would’ve gladly said I did it. But you’re going to have to tell my mom that it was your fault, and she’s going to be really mad.”
I was terrified. I’d destroyed a priceless family heirloom (传家宝). Why did I have to spin around like that
We gathered up the shattered pieces. I kept saying that maybe it could be fixed, but Missi said gently it didn’t look possible. I insisted we keep the pieces. The glass was so fragile, like a colourful, swirly light bulb had exploded. Some of it broke even more as we tried to sweep it up carefully.
Missi said her mom would be home by six. My stomach was in knots. Would her mom yell at me or punish me Would she tell me I couldn’t stay in their apartment for the weekend I couldn’t stop playing the fifteen seconds over in my mind, me spinning fast and the sound of glass crashing. The only thing I could think of to say was “I’m sorry.”
A couple of minutes after six we heard a key turn in the door. Her mom was home. Right from the start, we could see she was in a good mood. “Hello! It’s hot today. I want to treat you girls to that frozen yogurt I know you like, let’s go! ” her mom said. She pointed at the open door.
注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Before that, I need to tell you something.” I said.
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Hearing my apology, Missi’s mother burst into laughter.
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花瓶破碎故事续写
续写要点
第一段要点:细致描绘 “我” 承认错误时的细节,如声音颤抖、眼神闪躲、身体微微颤抖,突出紧张与害怕;描述 Missi 妈妈从最初的好心情到听到消息后的表情骤变,震惊、眼神凝固,以及走向客厅查看碎片时的动作,弯腰、轻轻触碰碎片,展现她对传家宝的珍视和此刻的复杂心情。
第二段要点:着重刻画 Missi 妈妈笑出声后的解释,强调她话语中的温暖与宽容,如 “it's just a vase” 时的轻松语气;描写 “我” 从惊讶到感动的转变,惊讶时嘴巴微张、瞪大双眼,感动时眼眶泛红、嘴角上扬;最后补充 “我” 在之后生活中对诚实和友谊有更深感悟的具体表现,如更勇敢承认错误、更珍惜友情。
情感线
起初,“我” 打破花瓶后极度害怕和自责,内心充满忐忑,担心 Missi 妈妈的责备。Missi 也因传家宝被打破而紧张。当 Missi 妈妈回家时,“我” 的恐惧达到顶点。承认错误后,“我” 满心等待惩罚,而 Missi 妈妈的宽容让 “我” 瞬间从恐惧转为惊讶,随后是深深的感动与如释重负,情感得到极大的转变与升华。
故事线
打破花瓶:“我” 给 Missi 讲笑话时在客厅旋转,不小心打破了她家珍贵的玻璃花瓶。
忐忑等待:“我” 和 Missi 收集碎片,明知难以修复,“我” 满心自责,害怕 Missi 妈妈回家后的反应。
妈妈回家:Missi 妈妈六点多回家,心情很好,准备带我们去吃冷冻酸奶。
勇敢认错:“我” 鼓起勇气向 Missi 妈妈承认打破花瓶的错误,Missi 妈妈的表情从愉悦转为震惊。
获得原谅:Missi 妈妈非但没有生气,反而笑着表示理解,强调人比物品重要。
收获感悟:“我” 深受触动,懂得了诚实的重要性以及友情和善良的力量。
主旨升华句
This incident taught me that in the face of mistakes, honesty is the cornerstone of resolving conflicts, and the embrace of kindness can turn a moment of despair into a precious life lesson.(这次事件让我明白,在错误面前,诚实是解决冲突的基石,而善意的包容能将绝望时刻转化为宝贵的人生教训。)
Through this experience, I realized that true friendship and understanding are not tested by material losses but by how we support each other when facing difficulties, and that is what truly matters in life.(通过这次经历,我意识到真正的友谊和理解不是由物质损失来考验,而是在面对困难时我们如何相互支持,这才是生活中真正重要的东西。)
The unexpected forgiveness from Missi's mother made me understand that kindness has the power to heal wounds, both physical and emotional, and that we should always approach others with compassion.(Missi 妈妈出人意料的原谅让我明白,善良有治愈身心创伤的力量,我们应该始终以同情心对待他人。)
This story serves as a reminder that the value of human relationships far outweighs that of any possession, and that being honest and forgiving can create a more harmonious and loving world.(这个故事提醒我们,人际关系的价值远远超过任何财物的价值,诚实和宽容能创造一个更和谐、更友爱的世界。)
In the end, I learned that the courage to admit mistakes, combined with the grace of forgiveness, can lead to personal growth and stronger bonds, and these are the treasures that last a lifetime.(最后,我懂得了承认错误的勇气加上宽容的美德能带来个人成长和更牢固的关系,这些是一生的财富。)
写作示范一
第一段
“Before that, I need to tell you something.” I said. My voice was barely above a whisper, and I could feel my heart pounding in my chest. Summoning all my courage, I met Missi's mother's eyes. “I'm dreadfully sorry, but I broke the glass vase in the living room. I know it's a family heirloom passed down for generations, and I feel so guilty.” Tears streamed down my cheeks, and I clenched my fists tightly. Missi stood beside me, her face pale with worry. Missi's mother's cheerful expression vanished in an instant. Her eyes widened in shock, and she took a step back. Without a word, she walked briskly into the living room and knelt down to examine the broken pieces, her fingers gently touching the fragments.
第二段
Hearing my apology, Missi’s mother burst into laughter. I was stunned, my mouth hanging open in disbelief. “Oh, sweetie,” she said, still smiling, “it's just a vase. Memories are not bound by objects. You two are like family to me, and your well - being is what truly matters. Accidents are a part of life.” She got up and wrapped me in a warm embrace. “Let's forget about it and go enjoy our frozen yogurt. There are countless beautiful vases out there, but there's only one amazing you.” A sense of warmth and relief flooded over me. From that moment on, I became more aware of the value of honesty and the power of kindness in mending relationships.
写作示范二
第一段
“Before that, I need to tell you something.” I said. My hands were clammy, and my voice quivered uncontrollably. I took a deep, shaky breath and forced myself to look Missi's mother straight in the eye. “I'm really sorry, but I accidentally shattered the glass vase in the living room. I know how important it is to your family, and I feel just awful.” As I spoke, my vision blurred with tears. Missi stood beside me, shifting nervously from foot to foot. Missi's mother's smile disappeared immediately. Her face turned solemn, and she looked at me with a mix of surprise and disappointment. Then, she slowly walked into the living room, her eyes fixed on the scattered pieces of glass on the carpet.
第二段
Hearing my apology, Missi’s mother burst into laughter. I stared at her in utter astonishment, unable to believe my ears. “Oh, honey,” she said, chuckling softly, “it's just a thing. You and Missi are the most precious things in my life. Accidents happen, and as long as no one's hurt, it's all okay.” She came over and gave me a big hug. “Don't worry about it. Let's go have some fun and enjoy our frozen yogurt. There are always more vases, but there's only one you.” A weight seemed to lift off my shoulders, and I felt a newfound sense of gratitude. From that day forward, I made a promise to myself to always be honest and to cherish the kindness shown to me.
【答案】
“Before that, I need to tell you something,” I said. I hesitantly explained how I had accidentally broken the treasured family heirloom. Holding back tears, I apologized sincerely and told her about our attempts to glue the shattered pieces. Missi added her explanation, confirming the details and emphasizing that it was an honest mistake. She also tried to take responsibility and expressed regret for being too focused on the story to remind me of the vase.
Hearing my apology, Missi’s mother burst into laughter. “I understand that it was an accident, and I appreciate your honesty,” she said. “As that vase held great sentimental value for our family, I replaced it with a copy before. Something that important and precious should be carefully preserved, right The original lies in a safe case in my room.” I was so relieved that I burst into tears. Missi’s mom offered gentle comfort and praised for my honesty. Even though it turned out to be a false alarm, I still learned a valuable lesson regarding the importance of taking responsibility for my actions.
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