读后续写 露西和杰克音乐比赛 讲义 山西省吕梁市2024-2025学年高三上学期期末考试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Lucy and her friend Jack loved being at school every day because they both really enjoyed music lessons. Lucy began playing two instruments, the piano and the violin, but she enjoyed singing more. She dreamed of being a pop star like Alex Pepper one day. Jack had a guitar and played pop and rock music very well. He wanted to be the coolest guitar player in the world.
One day, their music teacher, Mr. Brown, said to the class, “We’re going to have a music competition here at school next Friday. If you want to enter, you must sing or play a song on the school stage. Alex Pepper will be here that day for his concert at City Stadium, so I wrote to his manager and asked him to come and give you some guidance. He’ s going to decide the best performer and invite him or her to his concert.”
Lucy and Jack determined to take part in the competition as a team. They chose a song called I’ll help you! They practiced on the playground in their spare time. Lucy made such great progress that Jack was deeply absorbed in her singing and often said admirably, “How sweet your voice is!” While they pracitced, the branches of the trees around the playground were swaying（摇摆） in the wind as if they were enjoying their performance.
On the afternoon of the competition, all the students were waiting in the school hall for Alex Pepper to arrive. When he walked in with Mr. Brown, everyone clapped. Alex smiled and waved and then he and Mr. Brown sat down on special seats in front of the school stage.
Then the competition started. Lots of other students sang before Jack and Lucy. An older girl named Mary sang very well. Some students shouted “More! More!” when she finished. “She’s going to win,” thought Lucy. Soon Mr. Brown pointed to Jack and Lucy and called out that it was their turn.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右；
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Lucy began to tremble unknowingly when she stood in the middle of the stage.
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The big moment came.
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露西和杰克音乐比赛
续写要点
第一段要点：在 Lucy 克服紧张情绪表演的过程中，增加对观众反应的细节描写，如有的同学随着节奏轻轻点头，有的同学露出惊喜的表情；补充舞台上的灯光效果，如灯光如何聚焦在他们身上，营造出梦幻的氛围；还可以描写 Lucy 脑海中浮现出为了这次比赛付出的努力，如手指磨破仍坚持练习唱歌的画面，增强情感共鸣。
第二段要点：在获奖后，详细描述 Lucy 和 Jack 的后续行动，如他们兴奋地与同学们分享喜悦，接受同学们的祝贺；讲述他们在 Alex Pepper 音乐会上的精彩表现，如演唱的曲目、观众的热烈反响；最后展望他们未来在音乐道路上的发展，比如参加更多比赛、组建乐队等。
情感线
起初，Lucy 站在舞台上极度紧张，内心充满不安和恐惧，担心自己表现不好。看到 Jack 的自信后，她受到鼓舞，逐渐找回勇气，在表演过程中越来越投入，享受音乐带来的快乐。当宣布获奖时，她先是不敢相信，随后被巨大的喜悦和自豪淹没。在后续与同学们分享喜悦、参加音乐会以及展望未来时，她满怀期待和憧憬，对音乐的热爱更加坚定。
故事线
比赛通知：音乐老师宣布学校将举办音乐比赛，获胜者可获得 Alex Pepper 音乐会的邀请，Lucy 和 Jack 决定组队参赛。
刻苦练习：他们选择歌曲《I’ll help you!》，在操场课余时间刻苦练习，Lucy 进步显著，Jack 也给予她很多鼓励。
比赛当天：比赛当天，众多同学先表演，Mary 表现出色，让 Lucy 感到压力，轮到 Lucy 和 Jack 时，Lucy 起初紧张，后在 Jack 的影响下发挥出色。
宣布获奖：Alex Pepper 和老师讨论后，宣布 Lucy 和 Jack 获胜，他们惊喜又激动，上台领奖并得到 Alex Pepper 的称赞。
赛后分享：获奖后，他们兴奋地与同学们分享喜悦，同学们纷纷送上祝贺，他们沉浸在成功的喜悦中。
音乐之路：他们受邀参加 Alex Pepper 的音乐会，在音乐会上大放异彩，之后更加坚定地在音乐道路上前行，参加更多比赛，追逐音乐梦想。
主旨升华句
Lucy and Jack's journey in the music competition vividly illustrates that with perseverance, mutual support, and a passion for one's dreams, even the most daunting challenges can be overcome, and the sweet fruits of success will surely be reaped.（露西和杰克在音乐比赛中的经历生动地表明，凭借毅力、相互支持和对梦想的热情，即使是最艰巨的挑战也能被克服，成功的甜蜜果实必将收获。）
Through this experience, we witness the power of music to not only bring joy and inspiration but also to build confidence and foster growth. It shows that when we wholeheartedly pursue our passions, we can create beautiful moments that will stay with us forever.（通过这次经历，我们见证了音乐的力量，它不仅能带来快乐和灵感，还能建立自信，促进成长。这表明，当我们全心全意地追求自己的热爱时，我们可以创造出永远留在我们心中的美好时刻。）
The story of their victory serves as a reminder that every dream is within reach if we are willing to put in the effort and face our fears head - on. Their success is not just a personal achievement but also an inspiration to all those who dare to dream big.（他们胜利的故事提醒我们，只要我们愿意付出努力并直面恐惧，每个梦想都触手可及。他们的成功不仅是个人成就，也是对所有敢于梦想的人的鼓舞。）
In the end, we learn that the true value of participating in such competitions lies not only in winning but in the journey of self - discovery and the memories created along the way. These experiences shape us into better individuals and fuel our passion for life.（最后，我们懂得了参加这样的比赛的真正价值不仅在于获胜，还在于自我发现的旅程和沿途创造的回忆。这些经历塑造了我们，使我们成为更好的人，并点燃了我们对生活的热情。）
This heartwarming tale of Lucy and Jack's musical adventure teaches us that teamwork and belief in oneself are the keys to unlocking our full potential. When we work together and have faith in our abilities, there is no limit to what we can achieve.（这个关于露西和杰克音乐冒险的温馨故事告诉我们，团队合作和自信是释放我们全部潜力的关键。当我们齐心协力并相信自己的能力时，我们所能取得的成就将无可限量。）
写作示范一
第一段
Lucy began to tremble unknowingly when she stood in the middle of the stage. Her knees were shaking, and she felt like her legs would give way at any moment. The bright stage lights seemed to be blinding her, and the expectant eyes of the audience made her even more nervous. However, when she caught sight of Jack's unwavering gaze, a sense of calm washed over her. She took a deep, steadying breath and let the music guide her. As the first notes of the song filled the air, her voice was a bit shaky. But as she got into the rhythm, memories of their countless practice sessions flooded her mind. She remembered the times when she wanted to give up but Jack's encouragement kept her going. Now, with every lyric she sang, her confidence grew. The audience, who had been whispering at first, fell silent, completely entranced by the harmonious blend of Lucy's voice and Jack's guitar. Some students were leaning forward in their seats, their eyes wide with amazement, while others were gently swaying to the music.
第二段
The big moment came. Alex Pepper and Mr. Brown engaged in a long, intense discussion. Their faces were serious as they weighed the performances of all the participants. Finally, Alex Pepper rose from his seat and walked towards the microphone. The entire hall fell into a deathly silence, with everyone holding their breath in anticipation. “After much deliberation,” Alex began, “the winner of this remarkable music competition is...” He paused for a dramatic effect, and then with a broad smile, he announced, “Lucy and Jack!” The hall erupted into a deafening roar of applause and cheers. Lucy's eyes widened in disbelief, and she turned to Jack, who was equally stunned. For a moment, they just stood there, frozen in shock. Then, a huge grin spread across their faces, and they threw their arms around each other. They walked up to the stage, their steps light and buoyant. Alex Pepper handed them the golden trophy, saying, “Your performance was truly exceptional. It was full of passion and authenticity.” After the ceremony, they were surrounded by their excited classmates, all eager to offer their congratulations. Later, at Alex Pepper's concert, Lucy and Jack took the stage again. Their performance was even more outstanding, and the audience was on their feet, cheering and clapping. From that day on, they decided to form a band and continue to pursue their musical dreams, knowing that with hard work and determination, they could achieve anything.
写作示范二
第一段
Lucy began to tremble unknowingly when she stood in the middle of the stage. Her hands were shaking so much that she was afraid she would drop the microphone. The noise of the audience seemed to be closing in on her, and she felt a sense of panic rising within her. But then, she remembered the reason why they had chosen this song - “I’ll help you!”. Jack was there to support her, just like in their practices. She looked at him, and his warm smile gave her the strength she needed. As the music started, she took a leap of faith and began to sing. At first, her voice was barely audible, but as she focused on the lyrics and the melody, her voice grew stronger. She could feel the rhythm of the song coursing through her veins, and soon, she was completely immersed in the performance. Jack's guitar playing was like a safety net, guiding her through every note. The audience, who had been skeptical at first, were now nodding their heads in approval. Some of the younger students were looking at them with admiration, their eyes shining with excitement. The stage lights seemed to be shining brighter now, as if they were spotlighting their transformation from nervous beginners to confident performers.
第二段
The big moment came. Alex Pepper and Mr. Brown huddled together, their voices hushed as they made their final decision. The suspense in the hall was palpable, and everyone was on the edge of their seats. Finally, Alex Pepper stood up and walked to the center of the stage. He cleared his throat and said, “The winner of this music competition, the one who has shown the most talent, passion, and growth, is...” The room was so quiet that you could hear a pin drop. “Lucy and Jack!” he exclaimed. The audience erupted into a frenzy of applause, whistles, and shouts of joy. Lucy and Jack were so shocked that they didn't move for a few seconds. Then, they let out a scream of excitement and hugged each other tightly. They walked up to the stage, tears of happiness streaming down their faces. Alex Pepper congratulated them, saying, “Your performance was a breath of fresh air. I can't wait to see what you do next.” After the competition, they spent the whole afternoon celebrating with their friends. They shared stories about their journey to the competition, and everyone was inspired by their hard - work and determination. When they went to Alex Pepper's concert, they were treated like stars. They performed their winning song, and the audience went wild. From that day forward, they became more committed to their music. They started writing their own songs and participated in more local competitions, always remembering the day they won their first big prize.
【答案】Paragraph 1：
Lucy began to tremble unknowingly when she stood in the middle of the stage. She was rooted on the stage and found it hard to sing with her mind blank when Jack played the guitar smoothly. Noticing Lucy’s abnormal silence, Jack gave her an encouraging smile but it didn’t work. Jack replayed the music, hoping to help Lucy calm down and get started. To Jack’s relief, Lucy followed him this time though her singing was not as good as usual. They finished their performance regretfully, waiting for the result anxiously.
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The big moment came. Mr. Brown declared that the winner was Mary. The school hall erupted in cheer and applause. Lucy whispered to Jack guiltily, “I’m really sorry.” Jack responded with a smile, “ Never mind! I know you did your best.” Tears welling up in her eyes, Lucy felt a gentle pat on the head. Looking up, she was surprised to see Alex Pepper. “Nothing can beat a strong heart,” he noted. Hearing these words, Lucy expressed her heartfelt gratitude to Alex and renewed her determination and hope.