读后续写--钱包遗落,陌生司机解燃眉之急 讲义-湖南省2024-2025学年高三上学期第六次月考英语试卷

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名称 读后续写--钱包遗落,陌生司机解燃眉之急 讲义-湖南省2024-2025学年高三上学期第六次月考英语试卷
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I met Sam on a rainy, windy and chaotic morning in August. I had planned to take a train to Boston and then catch a coach to Harvard University for an important academic conference. Due to a track accident, my train was delayed by two hours. I arrived at the train station in Boston just 25 minutes before the departure of the last coach that could take me to the university on time. The moment I got off the train, I rushed like mad through the station building and jumped into the first car in the taxi queue(队列) without hesitation.
That was when I met Sam. I told him where I was going, but he said he wasn’t familiar with the nearest coach station to Harvard. I thought my explanation was not clear enough, so I provided more detailed information, including the names of nearby landmarks, but he still looked puzzled. When I was about to lose hope, Sam took out his smartphone and searched online. After a long and intense search that seemed like forever, Sam finally found the right route and started the car.
Finally, with just three minutes to spare we pulled into the coach station. Thankfully, there was a long line still waiting to board the coach. Sam parked the car nearby, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. “We made it,” he said.
Just then I realized that my wallet was left at home. I gave him an embarrassed and panicked look as I searched through my bag in vain. I had no cash and the mobile payment app on my phone was malfunctioning. A sense of hopelessness overwhelmed me as I saw the coach queue moving forward quickly.
At this moment, Sam pointed to a small convenience store beside the station, suggesting I could ask for help there. I rushed in, only to be told that they couldn’t offer any cash or bank card-related assistance.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I ran back to Sam and told him the bad news. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One day later, when I was back in Boston, I called Sam as promised. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
文章大意
“我” 计划乘火车转长途汽车去哈佛大学参加重要学术会议,因火车晚点导致时间紧迫。一下火车,“我” 就匆忙跳上出租车,遇到司机山姆。山姆不熟悉去哈佛最近的长途汽车站,经网上搜索才找到路线,最终在长途汽车发车前三分钟赶到。可这时 “我” 发现钱包忘在家,手机移动支付也故障,向便利店求助无果,陷入绝望。
故事山分析
开端:“我” 要去哈佛大学参加学术会议,火车晚点,时间紧张。
发展:乘坐山姆的出租车,他不熟悉路线,经搜索找到,及时赶到车站。
高潮:发现钱包忘带,支付出现问题,向便利店求助被拒。
结局(待续写):需解决支付问题,同时要体现 “我” 对山姆的感激以及故事的后续发展。
伏笔及在续写中的回应
火车晚点:伏笔在于时间紧迫,为后续支付问题带来更大压力。续写中可体现 “我” 因之前时间紧张而慌乱,所以才会忘带钱包。
山姆不熟悉路线:暗示行程可能会有波折,在续写中可回应为 “我” 焦急的情绪埋下伏笔,同时也突出最后赶到的不易,让 “我” 更感激山姆。
匆忙上车:预示可能会遗漏物品,对应后面发现钱包忘带。
手机移动支付故障:为支付问题设置障碍,续写中可围绕解决这一支付难题展开,比如寻找其他支付方式或获得他人帮助。
便利店无法提供帮助:进一步加剧困境,续写中可回应为山姆的帮助或 “我” 的其他解决办法做铺垫,突出问题解决的来之不易。
续写要点
第一段:着重描写 “我” 和山姆此时的状态,如 “我” 的窘迫、焦急,山姆的反应和他可能提出的新解决办法,比如山姆可能主动提出帮 “我” 支付车费,或者建议 “我” 联系朋友转账等。
第二段:“我” 回到波士顿后,遵守承诺给山姆打电话,表达感谢,可提及是否归还了钱,以及这次经历对 “我” 的影响,如让 “我” 感受到人与人之间的善意,相信世界的美好。
情感线
故事起始于 “我” 赶去参加会议的焦急,随着山姆寻找路线,焦急稍有缓解,成功赶到车站时松了口气,紧接着发现支付问题陷入绝望。在续写第一段中,“我” 因支付问题的窘迫和对解决问题的期待相互交织。到第二段,“我” 对山姆的感激之情达到高潮,同时这次经历让 “我” 收获了温暖和信任,内心充满对人性美好的感慨。
故事线
“我” 的行程计划及火车晚点带来的时间危机。
乘坐山姆的出租车,山姆寻找路线。
成功赶到车站却发现钱包忘带和支付故障。
向便利店求助失败。
山姆和 “我” 一起解决支付问题(续写第一段重点)。
“我” 回波士顿后联系山姆表达感谢(续写第二段重点)。
主旨升华句
This experience taught me that even in the most desperate situations, there is always a glimmer of hope and kindness from strangers can light up our way.(这次经历让我明白,即使在最绝望的处境中,也总有一丝希望,陌生人的善意能照亮我们前行的道路。)
The kindness shown by Sam not only solved my temporary problem but also made me believe more firmly in the beauty of human nature.(山姆展现出的善意不仅解决了我当下的问题,还让我更加坚信人性的美好。)
Through this incident, I realized that a small act of kindness from a stranger can have a profound impact on others, making the world a warmer place.(通过这件事,我意识到陌生人的一个小小善举能对他人产生深远影响,让世界变得更温暖。)
Sam's help reminded me that in the hustle and bustle of life, we should always be ready to lend a hand to those in need, for it is these acts of kindness that make life more meaningful.(山姆的帮助提醒我,在生活的忙碌中,我们应该随时准备向有需要的人伸出援手,因为正是这些善举让生活更有意义。)
This encounter with Sam was not just a matter of getting to my destination; it was a valuable lesson about the power of kindness and the importance of trust between people.(与山姆的这次相遇不仅仅是到达目的地这么简单,它是关于善意的力量以及人与人之间信任重要性的宝贵一课。)
写作示范一
I ran back to Sam and told him the bad news. I was on the verge of tears, my hands trembling slightly. Sam, however, remained calm. He thought for a moment and then said, “Don't worry. I can cover the fare for you. I trust you'll pay me back when you can.” His words were like a warm breeze on a cold winter day. I was so touched that I could only stammer out my gratitude. With his help, I managed to board the coach just in time.
One day later, when I was back in Boston, I called Sam as promised. As soon as he picked up the phone, I poured out my heartfelt thanks. I told him how much his kindness meant to me during that difficult moment. I also transferred the money to him immediately and invited him to have dinner with me if he had time. Sam happily accepted my invitation, and we made an appointment. This experience not only made me feel the warmth of a stranger's help but also taught me to be kind to others in the future.
写作示范二
I ran back to Sam and told him the bad news. Panic was written all over my face, and I kept apologizing for the inconvenience. Sam looked at me sincerely and said, “I have an idea. You can add me on a social app, and transfer the money to me later.” Without hesitation, I did as he said. With his understanding and support, I finally got on the coach.
One day later, when I was back in Boston, I called Sam as promised. I thanked him profusely for his help and flexibility. I told him that his act of kindness had made a deep impression on me. To express my gratitude further, I sent him a small gift with a thank - you note. Sam was very happy to receive it and said that he was glad to have been able to help. This incident made me realize that a little kindness can go a long way and can even change a person's day completely.
【参考范文】
I ran back to Sam and told him the bad news. “I left my wallet at home and I have no way to pay you right now,” I stammered, my voice shaking. Sam looked at me in disbelief for a second, but then his expression softened. Without hesitation, he reached into his pocket, pulled out a few bills, and handed them to me. “Here, this should cover your coach fare. Don’t worry about it. You can pay me later,” he said kindly. He then took out a piece of paper and wrote down his phone number. “Call me when you get the chance,” he added. Overwhelmed with gratitude, I thanked him from the bottom of my heart. “I will definitely pay you back. You saved my day and this conference means a lot to me,” I said, and then rushed towards the coach entrance, just managing to get in before the coach departed.
One day later, when I was back in Boston, I called Sam as promised. He answered the phone cheerfully and later he picked me up at the coach station where he had dropped me off the day before. We chatted happily on the way to the train station in Boston. I told him that thanks to his generosity and timely help, everything had gone smoothly. When he stopped his taxi outside the train station, I paid him for the “double car ride”, including the money for the coach fare he lent me, together with a generous tip that he turned down. I also gave him an attractive souvenir I had picked up during the conference, which he accepted with delight. Our brief encounter had blossomed into a lasting friendship, and we vowed to stay in touch. I felt truly fortunate to have such a warm-hearted friend like Sam.
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