读后续写-善举行为 讲义-湖南省常德市汉寿县汉寿县2024-2025学年高三上学期1月期末英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Dark rain clouds were gathering in the sky. I was cycling as fast as I could to get home before the downpour. When I felt a few big drops on my head, I decided to dash for a bus stop, about a hundred meters away. As I was nearing the bus stop, I saw a lady rushing towards it from the opposite direction, a little boy following her. The little boy was finding it hard to keep up with her, so, finally, she just picked him up and carried him.
Suddenly, a motorcycle roared past me, almost knocking me down. He turned to look at me, and for a split second, I saw his face - cruel, glaring eyes. A flood of fear crept over me. However, courage from nowhere got me to shout “Hey! Are you mad!” My voice trembled a bit. He just sped on. Then, I realized that he was rushing right toward the woman and the little boy!
“Watch out! Watch out!” I shouted. I saw the lady turn to look at the motorcyclist, with worry on her face. In an instant, the motorcyclist reached the lady. He stretched out an arm and grabbed hold of her handbag, hitting her on the back at the same time. The impact sent the lady hurtling (猛冲) forward. The mother and child fell on the road, landing right in the path of a van.
“Stop! Stop!” I screamed at the van driver, waving my arms wildly in the air. Thankfully, the van stopped a few meters from the spot where the mother and child lay. I saw the lady crawling on the road towards the crying child. Throwing my bicycle to the side of the road, I ran to help them.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
By the time I got there, the van driver had reached them.
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I realized that, by this time, the motorcyclist must have gone far from that spot, with the lady’s handbag.
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善举行动续写
续写要点
第一段要点：细致描写 “我” 和货车司机救助女士和孩子的过程，包括货车司机搀扶女士时的动作，“我” 抱起小男孩时的轻柔，检查孩子伤势时的专注神情。着重刻画女士和孩子的状态，女士的颤抖、惊恐的眼神，孩子的大哭、紧紧抱住 “我” 的动作。还可补充周围环境细节，如阴沉的天空、滴答的雨声，渲染紧张氛围。
第二段要点：具体描述 “我” 骑车追贼的心理活动，如坚定的决心、对追上贼的期待；追贼途中的艰难，如道路的崎岖、体力的消耗。回到公交站后，补充警察到来后的询问过程，女士的回答，以及大家对这件事的讨论，进一步展现善良的力量。
情感线
起初，“我” 看到女士和孩子被袭击，心中充满愤怒和担忧。救助时，关心他们的安危，急切地想要帮助他们。追贼时，满怀正义和决心，即使失败也感到不甘。回到公交站后，看到女士逐渐平静，感到一丝欣慰，在等待警察过程中，深刻体会到团结和善良的力量，内心充满温暖与希望。
故事线
暴雨将至：天空乌云密布，“我” 骑车赶回家，途中决定前往公交站避雨，看到女士和小男孩也在前往公交站。
遭遇袭击：摩托车飞驰而过，差点撞倒 “我”，随后冲向女士和孩子，抢走女士的手提包，将他们撞倒在货车行驶路径上。
紧急救助：“我” 呼喊货车司机停车，和货车司机一起救助受伤的女士和孩子，将他们带到路边。
骑车追贼：“我” 意识到贼已逃远，仍骑车追赶，虽未成功，但尽力而为。
等待警察：“我” 回到公交站，女士情绪逐渐稳定，大家一起等待警察到来。
感悟善良：在经历这场危机后，深刻体会到善良的力量，相信善良终将战胜邪恶。
主旨升华句
This incident serves as a powerful reminder that in the face of danger and evil, the courage and kindness within us can shine brightly, bringing hope and warmth to those in need.（这次事件有力地提醒我们，在危险和邪恶面前，我们内心的勇气和善良能够闪耀光芒，给有需要的人带来希望和温暖。）
Through this experience, we witness the unwavering power of unity and compassion. When we stand together, we can overcome any adversity, and kindness will always triumph over malevolence.（通过这次经历，我们见证了团结和同情的坚定力量。当我们团结一心，就能克服任何逆境，善良总会战胜恶意。）
The story of this heroic act shows that even in the darkest moments, a single act of kindness can become a beacon of light, guiding us towards a more just and harmonious world.（这次英勇行为的故事表明，即使在最黑暗的时刻，一个简单的善举也能成为一盏明灯，引领我们走向一个更公正、和谐的世界。）
In the end, we learn that the true strength of humanity lies not in our physical prowess but in our ability to care for others, and that kindness is the most powerful weapon against the darkness.（最后，我们懂得了人类真正的力量不在于我们的体力，而在于我们关爱他人的能力，善良是对抗黑暗最强大的武器。）
This heart - rending event teaches us that every act of kindness, no matter how small, can have a profound impact on the lives of others, and that we all have the responsibility to spread love and kindness in the world.（这个令人痛心的事件告诉我们，每一个善举，无论多么微小，都能对他人的生活产生深远影响，我们都有责任在世界上传播爱与善良。）
写作示范一
第一段
By the time I got there, the van driver had reached them. He swiftly knelt down beside the lady, his hands carefully supporting her arms as he helped her up. I rushed to the little boy, who was lying on the ground, his face covered in tears. Gently, I scooped him into my arms, his small body trembling with fear. “It's okay, little one. You're safe now,” I murmured softly, trying to soothe him. The lady was in a daze, her eyes wide with shock. Blood oozed from a scrape on her elbow, and the rain, which had started to pour heavily, mixed with the blood, making the scene even more heart - wrenching. We quickly moved them to the shelter of the bus stop, away from the pelting rain.
第二段
I realized that, by this time, the motorcyclist must have gone far from that spot, with the lady’s handbag. But the fire of justice burned brightly in my heart. Without hesitation, I jumped on my bike and sped off in the direction the thief had fled. The wind whipped against my face as I pedaled with all my might, my eyes scanning the road for any sign of the culprit. Despite the heavy rain and the slippery road, I didn't give up. However, after a long chase, I had to admit defeat. Disappointed, I returned to the bus stop. The lady was sitting on the bench, looking a bit calmer. When the police arrived, we recounted the incident. Although the thief escaped, the kindness and unity we showed that day would always stay with us, a testament to the power of good over evil.
写作示范二
第一段
By the time I got there, the van driver had reached them. He gently lifted the lady off the ground, his face filled with concern. I rushed to the crying boy, who was curled up in a ball. Crouching down, I carefully picked him up, his little hands clutching tightly to my shirt. “Don't be scared, sweetie,” I said, trying to comfort him. The lady was in a state of shock, her hands shaking uncontrollably. There was a large bruise forming on her forehead, and she winced in pain. We led them to the side of the road, where we could get them out of harm's way. I took off my jacket and wrapped it around the shivering lady, while the van driver offered a tissue to wipe the boy's tears.
第二段
I realized that, by this time, the motorcyclist must have gone far from that spot, with the lady’s handbag. Determined not to let the thief get away so easily, I hopped on my bike and chased after him. The rain was pouring down in sheets, making it difficult to see, but I didn't let that stop me. I pedaled as fast as I could, my legs aching from the effort. But alas, the thief was nowhere to be found. Defeated, I returned to the bus stop. The lady was talking to some onlookers, who had gathered to offer their help. When the police arrived, we all cooperated fully. This incident might have ended with the thief getting away with the handbag, but it also showed the power of human kindness and the strength of a community coming together in times of need.
参考答案
By the time I got there, the van driver had reached them. He was gently holding the child and examining his limbs. Fortunately, the little boy was all right. “Don’t panic. You’ll be all right. We’ll rush you to a hospital,” I said to the woman, trying to relieve her anxiety. The lady could not walk, so the man carried her and settled her in his van. I carried the whimpering child to the van and landed him beside his mother. The man asked me to go along with them so that I could help make the police report.
I realized that, by this time, the motorcyclist must have gone far from that spot, with the lady’s handbag. A few days later, I received a phone call from the woman. I was informed that she had suffered only minor injuries from the incident and already been discharged from the hospital. “What’s more, the snatch thief was finally arrested and put into jail, thanks to your detailed description of his facial features.” she added. “I would like to express my sincere gratitude for your timely help.” Finishing the telephone call, I felt overwhelmed with delight from the bottom of my heart. The warm sunshine shone in. What a beautiful day!