故事续写：给爷爷做拐杖故事 讲义-山西省晋中市昔阳县2024-2025学年高三下学期开学英语试题【预测卷(二)】

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A GIFT FOR GRANDPA
Summer vacation was coming. Jack and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement as they thought of visiting their grandparents again.
The big day came at last. After the happy family got ready, they set out for the grandparents’ eagerly. On the way, the brothers were excitedly talking about the fun they had with grandparents.
A little blue house with a tall white chimney finally appeared. Behind the property was the forest carrying their good memories with Grandpa. They arrived at the driveway, at the end of which Grandma was waiting for them joyfully.
Jack and Berlin each gave Grandma a big hug and then swept to the living room, shouting excitedly “Grandpa, we are back!”
Seeing his grandsons, Grandpa was wild with joy and tried to get up with all his strength from the chair but in vain. A helpless expression flashed on his face. Grandma explained that his health was declining rapidly and maybe couldn’t stand up on his own forever. But Grandpa declared stubbornly (倔强地), “I can!” Certainly, he was stuck in his boyish way. Mum and grandparents were happy to meet again after a long time. They sat together and chatted about what happened recently.
The brothers were soon bored with adult conversation, went out and wandered into the forest. Tall trees stretched up to the heavens with large branches crossing each other, while young ones rose straight like soldiers. Grandpa was once a great explorer full of wisdom. He could tell where the birds came from only by their calls and songs. The trees, birds, lizards, lots of bugs... How many merry moments they spent with Grandpa in the kingdom!
But now Grandpa couldn’t get up. This made them worried. “We’d think out a way to cheer him up.” Jack said. “Grandpa is a bird lover and we can catch him a bird.” Berlin suggested. “But he hates birds being caged!” Jack shook his head.
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Then a bright idea came to Jack’s mind. “Why not make a cane (拐杖) out of a young tree!”.
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Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa.
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给爷爷做拐杖故事续写
续写要点
第一段要点：在制作拐杖的过程中，补充更多细节。比如描述兄弟俩挑选树木时的讨论，对树木粗细、高度的考量；使用生锈锯子锯树时遇到的具体困难，如锯条卡顿、用力过猛差点摔倒等；打磨拐杖时，砂纸与木头摩擦发出的声音，以及兄弟俩专注的神情。还可以增加一些森林中的环境描写，如微风拂过树叶的沙沙声，营造氛围。
第二段要点：在送拐杖给爷爷的场景中，详细刻画爷爷的表情变化，从惊讶到感动，再到欣慰；描述家人的反应，妈妈的微笑、奶奶眼中的泪花；增加爷爷使用拐杖走路时的心理活动，如重拾自信、对孙子的骄傲。最后可以补充一些后续情节，比如爷爷带着拐杖和兄弟俩再次走进森林，回忆往昔。
情感线
起初，兄弟俩得知爷爷身体不好无法站立，满心担忧。想到制作拐杖的主意时，他们充满期待和兴奋。制作过程中，虽遇困难但凭借坚定决心克服，内心满是成就感。把拐杖送给爷爷时，紧张又期待爷爷的反应。看到爷爷感动并成功站立，他们无比开心和自豪。之后，一家人沉浸在温暖的亲情中，感情愈发深厚。
故事线
假期探望：暑假来临，杰克和柏林满心欢喜地随家人去看望爷爷奶奶，回忆着与爷爷奶奶相处的欢乐时光。
爷爷患病：到达后，发现爷爷身体衰弱无法独自站立，兄弟俩感到担忧。
想出主意：兄弟俩厌倦大人的谈话，走进森林，因爷爷不能走动而发愁，杰克突发奇想，决定用小树制作拐杖。
制作拐杖：他们精心挑选小树，用爷爷工具棚里生锈的锯子艰难切割，再用砂纸打磨，还用彩色丝带装饰。
赠送拐杖：兄弟俩把拐杖送给爷爷，爷爷又惊又喜，在拐杖的帮助下成功站立，家人欢呼，爷爷表达感激。
森林漫步：之后，爷爷带着拐杖和兄弟俩再次走进森林，一起回忆过去的美好时光，亲情更加浓厚。
主旨升华句
This heartwarming story of Jack and Berlin making a cane for Grandpa vividly shows that love is not just words but actions, and even the simplest acts of kindness can bring great hope and strength to our loved ones.（杰克和柏林为爷爷制作拐杖的这个温馨故事生动地表明，爱不仅是言语，更是行动，即使是最微小的善举也能给我们所爱的人带来巨大的希望和力量。）
Through their journey of making the cane, we witness the power of family love and the strong bond between generations. It reminds us that in times of difficulty, our family is always there to support and care for each other.（通过他们制作拐杖的过程，我们见证了亲情的力量和代际之间的紧密联系。它提醒我们，在困难时刻，家人永远在身边相互支持和关爱。）
The story of the cane is not only a symbol of physical support for Grandpa but also a testament to the deep - seated love and thoughtfulness of the grandchildren. It shows that true love is about understanding the needs of others and taking action to meet them.（拐杖的故事不仅是爷爷身体支撑的象征，更是孙子孙女深厚爱意和体贴的证明。它表明，真正的爱在于理解他人的需求并采取行动去满足这些需求。）
In the end, we learn that the most precious gifts are not bought with money but are made with love and care. Jack and Berlin's cane for Grandpa is a gift that will be cherished forever, full of warmth and family affection.（最后，我们懂得了最珍贵的礼物不是用金钱买来的，而是用爱和关怀制作的。杰克和柏林给爷爷的拐杖是一份将被永远珍视的礼物，充满了温暖和亲情。）
This touching tale of family love teaches us that no matter how tough the situation may be, there is always hope and comfort in the love and support of our family. It is the love within the family that gives us the strength to face any challenge.（这个感人的亲情故事告诉我们，无论情况多么艰难，家人的爱和支持总是能带来希望和慰藉。正是家庭中的爱给予我们面对任何挑战的力量。）
写作示范一
第一段
Then a bright idea came to Jack’s mind. “Why not make a cane (拐杖) out of a young tree!”. Berlin's eyes sparkled with excitement at the thought. “That's brilliant, Jack! Grandpa will surely love it,” he exclaimed. As they scoured the forest, they engaged in a lively discussion about the perfect tree. “This one looks too thin, it might break easily,” Jack pointed out, examining a slender sapling. Berlin nodded in agreement, his eyes scanning the trees around them. Finally, they found a sturdy young oak. The saw in Grandpa's tool shed was old and rusty, and every pull was a struggle. Jack's hands ached from the effort, and once, the saw got stuck, causing him to stumble. But they didn't give up. After what seemed like ages, they managed to cut the trunk to the right length. With sandpaper in hand, they carefully smoothed the rough edges, the sound of sandpaper against wood filling the air. They even found some wildflowers in the forest and wove them into the colorful ribbons to decorate the cane, adding a touch of nature's beauty.
第二段
Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. Grandpa's eyes widened in disbelief, his mouth slightly agape. As he took in the handmade cane, his eyes glistened with unshed tears. “For me ” he asked, his voice choked with emotion. Jack stepped forward, a big smile on his face. “Yes, Grandpa. We made it for you, hoping it can help you get around again.” Grandpa's hands trembled as he reached out to take the cane. With everyone's eyes fixed on him, he slowly pushed himself up from the chair. His legs wobbled at first, but with the support of the cane, he gradually found his balance. Mom covered her mouth with her hand, her eyes brimming with tears of joy. Grandma beamed, her face radiant with happiness. Grandpa took a few hesitant steps, and then, a broad smile spread across his face. “It's perfect,” he said, his voice filled with pride. He pulled Jack and Berlin into a tight embrace. “Thank you, my dear boys.” In the following days, Grandpa, with his new cane, took Jack and Berlin for walks in the forest, sharing stories of his adventures once again, and the bond between them grew even stronger.
写作示范二
第一段
Then a bright idea came to Jack’s mind. “Why not make a cane (拐杖) out of a young tree!”. Berlin jumped up and down, clapping his hands. “Let's do it right away!” he shouted. They walked deeper into the forest, the sunlight filtering through the thick canopy, creating a dappled pattern on the ground. As they searched for the ideal tree, Jack was careful to choose one with a straight grain and a good grip. When they started cutting with the rusty saw, it made a harsh, screeching sound. Berlin had to hold the tree steady while Jack pulled the saw, and they both had to put all their weight into it. At one point, Jack slipped and almost dropped the saw, but Berlin caught it just in time. After finally cutting the tree, they spent a long time sanding it. Jack blew the wood shavings away, making sure the surface was smooth as silk. They then tied the colorful ribbons around the top of the cane, creating a beautiful and unique design.
第二段
Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. Grandpa's face was a picture of surprise, his eyes welling up with tears of happiness. “I can't believe you boys did this for me,” he said, his voice shaking. Berlin grinned and said, “We wanted to help you, Grandpa.” Grandpa took the cane firmly in his hand and, with a determined look on his face, tried to stand up. At first, he struggled, but with the support of the cane, he gradually rose to his feet. Dad gave a thumbs - up, and Aunt Lily, who had come to visit, took out her camera to capture the moment. Grandpa walked a few steps, his steps becoming more confident with each stride. He turned to the boys and said, “This is the best gift I've ever received.” From that day on, the cane was always by Grandpa's side. On sunny afternoons, he would take the boys to the forest edge, and they would sit on a log, listening to Grandpa's stories, their laughter filling the air, and the love within the family blooming brighter than ever.
【参考答案】
Then a bright idea came to Jack’s mind. “Why not make a cane (拐杖) out of a young tree!” Berlin thought it was a good idea. When the two brothers reached an agreement, they quickly ran back to their grandfather’s house, got the tools they needed to make the cane, and ran back to the woods. In the woods, they worked hard to find a straight tree and set to work. After cutting the tree down, they took the bark (树皮) off with a knife. After an hour, a hand-made cane was finally made, which was smooth and was just of the right size. The two brothers were sure that their grandpa would love it!
Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. The moment grandpa took the cane with shaking hands, he cried with joy, “This is made by my grandsons themselves. How precious it is!” Jack shouted, “Grandpa, we hope this cane will help you stand up and come with us to explore the woods!” Grandpa smiled at the boys and seized the cane in his right hand, trying to stand up. To their amazement, he did it! Everyone was excited to see grandpa stand up. At that moment, Jack noticed grandfather’s eyes were wet. What a wonderful gift he had ever got!