写作回复Maria关于校园生活视频的邮件 讲义-甘肃省天水市2024-2025学年高三下学期开学收心考试英语试题

写作
假定你是李华，外教Maria发邮件请你为她的英国学生录制一个短片，介绍你的校园生活。 请给她回一封电子邮件，内容包括:
1.简述拍摄内容；
2.征求对方意见。
注意:
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
回复Maria关于校园生活视频的邮件
写作提纲
第一段：开篇先对 Maria 的邮件表示感谢，表达自己对录制校园生活短片一事的积极态度，让对方感受到你的热情与诚意，为后续内容做铺垫。
第二段：详细阐述拍摄内容，可按照校园生活的不同方面展开，如日常课程，描述上课的场景、老师的教学方式；社团活动，介绍参与的社团及活动内容；校园风景，提及校园标志性建筑、美丽的花园等，让对方对短片内容有清晰的了解。
第三段：礼貌地征求对方意见，询问是否有特定想要包含的内容或主题，最后表达期待对方回复，保持沟通的开放性。
语言积累
be glad to do sth.：很高兴做某事
record a short video：录制一个短片
cover sth.：涵盖某事
daily classes：日常课程
colorful club activities：丰富多彩的社团活动
offer a vivid picture of：生动展现
specific ideas：具体想法
look forward to：期待
include sth. in：将某事包含在…… 中
have a clear understanding of：对…… 有清晰的了解
佳句
I truly appreciate your email and am extremely delighted to take on the task of recording a short video that showcases my vibrant campus life for your students in the UK.（我非常感谢您的邮件，并且非常高兴能承担为您在英国的学生录制一个展示我丰富多彩校园生活短片的任务。）
The video is designed to provide a comprehensive view of my school days, featuring not only the rigorous academic curriculum but also the exciting extracurricular activities that enrich our campus experience.（这个视频旨在全面展示我的校园生活，不仅有严格的学术课程，还有丰富我们校园经历的精彩课外活动。）
Among the club activities, the English Drama Club stands out as a platform where I can improve my language skills while indulging in the world of performing arts.（在社团活动中，英语戏剧俱乐部脱颖而出，它是一个我可以在沉浸于表演艺术世界的同时提高语言技能的平台。）
I sincerely hope that the video will not only satisfy your students' curiosity about my campus life but also serve as a bridge to enhance cultural exchange between our two regions.（我真诚地希望这个视频不仅能满足您的学生对我校园生活的好奇心，还能成为加强我们两个地区文化交流的桥梁。）
Your insights and suggestions are highly valued, and I'm eagerly waiting for your reply to ensure that the video meets your expectations.（您的见解和建议非常宝贵，我热切期待您的回复，以确保视频能达到您的期望。）
写作示范一（正式商务风）
Dear Maria,
I am writing to express my gratitude for your email. I am honored to record a short video about my campus life for your students.
The video will comprehensively cover various aspects. It will present the detailed schedule of my daily classes, from the interactive math lessons to the thought - provoking literature classes. The English Drama Club activities, including rehearsals and performances, will also be shown. Additionally, the magnificent library and the charming lakeside on campus will be captured.
I wonder if you have any particular requirements or topics you would like me to emphasize. I am looking forward to your valuable feedback.
Best regards,
Li Hua
写作示范二（简洁明了风）
Dear Maria,
Thanks for your email. I'm happy to make the video for your students.
In the video, I'll show my daily classes like math and English. The fun club activities, especially the English Drama Club, will be in it too. And of course, the nice views on campus.
Do you have any ideas Please let me know. Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
写作示范三（亲切友好风）
Dear Maria,
Hey! Thanks a lot for reaching out. I'm super excited to record this video for your students.
I plan to film my normal classes, you know, how we study and interact. Then, the cool English Drama Club where we put on amazing shows. Also, the beautiful spots on campus, like the flower - filled garden.
What do you think Is there anything special you want me to add Can't wait to hear from you!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ms Maria,
Glad to hear from you. You want me to make a short video about my school life so that your students may have a better understanding of Chinese students’ school life. Now let me share my video plan with you, hoping that you’ll become interested in it.
Firstly, I’d like to record some beautiful sceneries in my campus and after-school activities, which help broaden our horizons and increase the pleasure of our life. Then, record how attentively my classmates and I listen to the teachers in class. Finally, I prefer to upload the video on the social media called TikTok. Can you imagine it when you see me on Tik Tok showing my colorful school activities
How is the plan above Look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua