写作
假定你是李华,想去美国参加英语课程。请阅读下面的广告,并写封邮件咨询细节。
注意:
1.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to find out more about the English language courses.
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
咨询美国英语课程的邮件
写作提纲
第一段:开篇直接表明写信目的,即对广告中的美国英语课程感兴趣,希望进一步了解相关细节,引起对方的注意,为后续询问做铺垫。
第二段:详细列举自己想要咨询的问题。从课程内容方面,询问是否涵盖听说读写各方面,是否有特定的英语考试针对性训练;教学方法上,了解是否采用互动式教学、小组讨论等方式;费用问题,除了学费,还可询问是否有其他杂费;住宿安排,询问学校提供的住宿类型、费用以及周边环境等。
第三段:结尾表达对对方回复的期待,希望能尽快收到详细的解答,体现礼貌和急切的心情,保持沟通的开放性。
语言积累
be interested in:对…… 感兴趣
find out more about:进一步了解关于……
detailed curriculum:详细的课程设置
focus on:专注于,集中于
teaching methods:教学方法
tuition fees:学费
accommodation arrangements:住宿安排
inquire about:询问,打听
look forward to:期待
reply as soon as possible:尽快回复
佳句
I am writing to express my keen interest in the English language courses you advertised and would like to seek some detailed information.(我写信是为了表达我对您所宣传的英语课程的浓厚兴趣,并希望获取一些详细信息。)
I am particularly eager to know about the curriculum, aiming to understand how it will enhance my English proficiency comprehensively, especially in aspects such as speaking and writing.(我特别渴望了解课程设置,旨在了解它将如何全面提高我的英语水平,尤其是在口语和写作方面。)
Could you kindly provide me with some insights into the teaching methods employed in these courses I am curious about whether they involve interactive activities to boost students' practical skills.(您能否好心地向我介绍一下这些课程所采用的教学方法?我很好奇它们是否包含互动活动以提升学生的实践技能。)
Another aspect I am concerned about is the tuition fees and any additional costs. Also, I would appreciate it if you could inform me about the available accommodation options and their associated details.(我关注的另一个方面是学费和任何额外费用。此外,如果您能告知我可用的住宿选择及其相关细节,我将不胜感激。)
I truly look forward to your prompt and detailed reply, which will greatly assist me in making a well - informed decision regarding these courses.(我真诚地期待您迅速而详细的回复,这将极大地帮助我就这些课程做出明智的决定。)
写作示范一
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my profound interest in the English language courses your institution offers. As an enthusiastic learner aiming to improve my English skills, I am eager to gather more information.
Regarding the curriculum, I would like to know if it includes in - depth training for different language skills, such as IELTS or TOEFL preparation. In terms of teaching methods, could you elaborate on how you ensure students' active participation Additionally, I am concerned about the tuition fees, including any possible hidden charges. Also, please provide details about the accommodation arrangements, like the types of housing available and their distances from the school.
I sincerely anticipate your timely and comprehensive response.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
写作示范二
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm interested in your English language courses. I have a few questions.
What exactly is in the curriculum Will it help me with daily conversations and writing How do you teach Do you use group work Also, how much is the tuition And is there any accommodation provided If so, what's it like
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
写作示范三(
Dear Sir or Madam,
Hey! I saw your ad for the English language courses and I'm super excited! I really want to know more.
First, could you tell me what the classes will cover I want to get better at both speaking and listening. And how do you usually teach Is it fun Next, I'm a bit worried about the cost. How much is the tuition And will there be a place for me to stay
Can't wait to hear back from you!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to find out more about the English language courses. Firstly, I’m curious to know about the course arrangement. How many courses will you offer in all and what subjects will it cover Since I’m interested in American culture very much, I would very much like to take related courses. I would also want to know the time schedule of these courses to see whether I’ll have time to visit other places in America on weekends.
Secondly, can you introduce boarding arrangement during the Winter Camp Are all the students living on campus or shall we rent houses in advance
Thank you!
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua