读后续写 篮球比赛成长故事续写 讲义 安徽省合肥市2025届高三上学期第一次教学质量检测英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Game of Growth
The gym was alive with the sounds of squeaking (嘎吱作响) shoes, bouncing basketballs, and teammates shouting plays. It was game day, and I should have been focused, but my mind was elsewhere. My thoughts dragged me down, and I couldn’t shake the heaviness I felt.
Every time I passed the ball, Ryan, one of our best players, would make some snide (挖苦的) remarks: “Can’t you aim better, Eliot ” or “Guess we know who won’t be taking the game-winning shot today.” His words cut deep, feeding my doubts. I wanted to fire back, but the energy wasn’t there.
Coach Rivera noticed something was off. “Eliot, can I talk to you for a second ” he said after practice. His voice was calm but firm, the way it always was when he saw something wrong. I sighed, knowing I couldn’t avoid the conversation. “Yeah, Coach ” He studied me for a moment, his eyes serious. “You’re not yourself lately. I’ve also noticed there’s tension between you and Ryan. What’s going on ”
I hesitated, then said, “Nothing, I’m fine.”
Coach didn’t buy it. “I’ve been around long enough to know when something’s weighing on a player. You’ re not just dealing with basketball issues, are you ”
I finally admitted, my throat tight and my eyes starting to water, “I have some family problems…my parents had an accident, and I’ve had to take care of them.”
Coach nodded, understanding. “That’s a lot to handle. But Ryan... he’s a tough guy, and you two are teammates, and the team only works if you’ re united. Let’s talk things through.”
The next day. Coach pulled Ryan and me aside. The conversation was awkward at first. Ryan explained that he felt I wasn’t pulling my weight in the games. I told him about my situation though I didn’t go into details.
Ryan’s expression softened. “I didn’t know you were dealing with so much. I’m sorry for pushing you too hard” he said. “I could’ve handled it better,” I admitted.
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With Coach’s help, Ryan and I started working together instead of against each other.
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In the championship game, Ryan passed me the ball for the game-winning shot.
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篮球比赛成长故事续写
续写要点（两段）
第一段续写要点：着重描写 “我” 和 Ryan 在训练和比赛中的互动细节，展现合作带来的积极变化。比如，详细描述一次高强度的训练，在训练中遇到困难时，两人如何相互鼓励、共同克服；在比赛中，通过一次精彩的配合得分，凸显团队协作的魅力。同时，增加其他队友的反应，体现整个团队氛围的转变。
第二段续写要点：深入刻画 “我” 接到决胜球时的心理活动，回忆与 Ryan 从矛盾到和解、合作的过程，以及对家人的牵挂。描述投球时的身体动作和周围环境，如全场的寂静与紧张气氛。投中后，描写队友的狂欢、教练的欣慰，以及自己内心的成就感和对未来的展望。
情感线
起初，“我” 因家庭问题和 Ryan 的挖苦而陷入自我怀疑，内心充满痛苦和压抑。与教练沟通后，鼓起勇气向 Ryan 袒露心声，得到理解，紧张关系开始缓和。在合作训练和比赛中，彼此信任逐渐加深，友情升温，自信心也不断增强。到了冠军赛关键时刻，虽有短暂的自我怀疑，但回忆起合作经历，最终克服恐惧，成功投球后，收获巨大的喜悦和成就感，深刻体会到团队和友情的力量。
故事线
比赛日，“我” 因家庭问题和 Ryan 的挖苦，在比赛中状态不佳。
教练发现异常，与 “我” 谈心，“我” 向教练坦白家庭困境。
教练召集 “我” 和 Ryan 沟通，Ryan 了解情况后道歉，两人关系缓和。
在教练帮助下，“我” 和 Ryan 开始合作，一起训练，改善比赛中的沟通与配合。
团队氛围积极转变，大家更加努力，顺利进入冠军赛。
冠军赛中，Ryan 传球给 “我”，“我” 投中决胜球，带领团队夺冠。
主旨升华句
This basketball journey taught us that true strength lies not only in individual skills but in the unity and support of a team, and that friendship can bloom even in the most challenging circumstances.（这次篮球之旅让我们明白，真正的力量不仅在于个人技能，更在于团队的团结和支持，而且友谊即使在最具挑战性的环境中也能绽放。）
Through the ups and downs on the court, we learned that understanding and empathy can bridge the gaps between people, and that working together towards a common goal can bring out the best in everyone.（通过球场上的起起落落，我们懂得了理解和共情能够弥合人与人之间的差距，并且朝着共同目标努力能够激发出每个人的最佳状态。）
Our story serves as a reminder that in the face of personal struggles, reaching out for help and building connections with others can lead to growth, both as athletes and as individuals.（我们的故事提醒着我们，在面对个人困境时，寻求帮助并与他人建立联系能够带来成长，无论是作为运动员还是作为个人。）
In the world of basketball and in life, this experience showed us that trust and respect are the building blocks of success, and that with these, we can overcome any obstacle and achieve our dreams.（在篮球世界和生活中，这次经历向我们展示了信任和尊重是成功的基石，有了这些，我们可以克服任何障碍，实现我们的梦想。）
This game - changing adventure taught us that every challenge is an opportunity for growth, and that the bonds we form with our teammates can become the most precious treasures in our lives.（这次改变比赛的经历让我们明白，每一个挑战都是成长的机会，并且我们与队友建立的情谊能够成为我们生命中最珍贵的财富。）
写作示范
示范一
第一段续写
With Coach’s help, Ryan and I started working together instead of against each other. During practice, we focused on complex plays that required seamless coordination. One day, we were struggling with a fast - break play. Ryan kept missing the pass at the crucial moment. Frustration was creeping in, but I remembered his support and encouragement. I patted him on the back and said, “Don't worry, we'll get it right. Let's try again.” After several more attempts, we finally nailed it. In the next game, when we executed the play perfectly, the crowd erupted in cheers. Our teammates were amazed, and the team spirit soared. From that day on, we became an inseparable duo on the court.
第二段续写
In the championship game, Ryan passed me the ball for the game - winning shot. As I caught the ball, the weight of the moment hit me hard. I saw my parents' faces in my mind, imagining their pride if I made it. I also remembered the countless hours of training with Ryan. The noise from the audience faded away, and all I could focus on was the hoop. I took a step back, adjusted my stance, and released the ball. Time seemed to slow down as the ball sailed through the air. When it swished through the net, pandemonium broke loose. Teammates jumped up and down, and Coach Rivera had a huge smile on his face. Ryan ran towards me and lifted me off the ground. That shot wasn't just about winning; it was about redemption, family, and the power of friendship.
示范二
第一段续写
With Coach’s help, Ryan and I started working together instead of against each other. After practice, we watched game tapes together, analyzing our opponents' weaknesses. Ryan pointed out areas where I could improve my dribbling, and I showed him how to better defend against certain moves. In the following games, our teamwork became more and more evident. Once, in a tight game, I was trapped by two defenders. Without hesitation, Ryan called for the ball and created an open shot for me. I made it, and we saw the hope in our teammates' eyes. Our chemistry on the court grew stronger, and the team's morale reached an all - time high.
第二段续写
In the championship game, Ryan passed me the ball for the game - winning shot. My hands were shaking slightly, and my mind flashed back to all the times I had doubted myself. But then I saw Ryan's confident eyes, full of trust. I took a deep breath, blocked out the distractions, and focused on the task at hand. I jumped, released the ball, and watched as it arced towards the hoop. The entire gym held its breath. When the ball went through, the place exploded. Teammates surrounded me, and the joy on their faces was contagious. Ryan hugged me tightly and said, “We did it together.” This victory was a testament to our hard work, the power of teamwork, and the new - found friendship that had carried us through.
参考答案
One possible version:
With Coach’s help, Ryan and I started working together instead of against each other. We found a rhythm on the court that we hadn’t had before. Ryan made an effort to understand my situation off the court and offered his support. Our teamwork improved, and so did our performance. The atmosphere in the gym became more positive, filled with encouragement. It was about overcoming challenges together. Coach reminded us that growth often comes from facing adversity, and through this, we learned lessons beyond the sport.
In the championship game, Ryan passed me the ball for the game-winning shot. Time seemed to slow as I took the shot. It wasn’t just about scoring; it symbolized all we’d been through. The crowd cheered as the ball went in. This victory felt sweeter because it showed our growth and the strength gained off the court. Ryan’s trust during that moment proved we had turned a corner. We didn’t just win a game; we strengthened our bond as teammates and friends.