专题11:书面表达——2025年四川中考英语高频考点专项分类练习(含范文)

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专题11:书面表达
一、书面表达
1. 假设你是李明,本周班会上,你将代表老师用英语通知学生参加一次敬老院的公益活动。
提示:1.星期天早上8:30在校门口集合,乘公共汽车前往。2.打扫卫生,整理房间。3.唱歌、跳舞、讲故事、聊天,给老人们带去快乐。4.给老人们赠送礼物。5.活动很有意义,希望大家积极参与。
要求:1.要点齐全。2.词数80左右 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Fellow students,
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That's all. Thank you!
2. 如今,英语已成为促进对外交流、了解不同文化的重要工具。假如你是来自英国的交换生Diana,一位中国学生李华给你写信寻求学习英语的方法。请你根据提示给李华写一封回信
内容包括: (1)对英语学习的看法;(2)提出学习英语的建议(至少三点);(3)提出鼓励和希望。
作文要求: (1)不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;(2)语句连贯,词数80个左右,作文的开头和结尾已给出
Dear Li Hua,
I'm very glad to share my ideas on how to learn English well with you.
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Best regards,
Diana
3. 家乡的美,是岁月沉淀下的宁静,是记忆中眷恋的风景。请你根据你家乡的特点,以"My Home Town"为题写一篇英语短文向外国游客介绍自己的家乡,并给出 1—2点旅行建议。
提示词汇: history; places of interest; weather; advice
要求:(1)短文必须包含以上所有信息,可适当发挥。(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。(3)80词左右,标题已给出,不计入总词数。
My Home Town
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4. 假设你校的新图书馆即将在下个月开放, 本周学校将进行题为"How to behave well in the library"的征文活动。请你根据下面的提示内容写一篇英语短文, 向校报投稿。
提示: 1.规则的重要性; 2.在图书馆应该遵守的规则: 保持安静、不能饮食……3.发出倡议。
要求:
1.必须包括以上提示内容,可以适当发挥; 2.80词左右(文章开头已经给出, 不计入总词数)。
How to behave well in the library
There is a new library in our school and it will open next month.
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5. 假如你是王林,你校发起了"找回消失的课间十分钟"的倡议活动。作为宣讲志愿者,请根据以下海报,撰写演讲稿, 谈谈合理安排课间十分钟的具体建议和意义。
注意:1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;2)词数:90词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Break between lessons
Make theBEST use of the10 minutes.
Be safe Be kind Have fun
Have a SAFE and FUN play!
Good morning, everyone. The ten-minute break is very important to us.
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6. 假如你是李华, 请阅读以下邮件并回复,词数80左右,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
To Subject
Hi Li Hua,
How's it going Best wishes in 2024!
The final exam is coming. I'm busy going over the lessons. But I have a problem, that is, if I turn on the screen, I can never turn it off. Have you got this problem If so, do you have any ideas
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Hope to hear from you!
Jack
参考词汇:设置闹钟set an alarm; 提醒remind
7. 曾子曰:"吾日三省吾身:为人谋而不忠乎?与朋友交而不信乎?传不习乎?"习近平总书记在演讲中多次引用这句话,告诫青少年要勇于面对自己的缺点,在学习中求真务实。初中三年将尽,未来已来,我们如何成为更好的自己?请你根据以下内容提示,以"How to Be a Better Teenager "为题,用英语写一篇演讲稿,在毕业典礼上发言。
内容提示:
1. 养成健康的生活习惯。
2. 学习有计划、有行动。
3. 友善待人。
4. 培养良好的兴趣爱好,参加志愿活动。
写作要求:
1. 内容必须包括所给要点,并适当发挥一至两点。
2. 语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范。
3. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、学校和地名。
4. 不少于90词。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
参考词汇:培养爱好 take up hobbies
志愿活动 volunteer activity
How to Be a Better Teenager
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
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Thank you!
8. 读完以上短文后你有什么感受呢?你的饮食习惯健康吗?你的饮食习惯如何呢?假如你是Li Ming , 请你根据以下思维导图写一篇短文介绍一下你的饮食习惯。
作文要求:(1)不能照抄原文,不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。(2)语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Tips: for breakfast/ lunch/ dinner 作为早餐/中餐/晚餐,drink milk 喝牛奶,have some bread 吃一些面包,eat some noodles or dumplings 吃面条或饺子,have rice with fish and beef 吃鱼、牛肉和米饭,have lots of vegetables 吃许多蔬菜,keep healthy 保持健康,be good for 对...有好处
My name is Li Ming. I have three meals every day.
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It is important to remember: eat well, stay healthy and do not get fat.
9.Think and talk.
Talk about your pet(if you have one) or your favorite animal in 6-7sentences with the help of the following questions.
·What is his/ her name ·What is your favorite animal
·How old is he/she ·Where is he/she from
·What can he/she do ·Why do you like him/her
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10. 学校开展英语演讲比赛,请你以"How to learn English Well"为标题,写一篇短文,分享一下自己学习英语的心得方法。
要求:(1)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名; (2)80~100词,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to learn English Well
Ladies and gentlemen, good afternoon! I'm more than glad to stand here and give you a short speech,
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11. 在"新冠疫情"常态化的今天,你是如何保持健康增强免疫力?假如你是大明, 正准备参加学校英语演讲比赛,请你写一篇题为"A Healthy Life"的演讲稿, 内容包括: 1). 健康生活方式带来的好处; 2). 介绍自己或身边同学的健康生活方式 (三个);3). 号召大家选择健康的生活方式。
关键词: 生活方式 lifestyle。
注意: (1) 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。(2) 语句连贯,词数60左右, 作文的标题和开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
A Healthy Life
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We all should have healthy lifestyles.
12. 书面表达。
假设你叫李明, 你们学校下周要举行主题为"健康生活",远离电子产品的英语演讲比赛,请你准备一份 演讲稿,内容包括:(1)什么是健康生活; (2)谈谈长期使用电子产品的危害(至少 3 点)以及减少使用电子产品的时间的方法(至少 2 点); (3)呼吁同学们远离电子产品,培养健康的生活方式。
作文要求:(1)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。(2)语句连贯,词数 80 左右;作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。 Dear fellow students,
I'm Li Ming. Today I would like to share my opinion on the relationship between healthy life and electronic products.
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Thank you for your listening!
13. 10月23日是中国传统节日重阳节。假如你是李华,在重阳节这天你和同学去了敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教Lucy写封邮件,告诉她这件事情,内容包括:1. 简介重阳节2. 到达敬老院及返回的时间3. 去敬老院的交通方式4. 在敬老院的活动:包饺子、唱歌、跳舞、做游戏等5. 你的感受(至少两点)
注意:1. 词数 80左右:2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开始和结语已为你写好。
Dear Lucy,
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Do you know anything about the Double Ninth Festival Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
14. 学校社团活动丰富了学生的课余生活,假如你叫李辉,请你写一封英文邮件,向你的英国笔友 Jack 介绍你和同桌 Ben 参加的社团活动。
注意:(1) 词数 60~80, (开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数);(2) 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Jack,
My deskmate Ben and I joined some wonderful clubs in my school this term.
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Can you tell me about your school clubs I hope to hear from you soon.
Li Hui
15. 假设你是Jenny,请以My Friend为题,根据下面提示写一篇短文,介绍一下你的朋友Laura,内容包括:(1)她上学的方式;(2)她喜欢的学科;(3)她的兴趣爱好;(4)她喜欢的动物及喜欢的理由。
要求: (1)注意紧扣主题,语言流畅,适当发挥,书写规范,卷面整洁,80词左右。(2)不能照抄原文,不得在作文出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。校名统一用 Guangming Middle School.
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答案解析部分
1.One possible version:
Fellow students,
We will pay a visit to the old people's home this Sunday. We'll have to meet at the school gate at 8:30 on Sunday morning and then go there by bus. There we will do some cleaning and tidy the rooms. After that we will have many activities, such as singing, dancing, telling stories and chatting to cheer up the old. Before we leave, we'll give our presents to them.
I hope all of us can take an active part in public welfare activities. Through the meaningful activity, we can learn to care for the old.
That's all. Thank you!
本文是应用文,是一篇通知;时态为"一般将来时";写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明周日要参加一次敬老院的公益活动;第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍时间,交通方式,去做的事情等;第三步,书写结语。发表自己对这次活动的看法。最后检查所用时态,人称是否符合要求,检查段落是否完整,句子表达是否准确。语法,拼写,标点,移行,大小写等方面是否有误。
文章应围绕"活动的时间,内容和意义"展开,确保所有内容均围绕这一中心进行阐述。 文章结构应清晰,各部分内容之间过渡自然,逻辑连贯。 使用准确的词汇和语法结构来表达,避免使用过于复杂或生僻的词汇,确保文章易于理解。同时,注意使用。 亮点词汇pay a visit to拜访;such as例如;cheer up使开心,使振作;take an active part in积极参加。高分句型Before we leave, we'll give our presents to them. (时间状语从句);I hope all of us can take an active part in public welfare activities. (宾语从句)。
2.One possible version:
Dear Li ,
I'm glad share ideas how learn well you. As the world is developing Here are my suggestions.
Firstly,we should often listen to English songs,we should speak English as much as possible. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak the fewer mistakes you'll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. Thirdly,we should keep diaries and recite some good passages.
I believe that as long as you study hard
Best regards,
Diana
这是一篇提纲作文。按照所给的提示内容给李华写一封回信。写作中要包含所给的三方面的内容, 对英语学习的看法、提出学习英语的建议以及提出鼓励和希望。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般现在时,人称主要是第一人称,注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题,写作中注意上下文的过渡,要符合逻辑关系,符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将三个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚、完整,时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语,如as much as possible;practice with others 等以及句型结构,如 The more you speak the fewer mistakes you'll make. Thirdly,we should keep diaries and recite some good passages.等运用较为得体,表达比较准确,使文章更加流畅,自然。
3.One possible version:
My Home Town
My home town is Jiangshan, a charming city located in Quzhou, Zhejiang Province. You can see the beautiful Jianglang Mountain and the ancient buildings that tell us stories from the past.
The weather in Jiangshan is pretty good. Spring and autumn are great times to come because the weather is just right for visiting.
If you visit Jiangshan, I recommend trying the local snacks. They are really delicious and you can find them in the small shops around the city. Also, don't forget to take a walk by the river in the evening; it's very peaceful and beautiful.
I hope you can come and see the beauty of Jiangshan for yourself!
本文是命题作文,主要以一般现在时和第三人称单数介绍我的故乡,内容包括①开头:开门见山;②正文:介绍家乡的特点和旅行的建议③表达愿望。注意词汇的选择和句子的使用,同时注意衔接词的运用,使上下文连贯。
篇短文根据所给的提示内容逐一地进行了陈述,内容切题,语言衔接自然,意思连贯,表达清楚,完整,时态运用灵活准确。本文使用较为精彩的词汇和句型有:recommend doing sth建议做某事;forget to do sth忘记要做某事。You can see the beautiful Jianglang Mountain and the ancient buildings that tell us stories from the past.(that引导的限制性定语从句) I hope you can come and see the beauty of Jiangshan for yourself!(省略that的宾语从句),使文章更生动。
4.One possible version:
How to behave well in the library
There is a new library in our school and it will open next month. In order to help us behave well in the library, it is important to make some rules. Only with the help of the rules can everyone study in a good environment.
First, it is necessary to keep quiet in the library. Then we can read in a quiet environment. Second, we can't eat or drink in the library. It is impolite. Third, we should wait in line when borrowing books. It is rude to jump the queue. Finally, we are not allowed to draw or write in the books. We should always keep the books clean.
Reading helps us become better, so let's make good use of our new library and behave well in the library.
5.One possible version:
Good morning, everyone. The ten-minute break is very important to us. Here is my advice to make the best use of it.
First, keep ourselves safe. For example, we mustn't run on the stairs or push each other. Instead, we can take a walk with our friends and have a kind talk. It's also a good idea to play some fun games so that we can develop our interests and have a rest from the schoolwork.
Have a safe and fun play during the ten-minute break. Let's relax and grow as a full man. Thanks for listening.
本文是篇演讲稿;谈谈合理安排课间十分钟的具体建议和意义。本文时态为一般现在时;注意本文要给出建议并指出这样做的意义。第一步,总述课间十分钟的重要性;第二步,具体给出建议及说明其意义;第三步,结束语,我们应该好好利用课间十分钟。在写作的时候,注意紧扣主题,连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;词汇,句式要丰富多样,避免句式单一。
本文结构紧凑,语言简练,要点齐全,亮点词汇Otherwise否则,What is more此外,be important to sb,take a walk with sb,等词汇的使用,使上下文意连接紧密 ,本文还采用了丰富的句型,比如keep ourselves safe(祈使句)。When the next class begins, we will feel fresh again.(时间状语从句)。It's also a good idea to play some fun games so that we can develop our interests and have a rest from the schoolwork.(结果状语从句)等的用法。
6.One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I'm sorry to hear that. About turning off the screen, I have some ideas.
Firstly, don't turn it on as soon as you get home. You can make a plan and keep it. If you want to watch one show, turn off the screen right after the show is over. You could even set an alarm to remind yourself. Maybe it's hard at first, but you'll feel much better if you spend that time reading or even talking with your parents. That'll do good to your study.
Hope my reply will be helpful to you!
Li Hua
这是一篇提纲作文。按照所给的提示内容回复邮件。写作中要包含所给邮件的全部内容。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般现在时,人称主要是第一人称单数,注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题,写作中注意上下文的过渡,要符合逻辑关系,符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将邮件的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚、完整,时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语,如turn it on;as soon as you get home;feel much better等以及句型结构,如You could even set an alarm to remind yourself.but you'll feel much better if you spend that time reading or even talking with your parents.等运用较为得体,表达比较准确,使文章更加流畅,自然。
7.One possible version:
How to Be a Better Teenager
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
First of all, we should develop healthy living habits. We can run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. What's more, we should make a study plan and take action to achieve it. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. And we had better be friendly to others. When others need help, we should try our best to help them. Finally, it is good to develop good hobbies and take part in voluntary activities, such as cleaning the city park, helping homeless people and so on.
In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better.
Thank you!
初中三年将尽,未来已来,我们如何成为更好的自己?请你根据以下内容提示,以"How to Be a Better Teenager "为题,用英语写一篇演讲稿,在毕业典礼上发言。本文是一篇演讲稿;时态为一般现在时;第一步,表明写作意图,借用"如何成为一个更好的青少年"的话题来引出重点介绍的内容;第二步,具体阐述怎样成为一个更好的青少年;第三步,书写结语,表达"我们会变得越来越好"的愿望。
本文结构紧凑,语言简练,要点齐全,文中be friendly to sb对某人友好,take up培养,take part in参加等词汇的使用,使上下文意连接紧密 ,本文还采用了丰富的句型,比如运用了The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. (the+比较级,the+比较级句式),In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better. (if引导的条件状语从句),使文章更富有条理。
8.One possible version:
My name is Li Ming .I have three meals every day. I have a cup of milk and some bread for breakfast. Milk is good for our teeth. Sometimes I have some noodles or dumplings for breakfast. I have rice with fish or meat and lots of vegetables for lunch .After lunch, I will eat some fruit. I have beef noodles or tomato noodles for dinner. I seldom eat junk food, because I think it is bad for my heath. I think my eating habits are very healthy.
It is important to remember: eat well , stay healthy and do not get fat.
这是一篇提纲作文,本文要求按照所给提示介绍自己的饮食习惯,写作中首先,开头部分可以简单介绍自己的基本信息,如名字和日常饮食习惯。接下来,可以详细描述每一餐的饮食习惯。在描述完每一餐的饮食后,可以介绍自己饮食习惯的特点。最后,可以在结尾部分重申自己的饮食习惯理念。根据材料内容可知时态为一般现在时,人称主要为第一人称,注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题,写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将自己的饮食习惯以及原因逐一进行了陈述,内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚,连贯,时态运用灵活准确,一些固定短语如every day每天,be good for对......有益,lots of许多,be bad for对......有害,stay healthy保持健康,get fat变胖等以及句型结构,如I seldom eat junk food, because I think it is bad for my heath.等运用较为得体,表达比较准确,使文章更加自然流畅。
9.One possible version:
I have a pet dog. Its name is Da Fu. It is a good name because it means"luck ". I get it from my parents as a birthday gift. He is 3 years old and he is really smart. He can walk on two legs and he can open the door for us. We like him very much!
这是一篇提纲作文。按照所给的提示内容用6-7句话谈论你的宠物。写作中要包含所给的提示内容,名字,什么动物,来自哪里,多大了以及为什么喜欢等。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般现在时,人称主要是第一人称和第三人称单数,注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题,写作中注意上下文的过渡,要符合逻辑关系,符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给提示将内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚、完整,时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语,如a good name;get it from my parents等以及句型结构,如It is a good name because it means"luck ".He can walk on two legs and he can open the door for us.等运用较为得体,表达比较准确,使文章更加流畅,自然。
10.All of us want to learn English well. Here are some useful ways of learning English. First,it's important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and take some notes so that you can go over after class. Second,try to take every chance to practice speaking,reading and writing both in and out of class. Third,try to listen to the radio,watch T V and movies in English.Above all,you should be confident,and don't give up whenever you meet difficulties. Enjoy your English learning,then you will make great progress and learn English well.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
这是一篇提纲作文。按照所给的提示内容以"How to learn English Well"为标题,写一篇短文,分享一下自己学习英语的心得方法。写作中要包含所给的提示的内容。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般现在时,人称主要是第二人称,注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题,写作中注意上下文的过渡,要符合逻辑关系,符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将如何学好英语逐一进行了陈述。内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚、完整,时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语,如some useful ways of learning English;make great progress等以及句型结构,如it's important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and take some notes so that you can go over after class.Above all,you should be confident,and don't give up whenever you meet difficulties.等运用较为得体,表达比较准确,使文章更加流畅,自然。
11.One possible version:
A Healthy Life
We all should have healthy lifestyles. A healthy lifestyle will make us work and study better. Here are my healthy habits. I often do some exercise, like swimming, running and jogging. On the weekend, I often ask my friends to run in the park. In the afternoon, we usually go to the swimming pool to go swimming. I never eat junk food because it is bad for our health. I never watch too much TV, because it is bad for our eyes. When I am bored, I often read some books to make me feel relaxed.
In order to have a healthy lifestyle, I hope everyone can take action now.
本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿;介绍健康生活的方式。时态为"一般现在时";写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏"信息提示",适当增加细节,并突出写作重点,以第一人称为主。第一步,整体说明健康生活方式带来的好处;第二步,具体介绍自己的健康生活方式;第三步:最后号召同学们行动起来。
这篇范文很好地展示了如何围绕"健康生活"这一主题展开论述,通过具体的行为实例和积极向上的态度,鼓励读者采取健康的生活方式。文章条理清晰,语言简洁,适合中学生借鉴和学习。 文章一开始就明确了主题,即健康生活方式的重要性。分为几个部分,首先指出健康生活的好处,接着列举了自己的健康习惯,最后呼吁大家行动起来。 逻辑清晰,从提出观点到具体做法再到呼吁行动,层层递进。 文章不仅提到了健康的习惯,还解释了这些习惯带来的正面效果,如提高工作效率和学习效率。 文章运用了好词好句,增添色彩;好词:ask sb to do sth让某人做某事;be bad for对……有害。好句:We all should have healthy lifestyles.简洁有力地提出了文章的主题。A healthy lifestyle will make us work and study better.明确指出健康生活方式带来的好处,增强了说服力。
I often do some exercise, like swimming, running and jogging.列举具体的锻炼方式,使文章更具可信度。On the weekend, I often ask my friends to run in the park.展现了与朋友一起锻炼的乐趣,增加了文章的生活气息。I never eat junk food because it is bad for our health.通过对比,强调了健康饮食的重要性。I never watch too much TV, because it is bad for our eyes.同样通过对比,说明了控制看电视时间的好处。When I am bored, I often read some books to make me feel relaxed.提供了一个健康的消遣方式,并解释了其作用。In order to have a healthy lifestyle, I hope everyone can take action now.总结全文,发出倡议,增强了文章的号召力。
12.One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
I'm Li Ming. Today I would like to share my opinions on the relationship between healthy life and electronic products.
Living a healthy life means we are supposed to do more exercise and keep far away from electronic products. Firstly, we will have poor eye sight if we are crazy about playing phones or computers for a long time.
Secondly, spending time on electronic products will also do harm to our relationship with family members and
friends because we will have less time to communicate with them. In addition, it will also make us fail to focus on studying so that we cannot get good grades.
Therefore, we should try to develop other hobbies like reading or exercising in our spare time and reduce or limit the time of using electronic products.
Let's keep away from electronic products together and develop a healthy lifestyle from now on. Thanks for your listening!
13.略
这是一篇提纲类作文,请给外教Lucy写封邮件,告诉她10月23日是中国传统节日重阳节。在重阳节这天你和同学去了敬老院陪老人们过重阳节,需要写的内容已经给出,但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要适当添加内容,最后检查所用时态,人称是否符合要求,检查段落是否完整,句子表达是否准确。语法,拼写,标点,移行,大小写等方面是否有误。
本文结构紧凑,语言简练,要点齐全,文中Looking forward to,know about,by bus,see sb doing等词汇的使用,使上下文意连接紧密 ,本文还采用了丰富的句型,比如运用了时间状语从句When the Double Ninth Festival approaches, we go to a nursing home to observe customs等复合句,大大增加了信息的容量,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。
14.Dear Jack, My deskmate Ben and I joined some wonderful clubs in my school this term. We both joined the English and sports clubs. At the English Club, we talk in English and learn to sing English songs. We learn a lot of new words and it makes us more interested in English. In the sports club, we learn to play basketball and football. If we have time, we often play with our team. Exercise is very important. It can not only make us happy, but also make us healthier.
Can you tell me about your school clubs I hope to hear from you soon.
Li Hui
这是一篇材料作文,要求在向英国笔友写一封邮件,介绍自己与同桌参加的社团活动。邮件主题要明确,用第一人称来写。首先简要介绍自己并引出邮件的主题,接着详细描述参加的两个主要社团活动(English club和Sports club),补充另一个运动活动的内容,以展现社团活动的多样性。最后表达对笔友的关心或希望保持联系的愿望,并附上合适的问候语。时态主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时。注意内容的详略得当,语言流畅。
范文结构清晰、中心思想明确,内容充实、完整,通过具体的活动来展现俱乐部的魅力和作者的感受,表达流畅自然,时态运用灵活。用的好的短语有make sb.+形容词;both…and;not only…but also…;好的句子如We learn a lot of new words and it makes us more interested in English这句话既描述了学习成果,又表达了对英语的兴趣增加,语言简洁明了;Exercise is very important. It can not only make us happy, but also make us healthier."这句话强调了运动的重要性,并用"not only…but also…"结构使句子更加有层次和说服力;Can you tell me about your school clubs I hope to hear from you soon.":礼貌地询问对方的信息,并表示期待对方的回信,使邮件更加友好和亲切。
15.One possible version:
My Friend
Laura is my good friend. Her home is very close to the school. She walks to school every day. Her favorite subject is English,because she thinks it is very useful. She also likes playing basketball. If she has time, she often goes to the playground with her friends to play basketball. She likes dogs because they are very kind. She has a pet dog. She takes it for a walk in the park every day.
这是一篇材料作文。本文要求根据四点提示写一篇短文,介绍你的朋友Laura,注意紧扣主题,语言流畅,可适当发挥,但在行文中不得出现真实的人名和校名,如果确实用到校名,统一使用Guangming Middle School。整体上,文章采用简单的叙述方式,通过一系列的描述,展现了Laura的生活和个性特点。写作步骤要清晰,内容要连贯,按照记叙文的要求来写。文章描述Laura的日常生活和习惯,时态上主要用一般现在时。
整体上,文章采用了顺叙的结构,先介绍Laura的基本信息,然后描述她的日常生活和兴趣爱好。每个信息点都是独立的,但又相互关联,共同构成了对Laura的全面介绍。文章的语言简洁明了,符合记叙文的特点。文章内容主要围绕作者的好朋友Laura的日常生活和兴趣爱好展开。通过对Laura的描述,我们可以了解到她的一些个人特点和生活方式。通过这些描述,文章传达了一个积极向上的中心思想,即Laura是一个有爱心、勤奋学习、健康生活的好学生。文章鼓励读者了解和欣赏这样的生活方式和态度。文章也使用了不少好句,例如,句子 Her favorite subject is English, because she thinks it is very useful.和句子She takes it for a walk in the park every day.通过提供额外的信息来增强文章的内容,使读者对Laura有更全面的认识。