书面表达
假设你是晨光中学高一学生李津,你的英国朋友Chris来信询问你的寒假生活,请你给他回信。内容包括:
(1)读书、参加社会服务等;
(2)欢天喜地过春节;
(3)邀请来中国过春节。
注意:(1)词数不少于100,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)文中不能提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Dear Chris,
I am delighted to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Jin
给Chris关于寒假生活的回信
写作提纲
第一段:开篇表达收到 Chris 来信的喜悦,自然引出要分享寒假生活的话题,引起对方兴趣。
第二段:详细描述寒假生活,先介绍读书经历,提及阅读的书籍类型及收获;再讲述参加社会服务的具体情况,如在养老院的活动内容和感受;最后重点描绘春节期间的活动,像家庭团聚、传统习俗等,突出节日氛围。
第三段:向 Chris 发出诚挚邀请,欢迎他来中国体验春节,强调春节独特的魅力,表达期待他到来的心情。
语言积累
短语
be delighted to 很高兴
hear from 收到…… 的来信
can't wait to 迫不及待
indulge in 沉迷于,尽情享受
broaden one's horizons 拓宽某人的视野
participate in 参加
social services 社会服务
nursing home 养老院
family reunion 家庭团聚
unique traditions 独特的传统
佳句
It was a pleasant surprise to receive your letter, and I'm more than happy to let you know how I spent my winter vacation.(收到你的来信真是个惊喜,我非常乐意让你知道我是如何度过寒假的。)
Reading those classic novels was like embarking on a journey through different times and cultures, which significantly expanded my knowledge and understanding of the world.(阅读那些经典小说就像是踏上了穿越不同时代和文化的旅程,这极大地拓展了我对世界的认识和理解。)
Volunteering at the nursing home not only brought smiles to the faces of the elderly but also taught me the importance of kindness and responsibility.(在养老院做志愿者不仅给老人们带来了笑容,也让我明白了善良和责任的重要性。)
The Spring Festival, a time - honored tradition in China, is filled with joy, laughter, and the warmth of family. It's a celebration that binds us together.(春节是中国历史悠久的传统节日,充满了欢乐、笑声和家庭的温暖。这是一个将我们紧密相连的庆祝活动。)
I truly hope that you can join us in China during the Spring Festival. It would be a wonderful opportunity for you to immerse yourself in our rich culture and create unforgettable memories.(我真心希望你能在春节期间来中国和我们一起过节。这将是你沉浸在我们丰富文化中并创造难忘回忆的绝佳机会。)
写作示范
示范一
Dear Chris,
I'm thrilled to hear from you! I'm eager to tell you all about my amazing winter vacation.
I spent a great deal of time reading some thought - provoking books. They opened my mind to new ideas and perspectives. Additionally, I took part in a community service project, helping to organize a charity sale. It was really meaningful.
The Spring Festival was the most exciting part. We decorated our house with lanterns, had a big dinner with the family, and watched the Spring Festival Gala. It was a time full of love and happiness.
I sincerely invite you to come to China for the Spring Festival. You can experience the unique charm of this traditional festival. Looking forward to your visit!
Yours,
Li Jin
示范二
Dear Chris,
Receiving your letter made my day! Now, let me share my wonderful winter break with you.
I delved into several interesting books, which broadened my mental horizons. Also, I volunteered at a local library, helping kids with their reading. It was so rewarding.
During the Spring Festival, we made paper - cuttings, set off firecrackers, and visited relatives. The streets were filled with red lanterns and the sound of firecrackers, creating a festive atmosphere.
I hope you can come to China during the Spring Festival. You'll surely be attracted by the rich traditions and warm family gatherings. I'm waiting for you!
Yours,
Li Jin
示范三
Dear Chris,
I'm overjoyed to have your letter! Now, I'm going to tell you about my unforgettable winter vacation.
I got lost in a series of adventure novels, which took me to different magical worlds. Besides, I joined a group to clean up the park. It was a great way to contribute to the community.
The Spring Festival was truly special. We pasted New Year pictures, ate dumplings, and received red envelopes. The whole family was together, sharing stories and laughter.
I sincerely hope you can come to China to celebrate the Spring Festival. It will be a remarkable cultural experience for you. I'm looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I am delighted to hear from you. I am happy to tell you how I will spend my winter holiday.
Firstly, I plan to read some books. As the saying goes, “Life without reading is like life without sunshine.” I will make full use of my holiday to read some interesting novels as well as books related to my study. In addition, I want to do some voluntary work for my community together with my schoolmates, such as visiting the lonely seniors and coaching the younger students.
As is known to us all, the Spring Festival is time for the whole families to reunite together. The day just before the lunar New Year, the spring couplets, Fu Character, and animal paper-cuts are pasted for decoration. On New Year’s Eve, family members sit together, enjoying the delicious dumplings as well as appreciating the Spring Festival gala. When the New Year bell rings, all the people will cheer and firecrakers are set off. With the New Year’s Day coming, people will dress up and go out to visit friends and relatives to pay New Year’s call each other.
Looking forward to your coming to China to celebrate the Spring Festival.
Yours,
Li Jin