Unit 5 First Aid 写作指导——急救经历 讲义-2024-2025学年高中英语人教版（2019）选择性必修第二册
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选择性必修二 U5 写作指导——急救经历
一、写作思路
（1）一审：体裁、结构 体裁：记叙文
结构：三段
第一段：导入事件的时间地点人物及原因
第二段：介绍现场情况，心理活动，病人情况以及自己会的急救知识
第三段：总结事件的结果和自己的想法
（2）二定：时态和人称
时态：过去进行时（现在分词）
人称：第一、三人称为主
（3）三明确：明确写作要点
事件发生的人物时间地点原因，现场情况和心理活动，总结事件的结果表达自己的观点。
二、常用短语
first aid (for sth）(对...的) 急救
an emergency situation 紧急情况
the Red Cross 红十字会
suffer a burn 被烧伤
call for an ambulance 叫救护车
give/perform first aid 实施急救
get burnt 烧伤
hear sb screaming 听到某人的尖叫
apply...to... 把...涂在...上；适用于...
run to... at once 马上跑到…
suffer from sth 遭受,承受(...的痛苦)
stop sth from doing sth阻止...做某事
regardless of sth 不管...,不顾...
ease discomfort 缓解不适
take steps to do sth 采取措施做...
lay the victim on his back让受害者仰躺着
ride along with sb 陪同(以提供帮助)
rush sb to the hospital 迅速送某人去医院
pat his shoulders 轻拍他的肩膀
fall over 摔倒 (fall - fell -fallen)
have trouble (in) breathing 呼吸困难
first-aid kit 急救箱
call for help 呼救
in trouble 在麻烦中，在困难中
without delay 立即,毫不拖延
in danger 在危险中
every minute counts 分秒必争
waste no time 毫不浪费时间；立即行动
prevent sb from doing sth 阻止某人做...
take risk(s) 冒险
the emergency number(s) 急救电话
heart attack 心脏病发作
sprained ankle 扭伤的脚踝
keep calm 保持镇定
put/lay sb on one’s back 让某人仰面躺下
perform mouth-to-mouth rescue breathing 做口对口呼吸
perform CPR 进行心肺复苏术
take small bites 小口进食
choke on sth (被...) 噎住
slap sb on the back 拍某人的背
（slap - slapped - slapped）(slapping)
with the help of sb 在某人的帮助下
help sb to his feet 帮/扶某人站立
be forced out 被挤出 （force sth out）
三、常用句型
1.Giving first aid plays a most important role in the treatment of burns.
急救在烧伤的治疗中起着最重要的作用。
2.John was studying in his room when he heard screaming.
约翰正在房间学习这时他突然听到一声尖叫。
3. She was lying in her front garden bleeding very heavily.
她躺在前花园的地上，流血不止。
4. He slowed the bleeding by applying pressure to the wounds until the police and ambulance arrived.
他使劲地按住伤口，使血流得慢些，一直等到警察和救护车的到来。
5. There is no doubt that Jon’s quick thinking and the first aid skills he learned at school saved Ms Slade’s life.
毫无疑问，是敏捷的思维和在学校学到的急救技术，使得斯莱德女士的生命得救了。
6. It shows that a knowledge of first aid can make a real difference.
这说明了急救知识的确能发挥重要的作用。
Accidents do happen; make first-aid your best mate.事故确实会发生；让急救成为你最好的伴侣。
Next to creating a life, the finest thing a man can do is to save one.除了创造一种生活之外，一个人所能做的最好的事情就是拯救一个人。
9.有关避免/处理紧急状况的一些表达:
①Bleeding:
Try to stop the bleeding.
Press a handkerchief onto the bleeding point and hold it there.
Hold up the part of the body which is bleeding if possible.
②Sprain(扭伤):
It is better to avoid walking with the injured ankle.
It is correct to use an ice pack for relieving the pain.
③Choke:
Make him/her spit(吐) it out by slapping him/her on the back.
To avoid this, we shouldn’t talk or laugh when eating.
④Nosebleed:
Stay calm.
Sit up, bow the head and lean slightly forward.
Pinch(捏) both nostrils(鼻孔) together between the thumb and forefinger. Breathe through the mouth, not the nose.
写作任务
一、假设你是李华, 上周末你正在写作业时听到母亲的尖叫声,得知她在厨房被切伤,然后你用有关急救方面的一些常识对她实施了急救，请你结合此事,用英语写一篇记叙文，内容包括:
1.简述紧急事件情况；2.描述具体的施救过程; 3.谈论施救后的感想;
Last Sunday afternoon, I was doing my homework when I heard my mum screaming in the kitchen.
Wasting no time, I got up and ran to the kitchen at once. Afraid and worried, I saw my mum trying to put the bleeding thumb under the tap. I instantly told her not to do that, because the depth of the cut should be checked at first. After finding it was deep, I realzied there was an urgent need to perform Compression Hemostasis(压迫止血法）on the cut by directly pressing the cut with gauze and then applying force to wrap it up. About ten minutes later, the bleeding stopped. However, to prevent the cut being infected, I called our neighbor to send mum to the hospital and the doctor cleaned, disinfected, stitched and bandaged the cut. Finally, my mum felt much better and we both breathed a sigh of relief.
Knowing basic first aid skills can make us better prepare for an emergency. Luckily, I had learnt how to give first aid for the cut in school. Seeing mum cutting her thumb, I felt a little bit afraid, but I remained calm and reacted immediately.
二、几天前，一名男子在玉溪河中溺水身亡。看到这一点，几个陌生人脱下衣服，跳到水里，毫不犹豫地救了那个溺水的人。假设你是记者，写一篇关于溺水急救的故事。
A Drowning Man Saved by Passers-by
Cai Zuning: a 73-year-old retired worker, was walking when he heard someone screaming. A fellow jumped into the water from the bridge. The drowning man was struggling in the water desperately.
Cai wasted no time. Regardless of his own safety, he took off the clothes and dived into the freezing cold water at once. Unfortunately, Cai was too weak to draw the drowning man out of water. Seeing the urgent situation, four passers-by joined the rescue instantly. They first succeeded in carrying them onto the pavement. After laying the victims on the back, they patted their shoulders to check for a response. They made sure the drowning man was fine, but there was an urgent need to perform CPR on Cai by blowing air in and pushing down on the centre of his chest. Several minutes later, an ambulance and the police arrived. They took over the incident.
Seeing two men drowning. Meng remained calm and reacted immediately. He later said about the incident,“It's a great honour to save a life."
写作任务
假设你是李华,你们班最近在英语课上学习了有关急救方面的一些常识,同学们普遍对这方面的知识很感兴趣,大家都认为学校有必要提供相关的课程。作为班长,请你给校长写一封信,提出你的建议,并写出建议的理由。内容包括:
1.学习急救知识的意义; 2.具体建议及原因; 3.重申建议的重要性。
Dear Principal,
Our class studied some knowledge about first aid. We are all interested in it and feel that being able to give first aid when needed can make a difference before proper medical treatment is given.
Therefore, we suggest that courses on first aid should be offered in our school. Posters about first aid for different injuries can be put up in every corner of our campus. What’s more, our school can organize the rescue drills to provide a stage for students to practice and gain experience in first aid.
I believe having a knowledge of first aid is of vital importance. I would appreciate it if you could take our suggestions into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假设你是李华,你们班最近在英语课上学习了有关急救方面的一些常识,同学们普遍对这方面的知识很感兴趣,大家都认为学校有必要提供相关的课程。作为班长,请你给校长写一封信,提出你的建议,并写出建议的理由。内容包括:
1.学习急救知识的意义; 2.具体建议及原因; 3.重申建议的重要性。
Dear Principal,
Our class studied some knowledge about first aid. We are all interested in it and feel that being able to give first aid when needed can make a difference before proper medical treatment is given.
Therefore, we suggest that courses on first aid should be offered in our school. Posters about first aid for different injuries can be put up in every corner of our campus. What’s more, our school can organize the rescue drills to provide a stage for students to practice and gain experience in first aid.
I believe having a knowledge of first aid is of vital importance. I would appreciate it if you could take our suggestions into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假设你和你的同学李明一起去锅炉房打开水,在回寝室的路上,李明的热水瓶突然破裂,开水烫伤了他的脚。于是你对他实施了必要的急救。请你结合此事,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,向学校英文报Teens投稿,主要内容包括:
1.描述事故发生的经过;
2.你是如何实施急救的(冷水冲洗、送医院做进一步的处理);
3.简要谈谈你对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的认识。
参考词汇:锅炉房 boiler room 热水瓶 Thermos bottle
参考范文
One day, Li Ming and I were walking back to the dorm from the boiler room when his Thermos bottle burst and the boiling water caused an injury to his feet. The burn was so severe that the skin was red and swollen. However, I managed to remain calm, quickly recalling what I had learnt in my first-aid class. I placed his feet under the cool running water right away to ease the pain. Afterwards, I called a taxi and rushed him to the hospital.
Only then was I aware of how important and practical the basic knowledge about first aid was.
写作积累
5 假设你是李华,你们班最近在英语课上学习了有关急救方面的一些常识,同学们普遍对这方面的知识很感兴趣,大家都认为学校有必要提供相关的课程。作为班长,请你给校长写一封信,提出你的建议,并写出建议的理由。内容包括:
1.学习急救知识的意义;
2.具体建议及原因;
3.重申建议的重要性。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Principal,
Our class studied some knowledge about first aid. We are all interested in it and feel that being able to give first aid when needed can make a difference before proper medical treatment is given.
Therefore, we suggest that courses on first aid should be offered in our school. Posters about first aid for different injuries can be put up in every corner of our campus. What’s more, our school can organize the rescue drills to provide a stage for students to practice and gain experience in first aid.
I believe having a knowledge of first aid is of vital importance. I would appreciate it if you could take our suggestions into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
6 假如你是Eric，你的学校预备进行消防演练，学校需要你针对校园火灾做一篇安全报告，让同学们了解火灾的严重性并且知道面临火灾该如何应对。请根据以上内容，以“Safety Tips in Fire Accidents”为题，写一篇报告。
要求：
1. 内容完整，可适当发挥。
2. 前后连贯，有逻辑性。
3. 词数80---100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。
4. 文中不能出现真实姓名以及所在学校名称。
Dear classmates,
I am so honored to stand here and give a speech about fire accident. As you know, fire accident is one of the most terrible disasters which can cause serious consequences. So knowing something about safety tips in fire accidents can help to save yourself and your classmates when in danger. Here are some tips which may help you get out of danger.
When you face a fire accident, the first and the most important thing you need to do is to keep calm. If you are too nervous, you can’t think carefully about what to do. Then call 119 at once when the fire just gets started. Take care not to be overcome by smoke, it contains harmful gas which can kill you at a short time. Cover your mouth with a wet towel or a wet cloth, and avoid getting into the smoke. More importantly, remember not to get in an elevator, which may get you trapped if the electricity fails. At last, if you can not get away by yourself, it is of great importance to hang something out of the window to get others’ attention as a sign of asking for help.
In short, if you make full preparations in advance and take measures during the fire, chances are that you will survive in case of a fire if it really breaks out some day.
Thank you for your listening.
Eric
一、写作思路
（1）一审：体裁、结构 体裁：记叙文
结构：三段
第一段：导入事件的时间地点人物及原因
第二段：介绍现场情况，心理活动，病人情况以及自己会的急救知识
第三段：总结事件的结果和自己的想法
（2）二定：时态和人称
时态：过去进行时（现在分词）
人称：第一、三人称为主
（3）三明确：明确写作要点
事件发生的人物时间地点原因，现场情况和心理活动，总结事件的结果表达自己的观点。
二、常用短语
first aid (for sth）(对...的) 急救
an emergency situation 紧急情况
the Red Cross 红十字会
suffer a burn 被烧伤
call for an ambulance 叫救护车
give/perform first aid 实施急救
get burnt 烧伤
hear sb screaming 听到某人的尖叫
apply...to... 把...涂在...上；适用于...
run to... at once 马上跑到…
suffer from sth 遭受,承受(...的痛苦)
stop sth from doing sth阻止...做某事
regardless of sth 不管...,不顾...
ease discomfort 缓解不适
take steps to do sth 采取措施做...
lay the victim on his back让受害者仰躺着
ride along with sb 陪同(以提供帮助)
rush sb to the hospital 迅速送某人去医院
pat his shoulders 轻拍他的肩膀
fall over 摔倒 (fall - fell -fallen)
have trouble (in) breathing 呼吸困难
first-aid kit 急救箱
call for help 呼救
in trouble 在麻烦中，在困难中
without delay 立即,毫不拖延
in danger 在危险中
every minute counts 分秒必争
waste no time 毫不浪费时间；立即行动
prevent sb from doing sth 阻止某人做...
take risk(s) 冒险
the emergency number(s) 急救电话
heart attack 心脏病发作
sprained ankle 扭伤的脚踝
keep calm 保持镇定
put/lay sb on one’s back 让某人仰面躺下
perform mouth-to-mouth rescue breathing 做口对口呼吸
perform CPR 进行心肺复苏术
take small bites 小口进食
choke on sth (被...) 噎住
slap sb on the back 拍某人的背
（slap - slapped - slapped）(slapping)
with the help of sb 在某人的帮助下
help sb to his feet 帮/扶某人站立
be forced out 被挤出 （force sth out）
三、常用句型
1.Giving first aid plays a most important role in the treatment of burns.
急救在烧伤的治疗中起着最重要的作用。
2.John was studying in his room when he heard screaming.
约翰正在房间学习这时他突然听到一声尖叫。
3. She was lying in her front garden bleeding very heavily.
她躺在前花园的地上，流血不止。
4. He slowed the bleeding by applying pressure to the wounds until the police and ambulance arrived.
他使劲地按住伤口，使血流得慢些，一直等到警察和救护车的到来。
5. There is no doubt that Jon’s quick thinking and the first aid skills he learned at school saved Ms Slade’s life.
毫无疑问，是敏捷的思维和在学校学到的急救技术，使得斯莱德女士的生命得救了。
6. It shows that a knowledge of first aid can make a real difference.
这说明了急救知识的确能发挥重要的作用。
Accidents do happen; make first-aid your best mate.事故确实会发生；让急救成为你最好的伴侣。
Next to creating a life, the finest thing a man can do is to save one.除了创造一种生活之外，一个人所能做的最好的事情就是拯救一个人。
9.有关避免/处理紧急状况的一些表达:
①Bleeding:
Try to stop the bleeding.
Press a handkerchief onto the bleeding point and hold it there.
Hold up the part of the body which is bleeding if possible.
②Sprain(扭伤):
It is better to avoid walking with the injured ankle.
It is correct to use an ice pack for relieving the pain.
③Choke:
Make him/her spit(吐) it out by slapping him/her on the back.
To avoid this, we shouldn’t talk or laugh when eating.
④Nosebleed:
Stay calm.
Sit up, bow the head and lean slightly forward.
Pinch(捏) both nostrils(鼻孔) together between the thumb and forefinger. Breathe through the mouth, not the nose.
写作任务
一、假设你是李华, 上周末你正在写作业时听到母亲的尖叫声,得知她在厨房被切伤,然后你用有关急救方面的一些常识对她实施了急救，请你结合此事,用英语写一篇记叙文，内容包括:
1.简述紧急事件情况；2.描述具体的施救过程; 3.谈论施救后的感想;
Last Sunday afternoon, I was doing my homework when I heard my mum screaming in the kitchen.
Wasting no time, I got up and ran to the kitchen at once. Afraid and worried, I saw my mum trying to put the bleeding thumb under the tap. I instantly told her not to do that, because the depth of the cut should be checked at first. After finding it was deep, I realzied there was an urgent need to perform Compression Hemostasis(压迫止血法）on the cut by directly pressing the cut with gauze and then applying force to wrap it up. About ten minutes later, the bleeding stopped. However, to prevent the cut being infected, I called our neighbor to send mum to the hospital and the doctor cleaned, disinfected, stitched and bandaged the cut. Finally, my mum felt much better and we both breathed a sigh of relief.
Knowing basic first aid skills can make us better prepare for an emergency. Luckily, I had learnt how to give first aid for the cut in school. Seeing mum cutting her thumb, I felt a little bit afraid, but I remained calm and reacted immediately.
二、几天前，一名男子在玉溪河中溺水身亡。看到这一点，几个陌生人脱下衣服，跳到水里，毫不犹豫地救了那个溺水的人。假设你是记者，写一篇关于溺水急救的故事。
A Drowning Man Saved by Passers-by
Cai Zuning: a 73-year-old retired worker, was walking when he heard someone screaming. A fellow jumped into the water from the bridge. The drowning man was struggling in the water desperately.
Cai wasted no time. Regardless of his own safety, he took off the clothes and dived into the freezing cold water at once. Unfortunately, Cai was too weak to draw the drowning man out of water. Seeing the urgent situation, four passers-by joined the rescue instantly. They first succeeded in carrying them onto the pavement. After laying the victims on the back, they patted their shoulders to check for a response. They made sure the drowning man was fine, but there was an urgent need to perform CPR on Cai by blowing air in and pushing down on the centre of his chest. Several minutes later, an ambulance and the police arrived. They took over the incident.
Seeing two men drowning. Meng remained calm and reacted immediately. He later said about the incident,“It's a great honour to save a life."
写作任务
假设你是李华,你们班最近在英语课上学习了有关急救方面的一些常识,同学们普遍对这方面的知识很感兴趣,大家都认为学校有必要提供相关的课程。作为班长,请你给校长写一封信,提出你的建议,并写出建议的理由。内容包括:
1.学习急救知识的意义; 2.具体建议及原因; 3.重申建议的重要性。
Dear Principal,
Our class studied some knowledge about first aid. We are all interested in it and feel that being able to give first aid when needed can make a difference before proper medical treatment is given.
Therefore, we suggest that courses on first aid should be offered in our school. Posters about first aid for different injuries can be put up in every corner of our campus. What’s more, our school can organize the rescue drills to provide a stage for students to practice and gain experience in first aid.
I believe having a knowledge of first aid is of vital importance. I would appreciate it if you could take our suggestions into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假设你是李华,你们班最近在英语课上学习了有关急救方面的一些常识,同学们普遍对这方面的知识很感兴趣,大家都认为学校有必要提供相关的课程。作为班长,请你给校长写一封信,提出你的建议,并写出建议的理由。内容包括:
1.学习急救知识的意义; 2.具体建议及原因; 3.重申建议的重要性。
Dear Principal,
Our class studied some knowledge about first aid. We are all interested in it and feel that being able to give first aid when needed can make a difference before proper medical treatment is given.
Therefore, we suggest that courses on first aid should be offered in our school. Posters about first aid for different injuries can be put up in every corner of our campus. What’s more, our school can organize the rescue drills to provide a stage for students to practice and gain experience in first aid.
I believe having a knowledge of first aid is of vital importance. I would appreciate it if you could take our suggestions into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假设你和你的同学李明一起去锅炉房打开水,在回寝室的路上,李明的热水瓶突然破裂,开水烫伤了他的脚。于是你对他实施了必要的急救。请你结合此事,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,向学校英文报Teens投稿,主要内容包括:
1.描述事故发生的经过;
2.你是如何实施急救的(冷水冲洗、送医院做进一步的处理);
3.简要谈谈你对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的认识。
参考词汇:锅炉房 boiler room 热水瓶 Thermos bottle
参考范文
One day, Li Ming and I were walking back to the dorm from the boiler room when his Thermos bottle burst and the boiling water caused an injury to his feet. The burn was so severe that the skin was red and swollen. However, I managed to remain calm, quickly recalling what I had learnt in my first-aid class. I placed his feet under the cool running water right away to ease the pain. Afterwards, I called a taxi and rushed him to the hospital.
Only then was I aware of how important and practical the basic knowledge about first aid was.
写作积累
5 假设你是李华,你们班最近在英语课上学习了有关急救方面的一些常识,同学们普遍对这方面的知识很感兴趣,大家都认为学校有必要提供相关的课程。作为班长,请你给校长写一封信,提出你的建议,并写出建议的理由。内容包括:
1.学习急救知识的意义;
2.具体建议及原因;
3.重申建议的重要性。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Principal,
Our class studied some knowledge about first aid. We are all interested in it and feel that being able to give first aid when needed can make a difference before proper medical treatment is given.
Therefore, we suggest that courses on first aid should be offered in our school. Posters about first aid for different injuries can be put up in every corner of our campus. What’s more, our school can organize the rescue drills to provide a stage for students to practice and gain experience in first aid.
I believe having a knowledge of first aid is of vital importance. I would appreciate it if you could take our suggestions into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
6 假如你是Eric，你的学校预备进行消防演练，学校需要你针对校园火灾做一篇安全报告，让同学们了解火灾的严重性并且知道面临火灾该如何应对。请根据以上内容，以“Safety Tips in Fire Accidents”为题，写一篇报告。
要求：
1. 内容完整，可适当发挥。
2. 前后连贯，有逻辑性。
3. 词数80---100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。
4. 文中不能出现真实姓名以及所在学校名称。
Dear classmates,
I am so honored to stand here and give a speech about fire accident. As you know, fire accident is one of the most terrible disasters which can cause serious consequences. So knowing something about safety tips in fire accidents can help to save yourself and your classmates when in danger. Here are some tips which may help you get out of danger.
When you face a fire accident, the first and the most important thing you need to do is to keep calm. If you are too nervous, you can’t think carefully about what to do. Then call 119 at once when the fire just gets started. Take care not to be overcome by smoke, it contains harmful gas which can kill you at a short time. Cover your mouth with a wet towel or a wet cloth, and avoid getting into the smoke. More importantly, remember not to get in an elevator, which may get you trapped if the electricity fails. At last, if you can not get away by yourself, it is of great importance to hang something out of the window to get others’ attention as a sign of asking for help.
In short, if you make full preparations in advance and take measures during the fire, chances are that you will survive in case of a fire if it really breaks out some day.
Thank you for your listening.
Eric