故事续写骑自行车故事 讲义-广东省2024-2025学年高三上学期期末联考英语试题

阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One of my teachers once asked my class what our favourite memory was. She was asking for the moment in which "you felt the best, you felt that you had the world in the palm of your hand. "Some described grand awards; others described winning a tournament. But I felt the best when I first learned how to ride my bike-at thirteen. I didn't mind my classmate's stares and snickering, because I knew there was more to the story.
My brother and I shared a typical brotherly relationship: we couldn't stand each other. Or, to be honest, he couldn't stand me. I hero-worshipped him. My clothes mysteriously looked like his, and even my words tended to mimic those I heard from him. Many times, I even wanted to literally follow my brother, sobbing every time I was prevented from hanging around with him. Needless to say, I was an annoyance to him. Any sort of conversation we had usually degraded to fighting, and try as I might, my brother usually won.
After a while, I stopped trying to impress him and learned to be totally indifferent; perhaps the silent treatment would get more approval. I was wrong. We soon fell into a sad pattern--- I avoided him, he ignored me, and deep inside, it hurt. Indifferent or hostile, he was only a brother in name. So that's how it was between us. I believed we would forever be apart, two housemates without conversation, two strangers without warmth. And nothing more.
I still remember the day I learned to ride a bike. I had received it that Christmas, which was great, until I realized I had no idea how to ride it. My mom was too busy and had long since abandoned any attempt to teach me. I decided to teach myself to ride, a little bit each day, but in vain. On that fateful day, it was no different. I was coming to the end of my daily one-hour torture, and I was so frustrated that I threw my bike aside and began to cry.
四校联考英语学科第9页共10页 注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I guess that was what caused my brother to come outside.
An hour later, I was showing off my riding skill to my mom.
骑自行车故事续写
续写要点（两段）
第一段续写要点：细致描绘哥哥教 “我” 骑自行车的过程。着重刻画哥哥的动作，如稳稳扶住车后座，耐心调整 “我” 的姿势；语言，像不断的鼓励和骑行技巧的讲解；神态，展现他专注又温和的神情。同时，描述 “我” 从最初的紧张害怕，到逐渐放松并掌握技巧的心理变化，以及对哥哥态度转变的惊讶与欣喜。
第二段续写要点：详细描写 “我” 向妈妈炫耀骑车技能时的场景，突出 “我” 的自豪和兴奋。深入探讨 “我” 与哥哥关系的后续发展，例如之后一起骑车出去玩，分享生活中的小事，相互帮助等。还可增加一些细节，如家人的反应，家里氛围的变化，来体现这种关系转变带来的积极影响。
情感线
起初，“我” 崇拜哥哥却总被他厌烦，两人关系紧张，“我” 满心委屈和无奈，选择冷漠对待后内心依旧痛苦。学骑车受挫哭泣时，“我” 感到极度沮丧和无助。哥哥主动来教 “我” 时，“我” 从惊讶转为惊喜与期待，在学习过程中，对哥哥的感激和亲近感不断增加。学会骑车向妈妈炫耀后，“我” 充满自豪，同时对和哥哥关系的改善感到无比欣慰和幸福，期待未来更亲密的相处。
故事线
老师询问同学们最喜欢的记忆，“我” 想起 13 岁学骑自行车的经历。
“我” 和哥哥关系不好，“我” 崇拜他，他却厌烦 “我”，两人常争吵，后来陷入互相回避、冷漠的状态。
圣诞节 “我” 收到自行车，却不会骑，妈妈没时间教，“我” 自学无果。
学骑车失败的一天，“我” 沮丧哭泣，哥哥闻声出来。
哥哥主动教 “我” 骑自行车，在他的耐心指导下，“我” 逐渐学会。
“我” 向妈妈炫耀骑车技能，和哥哥的关系开始改善，之后变得更加亲密。
主旨升华句
This experience of learning to ride a bike not only bridged the gap between my brother and me but also taught me that even the most broken relationships can be mended with a little kindness and understanding.（这次学骑自行车的经历不仅弥合了我和哥哥之间的裂痕，还让我明白，即使是最破裂的关系，只要有一点善意和理解，也能得到修复。）
Through the process of learning to ride a bike with my brother's help, I realized that family bonds are like a hidden treasure, sometimes overlooked but always there, waiting to be rediscovered and cherished.（在哥哥的帮助下学习骑自行车的过程中，我意识到亲情就像一个隐藏的宝藏，有时会被忽视，但它一直都在，等待着被重新发现和珍惜。）
Our story shows that small acts of love and support, such as my brother teaching me to ride a bike, can have a profound impact on our relationships and bring warmth and happiness back into our lives.（我们的故事表明，像哥哥教我骑自行车这样小小的关爱和支持之举，能对我们的关系产生深远影响，让温暖和幸福重回我们的生活。）
This incident of learning to ride a bike became a turning point in my relationship with my brother, reminding me that no matter how tough the times are between family members, there is always hope for reconciliation and a deeper connection.（这次学骑自行车的事件成为我和哥哥关系的转折点，提醒我无论家人之间的关系多么艰难，总有和解和建立更深厚联系的希望。）
In the end, the memory of learning to ride a bike is not just about mastering a skill but about the rekindling of a precious brotherly bond, proving that love and patience can overcome any obstacle in family relationships.（最终，学骑自行车的记忆不仅仅是掌握了一项技能，更是珍贵兄弟情谊的重燃，证明了爱和耐心可以克服家庭关系中的任何障碍。）
写作示范
示范一
第一段续写
I guess that was what caused my brother to come outside. He walked towards me with a puzzled look on his face. Instead of making fun of me as I had expected, he squatted down beside me and gently asked what was wrong. I told him how frustrated I was at not being able to ride the bike. To my surprise, he said, "Come on, I'll teach you." He held the back of the bike firmly, guiding me step by step. Whenever I wobbled, he would encourage me, "Don't worry, just keep your balance." As I pedaled shakily, he ran beside me, his grip on the bike never loosening. After several attempts, I managed to ride a short distance on my own. The feeling of accomplishment was overwhelming, and I couldn't help but smile at my brother, who smiled back, a warm glint in his eyes.
第二段续写
An hour later, I was showing off my riding skill to my mom. She was amazed at how quickly I had learned. But what made me happier was the change in my relationship with my brother. He stood beside me, a proud smile on his face. From that day on, we started to spend more time together. We would go on bike rides every weekend, exploring the nearby parks and trails. During these outings, we talked about our dreams, our hobbies, and even the silly fights we used to have. Our relationship blossomed, and the coldness between us was replaced by warmth and affection. The bike that once brought me so much frustration became a symbol of our new - found brotherly bond.
示范二
第一段续写
I guess that was what caused my brother to come outside. He approached me with a concerned expression. Without a word of mockery, he simply said, "Let me help." He positioned himself behind the bike, his hands steady on the seat. "Push off with your feet and start pedaling when I say go," he instructed. I took a deep breath and did as he said. At first, I was terrified, constantly afraid of falling. But my brother's calm voice kept reassuring me. "You're doing great, just a bit more balance." With each try, I became more confident. Suddenly, I realized he had let go, and I was riding on my own. The wind on my face, I felt a sense of freedom and joy like never before, and I knew this moment was special, not just for learning to ride, but for the new connection with my brother.
第二段续写
An hour later, I was showing off my riding skill to my mom. She clapped and praised me, but my eyes were on my brother. After that day, our relationship changed completely. We shared meals with more laughter, and he even helped me with my homework. One day, he brought home a bike map, suggesting we plan a long - distance bike trip. We spent hours poring over the map, marking the places we wanted to visit. The bike had become a bridge that connected us, turning our once - broken relationship into a strong and loving one. Our home was filled with a new sense of harmony, all thanks to that fateful day of learning to ride a bike.
参考答案
I guess that was what caused my brother to come outside. I turned my face away, fearing he would tease me. Unexpectedly, he gently picked my bike up and gestured me over, “Get on it.” His determined look smoothed away my doubts. As he gripped the back seat, I got on the bike, took a deep breath and started to pedal, holding tightly onto the handlebars. During the whole process, we didn’t talk much. He simply offered a few necessary instructions at times. But never once did he shout at me, nor did he let me fall. His patient teaching proved efficient and I gradually got the hang of riding.
An hour later, I was showing off my riding skill to my mom. She was amazed to see me riding steadily around the yard. While sharing my learning experience with her in excitement, I noticed my brother standing at a distance smiling at me. I cast him a grateful look and he nodded and then walked back into the house. From that day on, the sad pattern between us began to change. There were occasional conversations between us, filled with less embarrassment but increasing concern. I could feel a different kind of brotherly relationship slowly developing between us. I would always treasure that day as my favourite memory, the moment when I felt the best.