2025年广州中考英语写作冲刺（含素材集锦 连词集锦 句型应用）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
广州中考写作冲刺
I.近年中考写作题型分析
书面表达是广州市中考一个比较难的、也是必考的题型，要求考生根据题目要求写一段80词左右的短文。书面表达主要考查考生综合应用英语的能力，同时考查考生是否掌握所学过的语法知识、时态、句型和结构等知识。
近几年的中考书面表达题的题材大致为：
与中学生学习有关的题材；
与中学生日常生活有关的题材；
与中学生交际交往有关的题材。
II.中考写作评分标准
中考作文总分15分，给分标准基本上是6+6+3的评分原则，即6分内容分，要求作文涵盖材料中的内容。6分语法分，语法的错误从这里扣分。3分为流畅性，考查行文是否流畅，是不是生硬的直译，有没有足够的连接词。从近年考题看，需要踩的内容均会清晰地分好点，内容描述完毕后，有开放性的部分，需要加上学生自己的观点。具体评分标准细则如下：
要素 档次
内容（6分） 切合题意，体现要点 6 5.5 5 4 3 2 1 0
有所发挥
准确性（6分） 语法 6 5.5 5 4 3 2 1 0
词汇
机械性：大小写、拼写和格式等错误
流畅性（3分） 结构得体性与连贯性 3 2.5 2 1.5 1 0.5 0
建议和展望
对于参加中考英语的同学，如果想在写作方面拿到最高等级的分数（13-15），请大家关注下面几点：
1. 进行审-列-加-连-美的写作流程训练，特别注意时态、人称和要点分段。
2. 模仿训练，如：长短句拆并句子，改写课文，重视作文修改与讲评，培养良好的写作习惯。
3. 加强平时积累，如新东方课堂上老师重点提到的“升级词汇三大方法”、“如何写出错落有致的长短句”、“如何使用高大上的逻辑连接词”等。
III.写作步骤分析
写作7步走，帮助同学们在写各类作文时稳妥拿分：提-分-连-用-写-检-抄
提：提取信息列出提纲；
分：分配词数句数量，即每一个点分配多少句话；
连：确定句子之间的连接词，注意上下文的连接逻辑；
用：注意使用重点高分短语和句型；
写：连词成句、连句成篇，写出初稿；
检：检查单词、语法错误；
抄：将修改好的作文工整地抄写到考试的答题卡上。
IV.写作素材集锦
1.介绍地点
词组搭配：
表示计划及希望：will do, be going to do, want to do, plan to do, decide to do, make up one’s
mind to do…, would like to do, be about to do, hope to do, hope +从句
表示喜好及兴趣：like / enjoy doing, be fond of doing, be keen on doing, prefer to do, be
interested in sth. /doing sth., be impressed by,
表示其他活动：spend time doing, can’t help doing, suit sb. just fine, look forward to sth./doing
sth. relax oneself, experience the life,
表示介绍方位：south, north, west, east, in front of, between, opposite, next to, near…
2. 句型从句：too…to, so that, not only…but also…, why not, make sb. adj., that/which/who
3. 非谓语结构：It’s +adj. for sb. to do, doing sth. is…
2.环境健康
1. 词组搭配：turn off, remember to do, make use of, it’s our duty to do, prevent…. from, protect
the environment, beautify the environment, reduce pollution, do harm to,cut down
trees, live a low carbon life, waste resource, take effective measures to do, form the
good habit of doing…, raise people’s environmental awareness, take actions, have a
cold, feel sick, be in good health, get injured, take care of, care for
句型从句：without, so that, had better do, It’s bad for, make +adj., it’s time to, not only …but
also, the more ,the more, be glad that, the reason why …is that, generally
speaking, though/although, I think that…/I believe
非谓语结构：It’s +adj. for sb. to do, doing sth is…
3.节假日活动
1. 词组搭配：
表达活动：take part in / join in, help clean up, visit …, give a speech / talk to / chat with, put their
time to good use, sing / dance/ read / tell stories / perform for…
表达地点：in their neighborhood / the yard / a local hospital / the streets / parks / community
表达体会：shows a little kindness, to make them happy, be full of love, more and more wonderful,
develop / improve our interests, a good experience for us
表达时间：On March 12, we went to .. to do , Early in the morning… , When we got there…, In the middle of the day, we…, Late in the evening…by the time…
其他：take photos, look at, went to the beach, had ice cream, took photos, went to the aquarium,
hung out with friends, saw some seals, bought a souvenir, slept late, met a famous actor,
won a prize, watched a movie, helped mom, agree with, went for a drive, took a class,
return to，repair, cheer up, set up, make a plan, volunteer one’s time to do …, sing for kids,
fix up, give away, call up, hand out, give out, clean up, go off, take a quick shower, run off
to, get up, stay up, show up, be late for, come up with, think up, put off, put the love to
good use by doing…, help sb. out, open up, give a good start in life
1. 句型从句：so that, not only…but also…, not…until…Let’s…make sb. adj.,
非谓语结构：It’s +adj. for sb. to do, Doing … is a good way + to do…
4.建议类
词组搭配：
表示合作：cooperate with, go on working with, communicate with, help out, speak ill / highly of
sb., talk about, find out the reason, allow to do, insist on doing..., offer to do, tell to
do, express one’s idea, write sb. a letter, send a message, blame sb. sth., be weak in,
make progress
其他： stay at home, argue with, write sb. a letter, call sb. up, give sb. a ticket to…, say sorry, talk
about it on the phone, ask sb. for sth., borrow sth. from sb., get a part-time job, get
on ,well, give some advice, take part in, thank for, get out of, wait in line, get annoyed,
happen to sb., try (not) to do, keep sb’s voice down, take care (not) to do, drop litter,
pick up, make progress, take an interest in doing…, have fun with sth., surprise sb., get a
tutor, have a fight with, under too much pressure, compare with, think for themselves,
cut in line, stand in the subway door, put out cigarette, make sb. + 形容词, make sb. +
动词
句型从句：had better do, It’s bad for, make +adj ,be glad that, the reason why …is that,I
think that…/I believe that…, If I were you, I would (do)….You are supposed to
(do) ….not …until,find it difficult to do sth., on the one hand…on the other
hand ,it’s time for sth., Would you mind (not) doing… Why don’t you do… Why
not… How/What about … You’d better…, You’re supposed to…, If I were you,
I would… Doing sth. is a good idea.
校园生活
1. 词组搭配：
表示建议：suggest sb. do, suggest doing, advise sb. to do, give some advice on
表示同意：agree to do，agree with sb., agree that, be in agreement, approve, disagreement
表示允许：allow/ permit sb. to do, be allowed to do, should, be supposed to do…, It’s our duty /
responsibility to do…obey /break / follow the rules
表示活动：take part in, join in club, enjoy doing, , keep/stop/prevent… from doing, set an
example,do exercise, have PE class
表示学习：concentrate on , pay attention to, put one’s heart into... take notes, catch up with, by
doing, get good grades, make great/rapid progress, have difficulty in doing,find it
difficult / frustrating / amazing / encouraging / fantastic to do, be afraid of, work on,
work out, help with, help out, ask… for…, try one’s best, get over, go over, be afraid
to,can’t understand, listen to teachers
表示科目：Chinese, math, P.E, English, favorite subject，interesting, boring, fun, tired
其他：favorite subject, end-of-year exam, report card, semester, disappointing result, senior
high school, half the class, mistake; secret; speaking skills; writing skill, talk about,
do some reading, practice, have to, do one’s homework, have fun doing
2. 句型从句：too…to, so that, not only…but also…, Let’s…make sb. adj., that/which/who
3. 非谓语结构：It’s +adj. for sb. to do, doing sth. …
人物介绍
1. 词组搭配：
表示喜欢：like doing, enjoy doing, be fond of doing, be keen on doing, prefer to do
表示兴趣和能力：be interested in sth., be good at doing, do well in sth., be able to do
表示选择：prefer A to B, prefer doing A to doing B, would rather do A than do B,
doing A instead of doing B
其他：spend time doing, keep doing, can’t help doing, suit sb. just fine, go to movies, go to see
Beijing opera,be like, be from, work as a teacher, be of medium build, be of medium
height, look like, wear glasses, perform, become, skate, tour, travel, hold, be good at, like
to do, take part in, have a yard sale, get good grades, get a part-time job, make more
friends, make me laugh, major in, grow up, live alone, keep a pet, look smart
2. 句型从句：too…to, so that, not only…but also…, not … until, make sb. adj., that/which/who
3. 非谓语结构：It’s +adj. for sb. to do, doing sth. is…
课外生活
1.词组搭配：
表示活动：take the responsibility, take part in, share the burden
表示感受：be exhausted, be full of, be pleased with, be busy with, be tired of
表示喜欢：like doing, enjoy doing, be fond of doing, be keen on doing, prefer to do
表示兴趣和能力：be interested in sth., be good at doing, do well in sth., be able to do
其他：play sports，brush one’s teeth, have a shower, eat one’s breakfast, play one’s guitar, go to
work, take the No. 17 bus to …, take sb. to work, get home, go to bed，live, pay, enjoy,
walk, give, get, wear, talk, shop, cook, have, see, write, cry, make, feel, put, wash, order,
wait for, go shopping, go for a walk, play the guitar, play basketball, have dinner, read
newspaper, talk to sb., wear uniforms, like to do, like doing, stop doing, talk with sb., want
to do, go to the movie, talk about, watch TV, play computer games, play chess
2. 句型从句：too…to, so that, not only…but also…, Let’s…make sb. adj., that/which/who
3. 非谓语结构：It’s +adj. for sb. to do, doing
假期安排
词组搭配：
表示坚持：keep / go on / continue doing, hold on to, stick to
表示性格：be kind, be warm-hearted, be helpful, be hardworking, active, positive, optimistic
表示经历： experience, start / begin / stop / practice / try / keep / give up/ end up doing…
表示帮助：give a hand, do sb. a favor, help / with / do, communicate，talk with
encourage sb. to do
表示感谢：be grateful, be thankful, show my thanks to…, thanks to…, owe my thanks to…
学习困难: be poor / weak / in, be not good at, find sth. difficult / frustrating, have trouble in doing…
表示活动：pay a visit to…,go to … for an outing, give sb. a warm welcome, do some cleaning, show sb. around…, social service, have a picnic / rest, put on / give performances, have a good time / enjoy oneself, gather…start…( by…)
句型从句：too…to, so that, not only…but also…, Let’s…make sb. adj., that/which/who, No
matter how, as soon as
非谓语结构：It’s +adj. for sb. to do, doing
V.连词集锦
分类 连词 例句
表示递进关系 and 和both…and… 两者都not only…but also… 不仅…而且…as well 除…之外，也as well as 也，还in addition 除…之外（还）in fact / as a matter of fact（补充细节）确切地说 He slept badly and didn’t feel like eating.Both your grandpa and your grandma like watching Beijing Opera.This is not only cruel, but also harmful to the environment.Mr. Smith can speak English, and he can speak Cantonese as well.She can sing as well as dance.This garden has the best collection of native plants. In addition, it contains plants from overseas.Happiness is for everyone. In fact, happiness is always around you if you care about it.
what’s more 而且，更重要的是，另外in other words 换句话说last but not least 最后但同样重要的是 It is easy to send e-mail through the Internet. What's more, Searching information online is convenient.I like Tom, in other words, I like stay with Tom.Last but not least; I’d like to thank all of my friends, who have done their best to help me!
表示转折关系 but 但是while 然而yet 然而;但是;仍although／though 虽然;尽管however 然而;可是 You have probably never heard of Mike, but she is a most unusual woman.Some people work better to music while others do not.It’s a small car, yet it’s surprisingly spacious.We had to go on walking though we were very tired.He is poor now. However, he is rich in this town when he was young.
nevertheless 然而;不过otherwise／or 否则 They were lovely, nevertheless, they were naughty.Just don't say anything; otherwise the situation could become worse.
表示选择关系 or 或者; either…or… 要么……要么……neither…nor… …… 两者都不…… Either he couldn’t come or he didn’t want to.Neither dad nor mum is at home today.
表示因果关系 so 所以for 因为since 既然as 由于because (of) 因为 It was raining hard, so we had to stay at home.He may be ill, for he is absent today.Since this method doesn’t work, let’s try another.As you are in poor health, you’d better stay at home.I like listening to music, because it’s relaxing.
hence 因此;从此thus 因此therefore 因此;所以 He has no money left, hence he can't buy anything.The problem is solved, thus there is no need to focus on that.It is raining all day, therefore we stay at home.
表示总结 above all 最重要的是in the end 最后at last 最后in my opinion 依我看in general 通常，大体上to be honest 说实在的in a word 总之in short 简而言之personally个人而言 Above all, health is most important in our daily life.In the end, they sang a song together for the last time.At last the train arrived in the station.In my opinion, she should go to school tomorrow.In general, you are a good student.To be honest the house is not quite our style.In a word, this government isn't fit to rule.In short, global growth is slowing
to a certain degree 在某种程度上to sum up 总而言之on the whole 总体来说;整个看来 The soil here is sandy to a certain degree.To sum up, success results from hard work.On the whole, the appearance of the house was romantic.
VI.常用句型运用
一、五大句型：
主语+谓语
主语+谓语+表语
主语+谓语+宾语
主语+谓语+宾语+宾补
主语+谓语+双宾
二、常用句型：
1. too…to…太……以致不能……
例句：他太小了，不能去上学。
He is too young to go to school.
造句：他太兴奋了睡不着。
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2. …enough to… 足够……做某事
例句：那个男人足够强壮搬起这个重箱子。
The man is strong enough to carry the heavy box.
造句：他足够大可以照顾自己了。
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3. so…that…如此……以致……
例句：今天如此炎热，我不想出去了。
It is so hot today that I don`t want to go out.
造句：这个问题如此之难，我解答不出来。
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4. such…that…如此……以致……
例句：他是个如此优秀的老师，所以我们都爱他。
He is such a great teacher that we all love him.
造句：这本书如此有趣，我想要再读一遍。
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5. It`s + adj. + for sb. to do对某人而言，做某事怎么样
例句：对我们来说，学好英语很重要。
It is important for us to learn English well.
造句：对他来说，学好数学很难。
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6. It takes sb. some time to do… 做某事花费某人多少时间
例句：每天做功课花了我两小时。
It takes me two hours to homework every day.
造句：每天去学校花费我20分钟。
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7. sb. spend time/money on/doing sth. 某人花时间/钱在(做)某事上
例句：我花了50块买这本书。
I spent 50 yuan buying this book.
造句：他们花了太多时间玩电脑游戏。
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8. sb. find it + adj. + to do sth. 某人觉得做某事怎么样
例句：我们觉得跟他们沟通很难。
We find it hard to communicate with them.
造句：他发现一小时内完成工作是不可能的。
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9. There is no doubt that…毫无疑问……
例句：毫无疑问我可以自己完成它。
There is no doubt that I can do it on my own.
造句：毫无疑问他是班里最高的男生之一。
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10. It is said that…据说……
例句：据说你们学校的男生打篮球很棒。
It is said that the boys in your school play basketball well.
造句：据说你下个月要离开去北京。
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11. prefer doing A to doing B相对于做B更喜欢做A
例句：相对于早起，我们更喜欢再睡久一点。
We prefer sleeping a little longer to getting up early.
造句：相对于喝咖啡，我更喜欢喝茶。
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12. show great interest in + sth. /doing sth.对(做)某事表现出极大兴趣
例句：学生们对加入火箭俱乐部表现出极大兴趣。
The students show great interest in attending the rocket club.
造句：她对音乐表现出极大兴趣。
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13. try one`s best to do… 尽力去做……
例句：我正尽力去达到我的目标。
I am trying my best to achieve my goals.
造句：他爸爸正尽力去照顾好他们的家庭。
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14. What+名词词组+主语+谓语
例句：你们是多么聪明的孩子啊！
What smart children you are!
造句：这些是多么漂亮的花啊！
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15. How +形容词/副词+主语+谓语
例句：你的手好脏啊！
How dirty your hands are!
造句：他们看起来好开心啊！
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16. if条件状语从句
例句：如果我有足够的钱，我就去环游世界。
If I have enough money, I will travel around the world.
造句：如果明天下雨了，我就呆在家。
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17. to do表目的
例句：为了节省时间，我选择了坐车而不是走路去学校。
To save time, I went to school by bus instead of walking.
造句：为了保持健康，她每天吃一个苹果。
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18. doing做主语
例句：遵守交通规则是非常重要的。
Following traffic rules is very important.
造句：学习一门外语是十分有用的。
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19. 宾语从句
例句：每个都需要学习如何避开危险。
Everyone needs to learn how to stay away from danger.
造句：我知道如何去解答这个数学问题。
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20. 定语从句
例句：她是一个跟每个人都相处得很好的女孩。
She is a girl who gets along well with everyone.
造句：他是一个每天学习十分刻苦的学生。
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三、翻译练习
1. 他走得太慢，而不能准时到达那里。
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2. 她足够富有，可以买下一架飞机。
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3. 他太粗心了，以致于犯了很多错误。
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4. 他是个如此聪明的男孩，所以大家都喜欢他。
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5. 对我们来说，按时到校是非常必要的。
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6. 昨晚花了我一小时读完那本书。
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7. 她花了很多时间学习弹钢琴。
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8. 我觉得跟好朋友打篮球是很有趣的事情。
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9. 毫无疑问这是个激动人心的时刻。
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10. 据说今天下午有个足球比赛。
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11. 相对于出去吃饭我更愿意在家自己煮。
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12. 他对出去野餐表现了极大兴趣。
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13. 我会尽我最大努力去帮你解决问题。
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14. 这是多么棒的主意啊！
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15. 今天好冷啊！
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16. 如果明天晴天，我就去动物园。
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17. 为了抓到鱼，那只猫跳进河里。
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18. 在床上看书对你的眼睛不好。
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19. 你能给我们一些建议如何节省水源吗？
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20. 站在树下的女孩是我的妹妹。
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句型答案：
1.He was too excited to sleep.
2.He is old enough to take care of himself.
3.The problem is so difficult that I can`t work it out.
4.This is such an interesting book that I want to read it again.
5.It is difficult for him to learn Maths well.
6.It takes me twenty minutes to go to school every day.
7.They spend too much time playing computer games.
8.He found it impossible to finish the work in an hour.
9.There is no doubt that he is one of the tallest boys in the class.
10.It is said that you will leave for Beijing next month.
11.I prefer drinking tea to drinking coffee.
12.She shows great interest in music.
13.His father is trying his best to take good care of their family.
14.What beautiful flowers these are!
15.How happy they look!
16.If it rains tomorrow, I will stay at home.
17.To keep healthy, she eats an apple every day.
18.Learning a foreign language is very useful.
19.I know how to work out this math problem.
20.He is a student who works really hard every day.
翻译练习答案：
1.He walked too slowly to get there on time.
2.She is rich enough to buy a plane.
3.He was so careless that he made many mistakes.
4.He is such a smart boy that everyone likes him.
5.It is necessary for us to go to school on time.
6.It took me one hour to finish reading the book.
7.She spends a lot of time learning to play the piano.
8.I find it interesting to play basketball with my good friends.
9.There is no doubt that this is a very exciting moment.
10.It is said that there is going to be a foot match this afternoon.
11.I prefer cooking at home by myself to eating out.
12.He showed great interest in going on a picnic.
13.I will try my best to help you with the problem.
14.What a great idea it is!
15.How cold it is today!
16.If it is sunny tomorrow, I will go to the zoo.
17.To catch the fish, the cat jumped into the river.
18.Reading in bed is bad for your eyes.
19.Could you give us some advice on how to save water
20.The girl who is standing under the tree is my little sister.
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