故事续写澳大利亚丛林冒险故事续写 讲义-湖北省新高考联考协作体2024-2025学年高三下学期开学英语试题

故事续写
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When I was a young girl, I used to love going adventuring. My dad always took me down to the bush every weekend and we collected many sticks and stones to add to our collection. I wasn’t like any ordinary girl as I loved the outdoors even as a young toddler. I was never into dolls and tea parties.
Soon I became old enough to venture out on my own. When I ventured forth through the Australian bush land, I felt as if I was in heaven. There was nothing more beautiful than feeling the cool air brushing across my back. The leaves crushed beneath my feet at every step. I felt as if I was home.
As the sun dipped down beyond the horizon, there was nothing more to do than to head back home. On my way I heard a screeching（尖叫声）. It was the most horrible sound I had ever heard in my life. Sure enough, I just had to investigate. In the dead of night, I headed towards the screech and came across a lake or river of some sort. Looking up and down the river, I couldn’t find a way to cross it. In much shame I decided to give up. It was about one o’ clock in the morning and I thought my dad must be getting worried.
As I moved away from the lake, there was only one problem that I did not remember which direction I came from. My brain told me left but my instinct (直觉) told me right. In my past experiences I had always gone with my instinct. So of course I went with my instinct. As I walked off into the distance, I could see the sun breaking out in my distant view.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After what seemed like hours, I felt a sigh of relief rush through my body.
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“You are alive!” my dad shouted, “You are alive!”
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澳大利亚丛林冒险故事续写
续写要点（两段）
第一段：着重描写 “我” 找到回家方向后的具体行动，如快速奔向营地，途中看到熟悉的景物不断确认方向，同时内心的紧张和焦虑逐渐消散，转化为安心和期待，还可描述周围环境随着天色变亮的变化。
第二段：详细刻画与父亲重逢时的场景，父亲的动作、表情、语言，如激动地抱住 “我”，声音颤抖地表达担忧和喜悦，“我” 也在此时将内心的复杂情感释放出来，最后可以总结这次经历对 “我” 的影响，如让 “我” 更加勇敢和独立。
情感线（150 字）
起初在夜晚听到奇怪尖叫声，“我” 好奇又害怕，迷路后陷入极度恐惧与迷茫，在本能和理智间挣扎，不知该往何处走。随着天色渐亮，看到熟悉的景物，“我” 开始有了希望，内心的恐惧慢慢被安心取代。当与父亲重逢，听到他激动的呼喊，“我” 百感交集，既有劫后余生的喜悦，也有对父亲的愧疚，这次经历让 “我” 对冒险有了更深的感悟，也更珍惜与家人的情感。
故事线（6 条）
“我” 小时候就热爱冒险，常和父亲去丛林收集物品，长大后独自在澳大利亚丛林探险，享受大自然的美好。
傍晚准备回家时，“我” 听到恐怖的尖叫声，决定去一探究竟，来到一条河边，因找不到过河方法且天色已晚而放弃。
离开河边后，“我” 迷失了方向，在本能和大脑判断间犹豫不决，最终选择听从本能前行。
经过漫长的行走，“我” 终于看到了熟悉的营地，心中的紧张和恐惧瞬间消散，松了一口气。
父亲看到 “我” 平安归来，激动地大喊 “你还活着”，紧紧抱住 “我”，眼中满是喜悦的泪水。
“我” 向父亲讲述这次冒险的经历，从听到怪声到迷路再到找到回家的路，这次经历让 “我” 成长，更加坚定了继续冒险的决心 。
主旨升华句 5 句英文
This adventure taught me that in the face of fear and uncertainty, following my instinct and staying calm can lead me to safety, just like finding my way home in the dark.（这次冒险教会我，在面对恐惧和不确定时，跟随本能并保持冷静能让我安全，就像在黑暗中找到回家的路。）
From this unforgettable experience, I learned that the challenges in the wild not only test my courage but also strengthen my bond with my family, making me cherish every moment with them more.（从这次难忘的经历中，我了解到野外的挑战不仅考验我的勇气，还加深了我与家人的联系，让我更加珍惜和他们在一起的每一刻。）
This journey in the Australian bush made me realize that every step of adventure is a chance for growth, and the difficulties I encounter are stepping - stones to becoming a braver and more independent person.（这次在澳大利亚丛林的旅程让我意识到，冒险的每一步都是成长的机会，我遇到的困难是成为更勇敢、更独立的人的垫脚石。）
Through this experience, I came to understand that the beauty of nature comes with risks, and it is in overcoming these risks that I can truly appreciate the wonders of the wild and the power within myself.（通过这次经历，我开始明白大自然的美丽伴随着风险，正是在克服这些风险的过程中，我才能真正欣赏到野外的奇妙和自身的力量。）
This adventure in the bush was not just a physical journey but a spiritual one, teaching me to trust myself, face my fears, and embrace the unknown with open arms.（这次丛林冒险不仅仅是一次身体的旅程，更是一次心灵的旅程，教会我相信自己，直面恐惧，张开双臂拥抱未知。）
写作示范
写作示范一
After what seemed like hours, I felt a sigh of relief rush through my body. The familiar landmarks came into view one by one. The old oak tree with a strange shape, which I remembered passing by on my way to the lake, stood firmly on the roadside. With quickened steps, I made my way towards the campsite. The morning sunlight filtered through the leaves, creating a dappled pattern on the ground. My heart, which had been pounding wildly, gradually calmed down as the camp became closer.
“You are alive!” my dad shouted, “You are alive!” He dashed towards me, his eyes filled with tears of joy and relief. His strong arms wrapped around me tightly, as if he was afraid I would disappear again. “I was so worried. I searched everywhere for you last night,” he said, his voice choked with emotion. I nestled in his embrace, feeling the warmth and safety. At that moment, I realized how much my dad loved me and how precious our bond was. This adventure, though filled with fear, also made me grow stronger and more appreciative of home.
写作示范二
After what seemed like hours, I felt a sigh of relief rush through my body. The sight of the campsite made my tired legs move faster. The tents were just as I left them, and the smoke from the campfire was still lingering in the air. As I approached, I could hear the sound of my dad's voice calling my name. I yelled back, “Dad, I'm here!” with all my might. All the exhaustion and fear of the long night melted away at the thought of seeing him.
“You are alive!” my dad shouted, “You are alive!” His face lit up with a huge smile when he saw me. He ran towards me, his arms wide open. When we met, he hugged me so tightly that I could hardly breathe. “I was so scared, thinking something terrible had happened to you,” he murmured. I told him about my adventure, the screech, the river, and getting lost. He listened intently, his hand on my shoulder. This experience not only deepened our relationship but also gave me the confidence to face future adventures.
【参考答案】
Paragraph 1: After what seemed like hours, I felt a sigh of relief rush through my body. Emerging from the dense bush, I found myself standing in a familiar place, the collection of sticks and stones from our weekend adventures with my dad scattered (散落) around. It was then that I realized I had circled back to our special spot. The familiar rustling of leaves and the cool air on my back reassured me that I was indeed near home. In the foggy distance, a fuzzy but familiar figure stood still beneath the tall tree in front of my house. It was my dad! I gathered all my strength and ran towards the house.
Paragraph 2: “You are alive!” my dad shouted, “You are alive!” My dad’s voice echoed through the early morning, filled with a mixture of relief and concern. I threw myself into the warm embrace of my worried father, exhausted but relieved. He had been searching crazily for me as the night wore on. I shared my adventure, from the mysterious screech to the challenging encounter with the river. My dad, though relieved, couldn’t help but chuckle at my determination to explore even in the dead of night. From that day forward, our weekend adventures became even more special, filled with stories and laughter under the Australian sky.