读后续写--惊！铁轨上的夺命危机与暖心救援 讲义 浙江省精诚联盟2023-2024学年高二下学期3月联考英语试题
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was late, about 10:15 p.m., when Janice Esposito arrived at the Bellport train station; she jumped into her Honda Odyssey and began the 20-minute drive home to her husband and seven-year-old son. She’d just returned from visiting her mother and had traveled the route many times before. She practically drove on autopilot: a left onto Station Road, then a left on Montauk Highway, and then—wham!
Out of nowhere a car T-boned Esposito’s minivan, pushing her to move backward some 100 feet onto the railroad tracks. She sat in the minivan, bruised (撞伤) but mostly just knocked out by the impact and the airbags.
As it happened, Pete DiPinto was getting ready for bed. He’d just closed his book and was getting under the covers when he heard the sound of metal on metal and breaking glass coming from not far outside his bedroom window. A volunteer firefighter and retired teacher, DiPinto, 64, never stopped to think. He grabbed a flashlight and, still dressed in his pajamas (睡衣), ran out of the door. “Any firefighter would have done what I did,” he told Newsday. “We’re always on duty.”
The first car he came upon, 2,000 feet from his front yard, was the one that had hit Esposito. Once DiPinto concluded the driver was OK, he looked around and sprinted to Esposito’s minivan positioned on the railroad tracks.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。
Para1.
And then he heard a terrible sound: the bells signaling an oncoming train.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Para2.
The heavy train, traveling at 65 miles per hour, crashed into the minivan.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
文章大意
晚上 10 点 15 分左右，贾尼斯 埃斯波西托在开车回家途中，遭遇一辆汽车侧面撞击，她的小货车被撞到了铁轨上。她受伤不重，但被撞晕了。皮特 迪平托是一名志愿消防员和退休教师，当时他正准备睡觉，听到撞击声后，穿着睡衣拿着手电筒冲了出去。他先确认了撞埃斯波西托的那辆车的司机没事，然后冲向了停在铁轨上的埃斯波西托的小货车。
故事山分析
目标：皮特的目标是救出铁轨上的埃斯波西托，避免她被火车撞上；埃斯波西托的目标是脱离危险。
阻碍：时间紧迫，火车即将到来，埃斯波西托被困在小货车里，且可能受伤无法自行逃生。
努力：皮特努力尝试打开小货车，叫醒埃斯波西托，试图将她从危险中解救出来。
结果：可能成功救出埃斯波西托，也可能在火车撞上的最后一刻出现意外转机。
意外：火车突然来临，增加了救援的紧迫感和危险性，使故事发展充满不确定性。
转折：从相对平静的夜晚到突发的车祸和即将到来的火车威胁，情节发生巨大转折。
结局：埃斯波西托获救，皮特成为英雄，两人都对这次经历有深刻感悟，或者虽然遭遇危险但最终化险为夷，让人们感受到生命的脆弱与坚韧以及人性的光辉。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔：埃斯波西托的小货车被撞到铁轨上。回应：在续写中成为她面临生命危险的关键因素，是皮特展开救援的直接原因，也是故事发展的核心冲突。
伏笔：皮特是志愿消防员。回应：他的身份使他在听到撞击声后迅速做出反应，在救援中发挥专业能力，如在紧张情况下保持冷静，尝试打开车门等。
伏笔：埃斯波西托被撞晕。回应：导致她无法自救，增加了救援难度，需要皮特努力叫醒她并将她带出小货车。
伏笔：皮特听到撞击声和玻璃破碎声。回应：促使他立刻出门查看，开启了救援行动，推动故事发展。
伏笔：故事发生在深夜。回应：在续写中增加了救援的难度和紧张氛围，如光线不足，可能影响救援效率。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：详细描述皮特听到火车即将到来的铃声后的反应，他内心的焦急，如何快速行动，如拼命尝试打开小货车车门，呼喊叫醒埃斯波西托，同时描述周围环境的紧张氛围，如火车的轰鸣声越来越近。
第二段：着重描写火车撞上小货车后的情景，如小货车的损坏程度，埃斯波西托是否安全，皮特的感受，以及后续的救援情况，如其他救援人员赶到，埃斯波西托被送往医院等。
情感线
起初，埃斯波西托遭遇车祸被撞晕，处于危险和未知中。皮特听到撞击声出门，带着责任感和使命感投入救援。当听到火车铃声时，他的焦急和紧张达到顶点，拼命想救出埃斯波西托。火车撞上来时，紧张感再次升级，人们都为埃斯波西托的安危揪心。如果埃斯波西托获救，皮特会感到欣慰，埃斯波西托则充满感激，从危险到安全，情感在短时间内经历了巨大的起伏。
故事线
埃斯波西托开车回家途中遭遇车祸，小货车被撞到铁轨上。
皮特听到撞击声，作为志愿消防员出门查看。
皮特确认撞埃斯波西托的司机没事后，冲向埃斯波西托的小货车。
皮特听到火车即将到来的铃声，开始紧张救援。
火车以 65 英里每小时的速度撞上小货车。
后续救援展开，埃斯波西托的安危得到关注，皮特和埃斯波西托对这次经历有不同感悟。
主旨升华句
This incident vividly shows that in the face of danger, a selfless act of bravery, like Pete's, can be a ray of hope that saves a life and warms the world. 这一事件生动地表明，在危险面前，像皮特这样无私的勇敢行为可以成为拯救生命、温暖世界的希望之光。
Through this life - and - death encounter, we realize that every moment of life is precious, and the kindness and courage of strangers can turn a tragic situation into a miracle. 通过这场生死考验，我们意识到生命的每一刻都无比珍贵，陌生人的善良和勇气能将悲剧化为奇迹。
This story serves as a powerful reminder that even in the darkest of times, the heroic spirit within ordinary people can shine brightly, bringing hope and salvation to those in need. 这个故事有力地提醒我们，即使在最黑暗的时刻，普通人内心的英雄精神也能闪耀光芒，为那些需要帮助的人带来希望和救赎。
In the face of the approaching train and the trapped Esposito, Pete's unwavering determination to rescue her reflects the true meaning of humanity and the value of life. 面对即将驶来的火车和被困的埃斯波西托，皮特坚定不移的救援决心体现了人性的真谛和生命的价值。
This life - threatening situation not only tests the courage of an individual but also reveals the power of human connection and the beauty of self - sacrifice for the well - being of others. 这场危及生命的情况不仅考验了个人的勇气，还揭示了人与人之间联系的力量以及为他人的幸福而自我牺牲的美好。
写作示范一
And then he heard a terrible sound: the bells signaling an oncoming train. Panic surged through Pete. He knew he had no time to waste. With all his strength, he pulled at the jammed door of Esposito's minivan, shouting, "Wake up! Wake up! A train is coming!" But there was no response from Esposito. The sound of the approaching train grew louder and louder, like a death knell. Desperate, Pete tried to break the window with his flashlight. Finally, the window shattered, and he managed to reach inside and unbuckle Esposito's seatbelt.
The heavy train, traveling at 65 miles per hour, crashed into the minivan. The impact was so powerful that it sent the minivan flying. Miraculously, Pete had managed to pull Esposito out just in time. They fell to the ground a few feet away. Pete quickly checked Esposito's pulse. She was alive. Seconds later, emergency responders arrived. Esposito was rushed to the hospital, and Pete, although exhausted, felt a sense of relief. This night would be engraved in their memories forever, a testament to the power of courage and the will to survive.
写作示范二
And then he heard a terrible sound: the bells signaling an oncoming train. Pete's heart raced. He pounded on the minivan's window, yelling, "Ma'am, you have to wake up! There's a train coming!" Fearful that he might not be able to get her out in time, he looked around frantically for something to help him break the window. Spotting a large rock nearby, he grabbed it and smashed it against the window. The glass cracked, and he continued until he made a big enough hole. Reaching in, he shook Esposito vigorously. Finally, she opened her eyes, dazed and confused.
The heavy train, traveling at 65 miles per hour, crashed into the minivan. The minivan was almost completely destroyed. But Pete and Esposito were safe on the side of the tracks. As Esposito realized what had happened, she burst into tears, hugging Pete tightly. "Thank you," she sobbed. Pete comforted her, saying, "It's okay. You're safe now." Soon, the ambulance arrived. Esposito was taken to the hospital for a full check - up. Pete's heroic act had saved a life, and it became a story that inspired everyone in the community.
【答案】Para1.
And then he heard a terrible sound: the bells signaling an oncoming train. Seeing the headlight of the train, DiPinto ran quickly to Esposito’s minivan and knocked on the driver’s side window. She just looked at him, her eyes unfocused. “I don’t know where I am,” she said. She seemed unhurt. “Honey, you’re on the railroad tracks,” DiPinto shouted anxiously. “We have to get you off right now!” He pulled hard on the handle, but the door was crashed in and jammed shut. DiPinto ran to the passenger side and threw open the door. “Please, don’t let her be trapped,” he thought. He pushed aside the flat airbags, grabbed Esposito’s arms, and pulled her toward him across the passenger seat until he could help her out and quickly get her to safety.
Para2.
The heavy diesel train, traveling at 65 miles per hour, crashed into the minivan. Fortunately, Esposito had been dragged out of her minivan before a disaster happened. DiPinto called 911 for emergency service. It didn’t take a long time before an ambulance arrived at the accident spot/ site. No sooner had the doctors checked Esposito than she was rushed to the nearest hospital for further treatment. “It was like a Hollywood movie,” DiPinto told reporters the next day. But this one had a twist. “Last night,” South Country Ambulance chief Greg Miglino told CBS New York, “the hero arrived in pajamas, not in a fire truck.”
It was late, about 10:15 p.m., when Janice Esposito arrived at the Bellport train station; she jumped into her Honda Odyssey and began the 20-minute drive home to her husband and seven-year-old son. She’d just returned from visiting her mother and had traveled the route many times before. She practically drove on autopilot: a left onto Station Road, then a left on Montauk Highway, and then—wham!
Out of nowhere a car T-boned Esposito’s minivan, pushing her to move backward some 100 feet onto the railroad tracks. She sat in the minivan, bruised (撞伤) but mostly just knocked out by the impact and the airbags.
As it happened, Pete DiPinto was getting ready for bed. He’d just closed his book and was getting under the covers when he heard the sound of metal on metal and breaking glass coming from not far outside his bedroom window. A volunteer firefighter and retired teacher, DiPinto, 64, never stopped to think. He grabbed a flashlight and, still dressed in his pajamas (睡衣), ran out of the door. “Any firefighter would have done what I did,” he told Newsday. “We’re always on duty.”
The first car he came upon, 2,000 feet from his front yard, was the one that had hit Esposito. Once DiPinto concluded the driver was OK, he looked around and sprinted to Esposito’s minivan positioned on the railroad tracks.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。
Para1.
And then he heard a terrible sound: the bells signaling an oncoming train.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Para2.
The heavy train, traveling at 65 miles per hour, crashed into the minivan.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
文章大意
晚上 10 点 15 分左右，贾尼斯 埃斯波西托在开车回家途中，遭遇一辆汽车侧面撞击，她的小货车被撞到了铁轨上。她受伤不重，但被撞晕了。皮特 迪平托是一名志愿消防员和退休教师，当时他正准备睡觉，听到撞击声后，穿着睡衣拿着手电筒冲了出去。他先确认了撞埃斯波西托的那辆车的司机没事，然后冲向了停在铁轨上的埃斯波西托的小货车。
故事山分析
目标：皮特的目标是救出铁轨上的埃斯波西托，避免她被火车撞上；埃斯波西托的目标是脱离危险。
阻碍：时间紧迫，火车即将到来，埃斯波西托被困在小货车里，且可能受伤无法自行逃生。
努力：皮特努力尝试打开小货车，叫醒埃斯波西托，试图将她从危险中解救出来。
结果：可能成功救出埃斯波西托，也可能在火车撞上的最后一刻出现意外转机。
意外：火车突然来临，增加了救援的紧迫感和危险性，使故事发展充满不确定性。
转折：从相对平静的夜晚到突发的车祸和即将到来的火车威胁，情节发生巨大转折。
结局：埃斯波西托获救，皮特成为英雄，两人都对这次经历有深刻感悟，或者虽然遭遇危险但最终化险为夷，让人们感受到生命的脆弱与坚韧以及人性的光辉。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔：埃斯波西托的小货车被撞到铁轨上。回应：在续写中成为她面临生命危险的关键因素，是皮特展开救援的直接原因，也是故事发展的核心冲突。
伏笔：皮特是志愿消防员。回应：他的身份使他在听到撞击声后迅速做出反应，在救援中发挥专业能力，如在紧张情况下保持冷静，尝试打开车门等。
伏笔：埃斯波西托被撞晕。回应：导致她无法自救，增加了救援难度，需要皮特努力叫醒她并将她带出小货车。
伏笔：皮特听到撞击声和玻璃破碎声。回应：促使他立刻出门查看，开启了救援行动，推动故事发展。
伏笔：故事发生在深夜。回应：在续写中增加了救援的难度和紧张氛围，如光线不足，可能影响救援效率。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：详细描述皮特听到火车即将到来的铃声后的反应，他内心的焦急，如何快速行动，如拼命尝试打开小货车车门，呼喊叫醒埃斯波西托，同时描述周围环境的紧张氛围，如火车的轰鸣声越来越近。
第二段：着重描写火车撞上小货车后的情景，如小货车的损坏程度，埃斯波西托是否安全，皮特的感受，以及后续的救援情况，如其他救援人员赶到，埃斯波西托被送往医院等。
情感线
起初，埃斯波西托遭遇车祸被撞晕，处于危险和未知中。皮特听到撞击声出门，带着责任感和使命感投入救援。当听到火车铃声时，他的焦急和紧张达到顶点，拼命想救出埃斯波西托。火车撞上来时，紧张感再次升级，人们都为埃斯波西托的安危揪心。如果埃斯波西托获救，皮特会感到欣慰，埃斯波西托则充满感激，从危险到安全，情感在短时间内经历了巨大的起伏。
故事线
埃斯波西托开车回家途中遭遇车祸，小货车被撞到铁轨上。
皮特听到撞击声，作为志愿消防员出门查看。
皮特确认撞埃斯波西托的司机没事后，冲向埃斯波西托的小货车。
皮特听到火车即将到来的铃声，开始紧张救援。
火车以 65 英里每小时的速度撞上小货车。
后续救援展开，埃斯波西托的安危得到关注，皮特和埃斯波西托对这次经历有不同感悟。
主旨升华句
This incident vividly shows that in the face of danger, a selfless act of bravery, like Pete's, can be a ray of hope that saves a life and warms the world. 这一事件生动地表明，在危险面前，像皮特这样无私的勇敢行为可以成为拯救生命、温暖世界的希望之光。
Through this life - and - death encounter, we realize that every moment of life is precious, and the kindness and courage of strangers can turn a tragic situation into a miracle. 通过这场生死考验，我们意识到生命的每一刻都无比珍贵，陌生人的善良和勇气能将悲剧化为奇迹。
This story serves as a powerful reminder that even in the darkest of times, the heroic spirit within ordinary people can shine brightly, bringing hope and salvation to those in need. 这个故事有力地提醒我们，即使在最黑暗的时刻，普通人内心的英雄精神也能闪耀光芒，为那些需要帮助的人带来希望和救赎。
In the face of the approaching train and the trapped Esposito, Pete's unwavering determination to rescue her reflects the true meaning of humanity and the value of life. 面对即将驶来的火车和被困的埃斯波西托，皮特坚定不移的救援决心体现了人性的真谛和生命的价值。
This life - threatening situation not only tests the courage of an individual but also reveals the power of human connection and the beauty of self - sacrifice for the well - being of others. 这场危及生命的情况不仅考验了个人的勇气，还揭示了人与人之间联系的力量以及为他人的幸福而自我牺牲的美好。
写作示范一
And then he heard a terrible sound: the bells signaling an oncoming train. Panic surged through Pete. He knew he had no time to waste. With all his strength, he pulled at the jammed door of Esposito's minivan, shouting, "Wake up! Wake up! A train is coming!" But there was no response from Esposito. The sound of the approaching train grew louder and louder, like a death knell. Desperate, Pete tried to break the window with his flashlight. Finally, the window shattered, and he managed to reach inside and unbuckle Esposito's seatbelt.
The heavy train, traveling at 65 miles per hour, crashed into the minivan. The impact was so powerful that it sent the minivan flying. Miraculously, Pete had managed to pull Esposito out just in time. They fell to the ground a few feet away. Pete quickly checked Esposito's pulse. She was alive. Seconds later, emergency responders arrived. Esposito was rushed to the hospital, and Pete, although exhausted, felt a sense of relief. This night would be engraved in their memories forever, a testament to the power of courage and the will to survive.
写作示范二
And then he heard a terrible sound: the bells signaling an oncoming train. Pete's heart raced. He pounded on the minivan's window, yelling, "Ma'am, you have to wake up! There's a train coming!" Fearful that he might not be able to get her out in time, he looked around frantically for something to help him break the window. Spotting a large rock nearby, he grabbed it and smashed it against the window. The glass cracked, and he continued until he made a big enough hole. Reaching in, he shook Esposito vigorously. Finally, she opened her eyes, dazed and confused.
The heavy train, traveling at 65 miles per hour, crashed into the minivan. The minivan was almost completely destroyed. But Pete and Esposito were safe on the side of the tracks. As Esposito realized what had happened, she burst into tears, hugging Pete tightly. "Thank you," she sobbed. Pete comforted her, saying, "It's okay. You're safe now." Soon, the ambulance arrived. Esposito was taken to the hospital for a full check - up. Pete's heroic act had saved a life, and it became a story that inspired everyone in the community.
【答案】Para1.
And then he heard a terrible sound: the bells signaling an oncoming train. Seeing the headlight of the train, DiPinto ran quickly to Esposito’s minivan and knocked on the driver’s side window. She just looked at him, her eyes unfocused. “I don’t know where I am,” she said. She seemed unhurt. “Honey, you’re on the railroad tracks,” DiPinto shouted anxiously. “We have to get you off right now!” He pulled hard on the handle, but the door was crashed in and jammed shut. DiPinto ran to the passenger side and threw open the door. “Please, don’t let her be trapped,” he thought. He pushed aside the flat airbags, grabbed Esposito’s arms, and pulled her toward him across the passenger seat until he could help her out and quickly get her to safety.
Para2.
The heavy diesel train, traveling at 65 miles per hour, crashed into the minivan. Fortunately, Esposito had been dragged out of her minivan before a disaster happened. DiPinto called 911 for emergency service. It didn’t take a long time before an ambulance arrived at the accident spot/ site. No sooner had the doctors checked Esposito than she was rushed to the nearest hospital for further treatment. “It was like a Hollywood movie,” DiPinto told reporters the next day. But this one had a twist. “Last night,” South Country Ambulance chief Greg Miglino told CBS New York, “the hero arrived in pajamas, not in a fire truck.”