山东省德州市2024-2025学年高三下学期开学英语试题故事续写情感续写 讲义
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故事续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使其构成一篇完整的短文。
A Valentine’s Day joke is a funny but super sweet way to celebrate love without being quite so serious! Old Lady Hayes deserved it. She often screamed at us for “borrowing” some roses from her garden. Well, she had it coming.
At least, that’s the way we saw it as George finished tying the string to the red, heart-shaped box. We giggled(咯咯笑)as Ron added the final touch: two plastic red roses, glued to the lid. George practiced pulling the box by the string. I couldn’t wait to see it fly away when she tried to pick it up.
I was the first to notice my dad in the doorway. I froze. Within seconds, my anxiety was shared by all. Dad walked slowly to the empty candy box. He picked it up, and watched it swing back and forth. Then he looked into the eyes of the frightened boys.
“It doesn’t seem so long ago that I was playing Valentine’s Day jokes.” he said. “One year my cousins and I decided to pull one on our grandma even though we loved her. We just wanted to have some fun. We tiptoed to her doorstep and drew a gift there with red paint. Then we kicked the door and hid behind the bushes. When Grandma finally appeared, she looked down and reached for the fresh paint. Slowly, she figured out our joke. She smiled, absently wiping red paint on her clean and white apron(围裙).”Dad paused and for the first time I noticed that his eyes were wet. “Grandma died later that year. I never had another chance to give her a real Valentine.”
Later that night a red heart-shaped box was placed on Mrs. Hayes’ front doorstep. As we hid behind the bushes, the cool night air wrapped around us, adding a chill to our excitement. “Do you think she’ll scream ” I whispered. “Maybe she’ll think it’s a real gift this time,” George replied, trying to hold back his giggles.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just then, we heard the door click open.
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Hearing the giggles, Mrs Hayes walked up to the bushes.
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情感续写
续写要点
第一段：重点描绘 Mrs. Hayes 看到盒子时的神态、动作和反应。她先是疑惑，然后慢慢靠近，弯腰去拿盒子。孩子们在灌木丛后紧张地注视，心里既有对恶作剧可能被识破的忐忑，又有对 Mrs. Hayes 反应的期待。同时，可描述周围环境，如微风吹动灌木丛，增添紧张氛围。
第二段：Mrs. Hayes 走近灌木丛，孩子们从最初的尴尬到她温和的回应后，心情逐渐放松。Mrs. Hayes 表达对礼物的喜爱，孩子们与她交流，发现她并非如想象中那般严厉。最后，大家一起欢笑，氛围变得温馨，体现孩子们从这次经历中学会理解他人，收获温暖与友谊。
情感线
孩子们最初带着恶作剧的兴奋准备捉弄 Mrs. Hayes，在看到父亲讲述往事而落泪后，内心有所触动，开始反思行为。送礼物时，他们紧张又期待，怕被 Mrs. Hayes 责骂。当 Mrs. Hayes 看到盒子露出微笑并走向灌木丛时，孩子们转为尴尬。而 Mrs. Hayes 温和的回应，让孩子们的心情从尴尬转为惊喜与感动，最终大家感受到了温暖与友好，情感从略带调皮的戏谑转变为温馨的情谊。
故事线
孩子们准备用特制的带绳子的糖果盒捉弄 Mrs. Hayes，父亲出现并讲述了自己小时候对奶奶的恶作剧及遗憾。
当晚，孩子们怀着紧张又兴奋的心情将红盒子放在 Mrs. Hayes 家门口，躲在灌木丛后等待。
Mrs. Hayes 开门，看到盒子，露出疑惑的表情，慢慢走向盒子。
孩子们在灌木丛后紧张地观察，担心被发现。
Mrs. Hayes 听到孩子们的笑声，走向灌木丛，孩子们尴尬地站出来。
Mrs. Hayes 表达对礼物的喜爱，与孩子们友好交流，大家收获了温暖与友谊。
主旨升华句
This Valentine's Day experience taught the boys that kindness can transform even the most seemingly unfriendly relationships, and that a little thoughtfulness can bring unexpected warmth.（这次情人节的经历让男孩们明白，善良可以改变即使是最看似不友好的关系，一点点的体贴能带来意想不到的温暖。）
Through this prank - turned - gift - giving, the boys learned the true meaning of Valentine's Day: to spread love and understanding, not just play tricks.（通过这次从恶作剧到送礼物的转变，男孩们领悟了情人节的真正意义：传播爱与理解，而不只是搞恶作剧。）
The encounter with Mrs. Hayes on this special day showed that beneath people's tough exteriors, there often lies a heart yearning for kindness, and that reaching out with love can bridge any gap.（在这个特殊日子与 Mrs. Hayes 的相遇表明，在人们强硬的外表下，往往藏着一颗渴望善意的心，用爱去靠近能跨越任何隔阂。）
This Valentine's Day event became a precious memory for the boys, reminding them that changing their perspective could turn a potential conflict into a beautiful moment of connection and friendship.（这次情人节事件成为男孩们珍贵的回忆，提醒他们改变看法能将潜在冲突转变为建立联系与友谊的美好时刻。）
The boys' gesture of giving and Mrs. Hayes' warm response on Valentine's Day demonstrated that love has the power to melt misunderstandings and create a harmonious community where everyone feels cared for.（男孩们在情人节的给予之举和 Mrs. Hayes 的温暖回应表明，爱有融化误解的力量，能营造一个人人都感受到关爱的和谐社区。）
写作示范一
Just then, we heard the door click open. Mrs. Hayes stepped out, her eyes landing on the red heart - shaped box immediately. She looked around suspiciously, her brows furrowed. Slowly, she bent down, her hand reaching out tentatively towards the box. As her fingers touched it, we held our breath, our hearts pounding in our chests. The cold air seemed to thicken with tension. Suddenly, a small smile tugged at the corners of her mouth, and she gently pulled the box closer.
Hearing the giggles, Mrs. Hayes walked up to the bushes. We sheepishly stepped out, our faces flushed with embarrassment. But instead of scolding us, she looked at us with kind eyes. “This is the sweetest thing anyone has done for me in a long time,” she said softly. We were taken aback. She picked up the box and held it close, as if it were a precious treasure. “Thank you, boys,” she added. We exchanged shy smiles, realizing that our simple gift had brought joy to her. Maybe, Valentine's Day was about more than just jokes; it was about sharing love and making connections.
写作示范二
Just then, we heard the door click open. Mrs. Hayes emerged from her house, her gaze falling on the box. She froze for a moment, and then her eyes widened in surprise. She took a few hesitant steps forward, her hands clasped in front of her. As she got closer to the box, a look of curiosity replaced her initial shock. She bent down, her fingers brushing the edges of the red heart - shaped lid. The night air was still, and the only sound was the gentle rustling of the bushes where we hid.
Hearing the giggles, Mrs. Hayes walked up to the bushes. We stood up, feeling awkward and nervous. But to our surprise, she was smiling. “You boys are full of surprises,” she said. “I thought I was in for another one of your tricks, but this is really lovely.” We grinned, relieved. She invited us to come inside and share some cookies. As we sat in her warm living room, munching on cookies, we realized that Mrs. Hayes wasn't as scary as we thought. This Valentine's Day, we learned that a little kindness could go a long way in breaking down barriers.
【答案】
Just then, we heard the door click open. Out came Mrs. Hayes with a lamp in her hand. When her eye fell on the red, heart-shaped box, she leaned closer with a mixture of confusion and excitement. Driven by curiosity, she reached out her hand, picked it up and opened it with trembling hands. On seeing the candy, she could hardly contain her joy. A broad smile spread over her face. Seeing the surprise and happiness in her eyes, we couldn’t help giggling, covering our mouths with hands.
Hearing the giggles Mrs Hayes looked up at the bushes. We had nowhere to hide, so we jumped out of the bushes, yelling “Happy Valentine’s Day!”. She stood rooted to the spot, speechless with surprise. Recovering from the shock, she walked to us and hugged us tightly, saying “Thank you all!” with tears of happiness welling up in her eyes. At the same time, a great wave of warmth swept over us. The box of candy would be treasured as it was a reminder of an amazing Valentine’s Day.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使其构成一篇完整的短文。
A Valentine’s Day joke is a funny but super sweet way to celebrate love without being quite so serious! Old Lady Hayes deserved it. She often screamed at us for “borrowing” some roses from her garden. Well, she had it coming.
At least, that’s the way we saw it as George finished tying the string to the red, heart-shaped box. We giggled(咯咯笑)as Ron added the final touch: two plastic red roses, glued to the lid. George practiced pulling the box by the string. I couldn’t wait to see it fly away when she tried to pick it up.
I was the first to notice my dad in the doorway. I froze. Within seconds, my anxiety was shared by all. Dad walked slowly to the empty candy box. He picked it up, and watched it swing back and forth. Then he looked into the eyes of the frightened boys.
“It doesn’t seem so long ago that I was playing Valentine’s Day jokes.” he said. “One year my cousins and I decided to pull one on our grandma even though we loved her. We just wanted to have some fun. We tiptoed to her doorstep and drew a gift there with red paint. Then we kicked the door and hid behind the bushes. When Grandma finally appeared, she looked down and reached for the fresh paint. Slowly, she figured out our joke. She smiled, absently wiping red paint on her clean and white apron(围裙).”Dad paused and for the first time I noticed that his eyes were wet. “Grandma died later that year. I never had another chance to give her a real Valentine.”
Later that night a red heart-shaped box was placed on Mrs. Hayes’ front doorstep. As we hid behind the bushes, the cool night air wrapped around us, adding a chill to our excitement. “Do you think she’ll scream ” I whispered. “Maybe she’ll think it’s a real gift this time,” George replied, trying to hold back his giggles.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just then, we heard the door click open.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hearing the giggles, Mrs Hayes walked up to the bushes.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
情感续写
续写要点
第一段：重点描绘 Mrs. Hayes 看到盒子时的神态、动作和反应。她先是疑惑，然后慢慢靠近，弯腰去拿盒子。孩子们在灌木丛后紧张地注视，心里既有对恶作剧可能被识破的忐忑，又有对 Mrs. Hayes 反应的期待。同时，可描述周围环境，如微风吹动灌木丛，增添紧张氛围。
第二段：Mrs. Hayes 走近灌木丛，孩子们从最初的尴尬到她温和的回应后，心情逐渐放松。Mrs. Hayes 表达对礼物的喜爱，孩子们与她交流，发现她并非如想象中那般严厉。最后，大家一起欢笑，氛围变得温馨，体现孩子们从这次经历中学会理解他人，收获温暖与友谊。
情感线
孩子们最初带着恶作剧的兴奋准备捉弄 Mrs. Hayes，在看到父亲讲述往事而落泪后，内心有所触动，开始反思行为。送礼物时，他们紧张又期待，怕被 Mrs. Hayes 责骂。当 Mrs. Hayes 看到盒子露出微笑并走向灌木丛时，孩子们转为尴尬。而 Mrs. Hayes 温和的回应，让孩子们的心情从尴尬转为惊喜与感动，最终大家感受到了温暖与友好，情感从略带调皮的戏谑转变为温馨的情谊。
故事线
孩子们准备用特制的带绳子的糖果盒捉弄 Mrs. Hayes，父亲出现并讲述了自己小时候对奶奶的恶作剧及遗憾。
当晚，孩子们怀着紧张又兴奋的心情将红盒子放在 Mrs. Hayes 家门口，躲在灌木丛后等待。
Mrs. Hayes 开门，看到盒子，露出疑惑的表情，慢慢走向盒子。
孩子们在灌木丛后紧张地观察，担心被发现。
Mrs. Hayes 听到孩子们的笑声，走向灌木丛，孩子们尴尬地站出来。
Mrs. Hayes 表达对礼物的喜爱，与孩子们友好交流，大家收获了温暖与友谊。
主旨升华句
This Valentine's Day experience taught the boys that kindness can transform even the most seemingly unfriendly relationships, and that a little thoughtfulness can bring unexpected warmth.（这次情人节的经历让男孩们明白，善良可以改变即使是最看似不友好的关系，一点点的体贴能带来意想不到的温暖。）
Through this prank - turned - gift - giving, the boys learned the true meaning of Valentine's Day: to spread love and understanding, not just play tricks.（通过这次从恶作剧到送礼物的转变，男孩们领悟了情人节的真正意义：传播爱与理解，而不只是搞恶作剧。）
The encounter with Mrs. Hayes on this special day showed that beneath people's tough exteriors, there often lies a heart yearning for kindness, and that reaching out with love can bridge any gap.（在这个特殊日子与 Mrs. Hayes 的相遇表明，在人们强硬的外表下，往往藏着一颗渴望善意的心，用爱去靠近能跨越任何隔阂。）
This Valentine's Day event became a precious memory for the boys, reminding them that changing their perspective could turn a potential conflict into a beautiful moment of connection and friendship.（这次情人节事件成为男孩们珍贵的回忆，提醒他们改变看法能将潜在冲突转变为建立联系与友谊的美好时刻。）
The boys' gesture of giving and Mrs. Hayes' warm response on Valentine's Day demonstrated that love has the power to melt misunderstandings and create a harmonious community where everyone feels cared for.（男孩们在情人节的给予之举和 Mrs. Hayes 的温暖回应表明，爱有融化误解的力量，能营造一个人人都感受到关爱的和谐社区。）
写作示范一
Just then, we heard the door click open. Mrs. Hayes stepped out, her eyes landing on the red heart - shaped box immediately. She looked around suspiciously, her brows furrowed. Slowly, she bent down, her hand reaching out tentatively towards the box. As her fingers touched it, we held our breath, our hearts pounding in our chests. The cold air seemed to thicken with tension. Suddenly, a small smile tugged at the corners of her mouth, and she gently pulled the box closer.
Hearing the giggles, Mrs. Hayes walked up to the bushes. We sheepishly stepped out, our faces flushed with embarrassment. But instead of scolding us, she looked at us with kind eyes. “This is the sweetest thing anyone has done for me in a long time,” she said softly. We were taken aback. She picked up the box and held it close, as if it were a precious treasure. “Thank you, boys,” she added. We exchanged shy smiles, realizing that our simple gift had brought joy to her. Maybe, Valentine's Day was about more than just jokes; it was about sharing love and making connections.
写作示范二
Just then, we heard the door click open. Mrs. Hayes emerged from her house, her gaze falling on the box. She froze for a moment, and then her eyes widened in surprise. She took a few hesitant steps forward, her hands clasped in front of her. As she got closer to the box, a look of curiosity replaced her initial shock. She bent down, her fingers brushing the edges of the red heart - shaped lid. The night air was still, and the only sound was the gentle rustling of the bushes where we hid.
Hearing the giggles, Mrs. Hayes walked up to the bushes. We stood up, feeling awkward and nervous. But to our surprise, she was smiling. “You boys are full of surprises,” she said. “I thought I was in for another one of your tricks, but this is really lovely.” We grinned, relieved. She invited us to come inside and share some cookies. As we sat in her warm living room, munching on cookies, we realized that Mrs. Hayes wasn't as scary as we thought. This Valentine's Day, we learned that a little kindness could go a long way in breaking down barriers.
【答案】
Just then, we heard the door click open. Out came Mrs. Hayes with a lamp in her hand. When her eye fell on the red, heart-shaped box, she leaned closer with a mixture of confusion and excitement. Driven by curiosity, she reached out her hand, picked it up and opened it with trembling hands. On seeing the candy, she could hardly contain her joy. A broad smile spread over her face. Seeing the surprise and happiness in her eyes, we couldn’t help giggling, covering our mouths with hands.
Hearing the giggles Mrs Hayes looked up at the bushes. We had nowhere to hide, so we jumped out of the bushes, yelling “Happy Valentine’s Day!”. She stood rooted to the spot, speechless with surprise. Recovering from the shock, she walked to us and hugged us tightly, saying “Thank you all!” with tears of happiness welling up in her eyes. At the same time, a great wave of warmth swept over us. The box of candy would be treasured as it was a reminder of an amazing Valentine’s Day.