故事续写A Sweet Song故事续写 讲义湖北省武汉中学2024-2025学年度高二下学期开学收心考试英语试题

故事续写
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A Sweet Song
“Nothing will ever be the same again,” Ally whispered. She sank slowly into her father’s favorite chair and stared at the small American flag on his desk. It was the flag which Chief Russell had given to her after the funeral last summer, when he hugged her and told her how proud the Police Department was of her dad’s work for them. His tears had warmed Ally’s cheeks; her own tears were still frozen inside her heart.
Ally looked at her father’s picture on the bookcase. Dad was sitting in the middle of a stream, wet through but grinning proudly. “I miss you, Dad,” she said softly. By this time last year she had already taken dozens of pictures. Ever since she could remember, she and Dad had been a team, searching the woods behind the house each weekend for a glimpse of the special wood warbler (林中莺).
Ally reached for the first photo album she and Dad had put together. On the cover a tiny orange bird with blue-gray wings and sharp black eyes peered out of the photo her father had clipped from a local newspaper. Ally smiled, remembering the excited look on his face when he first showed her the pretty bird. “Ally, I bet if we search real hard, we’ll see this little guy together some day.”
They’d never spotted the warbler, but her father had an amazing way of making each outing seem special. Staying with Dad, Ally felt comfortable. “If only I could get that good feeling back,” she thought, sighing.
Staring at the bird, suddenly, she knew exactly what she had to do. Grabbing the-little flag, she placed her camera around her neck and hurried outside. Ally stuck the flag among the flowers in the garden. “Please let me see the warbler,” she murmured to herself. She gave her worried Mom a kiss and then set off into the woods.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Familiar smells of the earth rose up to greet her. ________________________________________________
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Determined to start out the next morning, she was about to head home when a ringing birdsong floated down to her. _______________________________________________________________________________________
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A Sweet Song故事续写
续写要点
第一段：着重描写 Ally 在树林中的感受，可回忆与父亲相处的过往，如在溪边的嬉戏、在树林里的探索等，突出她对父亲的思念以及此刻独自寻找的复杂心情。同时描述树林里的景色，如树叶的沙沙声、阳光透过树叶的光斑等，营造氛围。
第二段：当听到鸟鸣后，Ally 的反应应是惊喜与紧张交织。详细描写她看到林中莺时的样子，如鸟儿的姿态、羽毛的色泽等。最后以 Ally 的感悟收尾，升华主题，表达她对父亲的情感以及从这次经历中获得的力量。
情感线
Ally 从最初对父亲离世的深深悲痛，内心的泪水 “冻结”，到踏入树林后对过往与父亲相处美好时光的怀念，孤独感与思念交织。在听到鸟鸣发现林中莺的那一刻，惊喜与激动涌上心头，最终她收获了温暖与力量，内心的悲伤得到了些许慰藉，情感从低沉压抑逐渐转向积极温暖。
故事线
Ally 带着小旗和相机进入树林，熟悉的泥土气息扑面而来，回忆如潮水般涌来，她想起与父亲在树林里的点点滴滴。
Ally 沿着曾经和父亲走过的路前行，来到溪边，坐在熟悉的石头上，感受着微风，仿佛听到父亲的笑声。
天色渐晚，正当 Ally 准备放弃，打算第二天再来时，突然听到清脆的鸟鸣声。
Ally 循声望去，发现了梦寐以求的林中莺，它停在树枝上，姿态优美。
Ally 小心翼翼地举起相机，拍下了这珍贵的一刻，内心充满喜悦。
Ally 带着照片回家，向母亲分享喜悦，同时也在心中默默告诉父亲，她做到了。
主旨升华句
Through this encounter with the warbler, Ally realized that her father's love was like a warm current, always flowing in her heart, giving her the courage to move forward.（通过与林中莺的这次相遇，Ally 意识到父亲的爱就像一股暖流，始终流淌在她心中，给予她前行的勇气。）
The sight of the warbler not only fulfilled her dream but also healed her wounded heart, making her understand that love never fades away.（看到林中莺不仅实现了她的梦想，还治愈了她受伤的心，让她明白爱永不消逝。）
As Ally held the camera with the precious photo, she knew that her father's spirit was always with her, guiding her through life's journey.（当 Ally 拿着带有珍贵照片的相机时，她知道父亲的精神一直陪伴着她，引领她走过人生的旅程。）
This experience in the woods taught Ally that even in the face of loss, there is always hope, just like the unexpected appearance of the warbler.（这次在树林中的经历让 Ally 明白，即使面对失去，也总有希望，就像林中莺的意外出现。）
The sweet song of the warbler was a gift from her father in a way, reminding Ally that life is full of beautiful surprises if we keep our hearts open.（林中莺的甜美歌声在某种程度上是父亲给她的礼物，提醒 Ally 如果我们敞开心扉，生活充满了美丽的惊喜。）
写作示范一
Familiar smells of the earth rose up to greet her. Memories of her father flooded her mind as she walked deeper into the woods. The path they used to take together seemed both familiar and strange. The sunlight filtered through the leaves, creating dappled patterns on the ground. She remembered how her father would point out different plants and teach her about nature. As she reached the small clearing by the stream, she sat down on a rock, just like they used to do. The sound of the flowing water was soothing, but a sense of loneliness lingered. She kept looking around, hoping to spot the warbler, her eyes scanning every tree branch.
Determined to start out the next morning, she was about to head home when a ringing birdsong floated down to her. Her heart skipped a beat. She looked up quickly, and there, on a low - hanging branch, was the wood warbler. Its orange feathers glistened in the fading light, and its little body seemed to dance with the rhythm of its song. Ally held her breath, afraid to scare it away. With shaking hands, she slowly raised her camera and took a picture. A tear rolled down her cheek, but this time, it was a tear of joy. She knew that her father was watching over her, and this moment was a precious gift.
写作示范二
Familiar smells of the earth rose up to greet her. The moment Ally stepped into the woods, she was surrounded by the scents of damp soil and fresh leaves. It was as if the woods were welcoming her back. She could almost feel her father's presence beside her, just like in the old days. As she walked along, she recalled the times when her father would encourage her to be brave during their hikes. The trees seemed to whisper stories of their adventures. She reached the spot where they always stopped to rest, and a wave of sadness hit her. But she was determined to find the warbler, for herself and for her father.
Determined to start out the next morning, she was about to head home when a ringing birdsong floated down to her. Her eyes widened in excitement. She searched the trees, and finally, she saw it - the wood warbler. It fluttered its blue - gray wings and chirped merrily. Ally was overjoyed. She captured the moment with her camera, and a sense of peace filled her. She realized that although her father was gone, the memories and their shared dreams would always be with her. The warbler was a symbol of hope, and she knew that her father would be proud of her.
参考答案
Paragraph 1:
Familiar smells of the earth rose up to greet her.Some things never change, Ally thought. Quickening her pace, she hurried to the rock by the stream where she and her father used to sit and eat lunch. She sat on it, with her face toward the sun. Overhead the sky was filled with birds busily diving to gather dried grass to place in their nests. Their sweet songs echoed throughout the woods. Ally felt content for the first time in a long while. She could almost hear her father’s laughter in the gentle breeze as she listened for the sweet song of the special bird. All too soon, the sun disappeared behind thick gray clouds.
Paragraph 2:
Determined to start out again the next morning, she was about to head home when a ringing birdsong floated down to her.It was prettier than any she had heard before. An excited feeling bubbled up inside Ally as she searched the sky. A flash of orange dashed down and rested on a nearby branch. For a moment Ally couldn’t believe her eyes, but it was true. The tiny wood warbler just sat there, looking around, as if it were waiting for something. Ally blinked back tears. “Thanks, Dad,” she whispered slowly lifting her camera and taking careful aim.“Things will be different without you. I’ll always miss our time together, but I feel better now.”