Unit 1 Past and present 单元话题书面表达 【含答案+解析】-2024-2025学年八年级英语下册单元重难点高频易错题专练（牛津译林版）
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Unit 1 Past and present
单元话题书面表达
一、书面表达
1．假设你是李华，上个月你回到了家乡，发现变化很大。请根据以下提示写一篇题为"Changes in My Hometown"的短文。提示如下：
1）我的家乡过去是个安静的小镇，山清水秀，空气清新。人们骑自行车或步行出行。
2）现在我的家乡已变成一个现代化的城镇，已建起座座高楼，处处可见宽阔的马路。我们住的小区门口有许多公交车经过，很多人都已买了私家车，出行很方便。
3）但是，家乡的变化也给我们带来了许多麻烦，例如：……
4）你的想法是：……
Changes in My Hometown
When I returned to my hometown last month, I found it changed a lot.
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2．假设你是李华，上个月你回到了家乡，发现变化很大。请根据以下提示写一篇题为“Changes in My Hometown”的短文，词数不少于70。
提示：1）我的家乡过去是个安静的小镇，山清水秀，空气清新。人们骑自行车或步行出行。
2）现在我的家乡已变成一个现代化的城镇，已建起座座高楼，处处可见宽阔的马路。我们的社区门口有许多公交车经过，很多人都已买了私家车，出行很方便。
3）但是，家乡的变化也给我们带来了许多麻烦，例如：……
4）我的想法是：……
Changes in My Hometown
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3．下周的英语汇报主题为"放飞梦想，成就自我"，请你写一篇发言稿，谈一谈自己的职业理想。
要点:1. What's your dream job 2. Why do you dream of it
3. How will you make your dream come true
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现你的真实信息；
3. 不少于80词。
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4．书面表达
假设你是李明，给你的笔发Jim写一封信，向他讲述一下你最近的情况。80词左右。
提示：（1）好久没收到你的来信，我非常想念你。（2）叙述自己最近的情况：结束了考试，现在在家休假，每天都很忙。特别是今天，有许多家务要去做，作业还没有完成，还要去浇花、购物。（3）爸爸最近给我买了台电脑，晚上我要去上电脑课。现在我已经学会给朋友发送电子邮件。
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5．书面表达
假如去年寒假你和你的同学一起去香港旅行，请根据提示写一篇短文描述一下你们的经历，80个单词左右。短文开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。
提示: Hong Kong; by plane; tall buildings; shops; souvenirs; the Avenue of Stars, Ocean Park
Last winter holiday, I traveled to Hong Kong with my classmates.
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6．假如你校要开展“家乡的过去与现在”英语有奖征文活动。请你从以下几个方面入手写一篇英语短文，描述你家乡的变化，参加此次征文活动。
提示：①房屋②交通③人们的工作情况
要求：90词左右，可适当发挥。
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7．假如你是报社的一位记者，你对陈先生进行了采访，想了解一下阳光镇的变化。根据以下信息写一段采访稿，要点如下： 1. 阳光镇过去是个破旧的小镇，但是现在已经变成了一个现代化的镇。2. 镇上的钢厂过去常常把废料扔进河里，政府已经采取行动改善了这个情况。3. 他的大多数朋友已经搬走了，所以他常常感到孤独。4. 即使这样，他仍然很高兴能看到这些变化。--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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答案解析部分
1．Changes in My Hometown
When
I returned to my hometown last month, I found it changed a lot. My hometown used to be a quiet small town.
There were green hills and clean water. The air was fresh. People went around by bike or on foot. But now it has become a modern town. There are many tall buildings and you can see wide roads everywhere. Many buses drive past our community every day. And many people have bought their own cars, so it's easy to travel around. However, the changes of my hometown have also brought us a lot of trouble. For example, the water is not as clean as before. I think we should work together to make our environment much better.
这是一篇命题作文，时态是一般过去时、一般现在时和现在完成时，人称主要用第一人称和第三人称单数。注意运用形容词作定语，如green、wide和clean等；形容词的比较级 not as clean as before和 make our environment much better ；同时恰当运用连词and，but和so等；特殊句型there be。表达准确，标点正确。
作文内容全面，涵盖所有要求信息。运用好词好句，如 there be句型句There are many tall buildings and you can see wide roads everywhere.；宾语从句 I think we should work together to make our environment much better. 等。连词and，but和so的运用使文章上下文逻辑更加紧密。
2．Changes in My Hometown
When I returned to my hometown last month, I found it changed a lot. My hometown used to be a quiet small town. There were green hills and clean water. The air was fresh. People went around by bike or on foot. But now it has become a modern town. There are many tall buildings and you can see wide roads everywhere. Many buses pass our community every day. And many people have bought their own cars, so it's easy to travel around. However, the changes of my hometown have also brought us a lot of trouble. For example, the water is not as clean as before. I think we should work together to make our environment much better.
这是一篇材料作文，描述自己家乡现在和过去的变化。要注意要点齐全， 本题给出具体材料，只给出了几个方面，需要自己先确定写作内容，然后在写作选取材料时，注意选择自己熟悉的内容，在写作时要注意时态，结合所给材料可知，描写自己过去时，应该主要用一般过去时，描写自己现在时，应该主要用一般现在时。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密。符合逻切关系。
这篇短文详细叙述家乡现在和过去的变化。包含了所给要求的全部信息。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语、包含宾语从句和并列句及时间状语从句的准确使用，为文章增色不少。used to do 过去常常，但现在已经不存在了，When I returned to my hometown last month, I found it changed a lot. many people have bought their own cars, so it's easy to travel around. I think we should work together to make our environment much better. 写作时连词和过渡词的适当引用，but，however，and等，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
3．参考范文(基础版)：
Everyone has his dream job. Some want to be teachers and some want to be doctors. For me, I want to be a writer.
I have always dreamed of being a writer in the future, because I feel excited about writing my own stories. Besides, I enjoy reading the interesting works of those great writers. I hope that one day my stories will be interesting enough, so people can enjoy reading mine.
To make my dream come true, I know what I need to do every day. I should try to read books every day and share my ideas with others at first. It may take a long time to become a writer, but I will study hard.
参考范文(提升版)：
Everyone has his dream job. Some want to be teachers and some want to be doctors. For me, I want to be a writer.
Becoming a writer in the future has always been my dream, because I feel excited about writing my own stories. Besides, it's enjoyable to read the interesting works of those great writers. I hope that one day my stories will be interesting enough for people to read.
In order to get closer to my dream, I know what I need to do every day. It includes not only trying to read books every day, but also sharing my ideas with teachers and friends. These are just the first two things to make my dream come true. There is still a long way to become a writer, but I will try my best to keep doing it.
这是一篇提纲作文。时态是一般将来时和一般现在时，本文要求以"放飞梦想，成就自我"为题结合提示内容完成这篇发言稿，写作中要首先介绍自己的梦想职业是什么；然后介绍原因；最后介绍怎样实现梦想职业的原因。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：for sb.；dream of doing sth.；feel excited about doing sth.；want to do；in the future；enjoy doing sth.；make one's dream come true；need to do sth.；try to do sth.；share...with...；at first；in order to do；get closer to；not only...but also；keep doing sth.等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如：现在完成时和状语从句I have always dreamed of being a writer in the future, because I feel excited about writing my own stories.；宾语从句和状语从句I hope that one day my stories will be interesting enough, so people can enjoy reading mine.；宾语从句To make my dream come true, I know what I need to do every day.；动名词做主语Becoming a writer in the future has always been my dream, because I feel excited about writing my own stories.等。连词because、besides、so、but、not only...but also、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
4．One possible version:Dear Jim, How's everything I haven't heard from you for a long time. I miss you very much. I have finished my exams. I did very well in the exams. Now I'm spending my holiday at home. I'm very busy every day, especially today. I have so many chores to do. I have to do my homework, of course. I started about an hour ago, but I haven't finished. Then I have to water flowers and do some shopping. My father has just bought me a personal computer. In the evening I will have a computer class. Now I have learned to send e-mails to my friends. It's very interesting. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Ming
首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要李明向吉姆介绍自己的最近情况，因此现在完成时和一般现在时运用较多。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。当然，写作时尤要注意文章结构的合理，表述的条理性和准确性。要使用一些固定短语和句型，如heard from；do well in； water flowers；I have so many chores to do；My father has just bought me a personal computer等这些短语和句子的运用会让文章增色不少。
学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
5． Last winter holiday, I traveled to Hong Kong with my classmates. We went there by plane. The buildings are very tall there. And there are many shops. Although things were very expensive in Hong Kong, we still bought some souvenirs. We went to lots of places of interests, such as the Avenue of Stars and Ocean Park. I like Ocean Park best. The park is very big. There are lots of different fish there. Hong Kong is very beautiful. I hope I can go there again some day.
考查写作，注意主要时态为一般过去时，内容包括去年寒假你和你的同学一起去香港旅行，根据提示写一篇短文描述一下你们的经历，80个单词左右，注意将提示词用上以及首字母大写句子标点等。
6．One possible version：
My hometown has changed a lot．In the past, people lived in old and broken houses．There were few buses and cars People had to walk or ride bikes to go out. Many people had no jobs and they lived a hard life.
Since the 1980s, my hometown has changed. With the help of the government, people now live in new houses. Many people have their own cars. Factories have appeared one after another in my hometown．It's easy for people to find jobs and make money.
本题是以篇提纲性作文，写做的话题为写英语稿子，在写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态，语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤：一：阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.过去的房屋情况：In the past, people lived in old and broken houses
2.过去的都是走路或骑自行车：There were few buses and cars People had to walk or ride bikes to go out.
3.过去人们没有工作生活困难： Many people had no jobs and they lived a hard life.
4.现在的房屋情况：With the help of the government, people now live in new houses.
5.现在人们都有自己的车：Many people have their own cars. Factories have appeared one after another in my hometown．
6.现在的工作很容易找：It's easy for people to find jobs and make money.
二：根据要点，写出关键词，短语和句子。
三：组词成句，连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。
本题属于给出内容写作型作文，需要考生熟练使用相关短语，单词，和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。
7． Sunshine Town used to be a small old town, but now it has become a modern town. The steel factory in the town used to put waste into the river. The government has taken action to improve the situation. Most of Mr Chen's friends have moved away, so he often feels lonely. Anyway, he's still happy to see the changes.
本文根据题干中的要点书写的清楚明了。文中运用了used to；put waste into；be happy totaken action to等短语增加了文章的亮点。
本文运用了modern， improve，lonely等有色彩的词汇，使文章看起来丰富且能让人眼前一亮,印象深刻。
文中使用了but, so等连接词，使文章连贯又有特色。
考查英语词汇量和翻译的能力，将英语可以运用实际的生活中。
单元话题书面表达
一、书面表达
1．假设你是李华，上个月你回到了家乡，发现变化很大。请根据以下提示写一篇题为"Changes in My Hometown"的短文。提示如下：
1）我的家乡过去是个安静的小镇，山清水秀，空气清新。人们骑自行车或步行出行。
2）现在我的家乡已变成一个现代化的城镇，已建起座座高楼，处处可见宽阔的马路。我们住的小区门口有许多公交车经过，很多人都已买了私家车，出行很方便。
3）但是，家乡的变化也给我们带来了许多麻烦，例如：……
4）你的想法是：……
Changes in My Hometown
When I returned to my hometown last month, I found it changed a lot.
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2．假设你是李华，上个月你回到了家乡，发现变化很大。请根据以下提示写一篇题为“Changes in My Hometown”的短文，词数不少于70。
提示：1）我的家乡过去是个安静的小镇，山清水秀，空气清新。人们骑自行车或步行出行。
2）现在我的家乡已变成一个现代化的城镇，已建起座座高楼，处处可见宽阔的马路。我们的社区门口有许多公交车经过，很多人都已买了私家车，出行很方便。
3）但是，家乡的变化也给我们带来了许多麻烦，例如：……
4）我的想法是：……
Changes in My Hometown
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3．下周的英语汇报主题为"放飞梦想，成就自我"，请你写一篇发言稿，谈一谈自己的职业理想。
要点:1. What's your dream job 2. Why do you dream of it
3. How will you make your dream come true
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现你的真实信息；
3. 不少于80词。
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4．书面表达
假设你是李明，给你的笔发Jim写一封信，向他讲述一下你最近的情况。80词左右。
提示：（1）好久没收到你的来信，我非常想念你。（2）叙述自己最近的情况：结束了考试，现在在家休假，每天都很忙。特别是今天，有许多家务要去做，作业还没有完成，还要去浇花、购物。（3）爸爸最近给我买了台电脑，晚上我要去上电脑课。现在我已经学会给朋友发送电子邮件。
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5．书面表达
假如去年寒假你和你的同学一起去香港旅行，请根据提示写一篇短文描述一下你们的经历，80个单词左右。短文开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。
提示: Hong Kong; by plane; tall buildings; shops; souvenirs; the Avenue of Stars, Ocean Park
Last winter holiday, I traveled to Hong Kong with my classmates.
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6．假如你校要开展“家乡的过去与现在”英语有奖征文活动。请你从以下几个方面入手写一篇英语短文，描述你家乡的变化，参加此次征文活动。
提示：①房屋②交通③人们的工作情况
要求：90词左右，可适当发挥。
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7．假如你是报社的一位记者，你对陈先生进行了采访，想了解一下阳光镇的变化。根据以下信息写一段采访稿，要点如下： 1. 阳光镇过去是个破旧的小镇，但是现在已经变成了一个现代化的镇。2. 镇上的钢厂过去常常把废料扔进河里，政府已经采取行动改善了这个情况。3. 他的大多数朋友已经搬走了，所以他常常感到孤独。4. 即使这样，他仍然很高兴能看到这些变化。--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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答案解析部分
1．Changes in My Hometown
When
I returned to my hometown last month, I found it changed a lot. My hometown used to be a quiet small town.
There were green hills and clean water. The air was fresh. People went around by bike or on foot. But now it has become a modern town. There are many tall buildings and you can see wide roads everywhere. Many buses drive past our community every day. And many people have bought their own cars, so it's easy to travel around. However, the changes of my hometown have also brought us a lot of trouble. For example, the water is not as clean as before. I think we should work together to make our environment much better.
这是一篇命题作文，时态是一般过去时、一般现在时和现在完成时，人称主要用第一人称和第三人称单数。注意运用形容词作定语，如green、wide和clean等；形容词的比较级 not as clean as before和 make our environment much better ；同时恰当运用连词and，but和so等；特殊句型there be。表达准确，标点正确。
作文内容全面，涵盖所有要求信息。运用好词好句，如 there be句型句There are many tall buildings and you can see wide roads everywhere.；宾语从句 I think we should work together to make our environment much better. 等。连词and，but和so的运用使文章上下文逻辑更加紧密。
2．Changes in My Hometown
When I returned to my hometown last month, I found it changed a lot. My hometown used to be a quiet small town. There were green hills and clean water. The air was fresh. People went around by bike or on foot. But now it has become a modern town. There are many tall buildings and you can see wide roads everywhere. Many buses pass our community every day. And many people have bought their own cars, so it's easy to travel around. However, the changes of my hometown have also brought us a lot of trouble. For example, the water is not as clean as before. I think we should work together to make our environment much better.
这是一篇材料作文，描述自己家乡现在和过去的变化。要注意要点齐全， 本题给出具体材料，只给出了几个方面，需要自己先确定写作内容，然后在写作选取材料时，注意选择自己熟悉的内容，在写作时要注意时态，结合所给材料可知，描写自己过去时，应该主要用一般过去时，描写自己现在时，应该主要用一般现在时。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密。符合逻切关系。
这篇短文详细叙述家乡现在和过去的变化。包含了所给要求的全部信息。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语、包含宾语从句和并列句及时间状语从句的准确使用，为文章增色不少。used to do 过去常常，但现在已经不存在了，When I returned to my hometown last month, I found it changed a lot. many people have bought their own cars, so it's easy to travel around. I think we should work together to make our environment much better. 写作时连词和过渡词的适当引用，but，however，and等，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
3．参考范文(基础版)：
Everyone has his dream job. Some want to be teachers and some want to be doctors. For me, I want to be a writer.
I have always dreamed of being a writer in the future, because I feel excited about writing my own stories. Besides, I enjoy reading the interesting works of those great writers. I hope that one day my stories will be interesting enough, so people can enjoy reading mine.
To make my dream come true, I know what I need to do every day. I should try to read books every day and share my ideas with others at first. It may take a long time to become a writer, but I will study hard.
参考范文(提升版)：
Everyone has his dream job. Some want to be teachers and some want to be doctors. For me, I want to be a writer.
Becoming a writer in the future has always been my dream, because I feel excited about writing my own stories. Besides, it's enjoyable to read the interesting works of those great writers. I hope that one day my stories will be interesting enough for people to read.
In order to get closer to my dream, I know what I need to do every day. It includes not only trying to read books every day, but also sharing my ideas with teachers and friends. These are just the first two things to make my dream come true. There is still a long way to become a writer, but I will try my best to keep doing it.
这是一篇提纲作文。时态是一般将来时和一般现在时，本文要求以"放飞梦想，成就自我"为题结合提示内容完成这篇发言稿，写作中要首先介绍自己的梦想职业是什么；然后介绍原因；最后介绍怎样实现梦想职业的原因。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：for sb.；dream of doing sth.；feel excited about doing sth.；want to do；in the future；enjoy doing sth.；make one's dream come true；need to do sth.；try to do sth.；share...with...；at first；in order to do；get closer to；not only...but also；keep doing sth.等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如：现在完成时和状语从句I have always dreamed of being a writer in the future, because I feel excited about writing my own stories.；宾语从句和状语从句I hope that one day my stories will be interesting enough, so people can enjoy reading mine.；宾语从句To make my dream come true, I know what I need to do every day.；动名词做主语Becoming a writer in the future has always been my dream, because I feel excited about writing my own stories.等。连词because、besides、so、but、not only...but also、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
4．One possible version:Dear Jim, How's everything I haven't heard from you for a long time. I miss you very much. I have finished my exams. I did very well in the exams. Now I'm spending my holiday at home. I'm very busy every day, especially today. I have so many chores to do. I have to do my homework, of course. I started about an hour ago, but I haven't finished. Then I have to water flowers and do some shopping. My father has just bought me a personal computer. In the evening I will have a computer class. Now I have learned to send e-mails to my friends. It's very interesting. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Ming
首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要李明向吉姆介绍自己的最近情况，因此现在完成时和一般现在时运用较多。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。当然，写作时尤要注意文章结构的合理，表述的条理性和准确性。要使用一些固定短语和句型，如heard from；do well in； water flowers；I have so many chores to do；My father has just bought me a personal computer等这些短语和句子的运用会让文章增色不少。
学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
5． Last winter holiday, I traveled to Hong Kong with my classmates. We went there by plane. The buildings are very tall there. And there are many shops. Although things were very expensive in Hong Kong, we still bought some souvenirs. We went to lots of places of interests, such as the Avenue of Stars and Ocean Park. I like Ocean Park best. The park is very big. There are lots of different fish there. Hong Kong is very beautiful. I hope I can go there again some day.
考查写作，注意主要时态为一般过去时，内容包括去年寒假你和你的同学一起去香港旅行，根据提示写一篇短文描述一下你们的经历，80个单词左右，注意将提示词用上以及首字母大写句子标点等。
6．One possible version：
My hometown has changed a lot．In the past, people lived in old and broken houses．There were few buses and cars People had to walk or ride bikes to go out. Many people had no jobs and they lived a hard life.
Since the 1980s, my hometown has changed. With the help of the government, people now live in new houses. Many people have their own cars. Factories have appeared one after another in my hometown．It's easy for people to find jobs and make money.
本题是以篇提纲性作文，写做的话题为写英语稿子，在写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态，语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤：一：阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.过去的房屋情况：In the past, people lived in old and broken houses
2.过去的都是走路或骑自行车：There were few buses and cars People had to walk or ride bikes to go out.
3.过去人们没有工作生活困难： Many people had no jobs and they lived a hard life.
4.现在的房屋情况：With the help of the government, people now live in new houses.
5.现在人们都有自己的车：Many people have their own cars. Factories have appeared one after another in my hometown．
6.现在的工作很容易找：It's easy for people to find jobs and make money.
二：根据要点，写出关键词，短语和句子。
三：组词成句，连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。
本题属于给出内容写作型作文，需要考生熟练使用相关短语，单词，和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。
7． Sunshine Town used to be a small old town, but now it has become a modern town. The steel factory in the town used to put waste into the river. The government has taken action to improve the situation. Most of Mr Chen's friends have moved away, so he often feels lonely. Anyway, he's still happy to see the changes.
本文根据题干中的要点书写的清楚明了。文中运用了used to；put waste into；be happy totaken action to等短语增加了文章的亮点。
本文运用了modern， improve，lonely等有色彩的词汇，使文章看起来丰富且能让人眼前一亮,印象深刻。
文中使用了but, so等连接词，使文章连贯又有特色。
考查英语词汇量和翻译的能力，将英语可以运用实际的生活中。