Unit 2 Travelling 单元话题书面表达【含答案+解析】-2024-2025学年八年级英语下册单元重难点高频易错题专练（牛津译林版）
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Unit 2 Travelling
单元话题书面表达
一、书面表达
1．假设你是李华，请根据下面表格中的提示，用英语写一篇日记，叙述你今天参加的一次郊游活动，并简要谈谈你的感受。
活动地点 距离你家约十公里的里湖
交通工具 骑自行车
活动时间 ⒈上午九点出发 ⒉十点到达 ⒊下午五点半返回
活动内容 自定(至少谈及三项活动)
要点：1）日记必须包含表格中所有信息，可适当发挥；
2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3）不少于80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：outing郊游 Li Lake里湖
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2．上海是国际大都市，每年有大量的旅客来此游玩。请你以"A trip to Shanghai"为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述旅游地点，经历，并谈谈你的感受。
开车大约五小时； 晚上住旅馆（八楼） ；第一天在旅馆休息
第二天和哥哥去南京路买了些衣； 第三天去锦江乐园 （Jinjiang Entertainment Centre）和东方明珠（Oriental Bright Pearl TV Tower），很开心。
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3．初三毕业在即，你班将组织一次课外活动。假如你是班长，请根据正面内容，用英文写一篇80词左右的活动计划。
内容要点:1. 下星期天早上8点在校门口集合，下午2点返回；2. 坐公交车前往寸金公园(Cunjin Park);3. 唱歌、跳舞、野餐、与老师合影；4. 带齐食物、饮料等；5. 注意安全和防火。
要求：1. 包含所给出要点，可适当发挥；2. 不里逐词翻译，词数约80字左右。(文章开头不计入词数)；3. 文中不能出现考生的直实姓名、校名和共他真实信息。
参考词汇：at the school gate(学校门O)；activity(活动); keep away from fire (远离火灾)
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4．下周的英语汇报主题为"放飞梦想，成就自我"，请你写一篇发言稿，谈一谈自己的职业理想。
要点:1. What's your dream job 2. Why do you dream of it
3. How will you make your dream come true
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现你的真实信息；
3. 不少于80词。
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5．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Eddie因为自己先前的计划而缺席好友 Daniel 的生日会，这使 Daniel很生气，两人已经三天没有说话了，因此特意向你寻求使两人关系恢复如初的办法。请你用英文写一封邮件，给他提供你的建议。
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实信息；
3. 不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Eddie,
I'm sorry about what happened between you and Daniel.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6． 许多同学选择在假期时提高和放松自己。阳光中学英文周报编辑部想了解同学们心目中难忘的一次研学旅行。假定你是李华，请你根据要点提示，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
要点:1. Where did you go 2. What did you do there 3. What do you think of your trip
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实信息；
3. 不少于 80词。
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7． 阳光中学的英语社团在学期中举办交流分享会，邀请同学们分享英语学习方法，共同进步。假定你是李华，请你用英文写一篇演讲稿，介绍自己的学习方法。
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实信息；
3. 不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
I am happy to share my English learning ways with you. Now let me be clearer.
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I hope every student can learn English well. Thanks for your attention.
8．学校英语俱乐部发布了一个帖子，旨在了解同学们的兴趣爱好。请你针对以下要点进行回贴。
要点:1. What's your hobby
2. Why do you enjoy your hobby
3. What do you think of your hobby
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实信息；
3. 不少于80词。
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答案解析部分
1． Today I went for a pleasant outing with my friends. We went to Li Lake. It was about ten kilometers away from my home. We rode our bikes at 9：00 in the morning .One hour later, we got there. We went boating on the lake first, and then went fishing by the lake. The fish in the lake are big and fresh. They were all our meals at noon. In the afternoon, we went swimming in a swimming pool beside the lake. We felt relaxed and comfortable in the water. At 5：30 in the afternoon, we returned together. We all had a good time for our outing.
这是一篇日记，属于记叙文。以第一人称和一般过去时来写作。写作时要注意要点齐全，不能遗漏。文章主要是按照时间的顺序来叙述，包括活动的地点、时间、活动的内容、自己的感受和出行的交通方式。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密。符合逻切关系。 同时注意日记的格式。
如果文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。如 We went boating on the lake first, and then went fishing by the lake.固定搭配的使用； We all had a good time for our outing. 结束句的恰当的使用。还运用了副词 first, and then... 等使上下文衔接的更好。
2． I took a trip to Shanghai with my mother during the seven-day holiday. It took us more than two hours to drive to Shanghai. We stayed in a large hotel on the eighth floor. On the first day, I just stayed in the hotel and rested. On the second day, my brother and I went to Nanjing Road. It's the busiest street in Shanghai. When we got there, there were lots of people. We walked from one shop to another. I bought two T-shirts and two pairs of trousers for the coming summer. My brother also bought some clothes. On the third day, my mother took me to Jinjiang Entertainment Centre. It was full of people. I played many kinds of games there. The other days, I went to some other interesting places, such as the Oriental Bright Pearl TV Tower and Shanghai International Conference Centre. I had a full and happy holiday.
这是一篇提纲类作文，上海是国际大都市，每年有大量的旅客来此游玩。请你以A trip to Shanghai为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述旅游地点，经历，并谈谈你的感受需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要适当添加内容，使文章看起来更充实，不能出现文章脱节问题。本文主要以第一、三人称为主，时态为一般过去时。最后检查所用时态，人称是否符合要求，检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确。语法，拼写，标点，移行，大小写等方面是否有误。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，文中took a trip to，it took sb+段时间+to do，stay in，such as等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如运用了there be句型和时间状语从句，When we got there, there were lots of people. We walked from one shop to another，最高级It's the busiest street in Shanghai，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
3． Our class is going to have a picnic in Cunjin Part next Sunday. We are going to meet at the school gate at 8:00 on Sunday morning. And we will be back at 2:00 p.m. We plan to take a bus to Cunjin Park. We will have many activities there, for example, singing, dancing, having picnic and taking photos with our teachers. I'm sure we will have a lot of fun. I will ask my classmates to take plenty of food and drink. We should pay attention to the safety. And we must keep away from fire all the time.
这是一篇提纲作文，要求根据正面内容，用英文写一篇80词左右的活动计划。写作内容包括往返时间、交通方式、活动和注意事项。 根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般将来时，人称为第一人称复数we。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对往返时间、交通方式、活动和注意事项等进行了详细论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的I am sure that+从句等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的take a bus坐公车，take photos with和……拍照，plenty of很多等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
4．参考范文(基础版)：
Everyone has his dream job. Some want to be teachers and some want to be doctors. For me, I want to be a writer.
I have always dreamed of being a writer in the future, because I feel excited about writing my own stories. Besides, I enjoy reading the interesting works of those great writers. I hope that one day my stories will be interesting enough, so people can enjoy reading mine.
To make my dream come true, I know what I need to do every day. I should try to read books every day and share my ideas with others at first. It may take a long time to become a writer, but I will study hard.
参考范文(提升版)：
Everyone has his dream job. Some want to be teachers and some want to be doctors. For me, I want to be a writer.
Becoming a writer in the future has always been my dream, because I feel excited about writing my own stories. Besides, it's enjoyable to read the interesting works of those great writers. I hope that one day my stories will be interesting enough for people to read.
In order to get closer to my dream, I know what I need to do every day. It includes not only trying to read books every day, but also sharing my ideas with teachers and friends. These are just the first two things to make my dream come true. There is still a long way to become a writer, but I will try my best to keep doing it.
这是一篇提纲作文。时态是一般将来时和一般现在时，本文要求以"放飞梦想，成就自我"为题结合提示内容完成这篇发言稿，写作中要首先介绍自己的梦想职业是什么；然后介绍原因；最后介绍怎样实现梦想职业的原因。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：for sb.；dream of doing sth.；feel excited about doing sth.；want to do；in the future；enjoy doing sth.；make one's dream come true；need to do sth.；try to do sth.；share...with...；at first；in order to do；get closer to；not only...but also；keep doing sth.等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如：现在完成时和状语从句I have always dreamed of being a writer in the future, because I feel excited about writing my own stories.；宾语从句和状语从句I hope that one day my stories will be interesting enough, so people can enjoy reading mine.；宾语从句To make my dream come true, I know what I need to do every day.；动名词做主语Becoming a writer in the future has always been my dream, because I feel excited about writing my own stories.等。连词because、besides、so、but、not only...but also、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
5．参考范文(基础版)：
Dear Eddie,
I'm sorry about what happened between you andDaniel. I want to help you and give my suggestions to you.
First, communicating with Daniel is important. You should tell him that you're sorry and why you didn't go to his party. He will understand you because you've been old friends for many years. Second, prepare a gift for him, though it's small. Or you can ask him whether he wants to do some interesting things with you. Try to be patient with him. It's important between friends.
I hope my suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文(提升版)：
Dear Eddie,
I'm sorry about what happened between you and Daniel. I'd like to help you and my advice is as follows.
First, try to communicate with Daniel. It's a good way to explain why you didn't go to his party. That's because he may not feel sure of himself about the friendship between you two if you explain nothing. I'm sure he will understand you because you've been friends for years. Second, you can not only give him a gift though it's small, but also invite him to do some interesting things together. What's more, it's important to be patient with him all the time.
Hope you can make up quick!.
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文写作，主要介绍寻求使两人关系恢复如初的办法。时态是一般过去时和一般现在时，首先总体介绍给与建议；然后具体介绍怎样使两人关系恢复如初；最后总结。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：be sorry about；give sth. to sb.；communicate with sb.；prepare...for...；want to do；be patient with sb.；try to do sth.；a good way to do；feel sure of oneself about sth.；not only....but also；invite sb. to do sth.；what's more；all the time；make up等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如动名词做主语communicating with Daniel is important.；宾语从句You should tell him that you're sorry and why you didn't go to his party.；状语从句He will understand you because you've been old friends for many years.Second, prepare a gift for him, though it's small. That's because he may not feel sure of himself about the friendship between you two if you explain nothing.；宾语从句Or you can ask him whether he wants to do some interesting things with you.I hope my suggestions can help you. It's a good way to explain why you didn't go to his party.；祈使句Try to be patient with him.try to communicate with Daniel.Hope you can make up quick!等。连词first，second，because，though，or，not only...but also，what's more的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
6．参考范文(基础版)：
Last month, our school had a study trip to Chengdu Museum. I think it was a great trip!
We arrived at the museum at 9:00 am by bus. We spent about 25 minutes getting there. The building is very beautiful. When we got in, we saw many ancient things. I can hardly believe my eyes. I'm interested in history, so it is a good place for me to learn about the history of this city. I took quite a few photos of those wonderful works. I lost myself in those artworks.
All in all, it was a very amazing trip!
参考范文(提升版)：
Last month, we visited the Chengdu Museum. I think it was a great trip!
I got up early in order to take the bus with my classmates. It took us about 25 minutes to get there. When we arrived at the museum, we saw a beautiful building. I can hardly believe that I could see so many beautiful works of art there. I enjoyed myself there because I'm a big fan of history, and I wonder what life was like in this city in the past. Those works were so wonderful that I took quite a few photos of them. It was really enjoyable for me to know about the history of this city.
What an enjoyable trip it was! I'm looking forward to my next trip.
这是一篇提纲作文，主要介绍难忘的一次研学旅行。时态是一般过去时，人称主要是第一人称。文章首先介绍自己研学地点；然后介绍研学时做的事情；最后总结研学的感受。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：arrive at；in order to do；take the bus；It took sb.+时间段+to do sth.；enjoy oneself；in the past；take photos of；know about；the history of；look forward to等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如： 宾语从句I think it was a great trip!I can hardly believe that I could see so many beautiful works of art there and I wonder what life was like in this city in the past.；状语从句When we arrived at the museum, we saw a beautiful building.I enjoyed myself there because I'm a big fan of history. Those works were so wonderful that I took quite a few photos of them.；感叹句What an enjoyable trip it was!等。连词when、so、all in all；because、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
7．参考范文(基础版)：
I am happy to share my English learning ways with you. Now let me be clearer.
First, I think we'd better get interested in English. Do not think that it is just a course. Second, there are many things to do, like making a foreign friend and watching English films. We are certain to improve our listening and speaking quickly through these ways. We can also know more about the local culture. A language is not easy to learn. Finally, I think we need to have confidence in ourselves. Confidence is very important for language learning. We should believe ourselves. We must be able to learn more.
I hope every student can learn English well. Thanks for your attention.
参考范文(提升版)：
I am happy to share my English learning ways with you. Now let me be clearer.
First, I think we'd better get interested in English. Do not think that it is just a course. As the saying goes, "Interest is the best teacher. " Second, there are many things to do, such as making a foreign friend. watching English films and so on. It is up to you. These things can help us not only improve our listening and speaking quickly, but also know more about the local culture. A language is not easy to learn. Finally, I think we'd better have confidence in ourselves. Confidence is important for language learning. We should believe that we are certain to learn more.
I hope every student can learn English well. Thanks for your attention.
这是一篇材料作文，要求写一篇演讲稿介绍自己学习英语的方法。使用恰当的序列词是自己的方法逻辑清晰，至少提供三条学习方法。文章使用一般现在时，合理穿插使用复合句，观点清晰明确，积极向上。
考查材料作文。所给例文使用了First……Second……Finally……等表示次序的词将自己的观点逐条列举明白；建议一是对英语感兴趣，使用了had better短语，并且使用了祈使句；建议二是多做像交外国朋友、看英文电影这样的事情，使用了make a foreign friend、be certain to do等短语；建议三是相信自己，使用了have confidence in、be important for、be able to do等短语。文章逻辑清晰，观点明确，语言精炼。
8．参考范文(基础版)：
Reading is one of the most wonderful hobbies for me. And it takes up almost all my free time.
I like reading because I can learn a lot of new things. For example, I can learn about history and science by reading. I have many experiences of reading. I once joined in a summer reading activity. And we had to read many books. I found a series of novels, and I couldn't put them down. I spent many afternoons reading those stories.
Interest is the best teacher. The hobby brings me not only fun but also success. I have won some prizes as a result of reading.
参考范文(提升版)：
Reading is one of the most wonderful hobbies for me. And it takes up almost all my free time.
I like reading because I can learn a lot of new things. By opening a book, I can find out many different things and gain useful information. There are lots of experiences related to my reading hobby. I once joined in a summer reading activity. We had to read as many books as possible over the summer. I found a series of novels that I couldn't put down, and I spent many afternoons lost in those stories.
Interest is the best teacher. The hobby brings me not only fun but also success. I have won some prizes as a result of reading.
考查提纲作文。 学校英语俱乐部发布了一个帖子，旨在了解同学们的兴趣爱好。 要求针对以下要点进行回贴。 要求包括要点中的所有内容，并可适当增加内容，合理使用连接词，使得语句通顺，语意连贯，注意上下文的连接要符合逻辑关系，符合英语表达习惯，本文主要使用第一人称单数，一般现在时和一般过去时。
考查提纲作文，内容切题，语法正确，时态运用灵活，准确，一些固定短语，如 take up占据 ， For example 例如， as a result of 由于，等等，及句型结构，如 I like reading because I can learn a lot of new things. （because引导原因状语从句）， The hobby brings me not only fun but also success. （固定搭配not only…but also…的用法）等等的运用较为得体，使得文章更加流畅，自然。
单元话题书面表达
一、书面表达
1．假设你是李华，请根据下面表格中的提示，用英语写一篇日记，叙述你今天参加的一次郊游活动，并简要谈谈你的感受。
活动地点 距离你家约十公里的里湖
交通工具 骑自行车
活动时间 ⒈上午九点出发 ⒉十点到达 ⒊下午五点半返回
活动内容 自定(至少谈及三项活动)
要点：1）日记必须包含表格中所有信息，可适当发挥；
2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3）不少于80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：outing郊游 Li Lake里湖
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2．上海是国际大都市，每年有大量的旅客来此游玩。请你以"A trip to Shanghai"为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述旅游地点，经历，并谈谈你的感受。
开车大约五小时； 晚上住旅馆（八楼） ；第一天在旅馆休息
第二天和哥哥去南京路买了些衣； 第三天去锦江乐园 （Jinjiang Entertainment Centre）和东方明珠（Oriental Bright Pearl TV Tower），很开心。
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3．初三毕业在即，你班将组织一次课外活动。假如你是班长，请根据正面内容，用英文写一篇80词左右的活动计划。
内容要点:1. 下星期天早上8点在校门口集合，下午2点返回；2. 坐公交车前往寸金公园(Cunjin Park);3. 唱歌、跳舞、野餐、与老师合影；4. 带齐食物、饮料等；5. 注意安全和防火。
要求：1. 包含所给出要点，可适当发挥；2. 不里逐词翻译，词数约80字左右。(文章开头不计入词数)；3. 文中不能出现考生的直实姓名、校名和共他真实信息。
参考词汇：at the school gate(学校门O)；activity(活动); keep away from fire (远离火灾)
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4．下周的英语汇报主题为"放飞梦想，成就自我"，请你写一篇发言稿，谈一谈自己的职业理想。
要点:1. What's your dream job 2. Why do you dream of it
3. How will you make your dream come true
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现你的真实信息；
3. 不少于80词。
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5．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Eddie因为自己先前的计划而缺席好友 Daniel 的生日会，这使 Daniel很生气，两人已经三天没有说话了，因此特意向你寻求使两人关系恢复如初的办法。请你用英文写一封邮件，给他提供你的建议。
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实信息；
3. 不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Eddie,
I'm sorry about what happened between you and Daniel.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6． 许多同学选择在假期时提高和放松自己。阳光中学英文周报编辑部想了解同学们心目中难忘的一次研学旅行。假定你是李华，请你根据要点提示，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
要点:1. Where did you go 2. What did you do there 3. What do you think of your trip
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实信息；
3. 不少于 80词。
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7． 阳光中学的英语社团在学期中举办交流分享会，邀请同学们分享英语学习方法，共同进步。假定你是李华，请你用英文写一篇演讲稿，介绍自己的学习方法。
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实信息；
3. 不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
I am happy to share my English learning ways with you. Now let me be clearer.
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I hope every student can learn English well. Thanks for your attention.
8．学校英语俱乐部发布了一个帖子，旨在了解同学们的兴趣爱好。请你针对以下要点进行回贴。
要点:1. What's your hobby
2. Why do you enjoy your hobby
3. What do you think of your hobby
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实信息；
3. 不少于80词。
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答案解析部分
1． Today I went for a pleasant outing with my friends. We went to Li Lake. It was about ten kilometers away from my home. We rode our bikes at 9：00 in the morning .One hour later, we got there. We went boating on the lake first, and then went fishing by the lake. The fish in the lake are big and fresh. They were all our meals at noon. In the afternoon, we went swimming in a swimming pool beside the lake. We felt relaxed and comfortable in the water. At 5：30 in the afternoon, we returned together. We all had a good time for our outing.
这是一篇日记，属于记叙文。以第一人称和一般过去时来写作。写作时要注意要点齐全，不能遗漏。文章主要是按照时间的顺序来叙述，包括活动的地点、时间、活动的内容、自己的感受和出行的交通方式。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密。符合逻切关系。 同时注意日记的格式。
如果文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。如 We went boating on the lake first, and then went fishing by the lake.固定搭配的使用； We all had a good time for our outing. 结束句的恰当的使用。还运用了副词 first, and then... 等使上下文衔接的更好。
2． I took a trip to Shanghai with my mother during the seven-day holiday. It took us more than two hours to drive to Shanghai. We stayed in a large hotel on the eighth floor. On the first day, I just stayed in the hotel and rested. On the second day, my brother and I went to Nanjing Road. It's the busiest street in Shanghai. When we got there, there were lots of people. We walked from one shop to another. I bought two T-shirts and two pairs of trousers for the coming summer. My brother also bought some clothes. On the third day, my mother took me to Jinjiang Entertainment Centre. It was full of people. I played many kinds of games there. The other days, I went to some other interesting places, such as the Oriental Bright Pearl TV Tower and Shanghai International Conference Centre. I had a full and happy holiday.
这是一篇提纲类作文，上海是国际大都市，每年有大量的旅客来此游玩。请你以A trip to Shanghai为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述旅游地点，经历，并谈谈你的感受需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要适当添加内容，使文章看起来更充实，不能出现文章脱节问题。本文主要以第一、三人称为主，时态为一般过去时。最后检查所用时态，人称是否符合要求，检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确。语法，拼写，标点，移行，大小写等方面是否有误。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，文中took a trip to，it took sb+段时间+to do，stay in，such as等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如运用了there be句型和时间状语从句，When we got there, there were lots of people. We walked from one shop to another，最高级It's the busiest street in Shanghai，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
3． Our class is going to have a picnic in Cunjin Part next Sunday. We are going to meet at the school gate at 8:00 on Sunday morning. And we will be back at 2:00 p.m. We plan to take a bus to Cunjin Park. We will have many activities there, for example, singing, dancing, having picnic and taking photos with our teachers. I'm sure we will have a lot of fun. I will ask my classmates to take plenty of food and drink. We should pay attention to the safety. And we must keep away from fire all the time.
这是一篇提纲作文，要求根据正面内容，用英文写一篇80词左右的活动计划。写作内容包括往返时间、交通方式、活动和注意事项。 根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般将来时，人称为第一人称复数we。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对往返时间、交通方式、活动和注意事项等进行了详细论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的I am sure that+从句等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的take a bus坐公车，take photos with和……拍照，plenty of很多等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
4．参考范文(基础版)：
Everyone has his dream job. Some want to be teachers and some want to be doctors. For me, I want to be a writer.
I have always dreamed of being a writer in the future, because I feel excited about writing my own stories. Besides, I enjoy reading the interesting works of those great writers. I hope that one day my stories will be interesting enough, so people can enjoy reading mine.
To make my dream come true, I know what I need to do every day. I should try to read books every day and share my ideas with others at first. It may take a long time to become a writer, but I will study hard.
参考范文(提升版)：
Everyone has his dream job. Some want to be teachers and some want to be doctors. For me, I want to be a writer.
Becoming a writer in the future has always been my dream, because I feel excited about writing my own stories. Besides, it's enjoyable to read the interesting works of those great writers. I hope that one day my stories will be interesting enough for people to read.
In order to get closer to my dream, I know what I need to do every day. It includes not only trying to read books every day, but also sharing my ideas with teachers and friends. These are just the first two things to make my dream come true. There is still a long way to become a writer, but I will try my best to keep doing it.
这是一篇提纲作文。时态是一般将来时和一般现在时，本文要求以"放飞梦想，成就自我"为题结合提示内容完成这篇发言稿，写作中要首先介绍自己的梦想职业是什么；然后介绍原因；最后介绍怎样实现梦想职业的原因。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：for sb.；dream of doing sth.；feel excited about doing sth.；want to do；in the future；enjoy doing sth.；make one's dream come true；need to do sth.；try to do sth.；share...with...；at first；in order to do；get closer to；not only...but also；keep doing sth.等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如：现在完成时和状语从句I have always dreamed of being a writer in the future, because I feel excited about writing my own stories.；宾语从句和状语从句I hope that one day my stories will be interesting enough, so people can enjoy reading mine.；宾语从句To make my dream come true, I know what I need to do every day.；动名词做主语Becoming a writer in the future has always been my dream, because I feel excited about writing my own stories.等。连词because、besides、so、but、not only...but also、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
5．参考范文(基础版)：
Dear Eddie,
I'm sorry about what happened between you andDaniel. I want to help you and give my suggestions to you.
First, communicating with Daniel is important. You should tell him that you're sorry and why you didn't go to his party. He will understand you because you've been old friends for many years. Second, prepare a gift for him, though it's small. Or you can ask him whether he wants to do some interesting things with you. Try to be patient with him. It's important between friends.
I hope my suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文(提升版)：
Dear Eddie,
I'm sorry about what happened between you and Daniel. I'd like to help you and my advice is as follows.
First, try to communicate with Daniel. It's a good way to explain why you didn't go to his party. That's because he may not feel sure of himself about the friendship between you two if you explain nothing. I'm sure he will understand you because you've been friends for years. Second, you can not only give him a gift though it's small, but also invite him to do some interesting things together. What's more, it's important to be patient with him all the time.
Hope you can make up quick!.
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文写作，主要介绍寻求使两人关系恢复如初的办法。时态是一般过去时和一般现在时，首先总体介绍给与建议；然后具体介绍怎样使两人关系恢复如初；最后总结。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：be sorry about；give sth. to sb.；communicate with sb.；prepare...for...；want to do；be patient with sb.；try to do sth.；a good way to do；feel sure of oneself about sth.；not only....but also；invite sb. to do sth.；what's more；all the time；make up等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如动名词做主语communicating with Daniel is important.；宾语从句You should tell him that you're sorry and why you didn't go to his party.；状语从句He will understand you because you've been old friends for many years.Second, prepare a gift for him, though it's small. That's because he may not feel sure of himself about the friendship between you two if you explain nothing.；宾语从句Or you can ask him whether he wants to do some interesting things with you.I hope my suggestions can help you. It's a good way to explain why you didn't go to his party.；祈使句Try to be patient with him.try to communicate with Daniel.Hope you can make up quick!等。连词first，second，because，though，or，not only...but also，what's more的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
6．参考范文(基础版)：
Last month, our school had a study trip to Chengdu Museum. I think it was a great trip!
We arrived at the museum at 9:00 am by bus. We spent about 25 minutes getting there. The building is very beautiful. When we got in, we saw many ancient things. I can hardly believe my eyes. I'm interested in history, so it is a good place for me to learn about the history of this city. I took quite a few photos of those wonderful works. I lost myself in those artworks.
All in all, it was a very amazing trip!
参考范文(提升版)：
Last month, we visited the Chengdu Museum. I think it was a great trip!
I got up early in order to take the bus with my classmates. It took us about 25 minutes to get there. When we arrived at the museum, we saw a beautiful building. I can hardly believe that I could see so many beautiful works of art there. I enjoyed myself there because I'm a big fan of history, and I wonder what life was like in this city in the past. Those works were so wonderful that I took quite a few photos of them. It was really enjoyable for me to know about the history of this city.
What an enjoyable trip it was! I'm looking forward to my next trip.
这是一篇提纲作文，主要介绍难忘的一次研学旅行。时态是一般过去时，人称主要是第一人称。文章首先介绍自己研学地点；然后介绍研学时做的事情；最后总结研学的感受。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：arrive at；in order to do；take the bus；It took sb.+时间段+to do sth.；enjoy oneself；in the past；take photos of；know about；the history of；look forward to等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如： 宾语从句I think it was a great trip!I can hardly believe that I could see so many beautiful works of art there and I wonder what life was like in this city in the past.；状语从句When we arrived at the museum, we saw a beautiful building.I enjoyed myself there because I'm a big fan of history. Those works were so wonderful that I took quite a few photos of them.；感叹句What an enjoyable trip it was!等。连词when、so、all in all；because、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
7．参考范文(基础版)：
I am happy to share my English learning ways with you. Now let me be clearer.
First, I think we'd better get interested in English. Do not think that it is just a course. Second, there are many things to do, like making a foreign friend and watching English films. We are certain to improve our listening and speaking quickly through these ways. We can also know more about the local culture. A language is not easy to learn. Finally, I think we need to have confidence in ourselves. Confidence is very important for language learning. We should believe ourselves. We must be able to learn more.
I hope every student can learn English well. Thanks for your attention.
参考范文(提升版)：
I am happy to share my English learning ways with you. Now let me be clearer.
First, I think we'd better get interested in English. Do not think that it is just a course. As the saying goes, "Interest is the best teacher. " Second, there are many things to do, such as making a foreign friend. watching English films and so on. It is up to you. These things can help us not only improve our listening and speaking quickly, but also know more about the local culture. A language is not easy to learn. Finally, I think we'd better have confidence in ourselves. Confidence is important for language learning. We should believe that we are certain to learn more.
I hope every student can learn English well. Thanks for your attention.
这是一篇材料作文，要求写一篇演讲稿介绍自己学习英语的方法。使用恰当的序列词是自己的方法逻辑清晰，至少提供三条学习方法。文章使用一般现在时，合理穿插使用复合句，观点清晰明确，积极向上。
考查材料作文。所给例文使用了First……Second……Finally……等表示次序的词将自己的观点逐条列举明白；建议一是对英语感兴趣，使用了had better短语，并且使用了祈使句；建议二是多做像交外国朋友、看英文电影这样的事情，使用了make a foreign friend、be certain to do等短语；建议三是相信自己，使用了have confidence in、be important for、be able to do等短语。文章逻辑清晰，观点明确，语言精炼。
8．参考范文(基础版)：
Reading is one of the most wonderful hobbies for me. And it takes up almost all my free time.
I like reading because I can learn a lot of new things. For example, I can learn about history and science by reading. I have many experiences of reading. I once joined in a summer reading activity. And we had to read many books. I found a series of novels, and I couldn't put them down. I spent many afternoons reading those stories.
Interest is the best teacher. The hobby brings me not only fun but also success. I have won some prizes as a result of reading.
参考范文(提升版)：
Reading is one of the most wonderful hobbies for me. And it takes up almost all my free time.
I like reading because I can learn a lot of new things. By opening a book, I can find out many different things and gain useful information. There are lots of experiences related to my reading hobby. I once joined in a summer reading activity. We had to read as many books as possible over the summer. I found a series of novels that I couldn't put down, and I spent many afternoons lost in those stories.
Interest is the best teacher. The hobby brings me not only fun but also success. I have won some prizes as a result of reading.
考查提纲作文。 学校英语俱乐部发布了一个帖子，旨在了解同学们的兴趣爱好。 要求针对以下要点进行回贴。 要求包括要点中的所有内容，并可适当增加内容，合理使用连接词，使得语句通顺，语意连贯，注意上下文的连接要符合逻辑关系，符合英语表达习惯，本文主要使用第一人称单数，一般现在时和一般过去时。
考查提纲作文，内容切题，语法正确，时态运用灵活，准确，一些固定短语，如 take up占据 ， For example 例如， as a result of 由于，等等，及句型结构，如 I like reading because I can learn a lot of new things. （because引导原因状语从句）， The hobby brings me not only fun but also success. （固定搭配not only…but also…的用法）等等的运用较为得体，使得文章更加流畅，自然。