Unit 3 Online tours
单元话题书面表达
一、书面表达
1.现在电脑被广泛使用,因特网越来越受欢迎,但同学和老师及父母对此看法不一样。请根据以下要点,写一篇短文,并表达自己的观点。
学生的观点 可以上网聊天,交朋友和购物; 可以打游戏,听音乐使自己放松; 可以学到很多知识。
老师和家长的观点 网上交友不安全;浪费时间,影响学习。
我的观点 很有用,可以查资料、画画、收发邮件、看电影等; 不要沉迷于游戏和聊天而影响学习。
要求:1)词数80左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2)短文必须包含所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺。
Today,computers are widely used and the Internet is becoming more and more popular.
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2.现在电脑被广泛使用,因特网越来越受欢迎,但同学和老师及父母对此看法不一样。请根据以下要点,写一篇短文,并表达自己的观点。
学生的观点 可以上网聊天,交朋友和购物; 可以打游戏,听音乐使自己放松; 可以学到很多知识。
老师和家长的观点 网上交友不安全;浪费时间,影响学习。
我的观点 很有用,可以查资料、画画、收发邮件、看电影等; 不要沉迷于游戏和聊天而影响学习。
要求:1)词数80左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2)短文必须包含所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺。
Today,computers are widely used and the Internet is becoming more and more popular.
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3.现在,上网已经变得越来越流行了,很多学生都迷上了网络。你是怎么看待上网的?请谈谈你的观点。提示如下:
1)因特网使得交流更加简单,它已成为人们日常生活最重要的部分之一;
2)很多同学每天上网学习,发电子邮件……
3)但是还有很多同学沉迷于上网聊天,打电脑游戏,这对他们的健康很不利。
4)作为学生,我们应该以学习为先……
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4.根据提示写对A New Educational CD-ROM Called Daily English的介绍,词数在60个左右。
1)它是一个来自澳大利亚的新英语课程,它包括一本书和五个光盘;
2)对学生和游客有益;
3)可以了解有关使用电话、问答问题以及谈论天气和时间;
4)话题包括了旅行、宾馆、食品、饮料、购物及货币;
5)你一定会从中受益非浅的。
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5.书面表达
在日常生活(daily life)中,国际互联网起着越来越重要的作用。请根据以下提示,以On the Internet为题写一段50-70字的短文。
国际互联网的主要用途:
信息 看国内新闻,获取其他信息
通讯 发e-mail,打电话
学习 上网上学校,阅览各种书籍,自学外语
娱乐 欣赏音乐,观看体育比赛,玩棋牌游戏
生活 购物
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6.书面表达
在日常生活中,互联网起着越来越重要的作用.请根据以下提示,以“On the Internet”为题,写一篇70词左右的短文.
互联网的主要用途:
信 息 看国内外新闻,获取其他信息
通 讯 发邮件,打电话
学 习 上网校,阅览各种书籍,自学外语
娱 乐 欣赏音乐,观看体育比赛,玩棋牌游戏
生 活 购物,交友
On the Internet
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答案解析部分
1. Today, computers are widely used and the Internet is becoming more and more popular. Many students like chatting, making friends and shopping online. They think chatting and listening to music can make them relaxed and they can learn a lot of knowledge online. However, most teachers and their parents don't think it is safe to make friends online. They think it is a waste of time to chat online and play games. They are bad for their studies. I think computers are useful. We can search for information, draw pictures, send and receive emails and watch films. They can bring us much joy, but we shouldn't spend too much time playing games or chatting. We should use them in the right way.
这是一篇材料作文,主要介绍对电脑使用的看法。时态是现在进行时和一般现在时,首先介绍许多学生对使用电脑的看法;然后介绍老师和家长对使用电脑的看法;最后介绍自己的观点。为文章增色,注意运用好词好句,同时注意恰当使用连词,使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
写作时作文内容全面,运用好词好句,如:more and more poplar;like doing;make friends;listen to music;make sb.+形容词;be+形容词+to do;be bad for;a waste of time;search for;bring sb. sth.;spend+时间+doing;too much;in a right way等。被动语态、比较级、和宾语从句的运用为文章增色不少,如:Today, computers are widely used and the Internet is becoming more and more popular.They think chatting and listening to music can make them relaxed and they can learn a lot of knowledge online. However, most teachers and their parents don't think it is safe to make friends online. They think it is a waste of time to chat online and play games.等。连词and、however、but、or的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
2. Today, computers are widely used and the Internet is becoming more and more popular. Many students like chatting, making friends and shopping online. They think chatting and listening to music can make them relaxed and they can learn a lot of knowledge online. However, most teachers and their parents don't think it is safe to make friends online. They think it is a waste of time to chat online and play games. They are bad for their studies. I think computers are useful. We can search for information, draw pictures, send and receive emails and watch films. They can bring us much joy, but we shouldn't spend too much time playing games or chatting. We should use them in the right way.
这是一篇材料作文,时态是一般现在时。首先介绍学生的观点;然后介绍老师和家长的观点;最后介绍自己的观点。注意运用好词好句,同时恰当使用连词。
作文内容全面,涵盖提示信息。运用好词好句,如:more and more popular;like doing;make sb.+形容词;it+be+形容词+to do sth.;be bad for;spend+时间+doing等。被动语态、动名词做主语宾语从句的运用为文章增色不少,如Today, computers are widely used and the Internet is becoming more and more popular.;They think chatting and listening to music can make them relaxed;They think it is a waste of time to chat online and play games. 连词and、but、however等运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
3. Internet has made communication much easier. It has become one of the most important parts in people's daily life. Many students use the Internet to study, send emails and search for information. But many others are crazy about chatting online or playing computer games. It is bad for their health. As students, we should know study comes first. And we should spend more time doing sports instead of playing computer games.
本文叙述了现在上网已经变得越来越流行了,很多学生都迷上了网络。叙述的是现在的情况,所以句子的时态应该用现在时,所写的句子应该符合英语语法,用一些高级词汇。短文用了一些短语和句式,如:in people's daily life在人们的日常生活中; search for information寻找信息;be bad for 对某物或某人有害;sb spend some time doing 某人花费时间做某事; instead of代替。用了连词but,and等,增加了文章的亮点。
4. A New Educational CD-ROM Called Daily English is a new English course from Australia. It includes a book and five CD-ROMs. It is good for tourists and students. We can learn about using the telephone, asking and answering the questions, talking about the weather and the time through it. Its topics cover travel and hotels, food and drink, shopping and money. You will learn a lot from it.
根据题干要求可知,这是一篇新书介绍的说明文,写作时要紧紧围绕所给出的5个要点提示去组织习作的素材。认真思考如何选用恰当的短语及句式去完成汉语提示中的英文翻译。由于是介绍新英语课程,因此时态应以一般现在时态为主,人称为第三人称,注意主谓一致关系。写作中用到的词组有:be good for , learn about, use the telephone, talk about, learn from等。最后要注意文章的自然流畅,检查有无语法错误。
5.The Internet is very important in our daily life. On the Internet, we can learn news both at home and in the world. And we can also learn all kinds of information. We can send e-mails to our friends by Internet. We can even make phone calls, go to net school, read many books and learn foreign languages alone. If you are free, we can enjoy music, watch sports and play chess and cards on the Internet. We can do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them.
这篇文章要求我们以On the Internet为题,并介绍国际互联网的主要用途,要点要包括信息,通讯,学习,娱乐,生活这五个方面,并且每个方面的用途都已经给出,所以我们在行文的时候不能遗漏它列出的要点,并使行文流畅。
范文开篇先从国际互联网在生活中的重要性谈起,然后按照顺序列举出了各项用途,无一遗漏,而且句式整散结合,避免了句式过于繁琐,是文章看起来简洁明了。make phone call,打电话;do shopping购物;have a chat with和某人聊天;make friends with和.....做朋友.
这篇偏向说明的小散文最重要的是在全部列举要点的前提下使行文流畅。避免单纯的逐字翻译。
6. On the Internet
The Internet is becoming more and more important in our daily life. On the Internet, we can learn news both at home and abroad. And we can also get all kinds of information. We can send emails to our friends by Internet. We can even make phone calls, go to online schools, read many books and learn foreign languages by ourselves. If we are free, we can enjoy music, watch sports matches and play chess or cards on the Internet. We can do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them online.
本题是一篇命题作文“On the Internet”,且写作的主要内容已给出,在写作时应注意结合所给内容,不要遗漏,根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态,语态,语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤:
一:阅读提示,弄清所有信息,明确写作要点。
1.看国内外新闻,获取其他信息。 news both at home and abroad;get all kinds of information
2.发邮件,打电话。 send emails;make phone calls
3.上网校,阅览各种书籍,自学外语。 go to online schools;read many books; learn foreign languages by ourselves
4.欣赏音乐,观看体育比赛,玩棋牌游戏。 enjoy music;watch sports matches ;play chess or cards
5.购物,交友。 do shopping;make friends
二:根据要点,写出关键词、短语、句子。
三:组词成句,连句成篇。本文是一篇议论性文章,使用一般现在时即可。注意根据写作需要,变换句型,表达清晰合理。
本题以给题目和提纲,考查对信息的整理和运用,应熟练使用相关单词短语和句型,注意连词的搭配和词性,语态的把握。