Module 2 Experiences 单元话题书面表达 【含答案+解析】 -2024-2025学年八年级英语下册单元重难点高频易错题专练（外研版2024）

Module 2 Experiences
单元话题书面表达
一、书面表达
1．写作
你班下周要开一次以“My experience”为主题的英语班会, 请你准备一篇80个词左右的发言稿。主要内容包括以下几点:
① 你曾去过什么地方
② 给你留下深刻印象的地方是哪里 为什么
③ 你没去过而又很想去的地方是哪里 打算什么时候去
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2．假如你是王洁, 你美国的笔友John想到中国旅行, 请你根据下面提示给他发封email.
1)北京是中国的首都。名胜古迹不胜枚举, 夏季是来北京旅游的最佳时期；
2)还可到海南, 那儿四季如春, 可以游泳、潜水, 你一定会玩得开心。
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3．假如你是第六中学的学生李雷。请根据以下内容提示，给你的朋友小伟写一封信，告诉他有关你上个月去武汉旅行的经过。信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要求：80词左右。
提示：1）上个月，你和父母一起乘火车去武汉；
2）火车上非常舒适，可以看到窗外的美丽景色（scenery）。你们一共花了三个小时到达武汉；
3）武汉是中国最大的城市之一。有许多名胜古迹（place of interest），特别以东湖（East Lake）出名，你们参观了东湖，在那里拍了照片；
4）你的感想。
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4．请你以“My experiences in Beijing”为题，介绍一下游览北京的经历，内容如下： 北京在中国的北方，每年有很多人到北京旅游；2.去北京多次，游遍了北京；3.爬过长城，到过颐和园 (the Summer Palace) 和故宫博物院 (the Palace Museum)；4.吃过北京烤鸭，拍了很多照片，并与外国人交谈过。
My experiences in Beijing
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5．假如你是来自美国的学生 Peter，和朋友来北京旅行。请你以"My Visit to Beijing"为题，写一篇80词左右的旅行日记，描述这次令你难忘的旅行经历。
My Visit to Beijing
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6．回忆起第一次学游泳，第一次学骑车，第一次学做饭之类的经历时，你一定还会记忆犹新。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文，将这难忘的初次经历记录下来，存放在你的《成长记录册》中。
提示：
1)I can.../I like...
2)The first time I learnt (to)...
3)It gives me a lot…
注意：
1)短文需要包含以上所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2)词数：80~100。
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答案解析部分
1．例文：
Good afternoon, everyone!
I'm very happy to tell you my experiences. I have been to many places, such as Suzhou, Xi'an and Beijing. I think Beijing is my favourite city, because it is our capital and there are many places of interest. Our country held the 2008 Olympic Games there. I haven't been to Hainan. And I want to go there because I hear the beaches in Sanya are very excellent. I hope I can go there soon. What about your experiences Where have you ever been Don't forget to tell us.
（1）仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。 （2） 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语， 按照一定逻辑关系来写。（3）根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
2．Dear John,
I've heard from you. I know you want to visit China. That's a good idea. As you know Beijing is the capital of China. It has a long history and there are many places of interest：the Great Wall, Tian'anmen Square, the Great Hall of the People, the National Museum of China, the Forbidden City, Beihai Park and so on. Summer is the best time to come here. You can go surfing in Dalian or Qingdao. The waves there are terrific. You can also visit Hainan. The weather is always warm. No matter in summer or in winter, there you can go scuba diving. I think you'll have a good time.
I hope you'll come soon and wish you a lot of fun.
Yours,
Wang Jie
这题提纲类作文，所给材料较为详细，逻辑清楚，因此考生可以根据要点内容进行翻译，不能遗漏要点内容。根据要点内容可知短语主要应用一般现在及将来时态，主语为第一,三人称单数,注意主谓一致问题，句型以简单句为主。写作时要灵活运用，注意主谓一致，单词拼写正确。
本题因为要点已经很明确，只要将要点翻译清楚就可以，要注意使用正确的英语句型，避免出现汉语表达。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能写出一篇满意的作文。
3．Dear Xiaowei,
Last
month, my parents and I went to Wuhan by train. The train was quite comfortable. We could see the beautiful scenery out of the window. It took us about 3 hours to reach Wuhan. Wuhan is one of the biggest cities in China. There are many places of interest in Wuhan, and it's famous for the East Lake. We visited it, and took some pictures there. We had a wonderful tine in Wuhan.
Yours,
Li Lei
本文是一篇提纲性文章，写作时首先要提及作者如何去的武汉及其旅途风景，然后说一下武汉的景点。写作时以第一人称为主，用一般过去式，注意连词的使用，注意句子前后逻辑的联系。
本文用了较多较好的短语和句子，如last month，by train，The train was quite cocmfortable，out of the window，it takes sb sometime to do sth，one of，many places of interest，be famous for，take some pictures，have a wonderful time等，平时多积累较好的短语和句子， 会给文章增加很多亮点。
4．My experiences in Beijing
I'm very happy to tell you something about my experiences in Beijing. Beijing is in the north of China. There are many places of interest to visit. So a lot of people go to Beijing for a visit every year.
I have been to Beijing many times. I have travelled around Beijing already. I have climbed theGreat Wall. I have visited the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. I have also eaten Beijing duck and taken lots of photos. I have had conversations with foreigners.
I had a wonderful time in Beijing.
这是一篇提纲作文，要求根据所给内容介绍游览北京的经历，包括四部分内容，分别是（1）北京在中国北方，每年有很多人到北京旅游；（2）去北京多次，游遍了北京；（3）爬过长城，到过颐和园和故宫；（4）吃过北京烤鸭，拍了很多照片，并与外国人交谈。因为是描述游览经历，强调过去的事情对现在的影响，句子多用完成时态。
考查提纲作文。本文采用总分总结构，第一段总体说明每年有很多人参观北京。第二段介绍自己在北京游玩的经历，最后总结点题，说明自己在北京玩的很开心。本文条理清楚，意思连贯、完整，一些固定短语例如 in the north of， places of interest， have been to等，以及部分句子如： I'm very happy to tell you something about my experiences in Beijing. There are many places of interest to visit. So a lot of people go to Beijing for a visit every year. 等恰当得体，表达准确，是文章内容丰富，表达流畅。
5．My Visit to Beijing
August 7, 2021 Saturday Sunny
Today I went to Beijing, the capital city of China, for a visit with my friends.
Our visit started when we got off the plane. After we walked out of the airport, we hurriedly took a big bus to the Great Wall directly. To our surprise, the Great Wall is really great, just like its name. I took a lot of photos. All of us felt excited when we climbed to the top of the Great Wall. After lunch, we took another bus to the Summer Palace. It was also huge and wonderful. We spent the whole afternoon there. While we were on a boat on Kunming Lake, we heard someone singing the Beijing Opera on the bank. It sounded very beautiful. I liked it a lot. But time passed quickly. We had to find a hotel to live in and we finished the first day's journey in the city.
How tired but happy we were today! It was surely an unforgettable experience. I'm looking forward to tomorrow s trip.
Peter
这是一篇命题作文，要求以“My Visit to Beijing”写一篇旅行日记，描述令人难忘的旅行经历。根据提示可知此处写的是一篇在北京的旅行日记，则需用日记格式，写明日期，星期，天气情况。正文则需描述去了北京的哪些地方，做了什么，吃了什么，感觉如何等等，这些都要在文章中有所体现。文章描述的是过去发生的事情，须使用一般过去时，动词用过去式。人称以第一人称“I和we”行文。注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将去北京旅行的经历进行了详细的描述，内容真实，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如：the capital city of；get off；to one's surprise；take photos；hear sb doing；look forward to doing等以及句型结构，如：How tired but happy we were today!（感叹句）；While we were on a boat on Kunming Lake, we heard someone singing the Beijing Opera on the bank.（时间状语从句）等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
6．One possible version:
Whenever I look back on old times, some memories shine bright and are vivid in mind.
I still remember the first time I learnt to ride a bike. That was one summer afternoon when I was seven years old. Father was very pleased to be my "coach". At first, I was too afraid to have a try. Father encouraged me a lot. Finally, after falling off the bike several times, I could ride. How excited I was! And this experience teaches me that nothing is difficult to the man who will try.
Now I like to ride my bike to school, to shops, to the park, to my friends' homes… It gives me a lot of pleasure.