2025年中考英语作文指导课课件

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Writing
I can improve my writing skills.
Guess what we are going to write about
The family dinner on Spring Festival Eve (年夜饭)
（20分） 满分档：
准确理解写作任务，文本长度符合要求、书写规范，
涵盖所有要点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，
词汇丰富，没有语法错误。
初中毕业生学业考试作文题评分标准
points
structure
language
Get the key points.
checklist
Prewriting
年夜饭是中国文化最重要的团圆饭。年夜饭菜肴丰富、美味，像年糕（New Year cake）、鱼等都还带有美好的祝愿。
请以 “ The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve” 为题，写一篇约110词的短文，向外国朋友介绍自己家乡的年夜饭，让他们更好地了解丰富多彩的文化习俗。
注意：1. 文中不可出现人名；
2. 标题已经给出，不计入总词数。
Circle the key points.
importance
meanings & wishes
cultures & customs
Spring Festival dishes
points
Make an outline（提纲）
Title : The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve
Beginning:
Paragraph 1 _________________
Body:
Paragraph 2 _________________
_________________
Ending:
Paragraph 3 _________________
b. importance of the dinner
a. meanings & wishes
c. Spring Festival dishes in your hometown
points
d. cultures & customs
a clear structure
Make an outline
Title: The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve
Beginning:
Paragraph 1
Body:
Paragraph 2
Spring Festival dishes
in your hometown
meanings or wishes
Ending : Paragraph 3
What traditional dishes do you have on Spring Festival Eve
What good meanings or best wishes do these dishes have
How do you like the dinner
traditional dishes good meanings or best wishes
to become better every year
to have more good luck every year
to have more than what we need
to have enough to spend every year
to get together with family
to enjoy a family reunion
New Year cake is a traditional dish. It means to have more good luck and become better every year.
b. New Year cake is a traditional dish in China and it means having more good luck as well as becoming better every year.
New Year cake is a traditional dish which/that means to have more luck and become better every year.
d. New Year cake, one of the traditional dishes in China, means we can become better every year.
We Chinese believe we can have more good luck every year so that we often have New Year cake as a traditional dish on Spring Festival Eve.
…
Compare these sentences
Which one/ones do you like
How do you improve these sentences
Fish is a traditional dish. It means we can have more than what we need every year.
Tangyuan is also a traditional dish. It means that the family will always be together.
Tips：use correct and good sentence patterns (使用正确优美的句式)
用which/that引导的定语从句；
用and, as well as, not only…but also… 等连接词连接的句子；
用有插入语的句子；
用改变主语的句子；
用你自己喜欢的好句子……
____________________, New Year cake is the first dish which means having good luck as well as becoming better next year.
_________________, Tangyuan, one of the traditional dishes in China, means that the family will always be together.
_________________, people like to eat fish so that they can have enough money to spend every year.
How do you make these sentences into a good paragraph
In my hometown, there are many traditional delicious foods at the dinner.
To start/ begin the dinner,
Besides/What’s more
Generally speaking, we Chinese people all like the dinner very much.
Lastly/Finally
use proper linking words （使用合适的连接词）
表示罗列的：first, second, third; first, then/next, after that, finally; for one thing, for another; on one hand, on the other hand; besides/ what's more/also …
表说明的：for example, in fact, actually …
表并列的：or, and, also, too, not only…but also, as well as, either…or …
表总结的：in short, in a word, after all, in general, generally speaking…
The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve
The family dinner on Spring Festival Eve is the most important dinner in traditional Chinese culture. On Spring Festival Eve, family members get together to enjoy the dinner.
There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks. Many of them usually have great meanings. For example, in Wenzhou, New Year cake is often the first dish which means “having more luck and becoming better” in Chinese pronunciation. Another dish is fish which has the meaning of “having more than we need”. Children all like this family dinner. At dinner they receive not only best wishes but also lucky money from their parents.
It is a Chinese tradition that we have kept for thousands of years.
中考范文
Checklist
Points
Structure
Language
Writing
假设你是李华，端午节假期即将来临，请你用英语给来自加拿大的交换生Frank写一封110词左右的电子邮件，邀请他来你家共度假期，并向他介绍端午节的传统和你的3天假期安排。 注意：1. 文中不可出现人名；2. 标题已经给出，不计入总词数。
Circle the key points.
Paragraph 2
a. _________________________________________________________________
(celebrate, the fifth day of the fifth lunar month …)
b. _________________________________________________________________
(to remember, Qu Yuan, who…)
Paragraph 3
Day 1 (go to the library, know about, …)
___________________________________________________________________
Day 2 (visit grandparents, learn to make Zongzi, traditional food …)
___________________________________________________________________
Day 3 (watch a boat race, exciting, …)
___________________________________________________________________
traditions
plans
an invitation
Beginning:
Paragraph 1 __________
Body:
Paragraph 2 __________
When Why
What Who …
Paragraph 3__________
Day 1
Day 2
Day 3
Ending:
Paragraph 4 __________
hopes
Paragraph 1 Dragon Boat Festival is coming soon. Can you come to get together with my family Now let me tell you about it.
Paragraph 4 I’m sure we will have a good time. I am looking forward to your reply.
Groupwork
Check with your group members and
choose the best one and share it with us.
Total __________________
Checklist Have your classmates written all the points？ （涵盖所有要点）
2. Have your classmates organized the points in a clear structure (组织清晰的结构)
3. Have your classmates used proper linking words （使用合适的连接词）
4. Have your classmates used correct and good sentence patterns （使用正确优美的句式）
Complete your passage.
Homework
Checklist
Have you written all the points？ （涵盖所有要点）
2. Have you organized the points in a clear structure
(组织清晰的结构)
3. Have you used proper linking words
（使用合适的连接词）
4. Have you used correct and good sentence patterns
（使用正确优美的句式）
Practice makes perfect!
Thank you!