读后续写--从麻木到希望：一罐奶粉引发的温暖救赎 讲义-浙江省G12名校协作体2025届高三下学期开学考试英语试题
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Right after I had my first son, I found myself with a surplus of baby formula (奶粉) I couldn’t use due to his stomach issues. Not wanting it to go to waste, I turned to a website for giving away items for free. Shortly afterward, a young woman from my small town reached out, expressing her desperate need for the formula. She explained that her husband had just passed away in an accident, leaving her in a difficult situation. Feeling a tug at my heart, immediately promised to save all the formula for her.
However, three days passed, and I heard nothing. I tried to connect her but failed. My husband suggested might be a cruel joke or maybe some sort of sick tricks. Unwilling to believe it, I decided to give it one last try.
This time I got through. In the telephone, I could hear the tiredness and strain in her voice as she mentioned, she’d just managed to pay her phone bill and had to wait until she could find a way to get closer to town. It was clear she was struggling. Trying to keep my tone neutral, I offered to send the formula to her house. After an awkward silence, she agreed and provided her address.
Once I hung up, I felt compelled to do more than just provide the formula. We checked her address and discovered she lived in a desolate part of town. Her cottage was situated in the middle of the desert, far removed from any public transportation. Realizing how tough her situation must be, I went through my pantry (食品储藏室) fridge, and freezer, gathering anything we could spare. In total, we filled three bags and a laundry hamper with food and essentials.
When we arrived at her home the next day, she welcomed us inside, her face devoid (没有) of emotion. The sight that greeted me was heartbreaking: her living space was almost empty, with only a single couch and a bare kitchen. Even when we unloaded the items, she still seemed almost numb, as if life had drained all the color from her. Without a word, she simply nodded, turned away, and mechanically began making a bottle for her son, her movements slow and detached.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: On the way back home, I couldn’t shake her from my mind.
Paragraph 2: Several weeks later; the woman came to me.
文章大意
“我” 因儿子肠胃问题有多余婴儿奶粉，在免费赠送物品的网站上，一位小镇年轻女子联系 “我”，称丈夫意外去世，急需奶粉。起初她失联几天，再次联系上后，“我” 得知她生活艰难，住处偏远，便决定不仅送奶粉，还准备了许多食物和生活用品。当 “我” 到达她家时，看到她生活环境简陋，她表情麻木，对 “我” 的帮助反应冷淡。
故事山分析
开端：“我” 有多余奶粉，准备免费赠送，女子联系 “我” 要奶粉。
发展：女子失联又联系上，“我” 了解她艰难处境，决定多提供帮助并前往她家。
高潮：看到女子生活环境恶劣，她对帮助反应麻木，让 “我” 内心触动。
结局（待续写）：“我” 后续如何持续帮助她，她的生活是否改善，两人关系如何发展。
伏笔及在续写中的回应
女子丈夫去世，生活艰难：在续写中，女子可能因生活困难面临新问题，“我” 继续帮助她解决，体现人性关怀。
女子对帮助反应麻木：暗示她内心创伤严重，续写中可能因 “我” 持续关心，逐渐打开心扉，有所改变。
“我” 决定做更多帮助：为续写中 “我” 持续提供帮助，组织募捐等行动做铺垫。
女子住处偏远：可能导致她生活不便，如获取物资困难，续写中 “我” 可以帮忙解决交通不便问题。
“我” 和女子建立联系：续写中联系会更加紧密，进一步发展两人关系，展现温暖主题。
续写要点
第一段：描述 “我” 回家路上一直想着女子，决定再次帮助她，如组织募捐、联系社区福利机构等，为帮助她做准备。
第二段：女子来找 “我”，可能是来感谢，也可能是又遇到困难。“我” 把准备的帮助告诉她，她被感动，有所改变，两人建立更深厚联系，展现善良传递的力量。
情感线
从看到女子麻木状态的心疼、揪心，到决定再次帮助时的坚定，女子来的时候，期待她改变，最后看到她改变时感到欣慰和温暖，情感逐步升华，体现善良带来的积极影响。
故事线
“我” 回家路上想着女子，决定再次帮助她。
“我” 组织募捐、联系福利机构等。
女子来找 “我”。
“我” 向女子说明准备的帮助。
女子被感动，有所改变。
“我” 和女子建立更深厚联系。
主旨升华句
This experience taught me that a small act of kindness can be a spark in the darkness, gradually lighting up someone's life and bringing hope.（这次经历让我明白，一个小小的善举可以是黑暗中的火花，逐渐照亮某人的生活并带来希望。）
Through our continuous efforts to help, we witnessed the power of love and compassion to heal wounds and transform lives, showing that kindness is a never - ending cycle.（通过我们持续的帮助努力，我们见证了爱与同情治愈创伤和改变生活的力量，表明善良是一个永不停歇的循环。）
In the face of her despair, our actions became a bridge of connection, proving that even strangers can build deep - seated bonds through acts of kindness.（面对她的绝望，我们的行动成为了连接的桥梁，证明即使是陌生人也能通过善举建立深厚的联系。）
This journey of helping has not only changed her life but also deepened my understanding of humanity, reminding me that we are all interconnected and have the ability to make a difference.（这段帮助的旅程不仅改变了她的生活，也加深了我对人性的理解，提醒我我们都是相互关联的，都有能力带来改变。）
As we saw the transformation in her, we realized that kindness is not just about giving material things but also about offering emotional support and building a community filled with warmth and care.（当我们看到她的转变时，我们意识到善良不仅仅是给予物质，更是提供情感支持，构建一个充满温暖和关爱的社区。）
写作示范一
On the way back home, I couldn’t shake her from my mind. Her empty living space and numb expression haunted me. I decided to do more. I called some of my friends and told them about her situation. Together, we organized a small donation drive. We collected clothes, toys, and more food. I also reached out to the local community welfare agency, hoping they could offer some long - term support.
Several weeks later, the woman came to me. Her face was no longer devoid of emotion. There was a glimmer of hope in her eyes. She thanked me profusely, her voice trembling with gratitude. I showed her all the donations and the support plan from the welfare agency. Tears welled up in her eyes, and for the first time, I saw a genuine smile on her face. From then on, we became friends, and I knew that our kindness had made a real difference in her life.
写作示范二
On the way back home, I couldn’t shake her from my mind. I was determined to find a way to truly change her situation. I started a crowdfunding campaign online, sharing her story with the public. The response was overwhelming. People from all over the town donated money, goods, and offered their help. I sorted through the donations, carefully packing the most needed items.
Several weeks later, the woman came to me. She was accompanied by her son. When she saw me, she rushed forward and hugged me tightly. She told me how much my actions had meant to her. With the money and support, she had been able to fix some things in her house and start looking for a job. Looking at her and her son, I knew that our collective kindness had given them a new start in life.
读后续写参考答案
On the way back home, I couldn’t shake her from my mind. My heart ached for the young woman and her son, their plight echoing in my thoughts. Determined to offer more support, I started researching local resources and support networks that could assist her. I even reached out to a nearby charity organization, explaining her situation and pleading for their help. The response was overwhelming----clothes, toys, and even monetary donations poured in. Each contribution filled me with a sense of warmth and hope, as if we were all part of a larger, compassionate tapestry. Faced with the heartwarming contributions, I prayed that our small gestures would bring them a semblance of comfort and hope.
Several weeks later; the woman came to me. She was visibly different----her face brightened with a smile I hadn’t seen before and her eyes, once tired and strained, now sparkled with gratitude. She thanked me profusely, holding her son in her arms, looking much more at ease. “Thank you for restoring our faith in humanity. Your kindness has given us strength to keep going.” she said, her voice filled with gratitude. Her joy and relief were so genuine that it moved me deeply. Observing the positive transformation in her bestowed upon me a sense of gratification and strengthened my belief in the power of kindness and community backing.
Right after I had my first son, I found myself with a surplus of baby formula (奶粉) I couldn’t use due to his stomach issues. Not wanting it to go to waste, I turned to a website for giving away items for free. Shortly afterward, a young woman from my small town reached out, expressing her desperate need for the formula. She explained that her husband had just passed away in an accident, leaving her in a difficult situation. Feeling a tug at my heart, immediately promised to save all the formula for her.
However, three days passed, and I heard nothing. I tried to connect her but failed. My husband suggested might be a cruel joke or maybe some sort of sick tricks. Unwilling to believe it, I decided to give it one last try.
This time I got through. In the telephone, I could hear the tiredness and strain in her voice as she mentioned, she’d just managed to pay her phone bill and had to wait until she could find a way to get closer to town. It was clear she was struggling. Trying to keep my tone neutral, I offered to send the formula to her house. After an awkward silence, she agreed and provided her address.
Once I hung up, I felt compelled to do more than just provide the formula. We checked her address and discovered she lived in a desolate part of town. Her cottage was situated in the middle of the desert, far removed from any public transportation. Realizing how tough her situation must be, I went through my pantry (食品储藏室) fridge, and freezer, gathering anything we could spare. In total, we filled three bags and a laundry hamper with food and essentials.
When we arrived at her home the next day, she welcomed us inside, her face devoid (没有) of emotion. The sight that greeted me was heartbreaking: her living space was almost empty, with only a single couch and a bare kitchen. Even when we unloaded the items, she still seemed almost numb, as if life had drained all the color from her. Without a word, she simply nodded, turned away, and mechanically began making a bottle for her son, her movements slow and detached.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: On the way back home, I couldn’t shake her from my mind.
Paragraph 2: Several weeks later; the woman came to me.
文章大意
“我” 因儿子肠胃问题有多余婴儿奶粉，在免费赠送物品的网站上，一位小镇年轻女子联系 “我”，称丈夫意外去世，急需奶粉。起初她失联几天，再次联系上后，“我” 得知她生活艰难，住处偏远，便决定不仅送奶粉，还准备了许多食物和生活用品。当 “我” 到达她家时，看到她生活环境简陋，她表情麻木，对 “我” 的帮助反应冷淡。
故事山分析
开端：“我” 有多余奶粉，准备免费赠送，女子联系 “我” 要奶粉。
发展：女子失联又联系上，“我” 了解她艰难处境，决定多提供帮助并前往她家。
高潮：看到女子生活环境恶劣，她对帮助反应麻木，让 “我” 内心触动。
结局（待续写）：“我” 后续如何持续帮助她，她的生活是否改善，两人关系如何发展。
伏笔及在续写中的回应
女子丈夫去世，生活艰难：在续写中，女子可能因生活困难面临新问题，“我” 继续帮助她解决，体现人性关怀。
女子对帮助反应麻木：暗示她内心创伤严重，续写中可能因 “我” 持续关心，逐渐打开心扉，有所改变。
“我” 决定做更多帮助：为续写中 “我” 持续提供帮助，组织募捐等行动做铺垫。
女子住处偏远：可能导致她生活不便，如获取物资困难，续写中 “我” 可以帮忙解决交通不便问题。
“我” 和女子建立联系：续写中联系会更加紧密，进一步发展两人关系，展现温暖主题。
续写要点
第一段：描述 “我” 回家路上一直想着女子，决定再次帮助她，如组织募捐、联系社区福利机构等，为帮助她做准备。
第二段：女子来找 “我”，可能是来感谢，也可能是又遇到困难。“我” 把准备的帮助告诉她，她被感动，有所改变，两人建立更深厚联系，展现善良传递的力量。
情感线
从看到女子麻木状态的心疼、揪心，到决定再次帮助时的坚定，女子来的时候，期待她改变，最后看到她改变时感到欣慰和温暖，情感逐步升华，体现善良带来的积极影响。
故事线
“我” 回家路上想着女子，决定再次帮助她。
“我” 组织募捐、联系福利机构等。
女子来找 “我”。
“我” 向女子说明准备的帮助。
女子被感动，有所改变。
“我” 和女子建立更深厚联系。
主旨升华句
This experience taught me that a small act of kindness can be a spark in the darkness, gradually lighting up someone's life and bringing hope.（这次经历让我明白，一个小小的善举可以是黑暗中的火花，逐渐照亮某人的生活并带来希望。）
Through our continuous efforts to help, we witnessed the power of love and compassion to heal wounds and transform lives, showing that kindness is a never - ending cycle.（通过我们持续的帮助努力，我们见证了爱与同情治愈创伤和改变生活的力量，表明善良是一个永不停歇的循环。）
In the face of her despair, our actions became a bridge of connection, proving that even strangers can build deep - seated bonds through acts of kindness.（面对她的绝望，我们的行动成为了连接的桥梁，证明即使是陌生人也能通过善举建立深厚的联系。）
This journey of helping has not only changed her life but also deepened my understanding of humanity, reminding me that we are all interconnected and have the ability to make a difference.（这段帮助的旅程不仅改变了她的生活，也加深了我对人性的理解，提醒我我们都是相互关联的，都有能力带来改变。）
As we saw the transformation in her, we realized that kindness is not just about giving material things but also about offering emotional support and building a community filled with warmth and care.（当我们看到她的转变时，我们意识到善良不仅仅是给予物质，更是提供情感支持，构建一个充满温暖和关爱的社区。）
写作示范一
On the way back home, I couldn’t shake her from my mind. Her empty living space and numb expression haunted me. I decided to do more. I called some of my friends and told them about her situation. Together, we organized a small donation drive. We collected clothes, toys, and more food. I also reached out to the local community welfare agency, hoping they could offer some long - term support.
Several weeks later, the woman came to me. Her face was no longer devoid of emotion. There was a glimmer of hope in her eyes. She thanked me profusely, her voice trembling with gratitude. I showed her all the donations and the support plan from the welfare agency. Tears welled up in her eyes, and for the first time, I saw a genuine smile on her face. From then on, we became friends, and I knew that our kindness had made a real difference in her life.
写作示范二
On the way back home, I couldn’t shake her from my mind. I was determined to find a way to truly change her situation. I started a crowdfunding campaign online, sharing her story with the public. The response was overwhelming. People from all over the town donated money, goods, and offered their help. I sorted through the donations, carefully packing the most needed items.
Several weeks later, the woman came to me. She was accompanied by her son. When she saw me, she rushed forward and hugged me tightly. She told me how much my actions had meant to her. With the money and support, she had been able to fix some things in her house and start looking for a job. Looking at her and her son, I knew that our collective kindness had given them a new start in life.
读后续写参考答案
On the way back home, I couldn’t shake her from my mind. My heart ached for the young woman and her son, their plight echoing in my thoughts. Determined to offer more support, I started researching local resources and support networks that could assist her. I even reached out to a nearby charity organization, explaining her situation and pleading for their help. The response was overwhelming----clothes, toys, and even monetary donations poured in. Each contribution filled me with a sense of warmth and hope, as if we were all part of a larger, compassionate tapestry. Faced with the heartwarming contributions, I prayed that our small gestures would bring them a semblance of comfort and hope.
Several weeks later; the woman came to me. She was visibly different----her face brightened with a smile I hadn’t seen before and her eyes, once tired and strained, now sparkled with gratitude. She thanked me profusely, holding her son in her arms, looking much more at ease. “Thank you for restoring our faith in humanity. Your kindness has given us strength to keep going.” she said, her voice filled with gratitude. Her joy and relief were so genuine that it moved me deeply. Observing the positive transformation in her bestowed upon me a sense of gratification and strengthened my belief in the power of kindness and community backing.