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Unit 1 Animal Friends
教学 课题 第5课时 单元写作指导
课时 教学 目标 1.能够用英文写一篇短文,介绍自己最喜欢的动物,包括外貌、性格、能力、重要性及人类该如何给予保护; 2.学会珍爱动物,并呼吁人们共同保护动物,共建和谐生态共同体。
核心 语言 知识 核心句式: (1)This is…/These are… (2)There is…/There are… (3)My favourite animal is… (4)I like…because they are… (5)I don't like…because they are…
课堂 导学 ◆Step 1 写作积累 1.话题词汇 (1)狐狸 (2)长颈鹿 (3)鹰 (4)狼 (5)企鹅 (6)蛇 (7)鲨鱼 (8)鲸 Keys:(1)fox (2)giraffe (3)eagle (4)wolf (5)penguin (6)snake (7)shark (8)whale 2.话题短语 (1)……的象征 (2)好运 (3)与……不同 (4)互相 (5)处于危险之中 (6)砍伐;减少 (7)拿起;举起 Keys:(1)a symbol of (2)good luck (3)be different from (4)one another (5)in danger (6)cut down (7)pick up 3.佳句积累 (1)它们是好运的象征。 (2)大象也很善良。 (3)大象会照顾其他身体不舒服的大象。 (4)大象是泰国生活和文化的重要组成部分。 (5)让我们拯救森林,不买象牙制品。 (6)每头大象都很重要。 Keys:(1)They are a symbol of good luck. (2)Elephants are very kind too. (3)Elephants look after other elephants when they don't feel well. (4)Elephants are an important part of Thai life and culture. (5)Let's save the forests and not buy things made of ivory. (6)Every elephant counts. ◆Step 2 例文研析 1.写作任务 动物是人类的好朋友,你一定有自己最喜欢的动物。请你以“My Favourite Animal”为题,根据下面的思维导图和要求写一篇英语短文,介绍你最喜欢的动物。 要求:(1)短文必须包含提示内容,可适当发挥;(2)80 词左右,语句通顺,条理清晰。
课堂 导学 2.思路点拨 本次写作任务为介绍自己最喜欢的动物,人称使用第一人称和第三人称,时态使用一般现在时,具体可以从以下几个方面展开。 Beginning:介绍自己最喜欢的动物是什么,并说明原因。 Body:介绍动物的外貌、性格、能力。 Ending:介绍动物的重要性及对动物的保护。 3.范文借鉴 My Favourite Animal My favourite animal is the monkey.It usually lives in the forest.It is very clever.The monkey is good at climbing trees.It likes to eat fruit.Bananas are its favourite fruit.Some monkeys live in the zoo.Children love to see them.They often give some bananas to the monkeys. But some monkeys are in danger now.We must protect them.First,we shouldn't cut down trees.Next,when we visit a zoo,we shouldn't feed them.Finally,we should tell people around us about the importance of animals. ◆Step 3 类文训练 大熊猫是我们的国宝,它非常可爱。请你以“My Favourite Animal”为题介绍大熊猫,为中国文化的保护与宣传尽一份力。词数不少于60词。 Useful expressions: 1.I like…very much./ …is my favourite animal./My favourite animal is… 2.She is from… 3.She is beautiful.She is black and white…(外貌) 4.She is kind of cute/strong…(特征) 5.She can… 6.She eats… 7.She lives in… 8.I like…because… One possible version: My Favourite Animal My favourite animal is a panda named Xiaohua.I like her very much.She's from China.She is five years old.She is beautiful.She is black and white.She is kind of shy. I like Xiaohua because she's very cute.She eats bamboo every day.She can climb the trees and swim in the water.She lives in the zoo near my home.I usually visit her at weekends. Pandas are our national treasure.They are also our friends.We should be kind to the animals.And don't kill them.
课堂 小结 (板书) Unit 1 单元写作指导 Sentences: (1)This is…/These are… (2)There is…/There are… (3)My favourite animal is… (4)I like…because they are… (5)I don't like…because they are……
作业 布置 1.Review the new words in Unit 1. 2.Design a zoo.Draw a map of your zoo.Choose some animals you like for your zoo.Introduce your own zoo to your parents and then in class.
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Unit 5 Animal Friends
第5课时 单元写作指导
写作积累
一、话题词汇
giraffe
狐狸
长颈鹿
fox
鹰
企鹅
蛇
狼
wolf
penguin
eagle
snake
鲨鱼
...的象征
shark
写作积累
鲸
好运
whale
the symbol of
good luck
与...不同
each other
互相、彼此
be different from
处于危险中
be in danger
砍伐
cut down
写作积累
捡起，拾起
pick up
二、佳句积累
1.他们是好运的象征。_____________________________________________
2.大象也很善良。
______________________________________________
3.大象会照顾其它身体不舒服的大象。 ______________________________________________
4.大象在泰国的生活和文化中起着重要的角色。______________________________________________
They are a symbol of good luck.
Elephants are very kind too.
Elephants look after other elephants when they don’t feel well.
Elephants are an important part of Thai life and culture.
写作积累
5.让我们拯救森林不买象牙制品。
______________________________________________
6.每头大象都很重要。
_______________________________________________
写作积累
Every elephant counts.
Let’s save the forests and not buy things made of ivory.
例文研析
一、写作任务
动物是人类的好朋友，你一定有自己最喜欢的动物。请你以“My Favorite Animal”为题，根据下面的思维导图和要求写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的科目。
要求：
1.短文必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥。
2. 80 词左右，语句通顺，条理清晰。
二、思路点拨
例文研析
二、思路点拨
例文研析
三、范文借鉴
My Favourite Animal
My favourite animal is the monkey . It usually lives in the forest . It is very clever . The monkey is good at climbing trees . It likes to eat fruit . Bananas are its favourite fruit . Some monkeys live in the zoo . Children love to see them. They often give some bananas to the monkeys .
例文研析
三、范文借鉴
But some monkeys are in danger now.We must protect them.First,we shouldn’t cut down too many trees.Next,when we visit a zoo, we shouldn’t feed them too much.Finally, we should tell people around us about the importance of animals.
例文研析
大熊猫是我们的国宝，它非常可爱。请你以“My Favourite Animal”为题发帖介绍大熊猫，为中国文化的保护与宣传尽一份力。
Useful expressions:
1. I like ... very much./ ... is my favourite animal./My favourite animal is ...
2. She is from ...
3. She is beautiful, she is black and white ...(外貌)
4. She is kind of cute/strong ...(特征)
5. She can ...
6. She eats ...
7. She lives in ...
8. I like ... because ...
类文训练
One possible version:
My friend Beibei is a panda. I like her very much. She’s from China. She is five years old. She is black and white. She is kind of shy.
I like Beibei because she’s very cute. She eats bamboo every day. She can climb the trees and swim in the water. Isn’t she beautiful She lives in Beijing Zoo now.
Pandas are our national treasure, they are also our friends, we should be kind to the animals.And don't kill them.
类文训练
Homework
1.Review the new words in Unit 1.
2.Design a zoo.Draw a map of your zoo.Choose some animals you like for your zoo.Introduce your own zoo to your parents and then in class.(共15张PPT)
第5课时 话题写作指导
写作指导
类文训练
话题分析
该单元的写作话题为“动物”。该话题的写作内容主要是动物的特征、生活习性以及我们与动物之间命运共生的关系等。
话题分析
【写作任务】
动物是人类的朋友,我们应该善待动物,与动物和谐相处。凶猛矫健的东北虎,憨态可掬的大熊猫,活泼可爱的宠物狗……每一种动物对生态系统都至关重要。生物多样性是人类赖以生存的条件,是社会经济可持续发展的基础,是生态安全的重要保障。
假如你是李华,请根据以下提示,以“My Favourite Animal”为题,写一篇70词左右的英语短文,向校报英文专栏投稿。
写作指导
提示:1.你最喜欢什么动物 2.介绍它的外貌和
生活习性。3.你喜欢它的理由。
要求:1.参考词汇仅供参考;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
【思路点拨】
第一步:审题 体裁: 人称: 时态:
第二步:列提纲
记叙文
第三人称
一般现在时
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
1.As we all know,there are many animals around us.
我们都知道,我们周围有很多种动物。
2.Of ,I like pandas best.
在所有的动物中,我最喜欢熊猫。
kinds
of
all
the
animals
中间句:
1.They have round faces, and fat bodies.
它们有圆圆的脸,又大又黑的眼睛和肥胖的身体。
2.Pandas like bamboo.熊猫喜欢吃竹子。
3.They half of their day and most of the rest
time .
一天中它们用一半的时间来吃饭,其余的大部分时间用来睡觉。
4.They people.它们对人很友好。
5.When I go to the zoo,I always them first.
当我去动物园的时候,我总是先看它们。
big
black
eyes
eating
spend
eating
sleeping
are
friendly
to
look
at
结尾句:
Now I them again.现在我迫不及待地想再见到它们。
can’t
wait
to
see
名言名句:
1.The same sky,the same home.同一片天空,同一个家园。
2.Without animals,life is powerless.没有动物,生命没有了动力。
【范文品鉴】
My Favourite Animal
As we all know,there are many kinds of animals around us.Some are cute.Some are scary.But they are all our good friends.Of all the animals,I like pandas best.(引入话题)
Pandas are black and white.They have round faces,big black eyes and fat bodies.(外貌) They are one of the most lovely animals in the world.They mainly live in China’s Sichuan,Shaanxi and Gansu Provinces.Pandas like eating bamboo.They spend half of their day eating and most of the rest time sleeping.(生活习性)
Pandas are big and lovely.They are friendly to people. When I go to the zoo,I always look at them first. Now I can’t wait to see them again.(和谐期待)
类文训练
假如你是上海动物园的志愿讲解员,请你根据以下信息提示,写一篇70词左右的英语讲解词来介绍动物明星多多。
名字 多多
物种 亚洲象(Asian elephant)
家乡 缅甸(Myanmar)
喜欢的活动 洗淋浴;用象鼻和大家打招呼
喜欢的食物 青草(grass);各种水果和蔬菜
观看注意事项 请勿投喂
要求:1.讲解词须包含所有信息提示,可适当发挥;
2.讲解词的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Welcome to Shanghai Zoo.
Thanks for your listening!
One possible version:
Welcome to Shanghai Zoo. I’d like to show an elephant to you.Its name is Duoduo.It is an Asian elephant.It comes from Myanmar.It likes taking a shower and saying hello to everyone with its long trunk.It likes eating grass.It also likes eating all kinds of fruit and vegetables.Please don’t feed anything to the elephant.
Thanks for your listening!
