书面表达
备战2025年中考英语新课标（核心素养）一轮复习之题型特训
【基础题】
A
岁月不负追梦人。谭盾的音乐梦始于兴趣，韦伯的篮球梦敬于执着，赫本的演员梦久于大善。最近，你班就 “Our dreams” 展开了一次讨论。下面是你们小组的谈论情况汇总，请你根据所给要点写一篇英语短文向英语校刊投稿。
Name Dream
Jimmy 想当侦探，找出真相，防范危险。
Millie 想当舞蹈家，搭建东西方艺术的桥梁。
I 想当青少年辅导员，帮助青少年解决压力问题。
为了实现梦想，努力学习，…… (自拟一点)
参考词汇：侦探 detective 青少年辅导员 youth worker 压力 stress
防范危险 guard against any possible danger around us
搭建东西方艺术的桥梁 build a bridge between the East and the West
注意：
1. 短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 不得出现真实姓名，校名等；省略号处作适当发挥；
3. 90 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Our dreams
Recently, we have held a discussion to talk about our dreams. Here is the report about our ideas. _________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
B
请结合下图内容及提示，以“My ______ Birthday Memory”为题写一篇英文日志，以备在英语课上和师生分享。
提示：
1. 结合自身体验，用适当的形容词补全标题；
2. 短文须包含图中所有信息，并适当拓展；
3. 词数80-100（首句已给出），文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
My ________ Birthday Memory
Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. I have a(n) _________ birthday memory. Let me tell you about it. ____________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
C
《中学生英语报》开展了以“How to be a better teenager”为题的活动，讨论如何成为优秀的青少年。现在该报正在向各校学生征文。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇征文，可适当发挥。
要点如下：
◆在学校：上课认真听讲；按时完成作业；不准打耳洞；不准带手机；
◆在家里：帮助做家务；不和父母顶嘴，多与父母沟通；
◆在公众场所：应该主动给老人让座；不乱扔垃圾；不听嘈杂的音乐。
参考词汇：in public places在公共场所；throw rubbish 扔垃圾。
要求：
1.所写内容须包括所有所给信息，可适当发挥。
2.不得出现真实的人名或校名。
3.词数不少于80词，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How to be a better teenager
Every student wants to be a better teenager. But what can we do to be better Here are my suggestions.
At school, _________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
By following these suggestions, we can not only improve ourself but also make the world a better place!
【提升题】
A
学校的英语角正在举行征文比赛，让大家写一写对目前校园生活的感受，你也来参加吧！下面来看一下具体要求：
1. 对于现在的校园生活，你喜欢和不喜欢的部分分别是什么？请说出你的原因或看法；
2. 对于不喜欢的部分，你希望学校做出怎样的改变？
注意：
1. 内容完整，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
3. 词数80~100，短文开头已给出，不记入总词数。
I’m a student in Grade 9. Now I’d like to talk about what I feel about my school life.______
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
B
强国有我！作为祖国未来的建设者和接班人，青少年学生要努力成长为堪当大任的栋梁之材。假如你是李华，你校校园网站开展了以“How to be a civilized (文明的) student”为题的征文活动，请你根据下列提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。
参考表达：wait in line, communicate with, volunteer to,...
注意：
1）短文须包括上述全部要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2）文中不要出现真实的姓名和校名；
3）词数：80-100左右。
How to be a civilized student
As we all know, our school is building a civilized school.____________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
C
俗话说“生活处处有惊喜”。为了让同学们留意身边的美好，你校英文报以此为主题面向全校学生征文。请根据以下提示和要求，以“My unexpected surprise”为题，用英语写一篇关于自己经历的短文进行投稿。
提示：
1. 你的意外惊喜来自你的父母；
2. 你的父母是如何让你感到惊喜的；
3. 你的感慨。
要求：
1. 短文中应包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 不少于70词 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
My unexpected surprise
Life is full of surprises, often from those we least expect. ___________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【拔高题】
A
时间飞逝，难忘的2023在身后渐行渐远，不知不觉我们已经沐浴在2024的阳光里。过去的一年你一定有所收获，新的一年你也一定有所期待。请以“Say goodbye to 2023, and say hi to 2024”为题，用英文写一篇短文，内容必须包含表格中所有要点。
总结2023 收获：结交了很多朋友；学习了更多知识；掌握了一些技能。 感谢：(对象及原因)
计划2024 1、努力学习，进入理想高中； 2、读几本好书，提升自我； 3、(至少再列举一条计划并阐述其目的)
注意：
1. 100词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Say goodbye to 2023, and say hi to 2024
How time flies! The year of 2023 has been over.___________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I believe I can meet a better myself in 2024.
B
青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》抖音官方公众号专设Teens Talk专栏，其主编Sigmund Friend发布了一个视频，鼓励大家分享成长过程中的烦恼及解决办法，以下为Sigmund Friend视频发言内容。你作为青少年在观看主编的视频后，打算结合自己亲身经历进行评论回复。
注意事项：
1）评论内容须自拟，根据视频内容要求，语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2）词数在100左右，评论开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3）评论中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Nice to meet you, teenagers.
During the growth, we will meet many problems. These problems may come from study, relationships, family and so on. In the face of these troubles, we must learn to deal with them correctly. Also, people around us, people we admire, may give us a helping hand. Sometimes an important thing or even our hobbies may help us. These difficulties allow us to grow and make us stronger.
Do you have problems How did you solve it What else do you want to share with other teenagers Please write them down to comment (评论) on Tiktok.
If your comment is chosen, a gift will be provided.
Dear Friend,
I’d like to tell you about the problem I had during the growth.______________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This is my experience. Hope to be of some value to you.
C
法国作家雨果曾说，“进步，才是人应该有的现象”。步入九年级，学习与生活都会与以往有所不同。请你结合自身情况，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈这两个多月你的变化，向校报英语角投稿。要点如下：
1. 步入九年级后的各方面变化：
① 学习方面：增加一门学科 —— 化学，各学科学习方法的变化；
② 人际交往方面：与父母、老师或同学的关系；
③ 其他方面：……
2. 总结反思自己的进步和不足之处。
注意：
1. 词数为90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不出现真实姓名及学校名称。
How time flies! It’s over two months since I became a student in Grade Nine. ___________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________书面表达
备战2025年中考英语新课标（核心素养）一轮复习之题型特训
【基础题】
A
岁月不负追梦人。谭盾的音乐梦始于兴趣，韦伯的篮球梦敬于执着，赫本的演员梦久于大善。最近，你班就 “Our dreams” 展开了一次讨论。下面是你们小组的谈论情况汇总，请你根据所给要点写一篇英语短文向英语校刊投稿。
Name Dream
Jimmy 想当侦探，找出真相，防范危险。
Millie 想当舞蹈家，搭建东西方艺术的桥梁。
I 想当青少年辅导员，帮助青少年解决压力问题。
为了实现梦想，努力学习，…… (自拟一点)
参考词汇：侦探 detective 青少年辅导员 youth worker 压力 stress
防范危险 guard against any possible danger around us
搭建东西方艺术的桥梁 build a bridge between the East and the West
注意：
1. 短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 不得出现真实姓名，校名等；省略号处作适当发挥；
3. 90 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Our dreams
Recently, we have held a discussion to talk about our dreams. Here is the report about our ideas. _________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Our dreams
Recently, we have held a discussion to talk about our dreams. Here is the report about our ideas. Jimmy wants to be a detective. He is good at solving mysteries and he can always find out the truth. In addition, he hopes we can guard against any possible danger around us.
Millie would like to be a dancer. All her teachers and classmates think she has a real gift for Chinese ballet. So she insists that she will build a bridge between the East and the West by dancing.
As for me, I prefer to be a youth worker, especially to help teenagers solve their stress. I’m willing to give them valuable suggestions on how to deal with teenage problems.
In order to realize our dreams, we must study hard to improve ourselves. Moreover, we should be brave enough to take on new challenges any time in our daily life. Then we can succeed in making our dreams come true.
【难度】0.85
【知识点】青少年问题、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括Jimmy、Millie以及“我”的梦想，并要求包含为实现梦想所采取的行动。考生需围绕这些要点展开，确保内容全面，并适当发挥以丰富文章内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入话题，直接点明文章主题，即关于梦想的讨论报告；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先分别介绍Jimmy、Millie以及“我”的梦想，并简要说明各自梦想背后的意义或动机；
第三步，书写结语。强调梦想的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①solve mysteries解开谜团
②guard against预防，提防
③have a real gift for对……有天赋
[高分句型]
①He is good at solving mysteries and he can always find out the truth.（并列句）
②All her teachers and classmates think she has a real gift for Chinese ballet.（宾语从句）
B
请结合下图内容及提示，以“My ______ Birthday Memory”为题写一篇英文日志，以备在英语课上和师生分享。
提示：
1. 结合自身体验，用适当的形容词补全标题；
2. 短文须包含图中所有信息，并适当拓展；
3. 词数80-100（首句已给出），文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
My ________ Birthday Memory
Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. I have a(n) _________ birthday memory. Let me tell you about it. ____________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
My Unforgettable Birthday Memory
Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. I have an unforgettable birthday memory. Let me tell you about it. My birthday was on January 20th. Among all the people who were with me, my best friend Lily stood out the most in my memory. On that day, Lily came to my house early in the morning with a beautiful gift. She also brought me my favorite chocolate cake. In the afternoon, we watched a funny movie together and laughed a lot. In the evening, we had a small party with my family.
I think that it was an unforgettable birthday memory. Lily’s thoughtful gift and our happy moments together made me feel very warm and loved. I am grateful to have such a good friend like her.
【难度】0.85
【知识点】个人庆典
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇英文日志；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、补全标题，开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步、描述自己的生日记忆，包括生日的日期、人物以及活动等；
第三步、介绍自己的感受以及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①stand out脱颖而出
②bring sb. sth.给某人带某物
③make sb. do sth.让某人做某事
④be grateful to do sth.感激做某事
[高分句型]
①Among all the people who were with me, my best friend Lily stood out the most in my memory.(who引导限制性定语从句)
C
《中学生英语报》开展了以“How to be a better teenager”为题的活动，讨论如何成为优秀的青少年。现在该报正在向各校学生征文。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇征文，可适当发挥。
要点如下：
◆在学校：上课认真听讲；按时完成作业；不准打耳洞；不准带手机；
◆在家里：帮助做家务；不和父母顶嘴，多与父母沟通；
◆在公众场所：应该主动给老人让座；不乱扔垃圾；不听嘈杂的音乐。
参考词汇：in public places在公共场所；throw rubbish 扔垃圾。
要求：
1.所写内容须包括所有所给信息，可适当发挥。
2.不得出现真实的人名或校名。
3.词数不少于80词，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How to be a better teenager
Every student wants to be a better teenager. But what can we do to be better Here are my suggestions.
At school, _________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
By following these suggestions, we can not only improve ourself but also make the world a better place!
【答案】
How to be a better teenager
Every student wants to be a better teenager. But what can we do to be better Here are my suggestions.
At school, we should listen to our teachers carefully in class and finish our homework on time. Besides, we are not allowed to get our ears pierced or bring mobile phones to school.
At home, we are supposed to help our parents with housework. Moreover, we are not supposed to talk back to our parents. It’s impolite. We are expected to communicate with them more often. Through communication, we can understand each other better.
In public places, we should offer our seats to the old. We can’t throw rubbish everywhere. What’s more, we’d better not listen to music that’s loud.
By following these suggestions, we can not only improve ourselves but also make the world a better place!
【难度】0.85
【知识点】青少年问题、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，讨论如何成为优秀的青少年；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，因为是在讨论普遍适用的行为准则；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括在学校、家里和公众场所的行为规范。考生需确保覆盖所有要点，并可以适当发挥，增加细节或例子来支持论点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。在开头部分，通过提问“But what can we do to be better ”引出主题，即如何成为更好的青少年，并紧接着提出“Here are my suggestions.”来引出下文的具体建议；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。在学校部分，从“上课认真听讲；按时完成作业”这两个基本的学习要求出发，强调它们对于成为优秀青少年的重要性。接着，提出“不准打耳洞；不准带手机”等校规，说明这些规定有助于青少年专注于学习和保持学生形象；在家里部分，强调“帮助做家务”可以培养青少年的责任感和独立性，同时指出“不和父母顶嘴，多与父母沟通”是建立和谐家庭关系的关键；在公众场所部分通过“应该主动给老人让座；不乱扔垃圾；不听嘈杂的音乐”等行为规范，展现青少年的礼貌、环保意识和对他人的尊重；
第三步，书写结语。在结尾部分，通过“By following these suggestions, we can not only improve ourself but also make the world a better place!”这句话总结全文，强调遵循这些建议对个人成长和社会进步的积极作用，同时呼应开头，使文章结构完整。
[亮点词汇]
①be supposed to应该
②on time准时
③get one’s ears pierced打耳洞
[高分句型]
①We should listen to our teachers carefully in class and finish our homework on time.（and连接两个并列的谓语）
②We are not allowed to get our ears pierced or bring mobile phones to school.（or连接两个并列的不定式短语作宾语补足语）
③It’s impolite for us not to talk back to our parents.（It's+形容词+for sb. to do sth.句型）
【提升题】
A
学校的英语角正在举行征文比赛，让大家写一写对目前校园生活的感受，你也来参加吧！下面来看一下具体要求：
1. 对于现在的校园生活，你喜欢和不喜欢的部分分别是什么？请说出你的原因或看法；
2. 对于不喜欢的部分，你希望学校做出怎样的改变？
注意：
1. 内容完整，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
3. 词数80~100，短文开头已给出，不记入总词数。
I’m a student in Grade 9. Now I’d like to talk about what I feel about my school life.______
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
I’m a student in Grade 9. Now I’d like to talk about what I feel about my school life.
I like my teachers even though they are strict to me sometimes. They are really kind and helpful. They work hard to make their classes easy and full of fun. They also encourage us to believe in ourselves and improve ourselves. And I’m really happy that we take a 15-minute break now. I like playing sports with my friends and we have a lot of fun.
But I think our school life is a little boring. Working hard is not the only thing we should do. I hope our school can plan more fun things for us to make our school life more colorful.
【难度】0.65
【知识点】个人信息、学校信息、学校人员、文体活动
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，说明自己对学校生活的总体感受。
第二步，详细介绍自己对老师的看法和课间活动的乐趣。
第三步，提出对学校生活的建议，呼吁学校增加更多有趣的活动。
[亮点词汇]
①be strict to 对……严格
②encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事
③take a break 休息
[高分句型]
①I like my teachers even though they are strict to me sometimes.（even though引导的让步状语从句）
②I hope our school can plan more fun things for us to make our school life more colorful.（省略that的宾语从句）
B
强国有我！作为祖国未来的建设者和接班人，青少年学生要努力成长为堪当大任的栋梁之材。假如你是李华，你校校园网站开展了以“How to be a civilized (文明的) student”为题的征文活动，请你根据下列提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。
参考表达：wait in line, communicate with, volunteer to,...
注意：
1）短文须包括上述全部要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2）文中不要出现真实的姓名和校名；
3）词数：80-100左右。
How to be a civilized student
As we all know, our school is building a civilized school.____________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
How to be a civilized student
As we all know, our school is building a civilized school. As students, we should try to be civilized students.
First, we need to be polite at school. When we meet teachers, we should greet them politely. Also, it is important to wait in line during the lunch time. At home, we should be nice kids. We can communicate more with our parents and make them happy. Besides, we’d better help do some housework like doing the dishes. At society, it is a good idea to be a volunteer and help clean up the street.
As long as we try our best, we can be civilized students and our school will be proud of us!
【难度】0.65
【知识点】意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，具体介绍如何成为一名文明学生；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①need to do需要做某事
②help do some housework帮助做一些家务
③clean up the street清理街道
[高分句型]
①When we meet teachers, we should greet them politely. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②As long as we try our best, we can be civilized students and our school will be proud of us! (as long as引导条件状语从句)
C
俗话说“生活处处有惊喜”。为了让同学们留意身边的美好，你校英文报以此为主题面向全校学生征文。请根据以下提示和要求，以“My unexpected surprise”为题，用英语写一篇关于自己经历的短文进行投稿。
提示：
1. 你的意外惊喜来自你的父母；
2. 你的父母是如何让你感到惊喜的；
3. 你的感慨。
要求：
1. 短文中应包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 不少于70词 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
My unexpected surprise
Life is full of surprises, often from those we least expect. ___________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
My unexpected surprise
Life is full of surprises, often from those we least expect. Now I will tell you a story about a nice surprise of mine.
That day was my birthday. When school was over, I quickly walked home. But to my surprise, my parents weren’t at home. I felt very sad. I thought they forgot my birthday. Suddenly, the door was opened. My parents held a big cake and said “ Happy Birthday!”. I was so surprised that I couldn’t say a word. Then we enjoyed the cake together.
After this, I learn that parents love their children all the time.
【难度】0.65
【知识点】叙事忆旧、个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，生活处处充满惊喜；
第二步，具体阐述作者的父母如何让作者感到惊喜；
第三步，书写结语，表达作者感受。
[亮点词汇]
①to my surprise令我惊讶的是
②so...that...如此……以至于……
③all the time一直
[高分句型]
①When school was over, I quickly walked home. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②After this, I learn that parents love their children all the time. (that引导的宾语从句)
【拔高题】
A
时间飞逝，难忘的2023在身后渐行渐远，不知不觉我们已经沐浴在2024的阳光里。过去的一年你一定有所收获，新的一年你也一定有所期待。请以“Say goodbye to 2023, and say hi to 2024”为题，用英文写一篇短文，内容必须包含表格中所有要点。
总结2023 收获：结交了很多朋友；学习了更多知识；掌握了一些技能。 感谢：(对象及原因)
计划2024 1、努力学习，进入理想高中； 2、读几本好书，提升自我； 3、(至少再列举一条计划并阐述其目的)
注意：
1. 100词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Say goodbye to 2023, and say hi to 2024
How time flies! The year of 2023 has been over.___________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I believe I can meet a better myself in 2024.
【答案】
Say goodbye to 2023, and say hi to 2024
How time flies! The year of 2023 has been over.
In the past year, I have gained a lot. I made a lot of new friends with the same interests, learned more new knowledge and mastered some useful skills. I would like to thank my classmates who helped me with my schoolwork, my teachers who taught me knowledge, and my parents who took good care of me. Looking ahead to 2024, I also had some new plans. First, I will work harder and try my best to enter my ideal high school. Second, I want to read some good books to improve myself. Last, I will eat healthy food and exercise more to keep fit, so that I can be ready for new challenges.
I believe I can meet a better myself in 2024.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】个人经历、计划
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般将来时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总结2023年的收获，如结交朋友、学习知识和掌握技能；
第二步，表达感谢，包括感谢老师的指导和朋友的陪伴；
第三步，规划2024年，包括努力学习、读好书、自我提升和定期锻炼。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot很多
②take good care of好好照顾
[高分句型]
①I would like to thank my classmates who helped me with my schoolwork, my teachers who taught me knowledge, and my parents who took good care of me.（定语从句）
②Last, I will eat healthy food and exercise more to keep fit, so that I can be ready for new challenges.（状语从句）
B
青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》抖音官方公众号专设Teens Talk专栏，其主编Sigmund Friend发布了一个视频，鼓励大家分享成长过程中的烦恼及解决办法，以下为Sigmund Friend视频发言内容。你作为青少年在观看主编的视频后，打算结合自己亲身经历进行评论回复。
注意事项：
1）评论内容须自拟，根据视频内容要求，语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2）词数在100左右，评论开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3）评论中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Nice to meet you, teenagers.
During the growth, we will meet many problems. These problems may come from study, relationships, family and so on. In the face of these troubles, we must learn to deal with them correctly. Also, people around us, people we admire, may give us a helping hand. Sometimes an important thing or even our hobbies may help us. These difficulties allow us to grow and make us stronger.
Do you have problems How did you solve it What else do you want to share with other teenagers Please write them down to comment (评论) on Tiktok.
If your comment is chosen, a gift will be provided.
Dear Friend,
I’d like to tell you about the problem I had during the growth.______________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This is my experience. Hope to be of some value to you.
【答案】
Dear Friend,
I’d like to tell you about the problem I had during the growth. When I was in junior high, I had great difficulty in math. The difficult problems and lots of exercises made me feel like I was in a puzzle. I often felt discouraged and lost confidence. Every test score was like a heavy blow. But I didn’t give up. I asked my teacher for advice. The teacher patiently explained my problems and taught me different problem-solving methods. I also did extra exercises during my free time. Additionally, I joined a study group where we discussed and learned from each other. Gradually, my math improved. This taught me that we should be brave to face problems. When we actively search for solutions, we can overcome difficulties and grow.
This is my experience. Hope to be of some value to you.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】方法/策略、哲理感悟、意见/建议、个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要是一般过去时，在阐述道理时使用一般现在时；
③提示：文章围绕自己初中数学学习遇到困难、克服困难的过程展开，包括困难的表现、自己的应对措施和从中学到的经验。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头直接点明要讲述成长过程中的问题；
第二步，详细描述初中数学学习的困境；
第三步，总结从这段经历中学到的道理，即要勇敢面对问题、积极寻求解决方案就能克服困难并成长。
[亮点词汇]
①difficulty困难，难题
②discouraged气馁的，沮丧的
③confidence信心
④patiently耐心地
⑤extra额外的
[高分句型]
I joined a study group where we discussed and learned from each other. (where引导的定语从句)
This taught me that we should be brave to face problems. (that引导的宾语从句)
C
法国作家雨果曾说，“进步，才是人应该有的现象”。步入九年级，学习与生活都会与以往有所不同。请你结合自身情况，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈这两个多月你的变化，向校报英语角投稿。要点如下：
1. 步入九年级后的各方面变化：
① 学习方面：增加一门学科 —— 化学，各学科学习方法的变化；
② 人际交往方面：与父母、老师或同学的关系；
③ 其他方面：……
2. 总结反思自己的进步和不足之处。
注意：
1. 词数为90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不出现真实姓名及学校名称。
How time flies! It’s over two months since I became a student in Grade Nine. ___________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
How time flies! It’s over two months since I became a student in Grade Nine. I find that there are many changes during two months.
First, we started to learn chemistry as soon as we were in Grade Nine. It is new and a little difficult. To learn all the subjects better, the ways to learn had to change too. For example, we need to understand knowledge that we have learned. Only memorizing isn’t enough. We must learn to use it too. Just because of new challenges, I am growing up and have made progress in many ways.
Second, I used to argue with my parents. Now I can understand them and know they really care about me. I also get along better and better with my classmates now. Even I make friends with my teachers. They often help me when I have problems studying. I am getting happier and happier though I am very tired every day.
I need to find a better way to learn chemistry well. I believe I can be a better version of myself.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】学习策略、个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“总结反思自己的进步和不足之处”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明步入九年级有许多新的变化；
第二步，具体阐述有怎样的变化；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①as soon as一……就
②a little一点
③for example例如
④used to曾经
[高分句型]
①I find that there are many changes during two months. (that引导宾语从句)
②we need to understand knowledge that we have learned. (that引导定语从句)
