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课堂目标:
1. 会看各种图表,学会数据表达。
2. 掌握图表作文的基本结构。
3. 学会自我修改和美化文章。
Ms Hu did a survey about What Students Like to Do on the Phone in our class yesterday. Here are the results.
How many students 13% 27% 55% 5% 0
What to do Play games Listen to music Search for information Chat with people Exchange money
table
From the
The result shows that…
chart
According to the
It’s clear from the chart,
play games
listen to music
search for
information
chat with
people
exchange
money
Ms Hu did a survey about What Students Like to Do on the Phone in our class yesterday. Here are the results.
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Ms Hu did a survey about What Students Like to Do on the Phone in our class yesterday. Here are the results.
According to the table/ chart,
As can be seen from the table/ chart,
The result shows that…
From the survey, we know that
It’s clear from the table/ chart,
100%
95%
51-99%
50%
1-49%
1-20%
0
100 percent (students) /All (students)
Nearly all of the (students)/ A large number of the (students)
Most (students) ….
Half of the (students)…
Some (students)… /A few…
Several (students)/ A small number of
None of the (students)/No (students)/ Few (students)
Less / More than … percent of the …
你们学校最近就“一个好朋友的标准”做了一次问卷调查,调查结果如下图(阴影部分)。
请你以“What a Good Friend Should Be Like”为题,用英语为你们学校的校报写一篇短文,报道此次调查结果并谈谈自己的看法。
外表漂亮、英俊,身材苗条。7%
学习勤奋,功课好。48%
爱好唱歌、跳舞,擅长体育运动。67%
性格活泼,心地善良,待人诚实,彼此信任,与他人分享快乐。95%
What a Good Friend Should Be Like
Recently, we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like. _____________________________ students think a good friend should be kind, helpful and honest. _________________________________________ students would like their friends to be fond of singing and dancing. Besides, they hope their friends are good at sports. ________________________________________________ students agree that a good friend must be hard-working and do well in lessons. Of course, there are ________________________________________________ caring about appearance. They prefer to choose those with beautiful faces as their good friends.
I don’t think a good friend has to be beautiful or handsome. I think honesty is the most important.
Nearly all of the /Most / 95 percent of the/…
More than half of the / A large number of the/ Most …
Nearly half of the /Less than half of the / Some / A number of the /…
A few/ A small number/ Several / Some/ Less than 10 percent /…
How many students 13% 27% 55% 5% 0
What to do Play games Listen to music Search for information Chat with people Exchange money
Ms Hu 对我们班同学使用手机的情况进行了调查,以下就是调查的结果。请看图表,写篇100词左右以“what students like to do on the phone.”为题的调查报告。
要求:1. 内容必须包括图中要点,可适当发挥。
2. 文章条理清晰、意思连贯、语句通顺。
参考词汇: nearly, none of, more than…
Title
Beginning
Body
Ending
Make an outline
What Students Like to Do On the Phone.
We made a survey about / on …Here are the results of the survey./ We surveyed sb. about …. Here is our report.
In my view / opinion, …/We’d better/ are supposed to/…/It’s a good idea to …/
According to the table/ chart,/As can be seen from the table/ chart,/The result shows that…/From the survey, /It’s clear from the table/ chart,
Most students search for information . Some students…
How many students 13% 27% 55% 5% 0
What to do Play games Listen to music Search for information Chat with people Exchange money
Some students want to play games on the phone.
like to
prefer to
be interested in …(ing)
be crazy about …(ing)
be fond of …(ing)
…
Tips: 尽量使用各种不同的表达方式,使语言更加丰。
Make the composition better
Nearly 30 percent of the students__________ (listen) to music.
A small number of the students _____ (chat) with people .
None of the students ________ (exchange) money.
More than half of the students _______ (search) for information on the phone.
Make the composition better
like to/ prefer to / be interested in / be crazy about /be fond of /…
Tips: 尽量使用各种不同的表达方式,使语言更加丰富。
Tips:主体部分要进行适当地拓展。注意好词好句的使用。
Most students prefer to search for information on the phone.
Because they want to __________________________.
It makes _____________________.
It can help______________________.
It opens up their mind to the outside world.
…
know more about the world
them knowledgeable
with their study
Make the composition better
Some students are fond of listening to music on the phone.
It fills their life with pleasure .
It not only makes them more active but also study better.
They can be relaxed by listening to music, so that they can concentrate more on study. …
Because in their opinion, it / they …
fill with, not only…,but also…, so that, concentrate on…
Make the composition better
Tips:主体部分要进行适当地拓展。注意好词好句的使用。
Title
Beginning
Body
Ending
What Students Like to Do on the Phone.
We made a survey about what students like to do on the phone in our class. Here are the results of the survey.
In my view , it’s a good idea to do something that can make our life convenient and full of pleasure on the phone. Such as shopping on line, reading the news and so on.
As can be seen from the table, most students prefer to search for information on the phone. Because they want to know more about the world. Some students want to play games on the phone. It not only makes them relaxed but also active. Less than 30 percent of the students are interested in listening to music. They can be relaxed by listening to music, so that they can concentrate more on study. Beside, a few students are fond of chatting with people. But no students exchange money on the phone. They think it’s not safe enough.
实战练习:近来,因为连续雾霾天气。新华日报的记者就人们上班方式做了个调查。请你根据图表内容,给新华日报写一篇以“How People Go To Work”为题,100词左右的调查报告,并谈谈自己的看法。
要求:1. 内容必须包括图中要点,可适当发挥。
2. 文章条理清晰、意思连贯、语句通顺。
Title
Beginning
Body
Ending
Make an outline
How People Go to Work.
We made a survey about / on …Here are the results of the survey./ We surveyed about …. Here is our report.
In my view / opinion, … /We’d better/ are supposed to/…/It’s a good idea to …/…
According to the table/ chart,/As can be seen from the table/ chart,/The result shows that…/From the survey, /It’s clear from the table/ chart,
Most people drive to work . Some people…
How People Go to Work. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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