限时20分钟写作1
班级_________ 姓名_________________ 分数(满分15)____________ 书写(满分5)________
上周末你校举办了“急救知识进校园”的活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.活动的过程;2.活动的影响。
注意:写作词数应为80左右;
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Step 1 : 认真阅读红宝书P206-210以及下面范文
A Cross-Country Running Race
Aiming to enrich our campus life, our school organized a 5 km cross-country running race last Sunday.(活动目的、具体时间、地点)
After being fully prepared, ninety students from different grades gathered at the school gate. Bathed in sunshine, the runners crossed the Renmin Park and ran along the artificial lake, sweat soaking their clothes. Upon their arrival at the foot of Nanshan Mountain, the cheers of the schoolmates made them feel that all the time and efforts paid off.(活动内容:参与人员,组成部分或过程)
This activity provided us with a platform where we could build our bodies and release the stress from daily life. We do hope that the school will carry out more similar activities in the future.(活动意义与展望)
一次5公里越野赛跑活动
为了丰富校园生活,我们学校上周日举行了一次5公里越野赛跑活动。
在经过充分准备之后,来自不同年级的90名学生在校门口聚集。沐浴在阳光下,赛跑者们穿过人民公园,沿着人造湖泊跑着,汗水浸湿了他们的衣服。他们一到打南山脚下,所有同学们的欢呼让他们觉得所有的时间和努力都得到回报。
这次活动给我们提供了一个能强身健体,释放日常压力的平台,我们真的希望学校在未来能多举办相似的活动。
Step 2 : 思考下列问题
报道多用来描述已经发生的事情,所以时态通常一般是____________________为主;
报道和信件___________,也是_______段式:
第一段通常交代报道的活动背景:可包括活动的________________、_____________、______________;
第二段是报道的___________部分,主要介绍活动的安排,可借鉴___________信的语料,但相比该信有更多的___________、___________、__________描写,由___________或__________串联活动内容。
第三段则表示_______________。
Step 3 : 背满分佳句
夺人眼球开头句(介绍缘由:活动目的时间地点+事件)
1. The school playground witnessed the coming-of age ceremony last Friday, whose aim is to cultivate high school students with gratitude and courage to take responsibility.
上周五,学校操场见证了成人礼的举行,成人礼的目的是培养具有感恩之心和勇于承担责任的高中生。
2. Aimed at arousing our passion for art and enrich our campus life, the Campus Art Festival was launched in our school last Friday, which enjoyed universal popularity among students.
为了激发我们对艺术的热情并丰富我们的校园生活,校园艺术节于上周五在我们学校拉开帷幕,在学生中广受欢迎。
亮点出彩篇中句(具体事項、通知对象、特殊要求等)
At the beginning of the event, the principal delivered an inspiring speech, highlighting the importance of embracing adulthood with responsibility and integrity. Then, it was followed by the symbolic act of receiving gifts from parents, which marked the transition into adulthood.
活动伊始,校长发表了一篇鼓舞人心的演讲,强调了以责任和正直的态度拥抱成年的重要性。随后,是象征性的接受父母礼物的环节,标志着步入成年。
Bathed in the warm sunshine, we got involved in hike in high spirits, displaying our vitality.
沐浴在温暖阳光下,我们情绪高涨参与远足,展现了我们的活力。
Exhausted as we were, the activity received high praise from both us students and parents.
尽管我们很疲惫,这次活动收到了学生和家长的高度评价。
Despite/In spite of/Regardless of competitive game, no one gave up but persisted to the end, thus earning everyone’s admiration/ leaving an indelible mark on everyone.
尽管比赛激烈,没有一个人放弃,而是坚持到最后,因此赢得大家的赞赏/给大家留下深刻印象。
Gathering at the school gate at 2pm, we headed toward the park with high expectations. Upon arrival, we were greeted by extraordinary view unfolding before our eyes, astonishing us a lot.
在下午2点校门口集合,我们充满期待地前往公园。一到那里,美丽的风景就展现在我们面前,使我们充满惊奇。
During the activity, participants presented to the audience brilliant performances, which were a visual(-audio) enjoyment/ bringing them remarkable experience.
活动期间,参与者们向观众呈现了精彩的表演,对观众来说是一场视(听)盛宴/给他们带来非凡的体验。
韵味无穷结尾句(表示活动意义)
9. The ceremony holds great significance as it serves as a reminder for them to take responsibility and develop a strong sense of identity.
这个仪式意义重大,因为它提醒他们要承担责任,并培养强烈的认同感。
10. There is no denying the fact that we benefited a lot from the event, which not only enriched our school life, but also equipped us with a variety of traditional cultures.
不可否认的是我们从这次活动中受益匪浅,它不仅丰富了我们的校园生活还让我们接触到了多种传统文化。限时20分钟作文1
班级_________ 姓名_________________ 分数(满分15)____________ 书写(满分5)________
上周末你校举办了“急救知识进校园”的活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.活动的过程;2.活动的影响。
注意:写作词数应为80左右;
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First Aid Knowledge Hits the Campus
Last weekend witnessed an activity with the theme of "First Aid knowledge Hits the Campus", which brought a feast of first aid knowledge to students.
Our school invited experienced emergency doctors and nurses, who taught the students how to do first aid through vivid explanations as well as demonstrations. What followed was the first aid practice under the patient guidance of the professionals. A student selected from each class were given an opportunity to perform first aid exercises to guarantee their mastery of the basic skills.
By learning through practice, not only has this activity improved the students' first aid awareness, it has also equipped them with the knowledge to handle minor injuries and understand when to seek help.限时作文2 :写前阅读、思考并积累
Step 1 : 认真阅读红宝书P206-210以及下面范文
A Cross-Country Running Race
Aiming to enrich our campus life, our school organized a 5 km cross-country running race last Sunday.(活动目的、具体时间、地点)
After being fully prepared, ninety students from different grades gathered at the school gate. Bathed in sunshine, the runners crossed the Renmin Park and ran along the artificial lake, sweat soaking their clothes. Upon their arrival at the foot of Nanshan Mountain, the cheers of the schoolmates made them feel that all the time and efforts paid off.(活动内容:参与人员,组成部分或过程)
This activity provided us with a platform where we could build our bodies and release the stress from daily life. We do hope that the school will carry out more similar activities in the future.(活动意义与展望)
一次5公里越野赛跑活动
为了丰富校园生活,我们学校上周日举行了一次5公里越野赛跑活动。
在经过充分准备之后,来自不同年级的90名学生在校门口聚集。沐浴在阳光下,赛跑者们穿过人民公园,沿着人造湖泊跑着,汗水浸湿了他们的衣服。他们一到打南山脚下,所有同学们的欢呼让他们觉得所有的时间和努力都得到回报。
这次活动给我们提供了一个能强身健体,释放日常压力的平台,我们真的希望学校在未来能多举办相似的活动。
Step 2 : 思考下列问题
报道多用来描述已经发生的事情,所以时态通常一般是_____一般过去时___为主;
报道和信件___相同___,也是__三__段式:
第一段通常交代报道的活动背景:可包括活动的___时间_____、____地点_____、____目的_____;
第二段是报道的__主体___部分,主要介绍活动的安排,可借鉴___邀请__信的语料,但相比该信有更多的___动作___、___心理____、___环境___描写,由___时间___或___地点__串联活动内容。
第三段则表示___活动意义___。
Step 3 : 背满分佳句
夺人眼球开头句(介绍缘由:活动目的时间地点+事件)
1. The school playground witnessed the coming-of age ceremony last Friday, whose aim is to cultivate high school students with gratitude and courage to take responsibility.
上周五,学校操场见证了成人礼的举行,成人礼的目的是培养具有感恩之心和勇于承担责任的高中生。
2. Aimed at arousing our passion for art and enrich our campus life, the Campus Art Festival was launched in our school last Friday, which enjoyed universal popularity among students.
为了激发我们对艺术的热情并丰富我们的校园生活,校园艺术节于上周五在我们学校拉开帷幕,在学生中广受欢迎。
亮点出彩篇中句(具体事項、通知对象、特殊要求等)
At the beginning of the event, the principal delivered an inspiring speech, highlighting the importance of embracing adulthood with responsibility and integrity. Then, it was followed by the symbolic act of receiving gifts from parents, which marked the transition into adulthood.
活动伊始,校长发表了一篇鼓舞人心的演讲,强调了以责任和正直的态度拥抱成年的重要性。随后,是象征性的接受父母礼物的环节,标志着步入成年。
Bathed in the warm sunshine, we got involved in hike in high spirits, displaying our vitality.
沐浴在温暖阳光下,我们情绪高涨参与远足,展现了我们的活力。
Exhausted as we were, the activity received high praise from both us students and parents.
尽管我们很疲惫,这次活动收到了学生和家长的高度评价。
Despite/In spite of/Regardless of competitive game, no one gave up but persisted to the end, thus earning everyone’s admiration/ leaving an indelible mark on everyone.
尽管比赛激烈,没有一个人放弃,而是坚持到最后,因此赢得大家的赞赏/给大家留下深刻印象。
Gathering at the school gate at 2pm, we headed toward the park with high expectations. Upon arrival, we were greeted by extraordinary view unfolding before our eyes, astonishing us a lot.
在下午2点校门口集合,我们充满期待地前往公园。一到那里,美丽的风景就展现在我们面前,使我们充满惊奇。
During the activity, participants presented to the audience brilliant performances, which were a visual(-audio) enjoyment/ bringing them remarkable experience.
活动期间,参与者们向观众呈现了精彩的表演,对观众来说是一场视(听)盛宴/给他们带来非凡的体验。
韵味无穷结尾句(表示活动意义)
9. The ceremony holds great significance as it serves as a reminder for them to take responsibility and develop a strong sense of identity.
这个仪式意义重大,因为它提醒他们要承担责任,并培养强烈的认同感。
10. There is no denying the fact that we benefited a lot from the event, which not only enriched our school life, but also equipped us with a variety of traditional cultures.
不可否认的是我们从这次活动中受益匪浅,它不仅丰富了我们的校园生活还让我们接触到了多种传统文化。