限时作文3 ：写前阅读、思考并积累
Step 1 : 认真阅读红宝书P226-229以及下面范文
Hi Worried,
Having learned that you're having such a tough time at the moment, I am writing to share with you some suggestions.
Initially, talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. In addition, participating in more outdoors activities and physical exercise with your friends such as football or basketball is an effective way to relieve anger and stress. And more importantly, you are supposed to remain optimistic about your future and maintain peace of mind, which can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I will be more than delighted if you find my suggestions helpful. Wish you all the best!
Yours,
Jamie
得知你正经历着如此艰难的时刻，我写信与你分享一些建议。
最初，和你信任的人谈谈你的感受，这是一个很好的发泄愤怒的方式，不会伤害到别人或你自己。此外，参加更多的户外活动和体育锻炼与你的朋友，如足球或篮球是一个有效的方式来缓解愤怒和压力。更重要的是，你应该对你的未来保持乐观，保持内心的平静，这有助于提升你的精神。
如果你觉得我的建议有用，我会非常高兴。祝你一切顺利!
Step 2 : 思考下列问题
建议的事情属于主观意愿，还未发生，所以时态通常一般是_____一般现在时或将来时___为主；
建议信格式一般是__三__段式：
第一段通常交代信件的写作背景：可包括活动的___情绪/寒暄_____、____写信目的_____；
第二段是信件的__主体___部分，通常构思__2-3__ 条建议。需要注意的是，不仅要写建议，还要拓展建议的__理由__、__目的__、__好处__，让建议更有说服力的同时，增加句式和文章内容的丰富性。
第三段则写__重申期待_、__表达祝福____。
Step 3 : 背满分佳句
夺人眼球开头句（写信背景+写信目的）
1. Having learned that you have difficulty learning Chinese, I am writing to offer you some suggestions.
得知你学习汉语有困难，我写信给你提供一些建议。
2. I hope this letter finds you well. Knowing that you have trouble in I’m writing to express my earnest concern and give you some practical suggestions.
我希望你收到这封信一切安好。知道你有困难，我写信是为了表达我诚挚的关心，并给你一些实际的建议。
亮点出彩篇中句(具体建议+理由/目的等）
Were I you/ If I were you, I would do something to distract my attention from study, consisting of taking part in some physical activities and communicating with teachers and classmates.
如果我是你，我会做一些事情来分散我的注意力，包括参加一些体育活动，与老师和同学交流。
4. Were I you, I would develop a good habit of reading, only in which way could my horizons be broadened.
沐浴在温暖阳光下，我们情绪高涨参与远足，展现了我们的活力。
5. It is highly suggested/recommended that you read more English novels, in which way you can be exposed to more native expressions.
强烈建议你多读英文小说，这样你就能接触到更多的地道表达。
6. It is advisable for you to participate in activities at school, which can provide you with chances to challenge and perfect yourselves.
建议你参加学校的活动，这可以为你提供挑战和完善自己的机会。
7. I suggest that you participate in more outdoors activities and physical exercise with your friends such as football or basketball, which is an effective way to get rid of/ ease/ relieve anger and stress..
我建议你和你的朋友多参加户外活动和体育锻炼，如足球或篮球，这是一个有效的方法来摆脱/缓解/缓解愤怒和压力.
韵味无穷结尾句（表示活动意义）
8. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations useful/helpful.
我希望你觉得这些建议有用。
9. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. Wish you all the best in your work/study/life.
如果你能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。祝你工作/学习/生活一切顺利。
10.I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you.If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。限时20分钟写作1
班级________ 姓名____________ 分数（满分15）_________ 书写（满分5）________
(2023 全国卷)I 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
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Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together. Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua限时20分钟写作
班级________ 姓名____________ 分数（满分15）_________ 书写（满分5）________
(2023 全国卷)I 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________限时作文3 ：写前阅读、思考并积累
Step 1 : 认真阅读红宝书P226-229以及下面范文
Hi Worried,
Having learned that you're having such a tough time at the moment, I am writing to share with you some suggestions.
Initially, talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. In addition, participating in more outdoors activities and physical exercise with your friends such as football or basketball is an effective way to relieve anger and stress. And more importantly, you are supposed to remain optimistic about your future and maintain peace of mind, which can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I will be more than delighted if you find my suggestions helpful. Wish you all the best!
Yours,
Jamie
得知你正经历着如此艰难的时刻，我写信与你分享一些建议。
最初，和你信任的人谈谈你的感受，这是一个很好的发泄愤怒的方式，不会伤害到别人或你自己。此外，参加更多的户外活动和体育锻炼与你的朋友，如足球或篮球是一个有效的方式来缓解愤怒和压力。更重要的是，你应该对你的未来保持乐观，保持内心的平静，这有助于提升你的精神。
如果你觉得我的建议有用，我会非常高兴。祝你一切顺利!
Step 2 : 思考下列问题
建议的事情属于主观意愿，还未发生，所以时态通常一般是___________________为主；
建议信格式一般是_______段式：
第一段通常交代信件的写作背景：可包括活动的______________、_____________；
第二段是信件的________部分，通常构思_______ 条建议。需要注意的是，不仅要写建议，还要拓展建议的_______、_______、_______，让建议更有说服力的同时，增加句式和文章内容的丰富性。
第三段则写_______________、_________________。
Step 3 : 背满分佳句
夺人眼球开头句（写信背景+写信目的）
1. Having learned that you have difficulty learning Chinese, I am writing to offer you some suggestions.
得知你学习汉语有困难，我写信给你提供一些建议。
2. I hope this letter finds you well. Knowing that you have trouble in I’m writing to express my earnest concern and give you some practical suggestions.
我希望你收到这封信一切安好。知道你有困难，我写信是为了表达我诚挚的关心，并给你一些实际的建议。
亮点出彩篇中句(具体建议+理由/目的等）
Were I you/ If I were you, I would do something to distract my attention from study, consisting of taking part in some physical activities and communicating with teachers and classmates.
如果我是你，我会做一些事情来分散我的注意力，包括参加一些体育活动，与老师和同学交流。
4. Were I you, I would develop a good habit of reading, only in which way could my horizons be broadened.
沐浴在温暖阳光下，我们情绪高涨参与远足，展现了我们的活力。
5. It is highly suggested/recommended that you read more English novels, in which way you can be exposed to more native expressions.
强烈建议你多读英文小说，这样你就能接触到更多的地道表达。
6. It is advisable for you to participate in activities at school, which can provide you with chances to challenge and perfect yourselves.
建议你参加学校的活动，这可以为你提供挑战和完善自己的机会。
7. I suggest that you participate in more outdoors activities and physical exercise with your friends such as football or basketball, which is an effective way to get rid of/ ease/ relieve anger and stress..
我建议你和你的朋友多参加户外活动和体育锻炼，如足球或篮球，这是一个有效的方法来摆脱/缓解/缓解愤怒和压力.
韵味无穷结尾句（表示活动意义）
8. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations useful/helpful.
我希望你觉得这些建议有用。
9. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. Wish you all the best in your work/study/life.
如果你能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。祝你工作/学习/生活一切顺利。
10.I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you.If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
