限时作文8:咨询信 写前阅读、思考并积累
Step 1 : 认真阅读红宝书P231-233以及下面范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese exchange student here. Having learned your library provides service to foreigners, I’m writing to ask for some information about borrowing books.
Firstly, could you tell me what kinds of books can be borrowed and what kinds of books can only be read in the library Secondly, I want to know the specific rules related to borrowing books and keeping them. Additionally, I wonder when and where I can apply for a library card. Should I reserve it in advance
I’d be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
尊敬的先生或女士:
我是李华,一名在此学习的中国交换生。得知贵图书馆为外国人提供服务,我特此致信询问有关借书的一些信息。
首先,能否告知我可以借阅哪些类型的书籍,以及哪些书籍只能在图书馆内阅读?其次,我想知道与借书和保留书籍相关的具体规定。此外,我想知道何时何地可以申请图书证,是否需要提前预约?
如能尽早回复,我将不胜感激。
此致,
李华
Step 2 : 思考下列问题
1.咨询信写信人对不理解、不熟悉的事情或对某方面的信息感兴趣,希望了解___________的信件;信件句子形式基本由________为主,句式容易重复,需要熟练各种不同句式。
2.咨询信的结构是_______段式:
第一段通常交代:____________、______________、_____________;
第二段是咨询信的___________部分,主要介绍_________________,可具体包括____________、____________、______________;
第三段则表示_____________和______________。
Step 3 : 背满分佳句
夺人眼球开头句(自我介绍+咨询目的)
1. I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information on / regarding / concerning...
我写信是看您能否给我提供关于……的信息。
2.I’m Li Hua, a student planning to... / interested in... . I’m writing to inquire / ask for some information / details about... 我是李华,一个计划……/对……感兴趣的学生。我写信是为了咨询一些关于……的信息/细节。
3.I wonder if you could tell me/provide some special information about...
我想知道您能否告诉我/提供一些关于……的具体信息。
4.I have seen your advertisement and am keen to gain more detailed information./ Would you mind telling me some details about..........
我看过你们的广告,很想得到更详细的信息。/你介意告知我有关......的细节吗
亮点出彩篇中句(具体事項、通知对象、特殊要求等)
5.To begin with / To start with / In the first place, I would appreciate it if you could tell me the requirements for the applicants.
首先,如果您能告诉我对申请人的要求,我会很感激。
6.Since it is the first time that most of us..., we’d like to know the details about... Besides, is it possible for you to... / Additionally, I would appreciate it if...
由于这是我们大多数人第一次……,我们想知道关于……的细节。另外,你有可能…… 吗 / 另外,如果……,我将不胜感激。
7.I’d be grateful if you could let me know whether there are anything I should pay attention to.
如果您能告诉我对……还有需要注意的事项,我将不胜感激。
8.Besides, would you be so kind as to tell me whether there are any special customs in the host family so that I can make certain preparations in advance and avoid cultural misunderstanding
另外,请您告诉我寄宿家庭是否有特殊习俗,以便我提前做好准备,避免文化误解。
9.In addition, it is still unclear to me how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.
另外,我还不清楚我需要支付多少学费,是否包括住宿。
10.Lastly, I would be more than obliged if you could keep me informed of the content of the course in details so that I can make proper arrangements.
最后,如果您能将课程内容详细告知我,我将不胜感激,以便我做出适当的安排。
韵味无穷结尾句(期待回复+表示感谢)
11.Your timely attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.
您若能及时关注我的询问,我将不胜感激。
12.Thank you for your kindness, and I would appreciate it if you could respond at your earliest convenience.
谢谢你的好意,如果你能尽快回复,我将不胜感激。限时20分钟写作8
班级_________ 姓名_________________ 分数(满分15)____________ 书写(满分5)________
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tim邀请你参加他们学校暑假组织的“科技夏令营”。你想参加,现就此事写一封信向他咨询夏令营的相关事宜,要点包括:1.具体日程安排;2.住宿和费用等。
注意:写作词数应为 80左右。
Dear Tim,
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Yours,
Li Hua限时作文8:写前阅读、思考并积累
Step 1 : 认真阅读红宝书P231-233以及下面范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese exchange student here. Having learned your library provides service to foreigners, I’m writing to ask for some information about borrowing books.
Firstly, could you tell me what kinds of books can be borrowed and what kinds of books can only be read in the library Secondly, I want to know the specific rules related to borrowing books and keeping them. Additionally, I wonder when and where I can apply for a library card. Should I reserve it in advance
I’d be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
尊敬的先生或女士:
我是李华,一名在此学习的中国交换生。得知贵图书馆为外国人提供服务,我特此致信询问有关借书的一些信息。
首先,能否告知我可以借阅哪些类型的书籍,以及哪些书籍只能在图书馆内阅读?其次,我想知道与借书和保留书籍相关的具体规定。此外,我想知道何时何地可以申请图书证,是否需要提前预约?
如能尽早回复,我将不胜感激。
此致,
李华
Step 2 : 思考下列问题
1.咨询信写信人对不理解、不熟悉的事情或对某方面的信息感兴趣,希望了解____信息___的信件;信件句子形式基本由_问句__为主,句式容易重复,需要熟练各种不同句式。
2.咨询信的结构是___三__段式:
第一段通常交代:___自我介绍____、___写信背景______、____写信目的____;
第二段是咨询信的___主体___部分,主要介绍_____咨询内容_______,可具体包括____咨询问题___、___咨询目的____、____个人喜好/要求_____;
第三段则表示_____期待回复____和_____表示感谢____。
Step 3 : 背满分佳句
夺人眼球开头句(自我介绍+咨询目的)
1. I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information on / regarding / concerning...
我写信是看您能否给我提供关于……的信息。
2.I’m Li Hua, a student planning to... / interested in... . I’m writing to inquire / ask for some information / details about... 我是李华,一个计划……/对……感兴趣的学生。我写信是为了咨询一些关于……的信息/细节。
3.I wonder if you could tell me/provide some special information about...
我想知道您能否告诉我/提供一些关于……的具体信息。
4.I have seen your advertisement and am keen to gain more detailed information./ Would you mind telling me some details about..........
我看过你们的广告,很想得到更详细的信息。/你介意告知我有关......的细节吗
亮点出彩篇中句(具体事項、通知对象、特殊要求等)
5.To begin with / To start with / In the first place, I would appreciate it if you could tell me the requirements for the applicants.
首先,如果您能告诉我对申请人的要求,我会很感激。
6.Since it is the first time that most of us..., we’d like to know the details about... Besides, is it possible for you to... / Additionally, I would appreciate it if...
由于这是我们大多数人第一次……,我们想知道关于……的细节。另外,你有可能…… 吗 / 另外,如果……,我将不胜感激。
7.I’d be grateful if you could let me know whether there are anything I should pay attention to.
如果您能告诉我对……还有需要注意的事项,我将不胜感激。
8.Besides, would you be so kind as to tell me whether there are any special customs in the host family so that I can make certain preparations in advance and avoid cultural misunderstanding
另外,请您告诉我寄宿家庭是否有特殊习俗,以便我提前做好准备,避免文化误解。
9.In addition, it is still unclear to me how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.
另外,我还不清楚我需要支付多少学费,是否包括住宿。
10.Lastly, I would be more than obliged if you could keep me informed of the content of the course in details so that I can make proper arrangements.
最后,如果您能将课程内容详细告知我,我将不胜感激,以便我做出适当的安排。
韵味无穷结尾句(期待回复+表示感谢)
11.Your timely attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.
您若能及时关注我的询问,我将不胜感激。
12.Thank you for your kindness, and I would appreciate it if you could respond at your earliest convenience.
谢谢你的好意,如果你能尽快回复,我将不胜感激。限时20分钟写作8
班级_________ 姓名_________________ 分数(满分15)____________ 书写(满分5)________
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tim邀请你参加他们学校暑假组织的“科技夏令营”。你想参加,现就此事写一封信向他咨询夏令营的相关事宜,要点包括:1.具体日程安排;2.住宿和费用等。
注意:写作词数应为 80左右。
Dear Tim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Tim,
Many thanks for inviting me to your school's Summer Science Camp. I am looking forward to it and would like to enquire about further details.
First of all, could you keep me informed of the specific schedule of the summer camp so that I can make preparations in advance Secondly, I wonder if there is a student dormitory available, otherwise I will have to book a hotel ahead of time. And would you be kind enough to tell me about the costs associated with the summer camp activities as well as the accommodation fees
Looking forward to your early reply. I really can't wait for the summer camp to come soon.
Yours,
Li Hua