2025高考英语二轮复习 应用文写作
文体1 建议信
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议,以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题的信件。建议信可以写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点;也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。具体写作结构如下:
吸睛开头套语(写信目的)
1.Learning that you...,I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
得知你……,我写信给你一些建议/忠告。
2.I have received your letter asking me to give you some advice/suggestions regarding/with regard to...The following are my personal suggestions,which I hope can be of great help to you.
已收到你让我就……给你提供一些建议的来信。以下是我个人的建议,我希望它们对你多有帮助。
3.I am sorry to hear that you have difficulty doing...However,the situation is easy to improve if you take the following advice.
很遗憾听说你在做……方面有困难。但你如果采纳以下建议,情况很容易就会改善。
4.I’m delighted to learn that you’re particularly keen on...Here are some practical suggestions to help you...
我很高兴了解到你特别喜欢……这里有些实用的建议来帮助你……
完美结尾套语(表达希望)
1.I do hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.
我的确希望你会认真考虑我的建议。
2.I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.
如果你能考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。
3.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions helpful/useful/practical./I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.
希望你会认为这些建议有帮助/有用/可行。/我希望我的建议将对你有益。
4.Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help to you.I’m sure you can solve your problem before long.
希望这些建议会对你有很大的帮助。我相信你不久就能解决你的问题。
典例剖析 (2023·新课标Ⅰ改编)
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:1.说明问题;2.提出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式作答。
佳作赏析 亮句解读
Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3.I am writing to express my thoughts on your plan to randomly pair up students for oral practice.【自我介绍,点明写信目的】 Personally,[1]though fair,random pairing may not necessarily serve its intended purposes.In particular,[2]if neither speaks fluently,they might lack the motivation to participate,failing to reach the desired goal.Hence,I propose an alternative approach:grouping students with varying levels of fluency.[3]Pairing more fluent speakers with those who are less fluent could create a better learning environment.Alternatively,[4]if practicable,allowing students to choose their own partners would be even better as it can enhance their shared learning experience more efficiently.【说明问题+提出建议】 I would greatly appreciate your understanding and consideration of my suggestions.【希望采纳建议】 Yours, Li Hua [1]状语从句的省略+高级词汇,说明随机分组虽然公平,但可能难以达到目的。 [2]条件状语从句+现在分词短语作状语,拓展说明具体问题及其可能会造成的结果。 [3]动名词短语作主语+定语从句,提出建议1并说明理由。 [4]状语从句的省略+动名词短语作主语+原因状语从句,提出建议2并说明理由。
亮句集锦
(不同主题的中间句)
1.语言学习
(1)Reading English aloud can not only help us improve our oral ability but also develop our language skills,such as listening,speaking,reading and writing.
大声朗读英语不仅有助于提高我们的口语能力,而且能培养我们的听、说、读、写等语言技能。
(2)This is because reading aloud,which is the basis of memory,can make the sound,form and meaning of an English word strengthened and consolidated.
这是因为朗读是记忆的基础,可以使英语单词的音、形、意得到强化和巩固。
(3)In order to learn English well,apart from English class,you’d better take an active part in English corner and other after-class English activities,which will benefit you a lot.
为了学好英语,除了英语课,你最好积极参与英语角和其他课外英语活动,这会对你大有裨益。
(4)Besides,making more Chinese friends and communicating with them often is a good choice for you,since they will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
此外,结交更多的中国朋友并经常与他们交流对你来说是一个很好的选择,因为他们会告诉你很多关于中国的事情,帮助你学习汉语。
(5)What’s more,it is also helpful to watch Chinese TV programs and read books,newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.
另外,尽可能观看中国电视节目,阅读中文书籍、报纸和杂志也是有帮助的。
2.活动安排
(1)Consequently,you can prepare various activities and language games that are not only enjoyable but also highly educational.
因此,你们可以准备各种有趣而且很有教育意义的活动和语言游戏。
(2)To start with,I think it would be beneficial to have more events that encourage students to actively participate in English conversations.
首先,我认为有更多的活动来鼓励学生积极参与英语对话会有所帮助。
(3)In addition,to bring this theme to life,I suggest hosting a storytelling session where students can share their favorite stories as well as learn how to craft their own stories.
另外,为了使这个主题更生动,我建议举办一个讲故事会,学生们在会上可以分享他们最喜欢的故事以及学习如何编写自己的故事。
3.人际交往
(1)As far as I am concerned,you’re supposed to communicate with your classmates actively.
在我看来,你应该和同学积极沟通。
(2)If I were you,I would explain first,which will be beneficial to both of you.
如果我是你,我首先会解释,这会对你们两个人都有益。
(3)It would be wise to communicate openly and honestly with your friends in a calm and respectful manner.
以冷静和尊重的方式开诚布公地与朋友沟通是明智的。
即时演练
(2024·浙江金华一模)
假定你是李华,近日,你发现同学们参与外教Peter组织的“英语角”活动的兴趣不高,请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括:
1.说明问题;
2.提出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Peter,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua,one of your students.I’m writing to render what I’ve found about students’ interest in our English Corner.
Aimed at cultivating students’ interest in English learning,the English Corner you organized undoubtedly offers us students a great platform to enhance our English proficiency.However,I’ve found students lacking enthusiasm to get involved lately.I think it would be a good idea to showcase the unique charm of English Corner by adding more interactive activities like English Drama Performance.Additionally,why not undertake a survey to know about what really interests students
I would appreciate it if you could make a bit change,in which case the English Corner will surely become one of the fondest memories rooted in our hearts.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文体2 邀请信
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的信件。在写作时,要注意邀请信的交际性,语气要真挚,避免带有不礼貌或强人所难的字眼。根据邀请信的性质可将其分为普通邀请信和正式邀请信。普通邀请信对内容和格式的要求都不高,只要说明活动的内容、时间、地点等即可。正式邀请信的措辞要正式,语气要热情有礼,态度要诚恳。邀请信的末尾都要表达希望对方参加或出席的愿望。具体写作结构如下:
吸睛开头套语(背景信息/邀请原因+发出邀请)
1.I feel it a great honor on behalf of...to invite you to take part in/participate in...
我很荣幸代表……邀请你参加……
2.I’m more than pleased/delighted to invite you to join in...to be held from...to...in...
我很高兴邀请你参加从……到……(时间)在……(地点)举行的……(活动)。
3.Learning that you are interested in.../you are eager to improve.../you are an expert/a specialist in...,I am writing to offer/extend my warmest invitation to you.
得知你对……感兴趣/你渴望提高……/你是……方面的专家,我写信向你发出我最热情的邀请。
完美结尾套语 (希望接受邀请)
1.I sincerely hope you can accept our invitation and I have the confidence that it will leave a wonderful impression on you.
我真诚地希望您能接受我们的邀请,我有信心,它会给您留下深刻的印象。
2.I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into account.An early reply about your final decision will be highly appreciated.
如果您能考虑我的邀请,我将不胜感激。关于您的最终决定,请您尽早回复于我。
3.I’d be pleased if you could spare your time to join us.Will you be available during that time Please contact me at 1234567 at your earliest convenience.如果你能抽出时间加入我们,我会非常开心。那期间你有空吗?请方便时尽快拨打1234567联系我。
4.We’d be delighted if you could come and share the unforgettable moment with us.Looking forward to your involvement.如果你能来和我们共度这个难忘时刻,我们将十分高兴。期待你的参与。
典例剖析
(2022·新课标Ⅰ改编)
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:1.节目介绍;2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式作答。
佳作赏析 亮句解读
Dear Caroline, I’m Li Hua,[1]the student who is in charge of the English programme Talk and Talk of our school broadcasting station.On behalf of the school’s English broadcasting station,I sincerely invite you to attend our programme and be our honored guest.【自我介绍+表明写信目的】 [2]Focusing on the topics appealing to teenagers,our programme is committed to enhancing students’ understanding of domestic and international affairs.【节目介绍】 The topic of the coming show,[3]which is scheduled to be held next Friday,is environmental protection in our daily life.【访谈时间和话题】 If you are available then,I,together with the whole Talk and Talk staff,am waiting for your coming.[4]If not,please let me know so that we can make an adjustment accordingly.【询问时间是否合适】 I’d appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration.I’m eagerly anticipating your reply.【表达希望接受邀请】 Yours sincerely, Li Hua [1]同位语+定语从句,进行自我介绍。 [2]现在分词短语作状语,对节目进行介绍。 [3]非限制性定语从句,介绍访谈的时间。 [4]状语从句的省略+so that目的状语从句,协商时间。
(不同主题的中间句)
亮句集锦
1.英语活动
(1)With the intention of/Aimed at enhancing students’ enthusiasm of learning English,an English speech contest will be held in our school on August 6.
为提高学生学习英语的热情,我校将于8月6日举行一场英语演讲比赛。
(2)It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours,during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.
它将于下午两点开始,持续两个小时,在此期间将会有 15位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
(3)Participants will gather in the English Corner,sharing a knowledge of brilliant English cultures and interesting customs.
参加者将聚集在英语角,分享关于璀璨的英语文化和有趣习俗的知识。
2.美术活动
(1)As scheduled,the painting exhibition is to be held from 8:00 am to 12:00 am in the school lecture hall.During the exhibition,there will be a wide range of activities you are interested in.
按计划画展将于上午8时至12时在学校讲堂举行。展览期间将会有各种你感兴趣的活动。
(2)Not only can we understand various activities held in our school,but also we can broaden our horizons and inspire our interest in painting.
我们不仅可以了解学校举办的各种活动,还可以拓宽我们的视野,激发我们对绘画的兴趣。
3.音乐活动
(1)The concert will be held on Saturday,starting at 7:30 pm,which is well worth admiring.音乐会将于周六举行,晚上7点半开始,非常值得欣赏。
(2)The concert will showcase traditional Chinese instruments and melodies,and you are to be impressed by the richness and diversity of our musical culture.
音乐会将展示中国传统乐器和旋律,我们音乐文化的丰富性和多样性一定会给你留下深刻印象。
4.文化交流活动
(1)As scheduled,the party is to be held from 8:00 am to 12:00 am in our school stadium,started with a classical dance.
按照计划,派对将于上午8点到12点在我们学校的体育场举行,将由一支古典舞开场。
(2)You are expected to arrive at the stadium by 8:00 am and it is hoped that you can prepare some programs representing your country’s culture,followed by enjoying delicious traditional Chinese food as well as some traditional Chinese opera performances.
您要在早上8点前到达体育馆,希望您能准备一些代表你们国家文化的节目,然后享受美味的中国传统食物,欣赏一些中国传统的戏曲表演。
即时演练
(2024 ·安徽安庆二模)
假定你是李华,下周你校将举行“科普进校园”活动,请你给外教Eleanor写封邮件邀请她参加。 内容包括:
1.时间和地点;
2.主要内容和意义。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右。
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Eleanor,
I’m writing to share with you an activity called “Science Promotion Entering Campus” in our school.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Eleanor,
I’m writing to share with you an activity called “Science Promotion Entering Campus” in our school.Knowing that you have a real passion for science,I’d like to extend an invitation to you to attend it.
As scheduled,the occasion will be held from Monday to Thursday next week in the school hall.Our headmaster will deliver a brief opening speech first,which will be followed by diverse lectures and interactive exhibitions,ranging from science in daily life to practical applications of science at work.Not only can this event broaden our horizons,but it can also develop our innovative hands-on ability.Time permitting,we’d like you to answer relevant questions raised by students.
I sincerely hope that you’ll be able to confirm your attendance.Your early reply will be greatly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua