读后续写 Lily的徒步冒险 讲义-山东省济南市2024-2025学年高三下学期开学英语试题
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| 名称 | 读后续写 Lily的徒步冒险 讲义-山东省济南市2024-2025学年高三下学期开学英语试题 |  | |
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读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语编写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a sunny weekend, Lily, an adventurous high-school senior, and her close friends, Jack and Emma, decided to go hiking in the nearby mountains. Equipped with backpacks filled with water, snacks, and a map, they were excited to explore the great outdoors.
As they walked along the well-marked track, chatting and laughing, the weather took an unexpected turn. Dark clouds rolled in quickly, swallowing the sun. The wind started to roar, and soon, rain poured down heavily. The path became slippery, and visibility dropped significantly.
Lily, trying to keep up everyone’s spirits, suggested they find a place to take shelter. They spotted a small cave on the side of the hill and made their way towards it. Inside the cave, the air was damp and cold. As they gathered closely together, waiting for the storm to pass, they realized they had left their emergency flashlight in Jack’s backpack, which he had accidentally dropped on the trail during their rush to the cave.
After what seemed like hours, the rain finally stopped, but the sky remained cloudy. When they stepped out of the cave, they were shocked to find that the track was no longer recognizable. Mudslides had occurred, and large stones blocked their way back. To make matters worse, Jack checked his phone and found that there was no signal.
With a sense of unease coming in, they knew they had to find a way out of the mountains before nightfall. They decided to follow a small stream they saw, hoping it would lead them to a more familiar path or a nearby village. As they walked along the stream, the path became increasingly difficult, with steep slopes (陡坡) and thick underbrush.
Suddenly Emma let out a scream. She had stepped on a loose rock and twisted her ankle badly. Lily and Jack rushed to her side, their faces filled with worry. Now, not only did they have to find their way out, but they also had to help their injured friend.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Lily and Jack exchanged anxious looks, their minds racing for solutions.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Just when they felt tired and hungry, Lily spotted a village in the distance.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lily的徒步冒险续写
续写要点
第一段：着重描写 Lily 和 Jack 面对 Emma 受伤的紧急情况，如何冷静应对。比如 Jack 检查 Emma 伤势，凭借有限知识判断严重程度；Lily 从背包找物品临时固定伤口，同时互相打气，坚定带 Emma 走出困境的决心，然后继续沿着溪流艰难前行。
第二段：描述他们在疲惫饥饿时看到村庄的反应，如激动呼喊、加快脚步。到达村庄后，村民热情帮助，有人提供食物，有人帮忙联系外界或提供医疗救助。最后，三人对这次经历感慨，意识到友谊和坚持的力量。
情感线
起初，面对恶劣天气和迷路，三人感到不安、焦虑。Emma 受伤后，Lily 和 Jack 满心担忧，急切想帮助她。在艰难前行过程中，他们的不安转化为坚定的信念，彼此鼓励，相互支撑。看到村庄时，兴奋和希望涌上心头，获救后，对彼此友谊和这次经历充满感恩，情感得到升华。
故事线
Lily 和 Jack 发现 Emma 脚踝扭伤，迅速采取急救措施，用围巾固定伤口。
两人轮流背着 Emma，沿着溪流继续寻找出路，途中克服地形困难，如攀爬陡坡、穿越灌木丛。
随着时间推移，三人又累又饿，身体逐渐疲惫，但没有放弃。
Lily 偶然发现远处的村庄，三人瞬间充满希望，加快步伐。
到达村庄后，善良的村民纷纷伸出援手，为他们提供食物、水和医疗救助。
最终，三人安全获救，回顾这次冒险，深刻体会到友谊和坚持的重要性。
主旨升华句
In the face of difficulties, true friendship shines brightly, giving us the strength to overcome any obstacle.（在困难面前，真正的友谊闪耀光芒，给予我们克服任何障碍的力量。）
This adventure taught them that as long as they stick together and never give up, hope will always be within reach.（这次冒险让他们明白，只要团结一致、永不放弃，希望就总会触手可及。）
Their journey in the mountains proved that even in the most desperate situations, the power of determination and the bond of friendship can lead to a way out.（他们在山中的旅程证明，即使在最绝望的境地，决心的力量和友谊的纽带也能开辟出一条出路。）
Through this challenging experience, they learned that the support of friends is like a beacon in the dark, guiding them through the toughest times.（通过这次充满挑战的经历，他们了解到朋友的支持就像黑暗中的灯塔，引领他们度过最艰难的时刻。）
The adventure not only tested their physical limits but also deepened their friendship, showing that true friends are those who stand by each other in adversity.（这次冒险不仅考验了他们的身体极限，还加深了他们的友谊，表明真正的朋友是在逆境中相互支持的人。）
写作示范一
Lily and Jack exchanged anxious looks, their minds racing for solutions. Jack quickly knelt beside Emma, carefully examining her swollen ankle. His face was tense with worry, but he tried to sound calm as he said, "It's sprained, but we'll get you out of here." Lily rummaged through her backpack and found a scarf, which she used to gently wrap around Emma's ankle for support. "We'll take turns carrying you," Lily said firmly. With Jack taking the first turn, they resumed their arduous journey along the stream. The going was tough, with slippery rocks and thick underbrush, but they didn't stop, their determination growing with each step.
Just when they felt tired and hungry, Lily spotted a village in the distance. Her eyes widened in excitement, and she shouted, "Look! There's a village!" Jack, who was carrying Emma, looked up, hope lighting up his face. They quickened their pace as much as they could. Once they reached the village, the villagers were extremely kind. One villager brought them food and water, while another, who had some medical knowledge, carefully treated Emma's ankle. Safe at last, Lily, Jack, and Emma looked at each other, their eyes filled with gratitude. This adventure had tested them, but it had also strengthened their friendship.
写作示范二
Lily and Jack exchanged anxious looks, their minds racing for solutions. Jack immediately dropped to his knees to assess Emma's injury. His brow furrowed in concentration as he gently prodded the swollen area. "It's not looking good, but we can manage," he said, trying to mask his concern. Lily, her hands shaking slightly, searched through her bag and found a thin rope. She used it to fashion a makeshift splint for Emma's ankle. "We won't leave you behind," she promised. Then, Jack hoisted Emma onto his back, and they set off again along the stream. The path was rugged, and every step was a struggle, but they refused to give up.
Just when they felt tired and hungry, Lily spotted a village in the distance. Her heart leaped with joy, and she screamed, "A village! We're saved!" Jack, despite his exhaustion, managed a weak smile. They stumbled towards the village, their energy renewed. As they entered, the villagers rushed to help. Some brought hot soup and bread, while others called for medical assistance. Emma was carefully tended to, and soon, the pain in her ankle began to ease. The three friends sat together, looking back on their adventure. They realized that this journey had taught them the true meaning of friendship and the power of perseverance.
参考答案
Lily and Jack exchanged anxious looks, their minds racing for solutions. Jack quickly took off his backpack and looked through it, finding a bandage to wrap Emma’s ankle as best as he could. “We can’t leave her here,” Lily said firmly, her voice echoing with determination. They made a makeshift stretcher using branches and their jackets, carefully placing Emma on it. The going was slow and difficult as they navigated the rough path. Every step was a struggle, but their bond as friends kept them going. As the afternoon wore on, tiredness began to set in.
Just when they felt tired and hungry, Lily spotted a village in the distance. Heart pounding with hope, they made their way towards it. To their joy, they found a well-used path that led down the village. With renewed energy, they quickened their pace. Finally, they reached the small village at the foot of the mountain. The villagers, kind-hearted and helpful, provided them with food, shelter, and called for medical help for Emma. Safe and sound, Lily, Jack, and Emma learned the true meaning of friendship and courage in the face of adversity.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语编写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a sunny weekend, Lily, an adventurous high-school senior, and her close friends, Jack and Emma, decided to go hiking in the nearby mountains. Equipped with backpacks filled with water, snacks, and a map, they were excited to explore the great outdoors.
As they walked along the well-marked track, chatting and laughing, the weather took an unexpected turn. Dark clouds rolled in quickly, swallowing the sun. The wind started to roar, and soon, rain poured down heavily. The path became slippery, and visibility dropped significantly.
Lily, trying to keep up everyone’s spirits, suggested they find a place to take shelter. They spotted a small cave on the side of the hill and made their way towards it. Inside the cave, the air was damp and cold. As they gathered closely together, waiting for the storm to pass, they realized they had left their emergency flashlight in Jack’s backpack, which he had accidentally dropped on the trail during their rush to the cave.
After what seemed like hours, the rain finally stopped, but the sky remained cloudy. When they stepped out of the cave, they were shocked to find that the track was no longer recognizable. Mudslides had occurred, and large stones blocked their way back. To make matters worse, Jack checked his phone and found that there was no signal.
With a sense of unease coming in, they knew they had to find a way out of the mountains before nightfall. They decided to follow a small stream they saw, hoping it would lead them to a more familiar path or a nearby village. As they walked along the stream, the path became increasingly difficult, with steep slopes (陡坡) and thick underbrush.
Suddenly Emma let out a scream. She had stepped on a loose rock and twisted her ankle badly. Lily and Jack rushed to her side, their faces filled with worry. Now, not only did they have to find their way out, but they also had to help their injured friend.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Lily and Jack exchanged anxious looks, their minds racing for solutions.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Just when they felt tired and hungry, Lily spotted a village in the distance.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lily的徒步冒险续写
续写要点
第一段：着重描写 Lily 和 Jack 面对 Emma 受伤的紧急情况，如何冷静应对。比如 Jack 检查 Emma 伤势，凭借有限知识判断严重程度；Lily 从背包找物品临时固定伤口，同时互相打气，坚定带 Emma 走出困境的决心，然后继续沿着溪流艰难前行。
第二段：描述他们在疲惫饥饿时看到村庄的反应，如激动呼喊、加快脚步。到达村庄后，村民热情帮助，有人提供食物，有人帮忙联系外界或提供医疗救助。最后，三人对这次经历感慨，意识到友谊和坚持的力量。
情感线
起初，面对恶劣天气和迷路，三人感到不安、焦虑。Emma 受伤后，Lily 和 Jack 满心担忧，急切想帮助她。在艰难前行过程中，他们的不安转化为坚定的信念，彼此鼓励，相互支撑。看到村庄时，兴奋和希望涌上心头，获救后，对彼此友谊和这次经历充满感恩，情感得到升华。
故事线
Lily 和 Jack 发现 Emma 脚踝扭伤，迅速采取急救措施，用围巾固定伤口。
两人轮流背着 Emma，沿着溪流继续寻找出路，途中克服地形困难，如攀爬陡坡、穿越灌木丛。
随着时间推移，三人又累又饿，身体逐渐疲惫，但没有放弃。
Lily 偶然发现远处的村庄，三人瞬间充满希望，加快步伐。
到达村庄后，善良的村民纷纷伸出援手，为他们提供食物、水和医疗救助。
最终，三人安全获救，回顾这次冒险，深刻体会到友谊和坚持的重要性。
主旨升华句
In the face of difficulties, true friendship shines brightly, giving us the strength to overcome any obstacle.（在困难面前，真正的友谊闪耀光芒，给予我们克服任何障碍的力量。）
This adventure taught them that as long as they stick together and never give up, hope will always be within reach.（这次冒险让他们明白，只要团结一致、永不放弃，希望就总会触手可及。）
Their journey in the mountains proved that even in the most desperate situations, the power of determination and the bond of friendship can lead to a way out.（他们在山中的旅程证明，即使在最绝望的境地，决心的力量和友谊的纽带也能开辟出一条出路。）
Through this challenging experience, they learned that the support of friends is like a beacon in the dark, guiding them through the toughest times.（通过这次充满挑战的经历，他们了解到朋友的支持就像黑暗中的灯塔，引领他们度过最艰难的时刻。）
The adventure not only tested their physical limits but also deepened their friendship, showing that true friends are those who stand by each other in adversity.（这次冒险不仅考验了他们的身体极限，还加深了他们的友谊，表明真正的朋友是在逆境中相互支持的人。）
写作示范一
Lily and Jack exchanged anxious looks, their minds racing for solutions. Jack quickly knelt beside Emma, carefully examining her swollen ankle. His face was tense with worry, but he tried to sound calm as he said, "It's sprained, but we'll get you out of here." Lily rummaged through her backpack and found a scarf, which she used to gently wrap around Emma's ankle for support. "We'll take turns carrying you," Lily said firmly. With Jack taking the first turn, they resumed their arduous journey along the stream. The going was tough, with slippery rocks and thick underbrush, but they didn't stop, their determination growing with each step.
Just when they felt tired and hungry, Lily spotted a village in the distance. Her eyes widened in excitement, and she shouted, "Look! There's a village!" Jack, who was carrying Emma, looked up, hope lighting up his face. They quickened their pace as much as they could. Once they reached the village, the villagers were extremely kind. One villager brought them food and water, while another, who had some medical knowledge, carefully treated Emma's ankle. Safe at last, Lily, Jack, and Emma looked at each other, their eyes filled with gratitude. This adventure had tested them, but it had also strengthened their friendship.
写作示范二
Lily and Jack exchanged anxious looks, their minds racing for solutions. Jack immediately dropped to his knees to assess Emma's injury. His brow furrowed in concentration as he gently prodded the swollen area. "It's not looking good, but we can manage," he said, trying to mask his concern. Lily, her hands shaking slightly, searched through her bag and found a thin rope. She used it to fashion a makeshift splint for Emma's ankle. "We won't leave you behind," she promised. Then, Jack hoisted Emma onto his back, and they set off again along the stream. The path was rugged, and every step was a struggle, but they refused to give up.
Just when they felt tired and hungry, Lily spotted a village in the distance. Her heart leaped with joy, and she screamed, "A village! We're saved!" Jack, despite his exhaustion, managed a weak smile. They stumbled towards the village, their energy renewed. As they entered, the villagers rushed to help. Some brought hot soup and bread, while others called for medical assistance. Emma was carefully tended to, and soon, the pain in her ankle began to ease. The three friends sat together, looking back on their adventure. They realized that this journey had taught them the true meaning of friendship and the power of perseverance.
参考答案
Lily and Jack exchanged anxious looks, their minds racing for solutions. Jack quickly took off his backpack and looked through it, finding a bandage to wrap Emma’s ankle as best as he could. “We can’t leave her here,” Lily said firmly, her voice echoing with determination. They made a makeshift stretcher using branches and their jackets, carefully placing Emma on it. The going was slow and difficult as they navigated the rough path. Every step was a struggle, but their bond as friends kept them going. As the afternoon wore on, tiredness began to set in.
Just when they felt tired and hungry, Lily spotted a village in the distance. Heart pounding with hope, they made their way towards it. To their joy, they found a well-used path that led down the village. With renewed energy, they quickened their pace. Finally, they reached the small village at the foot of the mountain. The villagers, kind-hearted and helpful, provided them with food, shelter, and called for medical help for Emma. Safe and sound, Lily, Jack, and Emma learned the true meaning of friendship and courage in the face of adversity.