读后续写 Sean航海救援 讲义-河南省驻马店大联考2024~2025学年高二上学期12月月考英语试题
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读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Prepare to come about!” Sean turned to look at his father, who was standing confidently at the helm (船舵) of his newly bought sailboat. “Which way are we turning ” He saw his father frown (皱眉). “That means we are turning into the wind.” his father said, pointing to the right side of the boat, his frown deepening. Sean hated it when he felt he disappointed his father.
Sean had mixed feelings about sailing with his father. He liked spending time with his father, but when they were together, Sean was reminded of how different they were. His father was confident and outgoing. Sean was shy and had few friends.
Sighing, Sean looked up at the sky. Just an hour ago, it had been sunny. But now the sky was gray, clouds were gathering, and the wind began to blow angrily. He put on his life jacket and was once again reminded how different he was from his father who never wore a life jacket.
“Hey, Sean, can you take the helm for a minute ” his father asked. “Uh, yeah, sure,” Sean replied. Sean held the helm tightly.
Suddenly, the wind shifted direction, catching Sean off guard. The boat heeled (倾斜) so sharply on its side that it felt like it might overturn. Where was his father The boat began to heel even more. “Dad!” he called, but the wind swallowed his voice. He didn’t see him anywhere. “Dad!” he shouted crazily, but there was no sign of his father.
Sean looked out at the huge waves crashing against the boat. Then he saw it — just a flash of something in the water. It was his dad! He must be hurt, Sean thought, or he’d be able to swim over to the boat. Sean had to think fast. How could he get his dad back into the boat Then he had an idea.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
He reached under the seat for the rope he knew his dad kept there.
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“You saved my life, son,” his dad said.
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Sean航海救援续写
续写要点
第一段：着重描写 Sean 救父亲的具体过程。他拿到绳子后，要详细描述他如何克服内心恐惧，在摇晃的船上艰难地将绳子一端系在船上固定处，接着精准地把另一端抛向父亲。描述父亲在水中努力抓取绳子的艰难，以及 Sean 看到父亲抓到绳子时的激动心情，然后拼尽全力拉绳子，过程中可能会遇到风浪干扰，增加困难程度。
第二段：聚焦父子间的情感交流。父亲获救后，对 Sean 表达真诚的赞美和感激，肯定他的勇敢与智慧。Sean 此时回想起之前和父亲相处的种种，感慨自己在关键时刻的成长。父亲可以进一步分享自己以前航海遇到危险时的类似经历，让 Sean 明白成长往往在困境中发生，最后两人一起总结这次经历对彼此的意义，以及对父子关系的深远影响。
情感线
起初，Sean 在父亲意外落水后，内心充满恐惧与无助，害怕失去父亲。但在救援过程中，他的恐惧逐渐转化为坚定的决心，一心只想救父亲。父亲获救后，Sean 先是松了一口气，紧接着因父亲的夸赞而感到自豪，之前觉得自己与父亲不同、常让父亲失望的自卑情绪也随之消散。父亲则从最初对 Sean 能力的怀疑，转变为满满的骄傲与欣慰，父子间的情感在这场危机中得到前所未有的升华。
故事线
Sean 迅速在船中找到绳子，在风雨中艰难地将绳子一端牢牢系在船的桅杆上。
他奋力将绳子另一端抛向水中的父亲，大声呼喊父亲抓住绳子。
父亲在波涛汹涌的水中奋力游动，艰难地抓住绳子，Sean 开始全力拉绳子，过程中船身摇晃，多次差点被风浪打断。
父亲终于被拉回船上，Sean 和父亲都疲惫不堪，但 Sean 心中满是喜悦。
父亲对 Sean 的勇敢和果断进行夸赞，讲述自己过去航海遇险的经历，鼓励 Sean。
Sean 和父亲一起回顾这次冒险，两人关系更加亲密，带着新的感悟准备返航。
主旨升华句
In the face of danger, the bond between father and son was forged stronger, showing that love and courage can overcome any storm.（在危险面前，父子之间的纽带变得更加牢固，表明爱与勇气能战胜任何风暴。）
This terrifying experience taught Sean that his inner strength was far greater than he thought, and that his father's love was always there, even in the most challenging times.（这次可怕的经历让 Sean 明白，他内心的力量远比自己想象的强大，而且父亲的爱一直都在，即使在最艰难的时刻。）
Their shared struggle at sea not only saved a life but also transformed their relationship, proving that adversity can be a powerful catalyst for growth and connection.（他们在海上共同的挣扎不仅挽救了一条生命，还改变了他们的关系，证明了逆境可以成为成长和情感连接的强大催化剂。）
Through this life - threatening situation, Sean learned that differences between him and his father paled in comparison to the love and mutual support that bound them together.（通过这次危及生命的情况，Sean 了解到他和父亲之间的差异，与将他们紧密相连的爱和相互支持相比，显得微不足道。）
The journey home from the storm - ridden sea was not just a physical return but a spiritual one, with a new - found understanding and closeness between father and son.（从暴风雨肆虐的大海返航的旅程，不仅仅是一次身体上的回归，更是一次精神上的回归，父子之间有了全新的理解和亲密感。）
写作示范一
He reached under the seat for the rope he knew his dad kept there. With hands trembling, Sean tried his best to keep his balance on the violently rocking boat. He tied one end of the rope firmly around the mast, his fingers fumbling due to nervousness. Then, he took a deep breath and threw the other end towards his father, shouting, "Dad, catch it!" His father, looking exhausted, swam with all his might towards the rope. The waves kept pushing him back, but he didn't give up. Sean's heart was in his mouth as he watched. Finally, his father grabbed the rope. Sean pulled with all his strength, his muscles aching. Each tug was a battle against the powerful sea.
"You saved my life, son," his dad said. His voice was weak but filled with pride. Sean helped his father climb back into the boat. "I was so scared, but I knew I had to save you," Sean admitted, his eyes still wide with the memory of the danger. His father put a hand on Sean's shoulder. "You were incredibly brave. I was wrong to think you were different. You're just as capable as I am, if not more so." Sean smiled, a sense of pride swelling in his chest. They talked about how they had overcome the odds together, and Sean realized that their differences didn't matter. What truly counted was their love and the way they could rely on each other in times of need. As they sailed back home, the sun peeked through the clouds, symbolizing their new - found connection.
写作示范二
He reached under the seat for the rope he knew his dad kept there. Sean's mind was racing, but he forced himself to focus. The wind howled, and the rain lashed at his face as he secured the rope to the boat. He aimed carefully and threw the rope, his eyes fixed on his father in the water. "Come on, Dad!" he yelled. His father, struggling against the waves, finally caught the rope. Sean started pulling, his arms burning with effort. The boat pitched and rolled, making it even harder, but he refused to stop. He could see his father getting closer, and hope filled his heart.
"You saved my life, son," his dad said. There was a new respect in his voice. Sean helped his father sit down. "I was so worried about you," Sean said, his voice cracking. His father looked at him and said, "I've always known you were special, but today you showed me just how much. I should have had more faith in you." They shared stories of past adventures and near - misses. Sean learned that his father had faced similar fears when he was young. This experience had not only saved his father but also brought them closer. As they made their way back, Sean felt a new sense of confidence and a deeper connection with his father. The sea, which had seemed so terrifying, now held a different kind of beauty, a reminder of their strength and love.
参考范文
He reached under the seat for the rope he knew his dad kept there. Sean’s heart raced as he quickly tied one end of the rope to the boat and threw the other end towards his father, who was struggling to keep his head above the water. “Grab the rope, Dad!” Sean shouted. After several failed attempts, his father managed to grasp the rope, and Sean began to pull him towards the boat with all his strength. After what felt like a century, Sean finally pulled his father back onto the boat.
“You saved my life, son,” his dad said. “You did a great job,” he said smiling, looking at Sean right in the eyes. Sean felt a rush of relief and pride. But he knew he had to get his dad to the hospital. This time Sean took the helm confidently and called, “Prepare to come about!” Sean couldn’t help but smile. Despite all the differences, he and his dad had faced a challenge together and come out stronger because of it. Today witnessed a test of courage and resilience, but it had also brought him closer to his father in a way he had never imagined possible.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Prepare to come about!” Sean turned to look at his father, who was standing confidently at the helm (船舵) of his newly bought sailboat. “Which way are we turning ” He saw his father frown (皱眉). “That means we are turning into the wind.” his father said, pointing to the right side of the boat, his frown deepening. Sean hated it when he felt he disappointed his father.
Sean had mixed feelings about sailing with his father. He liked spending time with his father, but when they were together, Sean was reminded of how different they were. His father was confident and outgoing. Sean was shy and had few friends.
Sighing, Sean looked up at the sky. Just an hour ago, it had been sunny. But now the sky was gray, clouds were gathering, and the wind began to blow angrily. He put on his life jacket and was once again reminded how different he was from his father who never wore a life jacket.
“Hey, Sean, can you take the helm for a minute ” his father asked. “Uh, yeah, sure,” Sean replied. Sean held the helm tightly.
Suddenly, the wind shifted direction, catching Sean off guard. The boat heeled (倾斜) so sharply on its side that it felt like it might overturn. Where was his father The boat began to heel even more. “Dad!” he called, but the wind swallowed his voice. He didn’t see him anywhere. “Dad!” he shouted crazily, but there was no sign of his father.
Sean looked out at the huge waves crashing against the boat. Then he saw it — just a flash of something in the water. It was his dad! He must be hurt, Sean thought, or he’d be able to swim over to the boat. Sean had to think fast. How could he get his dad back into the boat Then he had an idea.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
He reached under the seat for the rope he knew his dad kept there.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
“You saved my life, son,” his dad said.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sean航海救援续写
续写要点
第一段：着重描写 Sean 救父亲的具体过程。他拿到绳子后，要详细描述他如何克服内心恐惧，在摇晃的船上艰难地将绳子一端系在船上固定处，接着精准地把另一端抛向父亲。描述父亲在水中努力抓取绳子的艰难，以及 Sean 看到父亲抓到绳子时的激动心情，然后拼尽全力拉绳子，过程中可能会遇到风浪干扰，增加困难程度。
第二段：聚焦父子间的情感交流。父亲获救后，对 Sean 表达真诚的赞美和感激，肯定他的勇敢与智慧。Sean 此时回想起之前和父亲相处的种种，感慨自己在关键时刻的成长。父亲可以进一步分享自己以前航海遇到危险时的类似经历，让 Sean 明白成长往往在困境中发生，最后两人一起总结这次经历对彼此的意义，以及对父子关系的深远影响。
情感线
起初，Sean 在父亲意外落水后，内心充满恐惧与无助，害怕失去父亲。但在救援过程中，他的恐惧逐渐转化为坚定的决心，一心只想救父亲。父亲获救后，Sean 先是松了一口气，紧接着因父亲的夸赞而感到自豪，之前觉得自己与父亲不同、常让父亲失望的自卑情绪也随之消散。父亲则从最初对 Sean 能力的怀疑，转变为满满的骄傲与欣慰，父子间的情感在这场危机中得到前所未有的升华。
故事线
Sean 迅速在船中找到绳子，在风雨中艰难地将绳子一端牢牢系在船的桅杆上。
他奋力将绳子另一端抛向水中的父亲，大声呼喊父亲抓住绳子。
父亲在波涛汹涌的水中奋力游动，艰难地抓住绳子，Sean 开始全力拉绳子，过程中船身摇晃，多次差点被风浪打断。
父亲终于被拉回船上，Sean 和父亲都疲惫不堪，但 Sean 心中满是喜悦。
父亲对 Sean 的勇敢和果断进行夸赞，讲述自己过去航海遇险的经历，鼓励 Sean。
Sean 和父亲一起回顾这次冒险，两人关系更加亲密，带着新的感悟准备返航。
主旨升华句
In the face of danger, the bond between father and son was forged stronger, showing that love and courage can overcome any storm.（在危险面前，父子之间的纽带变得更加牢固，表明爱与勇气能战胜任何风暴。）
This terrifying experience taught Sean that his inner strength was far greater than he thought, and that his father's love was always there, even in the most challenging times.（这次可怕的经历让 Sean 明白，他内心的力量远比自己想象的强大，而且父亲的爱一直都在，即使在最艰难的时刻。）
Their shared struggle at sea not only saved a life but also transformed their relationship, proving that adversity can be a powerful catalyst for growth and connection.（他们在海上共同的挣扎不仅挽救了一条生命，还改变了他们的关系，证明了逆境可以成为成长和情感连接的强大催化剂。）
Through this life - threatening situation, Sean learned that differences between him and his father paled in comparison to the love and mutual support that bound them together.（通过这次危及生命的情况，Sean 了解到他和父亲之间的差异，与将他们紧密相连的爱和相互支持相比，显得微不足道。）
The journey home from the storm - ridden sea was not just a physical return but a spiritual one, with a new - found understanding and closeness between father and son.（从暴风雨肆虐的大海返航的旅程，不仅仅是一次身体上的回归，更是一次精神上的回归，父子之间有了全新的理解和亲密感。）
写作示范一
He reached under the seat for the rope he knew his dad kept there. With hands trembling, Sean tried his best to keep his balance on the violently rocking boat. He tied one end of the rope firmly around the mast, his fingers fumbling due to nervousness. Then, he took a deep breath and threw the other end towards his father, shouting, "Dad, catch it!" His father, looking exhausted, swam with all his might towards the rope. The waves kept pushing him back, but he didn't give up. Sean's heart was in his mouth as he watched. Finally, his father grabbed the rope. Sean pulled with all his strength, his muscles aching. Each tug was a battle against the powerful sea.
"You saved my life, son," his dad said. His voice was weak but filled with pride. Sean helped his father climb back into the boat. "I was so scared, but I knew I had to save you," Sean admitted, his eyes still wide with the memory of the danger. His father put a hand on Sean's shoulder. "You were incredibly brave. I was wrong to think you were different. You're just as capable as I am, if not more so." Sean smiled, a sense of pride swelling in his chest. They talked about how they had overcome the odds together, and Sean realized that their differences didn't matter. What truly counted was their love and the way they could rely on each other in times of need. As they sailed back home, the sun peeked through the clouds, symbolizing their new - found connection.
写作示范二
He reached under the seat for the rope he knew his dad kept there. Sean's mind was racing, but he forced himself to focus. The wind howled, and the rain lashed at his face as he secured the rope to the boat. He aimed carefully and threw the rope, his eyes fixed on his father in the water. "Come on, Dad!" he yelled. His father, struggling against the waves, finally caught the rope. Sean started pulling, his arms burning with effort. The boat pitched and rolled, making it even harder, but he refused to stop. He could see his father getting closer, and hope filled his heart.
"You saved my life, son," his dad said. There was a new respect in his voice. Sean helped his father sit down. "I was so worried about you," Sean said, his voice cracking. His father looked at him and said, "I've always known you were special, but today you showed me just how much. I should have had more faith in you." They shared stories of past adventures and near - misses. Sean learned that his father had faced similar fears when he was young. This experience had not only saved his father but also brought them closer. As they made their way back, Sean felt a new sense of confidence and a deeper connection with his father. The sea, which had seemed so terrifying, now held a different kind of beauty, a reminder of their strength and love.
参考范文
He reached under the seat for the rope he knew his dad kept there. Sean’s heart raced as he quickly tied one end of the rope to the boat and threw the other end towards his father, who was struggling to keep his head above the water. “Grab the rope, Dad!” Sean shouted. After several failed attempts, his father managed to grasp the rope, and Sean began to pull him towards the boat with all his strength. After what felt like a century, Sean finally pulled his father back onto the boat.
“You saved my life, son,” his dad said. “You did a great job,” he said smiling, looking at Sean right in the eyes. Sean felt a rush of relief and pride. But he knew he had to get his dad to the hospital. This time Sean took the helm confidently and called, “Prepare to come about!” Sean couldn’t help but smile. Despite all the differences, he and his dad had faced a challenge together and come out stronger because of it. Today witnessed a test of courage and resilience, but it had also brought him closer to his father in a way he had never imagined possible.