读后续写 餐厅打工记：从失误到成长 讲义-湖南省长沙市2024-2025学年高三下学期月考（六）英语试题
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I stood in the restaurant kitchen, my eyes wide, arms hanging awkwardly, ready to work but unsure of what to do. “You will be trained first,” my manager Aaron said, “and do remember to check every detail!” With these words, he walked away.
A workmate threw me a dish brush and said, “Let’s get started.” He introduced me to the basics of washing dishes and demonstrated the process. This was the beginning of my part-time job, a new stage where I was both eager to learn and anxious about the challenges ahead.
On a Friday night, Aaron swiftly entered the kitchen. “Who has just bused (收拾) the back right table ” he shouted, his voice sharp with urgency. My hands, slippery with bubbles from the bowl I was washing, nearly let it slip through my fingers. I wanted to say I was guilty, but Aaron’s cold stare didn’t promise a happy reward for the guy who admitted. Finally, a mix of fear and my own conscience pushed the response out of my mouth.
“I did, Aaron.”
“What were you thinking Get back out here and look at what you missed!” His words forced me forward. I grabbed a rag (抹布) and followed him out to table twenty-two. As we made our way through the restaurant, he said something about rags, but I didn’t hear clearly with other conversations going on around us.
I quickly realized the true issue was the mess beneath the table. A nearly full cup of beer had tipped over, creating a small lake on the floor. It was a significant mistake on my part. “Take care of it!” Aaron tuned and stormed off to the front of the restaurant.
I dropped down to clean up the beer. That was when another problem occurred. I had brought only one rag. One already wet rag. It did nothing but increase the size of the lake. “More rags,” I thought. Immediately, I rushed into the kitchen and hurriedly grabbed five dry rags, hoping Aaron wouldn’t notice my brief absence.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way.
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After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron’s words.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
文章大意
文章讲述了 “我” 在餐厅做兼职洗碗工的经历。初入餐厅时，经理 Aaron 告知要注重细节并会先培训，同事教 “我” 洗碗的基本流程。在一个周五晚上，Aaron 发现后右桌被收拾得不干净，“我” 承认是自己负责的。原来是桌上一杯几乎满的啤酒打翻，在地上形成一片狼藉，Aaron 让 “我” 清理。“我” 拿了一块湿抹布去擦，不仅没清理干净，还让脏污范围扩大，于是急忙回厨房拿干抹布。
故事山分析
开场：“我” 在餐厅开始兼职，经理强调细节，同事教 “我” 洗碗。
发展：周五晚 Aaron 发现 “我” 收拾的桌子下有啤酒打翻未清理，“我” 承认错误并去清理。
高潮：清理时发现抹布不够且是湿的，回厨房拿干抹布，此时 Aaron 出现。
结局（待续写）：解决当前状况，“我” 反思并获得成长。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔：经理 Aaron 强调要注意每一个细节。
回应：在后续清理过程中，“我” 可能会因为注重细节，把地面清理得非常干净，让 Aaron 看到 “我” 的改变。
伏笔：“我” 对新工作既渴望学习又充满担忧。
回应：在面对这次失误和 Aaron 的批评时，“我” 的担忧得到体现，同时也促使 “我” 更加渴望学习如何更好地完成工作。
伏笔：Aaron 发现问题后尖锐的语气和着急的态度。
回应：续写中 Aaron 可能会因为 “我” 后续的表现，态度发生转变，从严厉变得温和，给予 “我” 鼓励和指导。
伏笔：清理时发现只有一块湿抹布，脏污反而扩大。
回应：这导致 Aaron 看到 “我” 手忙脚乱的样子，引发他进一步的教导，也让 “我” 深刻认识到准备工作的重要性。
伏笔：“我” 急忙回厨房拿干抹布，担心 Aaron 注意到自己短暂离开。
回应：Aaron 果然注意到了，他会借此机会和 “我” 交流，让 “我” 明白工作中的各种要点。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：当 “我” 拿着干抹布冲出去发现 Aaron 挡在面前，他可能会询问 “我” 去做什么，“我” 如实回答，然后他可能会借此机会教导 “我” 在工作中如何更好地处理问题，比如提前做好准备工作等。
第二段：清理完污渍后，“我” 反思 Aaron 的话，意识到自己在工作中的不足，明白注重细节和做好准备工作的重要性，并且决定以后更加认真对待工作，最后以积极的态度面对后续的工作。
情感线
起初 “我” 对新工作充满期待又有些忐忑，犯错被发现时内心充满恐惧和愧疚，面对 Aaron 的质问感到紧张和不安。在 Aaron 教导时，“我” 从紧张逐渐转变为虚心接受，最后反思时充满懊悔但也坚定了改正的决心，情感从消极逐渐转向积极，体现 “我” 在这次经历中的成长。
故事线
“我” 在餐厅开始兼职工作。
周五晚 “我” 收拾桌子出现失误被 Aaron 发现。
“我” 去清理失误造成的脏污，发现抹布问题。
“我” 回厨房拿干抹布，Aaron 出现。
Aaron 教导 “我” 如何更好地工作。
“我” 清理完后反思并获得成长。
主旨升华句（英文）
This experience taught me that in any job, no matter how trivial it may seem, attention to detail is the key to success.
Through this incident, I realized that making mistakes is not the end but an opportunity for growth and self - improvement.
What I learned from this encounter with Aaron was not just about cleaning up a mess, but about taking responsibility and doing things right the first time.
This event served as a wake - up call, reminding me that a positive attitude and careful preparation are essential in the workplace.
From this experience, I came to understand that every task, no matter how small, is a chance to prove myself and develop valuable skills.
写作示范
示范一
I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way. His eyes fixed on the rags in my hands, and he asked firmly, “Where have you been ” I stammered out my explanation, expecting another scolding. However, Aaron's expression softened a bit. He said, “In a restaurant, we need to be well - prepared for any situation. Next time, think before you act.” Then he showed me how to clean the floor efficiently, using the dry rags properly.
After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron’s words. I realized that my carelessness not only caused trouble for myself but also affected the overall operation of the restaurant. I was determined to change. From then on, before starting any task, I would make sure I had all the necessary tools and a clear plan. This experience became a turning point in my part - time job, making me a more responsible and capable worker.
示范二
I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way. “Going somewhere ” he asked with a raised eyebrow. I told him about the wet rag problem. Instead of getting angry, he nodded and said, “It's okay. Everyone makes mistakes. But remember, a good worker anticipates problems.” He then walked me through the correct way to handle such situations, emphasizing the importance of quick thinking.
After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron’s words. I understood that his strictness was not out of meanness but a desire to see me grow. I was grateful for his guidance. This incident made me more aware of my responsibilities at work. I promised myself that I would always strive for perfection, no matter how small the task was, and I was looking forward to the next challenge at the restaurant.
参考答案
I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way. “What’s up” he asked sharply, his eyes fixed on me. Feeling the weight of my mistake, I stammered nervously, “I need dry rags...to...clean...” Upon hearing this, Aaron let out a heavy sigh. “You should have checked every detail,” he remarked, a hint of disappointment in his voice. “This job isn’t just about reacting, it’s also about being careful. Now, go clean that up!” Avoiding his gaze, I dashed towards table twenty-two. With an ample supply of rags, I threw myself into the task, tirelessly mopping, scrubbing, and wiping.
After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron’s words. They were sharp but absolutely right. My inexperience and initial anxiety in this new job had led me to overlook crucial details, and I should have been more mindful of my work. Taking a deep breath, I returned to my duties, bearing Aaron’s words in mind. With very dish washed and every table cleared, I made sure to double-check my work. Everything went well and soon I realized this carefulness would not just apply to cleaning; it would influence every aspect of my job, preparing me to embrace any challenge with responsibility and confidence.
I stood in the restaurant kitchen, my eyes wide, arms hanging awkwardly, ready to work but unsure of what to do. “You will be trained first,” my manager Aaron said, “and do remember to check every detail!” With these words, he walked away.
A workmate threw me a dish brush and said, “Let’s get started.” He introduced me to the basics of washing dishes and demonstrated the process. This was the beginning of my part-time job, a new stage where I was both eager to learn and anxious about the challenges ahead.
On a Friday night, Aaron swiftly entered the kitchen. “Who has just bused (收拾) the back right table ” he shouted, his voice sharp with urgency. My hands, slippery with bubbles from the bowl I was washing, nearly let it slip through my fingers. I wanted to say I was guilty, but Aaron’s cold stare didn’t promise a happy reward for the guy who admitted. Finally, a mix of fear and my own conscience pushed the response out of my mouth.
“I did, Aaron.”
“What were you thinking Get back out here and look at what you missed!” His words forced me forward. I grabbed a rag (抹布) and followed him out to table twenty-two. As we made our way through the restaurant, he said something about rags, but I didn’t hear clearly with other conversations going on around us.
I quickly realized the true issue was the mess beneath the table. A nearly full cup of beer had tipped over, creating a small lake on the floor. It was a significant mistake on my part. “Take care of it!” Aaron tuned and stormed off to the front of the restaurant.
I dropped down to clean up the beer. That was when another problem occurred. I had brought only one rag. One already wet rag. It did nothing but increase the size of the lake. “More rags,” I thought. Immediately, I rushed into the kitchen and hurriedly grabbed five dry rags, hoping Aaron wouldn’t notice my brief absence.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron’s words.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
文章大意
文章讲述了 “我” 在餐厅做兼职洗碗工的经历。初入餐厅时，经理 Aaron 告知要注重细节并会先培训，同事教 “我” 洗碗的基本流程。在一个周五晚上，Aaron 发现后右桌被收拾得不干净，“我” 承认是自己负责的。原来是桌上一杯几乎满的啤酒打翻，在地上形成一片狼藉，Aaron 让 “我” 清理。“我” 拿了一块湿抹布去擦，不仅没清理干净，还让脏污范围扩大，于是急忙回厨房拿干抹布。
故事山分析
开场：“我” 在餐厅开始兼职，经理强调细节，同事教 “我” 洗碗。
发展：周五晚 Aaron 发现 “我” 收拾的桌子下有啤酒打翻未清理，“我” 承认错误并去清理。
高潮：清理时发现抹布不够且是湿的，回厨房拿干抹布，此时 Aaron 出现。
结局（待续写）：解决当前状况，“我” 反思并获得成长。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔：经理 Aaron 强调要注意每一个细节。
回应：在后续清理过程中，“我” 可能会因为注重细节，把地面清理得非常干净，让 Aaron 看到 “我” 的改变。
伏笔：“我” 对新工作既渴望学习又充满担忧。
回应：在面对这次失误和 Aaron 的批评时，“我” 的担忧得到体现，同时也促使 “我” 更加渴望学习如何更好地完成工作。
伏笔：Aaron 发现问题后尖锐的语气和着急的态度。
回应：续写中 Aaron 可能会因为 “我” 后续的表现，态度发生转变，从严厉变得温和，给予 “我” 鼓励和指导。
伏笔：清理时发现只有一块湿抹布，脏污反而扩大。
回应：这导致 Aaron 看到 “我” 手忙脚乱的样子，引发他进一步的教导，也让 “我” 深刻认识到准备工作的重要性。
伏笔：“我” 急忙回厨房拿干抹布，担心 Aaron 注意到自己短暂离开。
回应：Aaron 果然注意到了，他会借此机会和 “我” 交流，让 “我” 明白工作中的各种要点。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：当 “我” 拿着干抹布冲出去发现 Aaron 挡在面前，他可能会询问 “我” 去做什么，“我” 如实回答，然后他可能会借此机会教导 “我” 在工作中如何更好地处理问题，比如提前做好准备工作等。
第二段：清理完污渍后，“我” 反思 Aaron 的话，意识到自己在工作中的不足，明白注重细节和做好准备工作的重要性，并且决定以后更加认真对待工作，最后以积极的态度面对后续的工作。
情感线
起初 “我” 对新工作充满期待又有些忐忑，犯错被发现时内心充满恐惧和愧疚，面对 Aaron 的质问感到紧张和不安。在 Aaron 教导时，“我” 从紧张逐渐转变为虚心接受，最后反思时充满懊悔但也坚定了改正的决心，情感从消极逐渐转向积极，体现 “我” 在这次经历中的成长。
故事线
“我” 在餐厅开始兼职工作。
周五晚 “我” 收拾桌子出现失误被 Aaron 发现。
“我” 去清理失误造成的脏污，发现抹布问题。
“我” 回厨房拿干抹布，Aaron 出现。
Aaron 教导 “我” 如何更好地工作。
“我” 清理完后反思并获得成长。
主旨升华句（英文）
This experience taught me that in any job, no matter how trivial it may seem, attention to detail is the key to success.
Through this incident, I realized that making mistakes is not the end but an opportunity for growth and self - improvement.
What I learned from this encounter with Aaron was not just about cleaning up a mess, but about taking responsibility and doing things right the first time.
This event served as a wake - up call, reminding me that a positive attitude and careful preparation are essential in the workplace.
From this experience, I came to understand that every task, no matter how small, is a chance to prove myself and develop valuable skills.
写作示范
示范一
I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way. His eyes fixed on the rags in my hands, and he asked firmly, “Where have you been ” I stammered out my explanation, expecting another scolding. However, Aaron's expression softened a bit. He said, “In a restaurant, we need to be well - prepared for any situation. Next time, think before you act.” Then he showed me how to clean the floor efficiently, using the dry rags properly.
After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron’s words. I realized that my carelessness not only caused trouble for myself but also affected the overall operation of the restaurant. I was determined to change. From then on, before starting any task, I would make sure I had all the necessary tools and a clear plan. This experience became a turning point in my part - time job, making me a more responsible and capable worker.
示范二
I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way. “Going somewhere ” he asked with a raised eyebrow. I told him about the wet rag problem. Instead of getting angry, he nodded and said, “It's okay. Everyone makes mistakes. But remember, a good worker anticipates problems.” He then walked me through the correct way to handle such situations, emphasizing the importance of quick thinking.
After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron’s words. I understood that his strictness was not out of meanness but a desire to see me grow. I was grateful for his guidance. This incident made me more aware of my responsibilities at work. I promised myself that I would always strive for perfection, no matter how small the task was, and I was looking forward to the next challenge at the restaurant.
参考答案
I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way. “What’s up” he asked sharply, his eyes fixed on me. Feeling the weight of my mistake, I stammered nervously, “I need dry rags...to...clean...” Upon hearing this, Aaron let out a heavy sigh. “You should have checked every detail,” he remarked, a hint of disappointment in his voice. “This job isn’t just about reacting, it’s also about being careful. Now, go clean that up!” Avoiding his gaze, I dashed towards table twenty-two. With an ample supply of rags, I threw myself into the task, tirelessly mopping, scrubbing, and wiping.
After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron’s words. They were sharp but absolutely right. My inexperience and initial anxiety in this new job had led me to overlook crucial details, and I should have been more mindful of my work. Taking a deep breath, I returned to my duties, bearing Aaron’s words in mind. With very dish washed and every table cleared, I made sure to double-check my work. Everything went well and soon I realized this carefulness would not just apply to cleaning; it would influence every aspect of my job, preparing me to embrace any challenge with responsibility and confidence.